MaNan OS: Kise Da Yaar Na Vichre..! Updated on PG8/8th-January-2016 - Page 20

such an emotional story i couldn't control my tears😭

Mawara sach kahu..I wanna hug you right now for this amazing emotional story...I swear I loved each and every word..I felt like it was happening in front of my eyes..the way you wrote their last scene..was something making me weak..as if I wanted to go there and save them any how..but you are right ..FACTS ARE REALITY..the life which we live here is not REALITY..the life which is after death is REALITY..and this story is REALITY..


For the first time ..I wrote this much long in a comment..as you made me do this..love you ..stay blessed..


Love.. Kajal..

Tysm for d pm...

Yarrr u wrote dis supr amazing os nd btaya v ni...koi na mai dhund hi leti hu hmesha..ur wrks...
Dis one really made me speechless... i ws thinking ki bas ab ni pdha jaega mjhse bt fr v pura pdha.. nd tmne to likha h yr.. kaise kr lete ho.. hats off yr.. i really bow dwn fr ur writing.. dis really touched my heart... i remembrd dt song 'chal waha jate h' while reading dis..
So heart touching it ws...u wer mindblowing..srry mai hr prt is br xplain ni kr paungi i'l get emotionl jo mai bht jldi ho jti hu shyd...heheee... bt dat aryamnn arghh..mio jae mjhe to mai v use maar du.. n ya der flashbck momnt ws cute.. nd nandu k prayr itni jldi puri v ho gai... evn i wish ki kisi k sth aisa na ho..bt actually dey wernt seperatd dey died tgthr n will b tgthr till eternity... awesm it ws... mindblowing concpt... u wer too gud.. d way mani hld her close to himslf..n dey hugged each odr tightly to let it al go... it ws supr perfct desciption... m really touched by dis one... no apt wrds fr appreciatn.. u wer beyond perfct dis tym.. srsly luv u loadsss.. my bestes n fav writr.. always keep smiling.. be happy.. stay blessed...n spread love dear.. ok 'l b waaaiiitttiiinnnggg fr odr stries prts.. n those who r pending fr me to read i'l surely do dt.. c yaaa..tc.. :) :)

god!! m crying,,, pheww its amzing ..

Very emotional story.
Loved it very much.
Beautiful written.
Thanks for pm.
Sorry for late.
Waiting for more beautiful os.
Keep smiling.
Stay blessed

It's too much emotional
Very well written
I loved it
Keep writing dear

That's the only thing I could hope for my hopeless lovers.
Death is a painful phase in life, the last one in ours.
But they will reincarnate just to become the star-crossed lovers again

This was really Beautiful one Mawara...

emotional love story!! the flashback was amazing...loved MaNan! nandini's wish was accepted...they died together only!! beautifully penned down...