2//MANAN SS-HIDDEN LOVE ( PART -15 ON PAGE 38) 14 JULY PMS LATER... - Page 23

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsm but shocking update
Hope so manik ko nandu jaldi mil jaye
Woh us mathur ko sabak shikyae
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey guys...I knew must be wondering like where the hell am I? Why am I not updating any of my story...believe me i want to ... but am very stressed bcz of my exams and then result tension...Finally I got some peace...my results are good as the way I want ... so here is the first update...and yes I might pm u guys later...








PART - 15





6 Months Later ...






Malhotra construction :-




Men: arre jaldi jaldi kaam finish karo ... agar sir ko pata lag gaya ki kaam abhi tak complete nahi hua ... toh sab ke
sab marre jaiyenge...



Men2: am trying sir ... par samajh nahi aa raha kaha se start karu...matlab sir toh ek hafte baad aane walle the na



Men1: Haa par ab kya kar sakte he ...jaldi aa rahe he toh ... in 6 mahino main sab kitnaa badal gaya gaya ha ...esa lagta ha jaise sir ki life ke 2 his motive ha ...work and money ...apne liye toh jaise unke pass time hi nahi ha ...



Men1: u r right sir ... unhe kabhi haste huye nahi dekha...



Men 2: suna he unki hassi toh tabhi chali gayi jab mam...



Men3 : shut up guys... do u guys have death wish jaante ho naa...Sir ko pata laga ki tum log kaam karne ki bajaye unki personal life pe discussion kar rahe ho toh tum khud toh maroge saath main hum sab ko bhi le duboge ...



Men1: sorry sir ... we are just saying...


Men3:just shut up and go back to work ... Sir kissi bhi time aane hi walle honge...


Both nodded their head and left doing their own work...




AFTER 15 MINUTES...




A car stopped in front of office...while everyone stopped doing their work...and looked at the direction...manik came out of the car...







The way he was looking...u can see only a cold hearted and emotionless person who was brutal...everyone greets him...while manik nods and go straight to his cabin...



A men came to manik's office while looking happy...


Men : finally my son is back...I missed u so much manik...



Manik smiled a little to his dad and hugged him back



Manik : how are u dad?



Raj cheerfully asked : arre mujhe kya hona ha ... am perfectly fine...tu suna kaisa ha...



Manik : am fine dad...



Raj frowned a little and said :Manik Maine pucha ki tum kaise ho ...



Manik annoyingly said : and I said too dad am fine ...



Raj : duniya ko dikhane ke liye shayad Haa...par mujhe yeh janana he ki tu aur tera dill kaisa ha...



Manik sadly said : dill TOH ha hi nahi dad...abhi sirf yaade hai...



Raj : u will find her son ... Mill jayegi voh...


Manik :nahi dad sab ... sab meri galti ha ... mujhe...mujhe uss latter par viswas hi nahi karna chahiye tha ... naa hi main viswas karta...aur naa hi hum time waste karte...aaj pata nahi kaha hogi voh...kiss halat main...




Raj signed and said : police ke itna tourcher karne par bhi mathur ne kuch nahi bataya...uss jagah par sirf nandani ka blood mila tha...uski body



Manik :no dad she is alive ... I can feel her dad...bas abhi mil nahi rahi ha...



Raj looked at manik sympathetically ... he knew his son was only alive bcz of " HOPE " ...if this hope will end then he will end too ...




Raj : I knew son...I knew...












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AIRPORT -




Guy : guys we should leave soon...if we don't want to make her wait...



Girl : of course we don't want her to wait for us ... but let me buy some flowers...she would definitely going to love it...



Guy2 : it's being so long



Girl : so long ... jhutte...sirf 2 din ke liye hi gaye the hum...


Guy : Haa toh voh ha hi essi...raha hi nahi jaata usse dekha bina...



Girl : am waiting for her to say something...abhi tak toh bina kuch bole hi tumhamari zindagi ka itna ahem hissa ha...jiss din voh kuch bolegi...I doubt she is going to be death of urs...



Guy lovingly said : voh toh ha...I - I actually like her ...



Girl : God I can't wait the day she is going to be wake up...I would tell her personally...how much you love her ...


Guy blushingly looked away and said : hey shut up okay...just come with me fast...I want to meet her...I can't wait to long...


Girl teasingly said : Haa Haa chal majnu tujhe Teri lella se milati hu...


Guy: shut up...abhi chalo





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How's it? Hmmm ... so nandani was missing ... manik was finding her ... and any guesses who is this new ...MAJNU...I will give Ur answers wait for next update...till then tell me about Ur guesses...what u think...
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keep loving
Keep smiling
And
Keep shining For Ur loved ones !!!
Love you
Diya🤗














Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazinggg update
Ye sb kya ho gea nandu gayab...manik use dhoondh raha hai...kya huya in 6 months mein...wo grl nandu hi hogi jiski baat kr rhe the sb...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing part
please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow.. good to see u back
I hope the new girl is nandu and new guy maybe arya
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update dear
Vo girl Nandini hi hogi jiski baat vo log kar rhe the
Cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice one...
Is nandini in coma..
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update..
Luvd it..
Wat hppnf 2 nandu
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Posted: 9 years ago
I honestly forgot ths story! Glad tht u updated! Nice update n congrats for ur results!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Excellent update...
& emotional one...
Manik bcme cold-hearted...& hiding his emotions...
Nandini's still missing...
But where's she???
I guess d girl bout whom dey r tlkng is nandini...is it???
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...

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