MANAN SS - ALPHA AND HIS MATE (NEW THREAD LINK ON INDEX )16 FEB - Page 23

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: epshitatabassum

Sorry for late comments


I have high fever & catch bad cold




Awesome





Beautiful





Mind blowing



Superb

It's okay sweetheart thank u so much
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cute_Inaya

Mind blowing... update...

Thanks for the details ...
Nandini usse accept nhi kr rahi...
manik ka pov... kya m handsome nhi hu...😆 awesome...
Very very beautifully describe ...
u did a fabulous job...

But yrrr nandini 18 year ki nhi hai jo usse nhi pata chala ki manik hi uska mate hai..???
Aur nandini ki family alive hai ya nhi..??

Can't wait... continue soon..
Thanks for pm...
keep smiling...
Stay bless..
Lots of love...


Thanks inaya and wait for update u will get to knew
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rushagree

superb



lovely



amazing




plz next chapter


update soon

Thanks and updating

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: saradanamrata

Wow...

Its awesome...
I read all ur parts in one go...
I just loved it...
Can't wait for next one...
Plzzz update fast..
Plzzz pm me...
Plzzz pm me ur other stories also...
I want to read them all..
Plzzz

I will dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aarvi-manan

oh god...

i just loved it...

its totally new concept... manik n nandini both r from the other kingdom...hahahha...

but really interesting...

keep next updating soon...

Thanks and updating😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: reet0143

are maja nahi bhut maja aya yaar...


choti thi but koi ni...

busy hone ke baad bhi tumne update kiya for that 👏👏👏

am just loving this story...

superb...

different concept...

manik ko bhut kuch karna padega nandu ko manane ke liye...

abhi to nandu keh rahi k usne kuch wrong kiya kya jo manik uska mate hai...

but baad mein usko realise hoga k usne shayad bhut acha kiya hai kuch ki manik uska mate hai...

manik ke jitna love koi nahi karega nandu ko...

their cute fights ..bada maja ata hai...😆😆

kuch confousion tha but u cleared it all...

thanks

pls update soon now...

keep shining and stay blessed always diyu...

Reet

Thanks reet and updating sweetheart
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Posted: 9 years ago
Meri ek dost se is story ke baare mein suni thi finly yeh story mil gayi
Superb story
Pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello guys ...missed me ...well sorry for not updating last two days...actually yesterday was my jaan b'day ...so I was busy over there ...That's why I couldn't update ...hope you guys understand...so here is ur update ...ENJOY😛


PART-2 (B)


Manik was holding nandani in his arms ...but nandani being nandani like so dheet...how can she hold him ...through manik frowned by that but happy at least ...she is not shouting or crying anymore...manan came towards the war area ...nandani saw the surroundings and shocked to see ...dead bodies ...blood was everywhere...nandani was so afraid to see all this but the next thing makes her shocked from the core ...she pushed manik hardly and ran towards the direction ...manik was so shocked by this ...but he was afraid at the same time bcz war was going on and it's not safe for her ...he ran behind her and calling her ...but nandani was kept running ...running and running ...she pushed someone hardly who was trying to kill guy ...and hugged the guy tightly and cried loudly ...guy wss shocked at first but to hugged her back for calm her down ...

Nandani Pov :

I was so irritated with the monster...I really don't know how he became my mate ...kya iss jahan main ek yahi monster mila tha mere liye ...not fair Aayappaa ...I was thinking all this suddenly I noticed he came towards the war area ...I was so afraid to see dead bodies ...blood ...I just felt like to go somewhere else and hide myself ...I can feel his grip towards me is tighter ...I looked towards him ...he was already looking at me ...maybe he got to knew am afraid of all this...but I immediately looked away...suddenly I saw someone is trying to kill abhi ...oh god ...abhi ...no ...I can't let anything happen to him ...no never ...I pushed him hardly and ran towards abhi ...I can hear him ...I knew he is calling me ...but why would I listen to him ...he is the one ...bcz of whom my family is in this situation ...bcz of him they were in the edge of death ...if anything happens to my family ...I swear I will kill u ...bloody monster ...I pushed the guy hardly and hugged abhi tightly and cried ...I knew he must be shocked to see me here ...but still ...he hugged me back tried to console me ...I can feel someone was behind me ...maybe that guy whom I pushed ...I knew am going to die any moment ...suddenly a loud voice came STOP ...Everyone became silent and looked towards the voice ...and I knew it's him ...but I don't want to see him ...no ...never ...

