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ankita_t

@ankita_t

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Posted: 9 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: manya_189
Haha super good!
Loved it !!

Hi,

Thanks a lot for liking the chapter.

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reet0143

@reet0143

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Posted: 9 years ago

#182

Awesome...

Superb

Fantastic

Mind Blowing

Amazing

Fabulous...

really yaar i don't have any words to describe that how much am loving the story...

this is just the ist part and i loved it totally...

everything seems to be so perfect ,,,,,,

sab kuch itna jaldi jaldi ho raha hai...

and bechare manik ka kya haal kar diya haldi mein...😆😆

bechare ke kapde hi phat gaye...🤣

granny was awesome...her dialogues ...superb...

it's true we punjabi do everything in extreme ...

maja a gya chappy padh ke...

u nailed it...👏👏👍🏼

ab manik khud hi pachtayega k nandini ko frnds banne ka bol ke...

let's see what next...

pls update soon...asap...

just can't wait...

desperately waiting...

thanks

Reet

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etu

@etuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#183

update was full of fun... 😃 starting was really great... pizza -30 minutes
Maggie - 2 minutes & arrange marriage - 11 days... too fast... 😉 you really beautifully panned manik's situation... he was badly trapped... he would going to be lost his bachelorhood that thought scary for him... but poor manik couldn't cajole his home ministry... 😉 that pandit was hilarious...
"friends " that word will become his biggest enemy ...
thanks for not dragging marriage function so much... naughtiness of granny... & that bold auntie... poor manik couldn't save his cheeks from that ruthless pulls...

😉
I love this story so so so much... I don't have enough words for praise you... you're as usual flawless... can't wait for next chapter... if possible then update tonight please... 👏 😆

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jasmine

@gkjasmine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#184

it was awesome no words to say keep giving us long and early updates thanks for the pm u penned it well

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sri_valli

@sri_valli

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#185

superb update dear...im feeling pity for manik now...he is having so many expectations from nandu but she us sooo unromantic...she always feels releaved when manik told her that they R frnds...poor manik he himself built foundation for his own misery...wqiting for manan marriage to witness maniks different ways to get close to nandu and nandinis royal ignorance...

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Lizbeth

@Lizbeth

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Posted: 9 years ago

#186

Owww.. This is how it started.. Loved it .. I really appreciate ki, u r taking this marrg thing in cry fast manner.. That's really good.

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@ps_angel

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#187

Hahahhaaa

Lolzzz

Il die of laughing di

Its soo awesme dii

Loved manik z way of talking

Even manik z daadi too
Lolzzz
Manik kasa mummy ko.maskaa maar rha tha...bt den dimaag tokane ayaa nd blushing nd al haan...
Manan meet ws awesme
I gt no wrds to descrbe hw awesme it ws

N den haldi too ws mind blowinggg

Daaadi rockksss
Kapde faad daale

Lolzzz

Hayyee manan
Soo lovelyyy

Oved it di

Truly
Hope ur finw nw...sbb theek.hoje jldiii

God luck
Take care :)

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Aamikrish

@Aamikrish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#188

Awesome start.

It was really funny update.

I loved d way u explained everything in maniks pov.

Dat haldi part was so funny, poor Manik.

Continue soon.

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tas456

@tas456

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#189

Awesome update dear

Can't wait for the next update

Please update soon

Tqvm for the pm dear

Take care and stay blessed

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ankita_t

@ankita_t

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Posted: 9 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: Tiara115
Wow..
that was quick 11 days mei shadi ...
Manik's dadi seems to be cool..
Last part was dan funny
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly

Hi,

yes it was a quick wedding...yup his Granny i awesome...thanks a lot...

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