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ankita_t

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Posted: 9 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic
Wow awesome update...
Manan became friends...
Luved manik and his parents bond...
Soo marriage started...
Luved haldi rasam it was wow...
Luved last scene...
Luved it...
Thnx for pm...
update soon...

Hi,

Thank you so much... I am glad you liked the premise i tried to set up... Yeah the marriage has begun and we'll just go through the main highlight points...

Thank you sharing your thoughts with me... it means a lot to me..

Take care.

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ankita_t

@ankita_t

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Posted: 9 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: reet0143
Awesome...

Superb

Fantastic

Mind Blowing

Amazing

Fabulous...

really yaar i don't have any words to describe that how much am loving the story...

this is just the ist part and i loved it totally...

everything seems to be so perfect ,,,,,,

sab kuch itna jaldi jaldi ho raha hai...

and bechare manik ka kya haal kar diya haldi mein...😆😆

bechare ke kapde hi phat gaye...🤣

granny was awesome...her dialogues ...superb...

it's true we punjabi do everything in extreme ...

maja a gya chappy padh ke...

u nailed it...👏👏👍🏼

ab manik khud hi pachtayega k nandini ko frnds banne ka bol ke...

let's see what next...

pls update soon...asap...

just can't wait...

desperately waiting...

thanks

Reet

HI Reet,

What a pleasant surprise you are a Punjabi... I really need to quickly apologise for bizzare Punjabi dialogue lol... I mean i do understand Punjabi and speak a bit too, but i thought i should keept it simple for readers...

Well, firstly thank you so much for appreciating the chapter, it means a lot to me...

I had been to one of our family friend's Haldi ceremony when i got to know of this ritual that they tear the clothes of the groom...😆... And, it perfectly fitted here as soon as i started to pen down the Haldi ceremony... It just suited the flow in the narration and also i wanted to set up the premise for the Teaser...

Punjabi's are awesome trust me...

Thank you so much for appreciating my work... and ya jhappi meri taraf se bhi...

Take care.

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ankita_t

@ankita_t

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Posted: 9 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: etuu
update was full of fun... 😃 starting was really great... pizza -30 minutes
Maggie - 2 minutes & arrange marriage - 11 days... too fast... 😉 you really beautifully panned manik's situation... he was badly trapped... he would going to be lost his bachelorhood that thought scary for him... but poor manik couldn't cajole his home ministry... 😉 that pandit was hilarious...
"friends " that word will become his biggest enemy ...
thanks for not dragging marriage function so much... naughtiness of granny... & that bold auntie... poor manik couldn't save his cheeks from that ruthless pulls...

😉
I love this story so so so much... I don't have enough words for praise you... you're as usual flawless... can't wait for next chapter... if possible then update tonight please... 👏 😆

Hi,

Thank you Eetu, now this time it should be counted ok... well, i am glad to know you liked the start...

I didn't want to drag the functions and you know write all those typical stuff coz then you lose the pace and honestly, in real life 80% of the time you don't get time to do all this while the wedding goes on... so i just wanted to be real... hope i am not wrong...

I am glad you agreed with my line of thought... Well, the aunties attacked the cute "Dulha" and pulled his cheek with affection...😉... Hope you continue to like it ahead too.

Take care.