Mr.Romantic & Miss.Unromantic... ON HOLD - Page 23

Originally posted by: aditimanan

Hahaha lol manik even didnt realisr he was in towel its gonna be tough for manik to impress nandi as she is always in frndship mood
Loved the chappy

Originally posted by: manan23sujoy

Awesome update
This was just flawless. I mean you have written it perfectly. Without taking much time, you showed their haldi too only in one update. This was amazing.
The pace of the story is going well.
Okay so loved this update.
Pehle meeting me hi Manik and Nandini said yes for marriage.
You have described Manik's situation very nicely. Well written
Then their meeting...good
I loved the Pandit part!! 😆
The short courtship period was also very nicely written.
Then the Haldi 😆
Poor Manik 😆
And the bold Aunty...boxers nai pehne kya 🤣
Very interesting update
Continue soon
Waiting for next part

Well forgot to mention...You are an amazing writer. Loved your writing skills
Keep writing
Stay blessed ⭐️

Originally posted by: mickeym

Awesome update dear ..
You are an amazing writer.👏
I loved the Pandit part!! 🤣
poor Manik 😆 boxers nai pehne kya 🤣
waiting for next part,please continue soon,

Originally posted by: gkjasmine

it was awesome no words to say keep giving us long and early updates thanks for the pm u penned it well

Originally posted by: sri_valli

superb update dear...im feeling pity for manik now...he is having so many expectations from nandu but she us sooo unromantic...she always feels releaved when manik told her that they R frnds...poor manik he himself built foundation for his own misery...wqiting for manan marriage to witness maniks different ways to get close to nandu and nandinis royal ignorance...

Originally posted by: Aamikrish

Awesome start.

It was really funny update.

I loved d way u explained everything in maniks pov.

Dat haldi part was so funny, poor Manik.

Continue soon.

Originally posted by: rajirock123

Hey dear the update is nice

Marriage is going to happened in superb way i think

And haldi celebrations were hilirous

And they tore his pants i wad laughing while readin that part

Pls update next part soon

Pls pm me iam in ur buudy only