MaNan OS : Pudding: My Saviour

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello guys. I am here again with an OS.

Well for this OS I would like to tell all of you that this idea came in my mind while I was watching a program named STREET GENIUS on NATIONAL GEOGRAPHY channel. Yes yes you all heard it right. I was watching a show on national geography and got this idea so thought to pen it down and also share the information to as many people I can. Well that info you will come to know when you read this OS

Okay lets not talk much I would directly send all you to MaNan land with a new OS

Here it goes...

Role...Sound...Camera...Action

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PUDDING: MY SAVIOUR

A tall handsome guy with muscular body was sitting on a chair in his green room all shattered broken and was crying silently remembering his lady love, his life, his heart, his everything, his NANDINI holding her photo and caressing it.

Guy: kaha ho tum nandini aaj 10 din ho gaye tumhe dekhe, tumse baat kiye, tumhe mehsoos kiye, tumhara hath thame hue tumhe pata haina i cant live without you phir kyu nahi ho mere saath ha.??

Cabir his bestfriend, his brother came and sat on his knees and holded his hands.

Cabir: Manik plz try to understand she won't come, she can't come. Wo..wo ab..nahi hai yar

Manik instantly got up and jerked his hands and yelled at him"cabir kitni baar bolu she is alive she is alive she is alive Damnit get it clear in your head.

Cabir got up and thought manik needs to face the reality he needs to accept that she was shot dead so he too yelled at him"Wo mar gayi hai yar use goli lagi thi 10 din pehle ussi din jis din tune use date pe bulaya tha. Hamne baat ki thi na us reataurant k manager se. He too said that a girl was shot and when we showed him nandini's pic he accepted that the girl was same. Agar tere pass koi proof hai to bol... Nahi hai na Then accept it damnit. SHE IS NO MORE, NO MORE" cabir literally shouted the last line.

Manik who was in nandini's thought came out with his shout and again yelled at him"Cabir tujhe proof chahiye.!! Fine!!! mai zinda hu yahi proof hai that SHE IS ALIVE agar use kuch hua hota to maii bhi shayad nahi hota yaha tere samne"

Cabir was speechless by this statement. He remembered he was here to call him as it was their concert. FAB5 were here for a concert. But manik was really not willing for this concert as after nandini he was not interested in anything but FAB5 insisted him, they thought that this could bring him out at peace, as music was only thing that can give peace. At that moment dhruv aliya and mukti too came in the green room as they know how lonely manik would be feeling. Dhruv, his best childhood buddy said "Manik chal performance ka time ho gaya hai"

Manik sarcastically smiled with never ending tears flowing from his eyes and went with him as he knew everyone is just trying to divert his attention.

Mukti said "Group hug guys" everyone pulled manik into a hug as he was not budging an inch.

FAB5 came on the stage and took their postions. Last one was manik he came at the center and holded mike and then look at his all friends and smilled faintly to hide his tears. All responded with the faint smile as they knew how broken he is.

tanhai

sanG dil tanhai..sanG laai Yaad teri sanG laai

baar baar woh bahaar phir se Yaad aaYi

sooni sooni raah dil ki jisne thi saJaai

tanha dil. .

roYa re. .dil roYa re

(Manik closed his eyes to let the tears flow from his eyes and remembered his nandini.. her eyes..her smile everything about her flashed in front of him and he strummed the guitar strings and sang)

har taraF bikhare hai teri Yaad ke hi niSHaaN

meri har eik cheez mein hai teri hi

parchaaiYaan

(He remembered how he would mistake every third person to be his nandini and just goes and holds her but when he finds that the person is someone else he again brokes down)

tu hi hota hai..tu hi rehta hai mujh mein har

dum sadda

paas bhi tu hai..door bhi tu hi..hai Yeh kaisi

khala

Yaad banke aSHq teri aankhon mein samaai

Yaad banke eik hansi honton pe bhi aaYi

tanha dil. .

roYa re. .dil roYa re

(His everything in his house just reminds of her . his only bedroom where he can feel her presence and can feel close but cant hold her. That pain makes him cry more and more)

(Writer's pov: I m very bad at describing pain)

As the song ended a sudden cold breeze blew and touched his face. He immediately opened his eyes. He could feel her presence. He started scanning the crowd, he looked here and there. He even paced stage from one corner to another and his eyes were searching for that one face whom he could feel right now, his NANDINI. His eyes holding the longing for not being able to see her since 10 days. His shaking hands depicted the eagerness of getting wrapped in her wramth. His trembling lips not being able to voice out his thoughts. When all of a sudden a girl ran to the stage and hugged him tightly, sobbing hardly. He was taken aback by sudden hug, he didn't responded as he was not in state to, but when he realised a familiar touch, expected and known wramth, all he could utter was "NANDINI".

The reply came almost instantly "MANIK"

Now he was sure though not completely but slowly wrapped his arms around her. With each passing second he tighten the hold to get surety of her presence.