Manik came towards nandani who was hugging abhi ...he pulled her towards him and said loudly

Manik loudly said : MINE ...

Anger was clearly visible in his voice ... Everyone was looked at him in shock ...nandani glared at him and saw her father ...she again pushed him and hugged her father ...to which her father to hugged her back ...but she was again pulled by manik ...but this time his anger was at peak ...

Manik Angrily said : MINE ...ONLY MINE ...

Nandani looked at him angrily ...but he was looking straight and glaring her father ...she looked at him in disbelief ...abhi pulled nandani towards him and angrily said

Abhi angrily said : what the ...bloody hell ...u jerk ...how can u say my sister as urs ...haa...she is not bloody urs ...god dammit ...she can't be urs ...she is my sister ...I wouldn't let my sister go with a monster like u ...

Manik growled angrily to which abhi growled with the same hatred...anger ...they were about to attack but stop by a voice ...

Voice : STOP ...

Nandani looked at the direction saw her mom ...she hugged her mom tightly ...to which she to hugged her back and kissed her forehead ...and walk towards abhi and manik ...

Nandani's mom : Kya kar rahe ho tum log ...aur abhi tu kya kar raha ha beta ...mat bhul ...he is ur sister's mate ...ur sister has to go with him ...he has all the rights to consider her as his ...he is her mate ...please accept it ...

Nandani cryingly said : I ...Don't want to go mom...I ...I don't ...

Nandani's mom cupped her face and lovingly said

Nandani's mom : Nandani jaan please stop crying baby ...he is ur mate ...u both are designed by fate...please understand jaan ...

Abhi : No jaan ...u don't need to go ur brother is here ...I will not let anything happen to u ...please mat suno ...

Nandani's dad:Jaan what u want ...

Nandani eyes were filled with tears ...Manik came towards nandani ...and come close to her ears and said ...

Manik :MATE ... AGAR MANA KIYA MERE SAATH JAANE KE LIYE ...I WILL MAKE SURE EVERYONE WILL DIE ...EVERYONE MEANS EVERYONE ...AUR PHIR KOI BHI NAHI ROK PAAYEGA MUJHE TUMHE YAHA SE LE JAANE KE LIYE...SOCH LO TUM KYA CHAHTI HO ...CHUP CHAP MERE SAATH CHALOGI ...I WILL OVER THIS WAR RIGHT HERE ...AUR AGAR NAHI I WILL MAKE SURE EVERYONE WILL DIE...CHOICE IS URS SWEET ...KYUNKI LE KAR TOH MAIN TUMHE JAAUNGA ...ESE NAHI TOH VAISE ...

Nandani looked at him with anger filled eyes ...but he just smirks and back to his place ...nandani looked at her father ...and then at manik ...and took a deep breath and said

Nandani : I WILL GO WITH U ...

Screen frazes abhi shocked expression ...manik smirks ...nandani who was holding tears in her eyes ...

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***werewolves are very possessive about there mates ...they can't bear any male near their mate ...***


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***When werewolves found there mates ...mate (female) has to go with his mate (in there pack house)

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So how's it Guys ...I hope koi confusion nahi ha ...if u still have any confusion tell me ...so manik is becoming a monster now ...ab kya kya hoga ...well bahot saare twist abhi aane baaki ha ...so please be ready ...
And yes
IF U GUYS LOVE IT ...DO HIT THE LIKE BUTTON AND COMMENT ON IT TOO ...
Till then
Keep loving
Keep smiling
And
Keep shining For Ur loved ones
Love
Diya😛


WHICH STORY U WANT ME TO UPDATE NEXT

MANAN SS - HIDDEN LOVE
&

MANAN FF - FRIENDS TO SOULMATES

I WILL UPDATE... CHOICE IS URS ...PLEASE TELL ME ...THEN I WILL UPDATE ...

Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its kinda imprint thing like twilight right.?hope manik haven't hurt nandu's family. or else she will never accept him...
Waise m loving d concept n story..couldn't comment earlier. .was little busy. .sorry.
I loved MaNan..
Update soonish😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazinggg update
Manik jo khta hai wo krta hai
Lovd it
Continue soon

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