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vani

@knfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#411

Amazing update .. Superbly written.. Loved the whole truth and dare .. MaNan romance was the best part.. Cabir and his wonderful idea.. All the couples were really sweet.. Nandini became so bold .. Glad she did her dare.. I am eagerly waiting for the next part where MaNan talk.. Please update soon.. Thanks for this beautiful chapter and pm..

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ahanabansal13

@ahanabansal13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#412

Hi!!

Kya karti ho yarrr. ..

What an update. ..maaza aa gaya..

The truth nd dare was sooo interesting

Mujhe sabse aacha dare laga dhruv- it was really unexpected matlab sabke samne kissing on her body part which is his favourite. Cha gaya😆

Manik- OMG! !! Kya seduce kia... nandu toh pakka tomatoes ko competition de rahi hogi..hehe😆 nd upar se mukti ka bold comment " nandini tumhe toh shaadi ke baad bahut maza aane wala h" hahahhah. ..aaega hi hamara very own many manik jo h😆

Nd nandu-😲 <- I was like tu is only while reading that part

Mtlb itni bold... seriously seducing ka kuch Zayda hi effect par gaya. ..hahaha nd iske baad toh I can say ki sirf nandu ko hi nai manik ko bhi maza aane wala h😳*blushing*

Nd I want to say one thing...I can't comment on the pace of the story... but I can say one thing ki ye main make manik and nandini as manan ..mtlb. .the way everyone gets Aww an mukbhi nd the way abhi behaves I really want to see manan like that...nd even manik toh usse bhi 1 no. Aage hona chahie...

Make them understand their silences...make them talk more ...let them know each other more... ns I seriously want to see nandu as a shining star of manik...uske sb probs ka solution ho uske pass...usse handle kare...uske gusset ko bade aaram se had le kare..nd manik he should also reciprocate the same nd love her to a great extent. . mere lie yeh bahut h.. nd if u use ur writting skills tab aur mazedaarr ban zaayega😊

Eagerly waiting for the next update...

Thank you😊

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Roshnisk

@Roshnisk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#413

Its amazing update...

D game was superb it such a mature game 😉

I never expected nandini will do her dare😆 but its soo gud...

N d sitting arrangement is beautiful...

All d pictures u have posted r fabulous...

Waiting to know wat dey r going to talk...

Waiting for next update..

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Kavikrish

@Kavikrish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#414

loved the update...superb...amazing...loved the dare game...all of them were superb...loved nandus bold act...waitngfr their talk...continue soon

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RainFlies

@RainFlies

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Posted: 9 years ago

#415

that was smthing hawwt...😊😊😊

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Mou Deb

@moudeb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#416

super duper awesome updet dear.
thank u for this big updet.
i just loveee it.
love the arrangmeant.
love aliya dhruv acting.
naviya cabir part so funny.
mukti so bold.love mukti boldness.
and last manan part.
its just out of the world.
manik &nandini sunggleing so cute.
manik seduce part to much hot.
&nandini's blodness just amazing.
poor manik try hard to control.
plz plz plz plz plz dear next part updet soon.
stey blessed
keep smiling.
forver.

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guptaritika

@guptaritika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#417

awesome yaar...
loved it...
eagerly waiting 4 d nxt part...
plz b little fast...

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Sree

@Sreeja_babu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#418

Wow!! Awesum update dear...
Such along update..Lvd it so much...
N such A hot n romantic one...😳😳
Sorry dear 4 late commentin...
Thnks dear 4 d pm so much...

Cabir's version of truth n dare vid twist rckd really..
Kya mast dares tha??Damn suprb!!!!Njyd a lot..
Alya enactin dhruv n his proposing..
Dat was fantastic dear...Really dhruv itna shy tha???😲
Ab dhruv bhi bold hogya...hahaha😆😆😆

Then came Mukbhi's dare...
Abhi's dare was so nice n cool...Really emotional..
Den mukthi's dare..OMG!!!😲😲😲
Mukthi became so bold yaar...
Kissin Abhi infront of all other 4 minutes...
So much guts yaar...Hahaha😆😆 Nice yaar..

Den came our one n only Manan's turn...
Wt 2 say yaar?? Dat was so hot...
Manik seducin nandu n givin hickey 2 manik...
So romantic...No wrdz 2 say...
U nailed it dear...Update was beyond suprb..
Do continue dear..Waitin 4 nxt prt

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kash321

@kash321

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Posted: 9 years ago

#419

Heyy
Its fab read both chaps in 1 go
It is nt dt usually truth nd dare stuff
It was crazy
I Njoy to d core
Id d bst part long updates
Super duper excited for next part