#5//The Ex's At War//Ch17 on Pg 126 n Link for Thread 6 on Pg 1 - Page 104

U literally knw how to chamkoa our battisi by giving such an awesum wala update hahhahaahahha
Yrr ur writings n especially dis ff z a stress buster for me
I luv manini a lottt
Her cute antics makes me luv her like hell more dan manan
She z such a sweetheart a kind f " Freedom Fighter" f nandini n nw navya too frm rewa n rose hhahahahahahahahahhahaha
So dis was all stuff happened in past dats why manan got separated dat was so much painful for both f dem n wid manini too
Poor manan
Aaa nandini got drunk well its a headache for manik bt ita a pleasure for we the audience
Bechara manik she literally made manik to say i m her husband to each n every guest hahhahahhahhahahahaahha
My stomach z paining by continous laughing
Bt i feel so bad for the most romantic cple who had nw grown apart
Hopefully all get sorted n yeah dere was much needed manik's p.o.v
Thnq for dat n pm for tooo
Stay blessed
N do update jldi jldi
Will wait for it

HI DEAR

Awwwsome update...I loved it...manik's point of view was awsm and much needed and I am surprised :D haha ok manini's part was awsm and drunk nandu cherry on the cak last me emotional kar diya

Thanks for the pm
It was super duper
Was a nice change reading it from maniks perspective
N also the flashback parts
So now we kinda now what had happened
N Nandu was 7 weeks pregnant n I was honking she was like in her last month
N loved when Nandu got drunk n how they went to each guest
That was too cute!
So looking forward to next update already!

The update was MIND BLOWING ...n sachhi mein LOVE IT TO THECOREE... I just wanna know ur secret behind writing such brilliant updates...aisa ideas hame kyun ni aate...!!!! Nandu drunk...plsss kuch toh fire works hone chaiye...i knw raat mein ni honge...bt morning should b hot..! B haha..!! Loved Drunk nandu alot...!!!! M in love with ur update ya..".Kaise Bataaun tujhe ki dil mera kya kah raha..." Tum ho kon..????
Updateee soonnn...!! I knw weekends pe hi milega but phir bhi..koi chamtkaar..!!!
God Bless u

As always superbbb...awesome. i love the manik pov. And the way u connect the Flashback with current track its just awesome...love it so much and most important ending of this chapter it just tooo good.thank you so much for this lovely update...thank you sooo much nd plzzz plzzz update asap

Manini is sho sweet...she is definitely a princess...And as usual manan rocked with their love bond together

Yaaay! Manik's point of view!

That was brilliant !! Manik's POV was just too good - gave a lot of clarity on what happened and obviously his side of the story :)

So finally Nandini spoke .. N Manik promised .. I just loved it

Can't wait for the next part :)