MaNan FS TOM AND JERRY BUT WITH LOVE EPILOGUE /PG 51 (25 MARCH) - Page 31

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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update...
manan parents planed all this to confess manan...wow...best parents
loved manik confession ...
beautiful ending...
loved d update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...
Manan parents planed all this...
Awww.. So cute...
Manik's Confession was very cute...😳
Perfect Ending for this story...
Thanks foe the PM
Keep Writing...
Thanks for this lovely story...
Take care dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome happy update
manan confession infront of family is good
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
EPILOGUE:

The sun rays were disturbing the sleep of a beautiful girl who was sleeping peacefully and she was covering herself more and more with the blanket.

She was stirring on the bed when her room door got opened and a man of late 20's entered her room and he smiled seeing her.

He slowly walked towards her and sat beside her and he kept his hand on her forehead and spoke lovingly

Man: princess utho na

Girl: no Papa

Man: arey esa kaise chalo na we have to play remember

The girl woke with a jerk and sat on the bed and spoke while rubbing her eyes with back of her palms

Girl: good morling Papa see I wake filst than bhai

The man smiled seeing his genes in his princess and he took her in his arms

Girl: see papa I gol(got) to sal(say) my name

Man: acha toh batav na

Girl: ishika malhotra daughter of manik malhotra

Yes she was the daughter of our MaNan and princess of manik and her name was ishika which means daughter of god.

It was five years MaNan were married and they have two bunches of happiness with them I.e. MaNan got twins a boy and girl three years ago

Twins sey yaad aya lets meet the boy and junior malhotra

A boy was in peaceful sleep and his sleep was disturbed by his very own mother who came to wake him.

Boy: plz mumma sone do na

His mother was none other than our nandini

N: nahi aru utho na

Aru: nali(nahi) mom

N: bilkul thumari dad ki tarah hey

Aru: arey beta vuska hey toh Papa ki tarah hi rahunga na

N: acha toh thum uth gaya

Aru: haa

The boy was none other than the junior malhotra the aarav malhotra which means peaceful who was the Xerox copy of nandini in behaviour but is ziddi like his father and was over sey bhi over protective towards her sister but he doesn't show it to her

Same as manik na but bechara nandini and ishu they have to deal with the world tough father and son

The both mumma and son duo were hugging each other and were spending some private time of theirs but their time was broken by manik who came with ishu their to check on aru

Manik and ishu came inside and they saw both of them were busy in their land and manik fake coughed to gain their attention and they turned towards them.

As soon as ishu saw her mom she hopped down from her father arms and ran in to nandini arms

And same is the case with arav he too jumped in to arms of manik

They both took them in to their as and manik joined nandini and ishu in the hug with arav and it turned into a perfect family hug.

They broke the hug when they heard someone calling from back and broke d hug and they turned towards the source and found their parents.

The two children when found their grand parents there they both ran towards them in a light speed and took all of them in to a hug.

Seeing all of them hugging each other nandini came with her plans

N: see manik when their daadi and naani came na they both forget about us

She said rubbing her fake tears and manik too seconded her and played along

M: haa nandu I agree

As soon as he completed they both were loaded with huge amount of kisses from their two tiny loved ones

MaNan smiled by seeing their loves

"WE LOVE U BOTH A LOT"

Both ishu and aru said the same dialogue at the same time and this made MaNan smile to largest and they both were laughing and took both of them in to hug and spoke in unison

"WE LOVE U TOO"

"We love u all"

All the elders said in unison and they came and hugged them.

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MaNan were sitting in their room as they got some lone time as their chota packets were out by the parents

They both were sitting on the swing and nandini in manik lap and he was nuzzling his face in her hair and nandini was enjoying it thoroughly and blushing at d same time also

N: Mani see after entry of ishu and aru our lives changed a lot na

M: hmm

Manik was not even listening to what is nandini saying and he was just say hmm for all her words.

Manik without giving her a chance to speak further he turned her around and just cupped her face and came closer to her face

M: I love u jaan

He said slowly yet with passion in her ears and this husky voice of his always gives goosebumps to her and she was shivering and this made manik smirk by seeing his effect on her

He slowly came towards her lips and took both her lips inside his mouth and slowly started to kiss them hungrily as he had kisses them a agea ago but we know our majnu manik na he kissed her lips just 4 hrs ago as he dint let her sleep at night at all.

Iss manik ka toh kuch na kuch toh karna padega

Both were busy bitting and chewing eachother lips and manik as usual dominating her

Bechara nandini ko ek baar bhi dominate nahi karne deta hey manik kya karu iss ladka ka

They broke the kiss when they were out of breathe and they joined their foreheads and manik spoke lovingly again

M: I love u a lot jaan

N: I love u too honey

Manik smiled and was about to take her lips for another round but we're stopped by the voice of their chotu packets who were back home.

Manan smiled at each other and went towards them.

Their day starts with them and also ends with them and they make a perfect family and a perfect parents and a perfect friends and perfect enemies aa they don't stop fighting now also and they fight on all silly things and get patched in a minute.

After all thy are Tom and Jerry na bit has love in between them which is inseparable.




so here is my first epilogue

hope u all like it

and if there are any mistaked plz say me i will change as i dint re check the chapter

and do tell me how is it

and urs views abt the story

whether u liked it or not

and i want to say thanks to all of u for bearing with my idiotic and waste stories

silent readers at least comment now

love

prathyusha

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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazinggg
Superbbb epilogue
Lovd it
Enjoyed a lot
Happy endingg
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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi,


That was a beautiful and a mesmerising Epilogue. A happy family with its own shares of emotions and bonds. I think a relationship would be amazing between a couple if they are good friends too and thodi fight toh chalti hai...

You really drafted the chapter well and I am so glad. But, i am upset too with the note, though i understand you completely. I will be following you on wattpad for sure. I'll always be there for you.

Lots of Love

Ankita
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow wat a beautiful epilogue...
Manan nd der amazing love for each other...

Manan nd der cute chota packets al tym cutie pies...

Plzzz update new part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb ending...
Loved it very much...
Thanks for the PM...😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wowew

Beautiful epilogue yr

Keep it up dear

Last line was the best
Ofcourse fighting? Nok jhok is the best part
In tom n Jerry hayeeena

Happy holi

Vidhi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow.. awesome. .
Too cute. .
Ishu and aarav
Do update soon
Waiting Eagerly

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