#3MUJHE TERI ZARORAT HAI (v.v. v. imp. note) pg83

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<font size="6" color="#000007">TO THREAD 3</font>

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<font color="#000007" size="3">So guyz.. thanx.. alot.. to u all that i reached to thread 3 of this story.. this is very.. very.. emotinal.. story.. as all guyz.. but hope from this thread the darkness n sadness of story.. will end thread is opened at right is from the next part new beginning of story.. will start..</font>
<font color="#000007" size="3">bs i wanna.. say.. sorry. If i made. U.. cry.. n thanks.. alot.. for supporting.. me.. hope.. for same in future.. too...</font>

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<font size="4" color="#990033">THREAD 1</font>
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<font size="4" color="#990033">THREAD 2</font>


Part : 30 Full of romance






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<font color="#000007" size="3">LOVE MEHAK</font>


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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats dear :)
wish you to make many more threads
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Posted: 9 years ago
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a lot of congrats fr the new thread...
keep smiling n keep writing...
love ur story so much...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART : 28 A
"Nhi.. manik.. u can't say to her that ki she is been coma from 2 yr. As her wound r fresh she will doubt than"doc. Said as manik asked him to tell nandini that she is coma from 2 yr

"But.. doc. Wht i will tell to her"manik asked from doc. Worriedly

"Manik.. relax.. u smiply say to her she met with big accident in which she loss her memory.. aur.. manik.. don't worry.. now i can say she will be f9.. soon.."doc assured manik

"She will.. be f9.. "manik said with determined face

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"Manik..."nandini get up shouting manik name

"Shona.. i m here.. only"manik said holding her she was sweating badly

"Manik.. where.. we r.. wht happen to me.."nandini start asking questions as she was feeling so much.. worried wht happening to her as she forgot 2 yr. Memory

"First.. relax.. i will tell u everything"manik said calmly making her sit with support of bed n put pillow at her back n make her drink water

"Manik.. plz.. batao.. na.. "nandini said n look toward him helplessly

"Nandini.. u have been in coma from 2 month.. and u loss yr memory of 2 yr.. "manik said n nandini looked at him shockingly

"Dekho.. u don't need be worry.. i m wid u.. na.."manik said holding her face

"Pr.. mujhe.. ho kya.. tha.. "she asked him cryingly looking at him n manik take a deep breath as now he have to ly her

"Shot circuit ke karan blast ho gya.. tha.. n ush time u were.. only in the house.. nandini.. i can't tell how much happy i m to see u.. f9.."manik said n hug her as it very difficult to ly to her but he have to do for her betterment that'why to hide his tear he hug her.. as he knows if she will see him in tear.. n she feel bad for him

"Manik.. i m sorry... i was not there wid u.. in these 2 month " nandini.. said cryingingly holding him tightly

" U r feeling sorry.. for me for 2 month but when u come to know it's not 2 month it's 2 long yr.. n not only u have to remain separated from me even u have suffered alot in this 2 yr.. i m sorry.. "manik thinks as he feeling so much guilty that he can't protect her but now she is saying sorry.. without knowing anything

"Shona.. u okay.. now.. that's more imp. Why.. u r saying.. sorry.. i m sorry.. i m not dr wid u that.. time.. to protect.. n tum itna.. pain suffer krna.. padha.."manik said holding her face n looking into her eyes wht he want to say to her from past 2 month now he is saying the guilt he is having in it.. it making more more weak

"Manik... i know.. u do yr.. best.. to save me from that blast.. but.. manik.. i toh.. goes in coma.. but how u lived.. by seeing me like.. this.. u want to talk to me.. but mein.. toh.. tumhai.. kuch.. reply.. hi.. nhi.. deti.. hongi.. i feeling.. i thinking.. about yr.. condition manik.. yeh.. sb.. i m saying becoz i know.. how much u love me.. mujhe.. tum ek chuti.. si.. chut bhi.. lg jati.. hai.. toh.. how much.. u cry.. chut mujhe lgti.. hai.. ushai.. khi jada dard tumhai hota hai aur ab.. i was been for 2 month.. i m sorry.. i.. can't do anything.. " nandini said looking toward manik with her painful eyes she said all this as she know how much he loves.. her..

Manik is just looking into her eyes in disbelief as he was so much surprised with her.. as he how much she knows about him the each word she said is right.. yes he die in this 2 month when she became a lifeless soul n he kill himself that day when he see her worst condition he was only living for her only as he want to give her happiness back.. vrna.. toh.. he died on that day only when he come to know that nandini has go through dat much pain n he can't protect he died in a guilt

"Manik... i feeling so.. sorry.. for this also that.. i forgot our precious 2 yr.. our.. loveable 2yr."nandini said n manik got a shocked as these r not their precious loveable years these r the worst year for them specially for her as she was saying that year it giving her more n more pain

"Manik.. plz.. i want to spend our 2 yr.. once more... "Nandini said hugging him again manik is numb. As she was saying she spend this 2 yr again..

