Yaariaan of SPACE-part 34 updated 03 May - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Amazing😛
Read all da chappys in one go
Update soon

Luv
Achyu..😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome updates...
Pls update mxt part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 10 Take off to SPACE



Nandu spent the initial 2 weeks in Mumbai sight seeing and shopping . Classes were to start only after 2 weeks. All the application forms were filled online, therefore, she did not have to go to SPACE before the actual reopening date for the new academic year.
Chachi accompanied her on her shopping spree and insisted that Nandu buy some fashionable tops to go with her jeans. Nandu always preferred to wear jeans and kurtis , but she gave in to the whims of chachi and got herself few tops , stoles to go with it .Nandu being a slight girl with a height of 5'2 and a child like face looked more like a school girl than her 17 years. She had a baby face to go with her large eyes, full pouty lips and chubby cheeks. Cute was one word with which you could describe Nandu. Chachi knew that these attractive features and innocence of Nandu may give the impression of her being a weakling especially in a place like SPACE. Chachi also knew that Nandu was a very strong girl who could stand up for herself as she had lost her parents at a very small age, she had developed the maturity to fight the world for herself and her little brother. It is also true that her innocence was also one of her strength because she was not tainted by the hypocrisy of the world. Chachi also dragged Nandu to a beauty parlour to get her hair and face done. This was Chachi's plan to bring a tiny bit of sophistication for our innocent doll like Nandu.
They had been successful to secure an admission for Rishu in a near by public school and Nandu had slowly started enjoying life with Chacha-Chachi. Both of them were very loving and jovial.
Nandu wore a deep blue sleeveless top to go with her while jeggings on her first day to college. She took a local bus to the college even though Chacha was more than willing to drop her in his scooter.
The college was bustling with activities , some students searching for classrooms while others searching for their friends. Nandu went directly to the administrator's office. There were few other students waiting outside his office. Nandu gave a friendly smile to the others. There was a boy and a girl who were standing together and chatting whereas another girl was typing furiously on her mobile. They ignored her whereas another girl standing a bit apart acknowledged her with a welcome smile. The peon came and called out a name and the girl with the mobile went inside. The friendly girl approached Nandu. She was a very attractive girl, dressed in a bright yellow salwar kameez with two plaited hair. Nandu liked her instantly.
"Hi, I am Navya naveli" she stretched her hand forward for a hand shake which Nandu immediately accepted." I am Nandini Murthy. I am here to join BArch course."
"Do you stay in the hostel? Please tell me that you are. I like you and I don't have any friends in the hostel. Whenever I approach someone to befriend them, they give strange looks. You know, the one you give when you see a foreigner. But you look approachable and you are the first friend I am making after reaching Mumbai. Oh, forgot to mention, I am from Bihar. I had prayed to Devimaa today to lead me to someone who would accept me as her friend and see I have found you" Navya was moving from one topic to another rapidly and Nandu had lost track of the conversation. Nandu decided to let her continue.
" Nandini Murthy, are you from the south? So, you are also new to Mumbai. Aren't you? No wonder you were willing to be my friend. That means we can explore Mumbai together. Hai na? " and so and so the monologue continued until Nandini's name was called to enter the administrator's office.
Nandini nodded to Navya, taking her leave and went inside to collect her ID card and admission card.
The peon directed Nandini to her classroom. Navya joined her later and Navya continued acquainting herself to Nandini until a teacher entered the classroom. After the initial introduction, the students were taken around the campus and introduced to the library, restrooms, canteens, gym and the activities block.
Many seniors dropped in between the classes to introduce themselves. A fresher's welcome program was announced which was to take place the following day. It was customary to have a fashion show during this program where all the freshers had to participate wearing dresses suggested by the seniors. It was in fact a platform for all the seniors to have a look at all the freshers and to exert some power over them. Although ragging was banned in the college, there were few subtle ways in which the seniors continued to exercise command over the juniors.
It was soon after the lunch break and Malini maam, the Engineering drawing teacher had just introduced herself when the FAB 5 entered the classroom. Mukti and Alya entered first. On seeing them, Mailini maam excused herself and moved out. The three boys soon followed. There was a sudden hush in the classroom. Most of the students had already heard about the FAB 5 and were awaiting their arrival.

Nandini recognized Cabir immediately and she realized that these were the five she had encountered in the airport. Immediately her glance fell on Manik who was leaning nonchalantly on the desk . She could hear whispered running commentary from a girl right behind her.

" -and that's the great Manik Malhotra, son of Nyonika Malhotra, college trustee. Isn't he hot? And the girl to his right , the short frock one is his girlfriend-"

Her attention was brought back to the front .

"Okay guys. Welcome to SPACE. I heard there are two charity cases among us" Cabir immediately went for the kill. And pointing in Nandu's and Navya's direction" -there they are..."

39 pairs of eyes were now directed towards Nandu and Navya.
Edited by minnu26 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Great work
Really loved it
Read all parts in one go
Plzz update soon 😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
intresting!!!!!!!!!!!!




eagerly and desperately waiting for the next update ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Wow...
I just read ur story in one go
I really loved it
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Part 11 - Centre of Attention

Manik Malhotra would have ignored Nandini Murthy without a second glance under ordinary circumstances. A person who is accustomed to the most stylish women of Mumbai Society, there was nothing striking in Nandini Murthy to hold his attention for any period.

