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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you SooO much Guys for ur lovely comments and likes ...Guys this story is quite different as u all knew...maybe that's the reason when am writing this story ...I feel so good ...so without any delay ...here is ur update ...ENJOY😛

PART-1(B)

Nandani hugged her mother and left her house ...and saw people's were running here and there for saving there lifes ...she was running aimlessly ...tears were flowing from her eyes continuesly ...

Nandani Pov :
Why Aayappaa ?...why ? ...why are u doing all this? ...today is my b'day ...it should be the best day of my life ... why are u making it a worst day ...why Aayappaa? Why? ...kya karu main ...kaha jaau ...maa ...papa ...abhi...they all want me to leave them ... how am I supposed to leave them when I couldn't even breathe without them ... when I knew they need me ... what am I supposed to do ... please help me Aayappaa ...please ...

Nandani was thinking all this ...suddenly her eyes fell on a guy who was killing people's so harshly ...his eyes were blood shot red...its like monster over took him ...nandani's hand were literally shaking ...fear was visible in her face ...the only thing which came in her mind was to RUN ...she started running like anything ... she came to the forest ...but not for a second she stops ...those eyes were literally Killing her ...she just wanted to go ...go away from here ...from those monsters ...suddenly she pulled by a unknown force ...he grabbed her both arms and pined her towards the tree ...nandani eyes were closed due to fear...her tears made there way ...she couldn't understand what to do ...but the next thing makes her shocked like anything ...

Guy smirkingly said : MATE ...

After listening mate nandani eyes were poped out like a socket ...she couldn't believe in her ears ...she just looking at the guy with widened eyes...and...guy was also looking at her ...

Guy Pov :
God she is so cute ...so little ...so fragile ...like a cute doll ...her big eyes ...cute nose ...chuby cheeks ...her pouty lips ...god I just wanted to kiss her so hard...God...how am I going to control myself ...I can't believe ...I got such a beautiful mate ...but wait ...what she is doing here ...did she lived here or what ...I need to knew ...

Guy cupped nandani's face and lovingly said

Guy lovingly said : MATE ...

Nandani came out of the trance and stammeringly said

Nandani stammeringly said: k-kon...ho...tum...

Guy smiled looking at her innocence and said :

Guy smilingly said : AM MANIK ...ALPHA OF BEAST ...

After listening this ...nandani pushed manik and hide herself under the tree ...manik was just looking at her in shock...

Manik : Mate kya hua ... are u okay ...

Nandani hugged her knees and cried bitterly ...manik couldn't see her like this ...he came towards her and about to toch her suddenly she shouted

Nandani cryingly said : No ...du...dur raho ...pl...please ...Don't ...kill me ...please ...

Manik was so shocked by listening this but he knew he has to be calm ...

Manik calmly said : Hey please don't be scared ...am ur mate ...please come out ...

Nandani cried bitterly and shoutedly said

Nandani shoutedly said : No ...u ...will ...kill me ...u ...u ...r a monster ...please chale jao ...leave me alone ...please go away...

Manik was now angry ...Firstly how can she call him a monster ...and now she wants him to leave her ...how can she said that ...these things makes him angry

Manik angrily said : Listen just come out ...

Nandani cryingly said : No ...

That was it ...manik forcefully holds her hand and dragged her with him ...nandani was crying shouting like anything ...manik stops and pinned her towards the tree and angrily said

Manik angrily said : Shut up ...

Nandani closed her eyes due to fear ... tears were continuesly flowing from her eyes ...manik holds her by her waist ...

Manik calmly said : Mate please open ur eyes ...

Nandani opened her eyes and looked ibto his eyes ...both were just looking at each other ...but reality hits her ...sh pushed him hardly to which he steps back ...he was looking at her confusingly ...

Manik : Mate ...

Nandani shoutedly said : No ...am not ur mate ...why can't you understand...I can't be ur mate ...u r monster...suna tumne ...u r a monster...please leave me ...just go away ...

Manik holds nandani waist tightly ...nandani was trying hard to get rid of his grip but his grip became tighter ...

Nandani shoutedly said : leave me ...

Manik angrily said : No ...

The voice is so horrible ...nandani looked at him his dark brown eyes became green ...she got to knew his wolf was empowered him ...nandani closed her eyes in fear ...she can heard his roaring sound ...she knows now he will kill her any moment ...the fear of being killed by any moment was over her face ...her tears were not stopping .. she just want to god it's her dream ...and when she opened her eyes all these things will be vanished ...but no ...this is not a dream ... this is the reality of her life now ...his roaring voice is so horrible ... tears were started flowing from her eyes ...suddenly she felt his grip became loose ...she opened her eyes and saw him looking at with all his love ...he cupped her face and wiped her tears and lovingly said

Manik lovingly said : Mate please don't cry ...I will not kill u ...if I will kill u ...I will hurt myself too ...and u knew that ...believe me mate I will never harm u ...I will protect you always ...

He kissed her forehead and hold her hand and ask her to come with him but the next thing makes him shocked ...

Nandani : I can be ur mate but u can't be my mate ...u can have me ...but I will never except u ...bcz u r a murderer ...a monster ...and a monster can't be my MATE ...

Manik was just looking at her with painfully eyes ...

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So how's it ...accha laga yaa nahi ...please tell me guys ...u knew ur views are very important for me ...well this is how they meet ...and guys...abhi toh story start hui ha ...much more fun is coming ...and yes I will update this story regularly ...but I need ur response ... agar response accha nahi mila toh I have to change my decision ...I hope you don't want right ...so please comment or likes karna mat bhulna ...if you guys like it
Do Hit the like button And comment on it Too...
Till then Keep loving Keep smiling And Keep shining For Ur loved ones
Love you all
Diya😛

(One important thing any werewolf can't kill there mate .. if they will kill them they also be killed ...in short if ur mate got hurt somewhere the other person (mate) is also feels the pain)
Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
Wow!!!!!
U have really gud writting skills... plz continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Soo nice! Its just smwher else! Plz cntinue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
That was a very dramatic meet
Manik needs to change her perspective about him...


Loved it

Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Amazing mind-blowing.
Alpha can't harm his mate.
But he is alpha of beasts.
What he will do.
She hates him.
But he will protect her and love her madly.
Will wait for next update.
Awesome story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Nice 1..
So nandu is tryng to reject manik...hr mate..
Lukng frwrd fr wht step manik wl tk nxt

Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Wow nice update...
So Nandi is manik mate...
Nandu was soo scared of him...
Manik is soo caring he is behaving so calmly with her...
Manik was soo hurt to hear the last words from Nandu...
And will u explain what the diff b/w beast and warewolf in ur story...
Luved it...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Hey dear nice update manan met but nandu is sacred and crying she is not accepting his her mate and excited for further parts
absnads thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
nice story..
its quite different and awesome...
pls continue..
Patelsonu thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting excited continue soon plzzz plzzz plzzz

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