"Nandini.. forgot.. na.. ab we are.. r together na.. we make.. our future more special.. why u thinking about past.."manik compose himself n said as now no more he can't listen her that word

"Manik.. u know.. i m so.. happy.. to have u.. in my.. life.. becoz.. u never.. make me.. feel stressed as balae.. i forgot 2 yr. But mujhe.. pta.. hai.. u never make me to feel that.. i don't know wht good work i have done jo mujhe tum mile... i love u.. so much... "nandini said n again hug him tightly

"I love.. u.. to.. my shona.. "manik said happily as he feeling from inside happy that now he get her nandini back that he is being craving from 2 yr..

Both r holding eachother more n more tightly manik he want to save her in his arm forever n after many he get relief now thing became better as now she is with.. n nandini from inside having so much confusion but she don't want to stress him as she is thinking that as she wake up after 2 month she will talk him later on
Love is like this only in this both lover don't want to give tension to eachother. They always want to see eachother always happy they always try to hide their sadness inside . Here also both of them having lots of going in their mind but they have to hide as they don't make them worried..


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PART : 28 B
"Manik.. seriously this room.. is so.. beautiful mtlb.. ki.. i was in coma also.. n u were.. taking care.. of wht i like.. as u know i loved underwater things n tumhne.. toh.. wht say.. manik.. u r best.. "nandini said as she feeling so much blessed to have him now manik and nandini lying on bed in eachother arm nandini head on manik chest


"Shona.. agr.. tum mujhe.. itna.. pyaar.. karogi.. toh.. tum itni.. achi.. hogi.. toh.. i have try my best to make u feel special.."manik said pecking her forehead manik is fully trying to be normal as he knows she caught him immidiatly

"Manik.. plz.. na.. i want to see.. the house.. if. only.. one room is so.. beautiful.. toh.. i m very.. much excited to see the whole palace.. lets go.."nandini said setting up on bed n manik is only seeing her as after... ages.. he is seeing her world her life so much happy.. so much excited he is lost in her.. he don't having word to express his happiness he thinking how can god do this to innocent so pure soul.. wht was her mistake that she is always try to spread happiness..

"Manik... i know... how u feeling to see me.. that's i m trying to be normal.. as.. i want to know about my 2 yr.. it making... my head.. blasting... but.. abhi.. i want to make this movement special for u.."nandini thinks in her mind as she knows manik is dyeing to see to her speaking.. but she was confused why he is not sharing anything of this 2 yr

"Manik... chlo.. na.. "Nandini said shakking manik n manik comes out of his thought n immidiatly set up

"Where.. " manik asked as he didn't listen wht she as said he that much lost in her..

"Oh.. god.. manik.. i want to see.. this.. house.. as the room.. is so beautiful.. i loved.. it.. " Nandini said in excitedly

"Offcourse.. my princess.. yr.. all wishes r my demand.. "manik said getting up.. he was also.. worried about her physical condition as now also she is not that much fit that she can walk own by own but he don't want to denay her any wish

"Wait.. where.. look at yr.. condition.. kha.
ja.. rha rhio.. "manik said stopping her as she about to get up from bed

"Manik.. it's okay.. i m "nandini about.. say something more but before manik immediate act make her silent as he take her in his arm

"Shona.. i know.. u having pain.. in yr.. leg.. n plz.. don't hide yr.. any pain from me.. fir age.. jakr.. it become severe "manik said worriedly n nandini is just looking into his eyes how much he cares for her

"Okay.. baby.. "nandini said pecking his cheeks n encircled her arm around his neck n put her head on his chest

"Meri.. shona.. bhukhi.. toh.. nhi.. lgi.. na.. "manik asked n she nodded no like a small kid n she loss in seeing the house as they were walking corridors from both side the wall were transparent so all water fishes are clearly vissible


Nandini is admiring the scene like a baby.. n manik is admiring her happiness is beyond words.. as his wait 2 yr is now end. He want stop the world now only as he worried about future..

"Manik.. wao.. kitne.. osm rooms hai.. u know.. wht.. i want live in all room.. "nandini said as Manik showing her different rooms of house all r very beautiful



"Toh.. ishmein.. problem.. kya hai.. we will change our room every week.. "manik said smiling looking toward her

"Really.. thank u.. "she said pecking his cheeks

"Manik... "nandini shouts hiding her face in manik's chest hold him tightly

"Shona.. u.. okay.. wht happen."manik asked worriedly as he got scared khi.. ushai.. kuch yad toh nhi aagya..