But no sooner than Cabir pointed his finger at the two, out of the place, girls, Manik's eyes first fell on the short and cute girl whose chin raised by itself in resistance when she heard herself being referred to as a charity case. The first thing he noticed was how short she was although how it matters to him if she's short or not is not to be questioned. He noticed her eyes flash in rebellion at Cabir's derogatory remarks. Manik had heard somewhere that short and slight girls arouses a man's protective nature and seeing her he felt that the statement may not be completely untrue. Manik had a sudden urge to protect her from Cabir's taunts, which was a first. He never felt this protective towards anyone before. Manik forced himself to look away from her and his glance fell on the desperately dramatic girl who was also murmuring something continuously to the short girl. Her entire stance cried out nervousness although she was looking at everyone and smiling.

Cabir , Mukti and Alya had now approached the two girls. All the others looked at the happenings curiously.

"Hello there, What are you people doing here?. SPACE is not meant for you. So you can pack your bags and run back to where you came from " Cabir said and pointing at Navya, he continued " You.. should be in films... no not this century wala...may be the first century wala one.. this century wala is too classy for you" and saying he laughed at his own joke. Mukti and Aliya joined. Mukti took it from there...

" I think, Cabir, these two have lost their way and wandered inside SPACE. Tch tch...poor babies... let us just give them a chance ...they will never set their foot in SPACE again. Hai na, babies?"

Nandini was the first to speak up " Listen, I don't understand what you are talking about?"

" Ohho...this behenji here, can't even follow our language... How can she survive in SPACE?"

It was Navya's turn next. " Dhekhiya... If you want to say something, seedhe seedhe bolo.. I am here with full scholarship and it was not easy to achieve it." There was pride in her voice." I had a talk with the administrator today morning. He enrolled me and gave me Admission and ID cards. Now you are saying that I am not admitted. How can that be? I have my entrance mark list with me that proves that I am eligible for admission here. You can check with Sachin Sir, who is the person I met this morning. He assured me everything is fine. I cannot go back now, to Patna, my parents would be sad; the entire village had come to see me off... I will not go back." Navya was blabbering as usual and

Nandini had to give her a tug to make her stop. Even Cabir was taken aback, but soon gathered himself "So, our black and white madhubala has turned out to be a chatterbox as well. What a combination..." and turning to Manik " Manik, why are you standing there? Come na.. "

Manik moved to the center of the whole drama . He was aware that amidst the whole spectacle, the girls of the classroom had their attention fixed on him. Some were throwing glances at him whereas some others were openly ogling. Most of the time he was oblivious of this attention and he was too used to it to feel any awkwardness.

Manik's name stirred the classroom again, as many of the girls were just waiting to hear Manik speak. Manik did not disappoint them. He had a deep voice that was equally sexy and manly. And at that moment, when he opened his mouth, majority of the girls fell deeply into the pit, that was the aura of Manik Malhotra.

"What is your name? " It was an unnecessary one, aimed at Nandini. His question was a surprise one for the FAB 4 as well. "Tell me, orr..." the monster was back " -do you want Cabir to give me you a name that will best suit your-" looking up and down"- appearance.. little mouse?" Manik bend a little to reach Nandini's height.

" Nandini... Nandini Murthy" That was Navya " -and no, before you tag her as one, let me tell you, she is not a mouse..She is my friend and I will not tolerate anyone belittling her "
Navya looked at Nandini and smiled. Nandini couldn't help but roll her eyes at Navya. Navya had already put on her ghansi rani attire. "Now, Nandini, if you don't speak, Navya will make a mess of the whole thing." Nandini said to herself.

By now Nandini had already realized that this was some form of ragging and they had been singled out. May be, the students here had some problem with scholarship students. It was nothing to be ashamed of. Nandini had already figured out that majority of the students were from well to do families and had grown up to be unfeeling, selfish and rude.

Manik's voice brought her out of her thoughts.

" It seems we have to stand here the entire day to hear a word out of Madam's mouth... Hellow... We don't have the entire day for you to answer"

It was then that Nandini realized that Manik had shot another question at her, of which she had no clue, and was looking impatiently at her. She looked at Navya for assistance. Now Manik lost his temper " Oh Madam, Are you dumb? Or plain stupid? I asked you a very simple question. Not rocket science."

Nandini looked at him and blinked.

" Manik. Choddo. Its not her fault. She is suffering from a severe case of MFHOHFM" Cabir couldn't control his laughter.

"What??!!" Typical Manik reaction.

" Madly Fallen Head Over Heels Over Manik Malhotra Syndrome and staring at your face without uttering a word is the major symptom of this disease." and more laughter.

Manik had a " what the" expression on him whereas clearly Mukti was not amused. Aliya's expression was thunderous. Nandini had become red as a tomato and even Navya had nothing to say.
Manik turned just in time to see Aliya storm out of the classroom.

This entire incident drove the first nail to Manik- Aliya relationship coffin.
Edited by minnu26 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Nyc updated
Intresting plot
Waiting for the next update
Update soon

Can u plz pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Oh manik is finally attracted to nandini...
Navni bond was superb...
Really excited for next
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Wow read all parts in a go.
Excited to read further parts.
Pls continue soon.
This is nothing less than our show.
And am really liking it.
Continue soon pls.

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