"Manik.. look.. there.. "nandini said pointing her finger toward the wall but her face was hidden in manik's chest

Manik look there n take a breath of relief as nadini is only scared from the big fish in water n manik immidiatly comes out

"Shona.. now we r out.. don't scared.. "manik said softly patting her hair but she didn't react n manik hold her tightly in his arm

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"Manik.. tum thk gye.. honge.. put me.. down.. "Nandini said as it is been from 1 hour manik is showing her the house taking her in his arm

"Wht.. thak.. gya.. honga.. mein.. apni.. sona.. ko.. puri.. life.. apne.. arms.. le.. kr.. chl.. skta.. hn.. kyoki.. meri.. shona.. baby... hai.. so.. light.. "manik said lovingly as he talking to small kid

"But.. manik.. i m feeling sleepy.. let's go back to room"nandini said rubbing her eyes for manik only becoz she knows manik will never got teried holding her

"Okay... baby.. but ushai phle.. it's time for yr medicine n dinner"manik said pecking her forehead n take her back to room


"No.. medicines.. kadwi.. kadwi.. yak.. nhi.. manik... no.. medicine.. "nandini denay taking for medicine acting like a baby.. n manik is see her this cute antics only he is dyeing to see her like this n now she is back n manik happiness is beyond limit

"Shona.. if u will not take.. medicine.. so how will u.. recover.. mujhe.. bhi.. acha.. thodhi.. na.. lgta.. hai.. tumhai.. voh.. kadvi.. kadvi.. medicine.. dena.. "manik said putting her on the bed n Nandini making face n than manik call servant n ask her to bring the dinner

"Dinner.. is here.. "manik said putting dinner on side table n than he put small dinner table in front of her than put dinner plate on it n nandini is looking at him as how much he cares for her

"I love.. u.."nandini said as she feel so blessed so lucky to have him as nandini said manik is about to feed her he stops look into her eyes n than put spoon back in bowl n hug her

"I love.. u.. more.. "manik said holding him tightly "i know.. "she said confidently

"Nandini.. u okay.."manik said petting her back as he feed her first spoon of soup she start coughing badly

"Pa.. pa.. pani.. "nandini said while coughing as the soup is so spicy n manik immidaitly make her drink water

"Now.. okay.. "manik ask her n take her for a side hug N nandini just hmmed

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OUTSIDE THE ROOM

"R.. u.. mad.. i instruct u.. strictly.. about her.. food.. why.. it's spicy.. "manik shout on servant . Servant is standing putting her eyes down he didn't dare to say anything

"R u.. deaf.. answer.. me.. " manik shouts more louder as he got very angry.. as now he can't see her in pain

"I m sorry.."servant said in low voice

"U r fired "manik said n go back room

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"Manik.. bsh.. now.. my tummy.. is full.. really.. " nandini said manik is feeding her n she said this many time but he want give her proper diet

"Shona.. bsh.. lit.. bit.. left.. "manik said giving one more spoon of soup n nandini drink it for it n makes faces

"Manik.. plz.. i m okay.. now.. don't worry.. "nandini said holding his face as she can clearly see his tension that is for her condition but the real reason of his tesion she is unware that he is worried one day she remember about her past than wht will happen

"Shona.. i m okay.. u don't worry.."manik said n give a smiles to her n she smiles back

"Kitni.. kadwi.. thi.. "Nandini said after taking medicine

"Shona.. mujhe.. thodhe.. din.. bad.. tum.. itni.. fit.. ho..jaogi.. aur.. fir.. in medicine.. ki.. koe... need bhi.. nhi.. hogi.."manik said arranging her pillow

"Manik... now.. i m not feeling sleepy.. lets talk na.."nandini said as manik making her ly down on bed

"Shona.. u need proper sleep.. acha.. i have an idea.. "manik said n sit on bed n make her ly on his lap

"Now dekhna.. meri.. shona.. ko.. kitni.. jldi.. need ati.. hai.."manik said moving his hand in her hair n nandini is just looking at him

And manik was right with in a sec. she drifted in sleep becoz of medicine

"Nandini.. u don't know how.. much.. i m happy.. that i get.. u..back yr smile.. yr.. talks meine in 2 salo kitni miss ki hai.. bhut dhr lgta.. hai.. khi i will not lost u again... khi.. tumhai.. voh.. sab.. no.. now i don't have more power left to u.. in that condition again.. aisa hua hi kyo tumhre.. sth.. wht was yr mistake.. i only prayed to god.. bs u remain happy.. like this only.. i love.. u.. beyond anything.. u r my world.. " manik thinking caressing her face n moving his hand on her hair n looking at her lovingly after so many years he seeing her life sleeping so peacefully


So here is next part.. hope.. it.. is upto.. the mark.. i have tried to show both of them feeling.. n guyz.. plz..do big wale.. comments.. n hit like... botton
howz.. new poster..


Love Mehak

Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely update...
happy to see the old nandini...
sad to see manik's condition,,he is happy bt at the same time so much worried fr the coming back of nandu's memory...
waiting fr the next part...hope manan will fight all their problems together in future...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow... supab update

so finally nandini is back...

nd now manik also get back his happyness

plz keep them happy

nd waiting 4 nxt part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hmm loved the chap it was beautiful

m so so happy seeing both of them smiling talking laughing.

aiyooo when nandu will got to know the truth

it will be so heart wrenching..

both of them care for each other so much

both are in so much pain

but for each other happiness...😊😊

poor chef...

keep smiling n take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice amazing update.
That was definitely happy happy update.
Thank God I finished a chapter without sadness and tears.
Otherwise dear u realy write hell imotionel updates.
U r amazing writer.
U can make us cry with ur touchy words.
But I know now u will make us happy too.
Will wait for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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THANKS FOR THE UPDATE AND PM... IT WAS LOVELY... LOVE YOU MEHEK...

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