After what seemed like forever Manik broke the hug, his eyes holding all the love for her and tears of happiness of finally having her in his arms. And same was for nandini too Suddenly reality struck him and he started checking her everywhere hands, legs, face tummy, on not finding any bruise or bandage, he looked at her and said "Nandini.. t..tum..thi..thik ho..na.." he wanted to make sure that this was reality not dream and if it was dream then he wouldn't mind to kill the one who would wake him up from such a beautiful dream.

Nandini smiled as she was expecting such reaction "ha me thik hoon"

Manik gave her a questioning look and She then turned and saw everyone was looking at them with shock so she forcefully parted herself from manik much to manik's annoyance and said "Manik green room me chalke baat kare.?? Mujhe bohot kuch kehna hai"

"ha chalo" He instantly held her hand and left from their followed by rest of the FAB5 members who were till now in a utter shock. On the way cabir was chanting hanuman chalisa so aliya asked the reason. He could only utter"BHOOT.. NANDINI BHOOT ban gayi"

Everyone in unison "Shut up cabir.."

Nandini's POV

Everyone entered in the green room where navya was already present, manik was impatiently waiting. Everbody took their seats and saw me with questioning eyes and now i know i have to speak so i took a glance of manik before speaking as i was afraid of his reaction.

Manik: Nandini plz clear the air. Kya hua tha us din? Tum kaha thi? Aur agar tum thik ho to goli kise lagi?

"Manik calm down batati hu sab...As you all know harshad was trying all his possible ways to apart me and manik but was miserably failing in each attempt"

Everybody nodded. Manik was fuming in anger. I assured him with eyes to listen me first.

"So manik when I was walking to the restaurant where u called me that day to meet, suddenly my eyes fell on the rear view mirror of the vehicle parked and I saw that harshad was following me, I even saw the gun tugged in his waist, I just wanted to end this once and for all so I made a plan and when i reached the restaurant, I approached a waiter without being noticed by anyone and gave him money and told him to keep an eye on harshad. I even told him to record his action. I sat on the table that you reserved for us and after sometime from the corner of my eye I saw him taking seat to the opposite of our table and was facing his back to me. Then I signalled waiter to start shoot and I ordered My saviour pudding and told him to also get a tomato for me. Manik became confused and said

Manik: Nandini pudding...saviour.. you are really not making any senses.

I smiled to him and said "Manik am a science student and i was cognizance to the fact that pudding can bear the bullet. It contains non-Newtonian fluid. This fluid shows unique behaviour of behaving like a liquid under low pressure or solid under high pressure. It responds to a magnetic field by increasing in viscosity dramatically almost acting like a solid. So when apply force on that liquid it turns out to be a solid one thus resisting the force" Everybody was surprised and their faces were like oh like that'

(In the show there were 4 desserts kept to know which one was the bulletproof dessert ice-cream, whip cream, chocolate syrup and pudding. So after trying practically pudding was the winner. If you don't believe check this video: Bulletproof-desserts do let me know if the link doesn't work and you can even check Street genius videos by googling)

Cabir:Dekho mera IQ level dhyan me rakh ke bolo wo kya hai na sabko samjme nahi aayega

Manik:tere liye tha bhi nai sirf intelligent logo ke liye tha...nandini tum aage bolo.

i continued"the moment he turned and fired, my pudding was in the middle it helped me but i smashed tomato on the chest to show the sign of blood and immediately acted as if i fainted than he took me out and laid me in the car and went to make a call as he thought i was fainted. Then i quietly sneaked out and punctured his car. And came back to restaurant and asked waiter to come to come to police station and be the witness. I must say he was such a generous person. He really helped me in all this. " Manik couldn't hear appreciation about any other guy from me so he has to interrupt so he said

Manik: then why didn't you come to us?

I smiled on his possessiveness and replied "I wanted to come but then thought since i have ran from harshad will try his all ways to find me and to get back at me the only source was you all i know him he might have gone to any extent which i couldn't afford to. So i had to wait until he was caught. Then last night i was informed that he is caught and i was dieing to meet everyone of you. Though you weren't able to see me but i had a track of all yours actions in these 10 days. I knew you have a concert today so thought to give a surprise and here i am.

I saw everyone looking at me as if i am some alien. It has been complete 5 minutes since i had finished my story but still everyone is looking at me in utter shock. I hope they believe me that I am alive because their facial expressions are unreadable. Finally cabir spoke

Cabir: matlab bahar jav to pure body mein pudding laga ke jav.

Everybody looked at him in ewww expression.

"hum to pudding khake hi niklenge kya pata koi goli muh me chali jai to"Navya spoke with a horrified expression.

Everyone gaped at the Two(cabir and navya)for a while and then broke into fits of laughter. I was smilingly watching manik his laugh, his twinkling eyes, everything about him I so missed all these in these 10 days. How I had longed for him every single nanosecond. He caught me looking at him. Suddenly he turned serious and shot a glare at me and walked out of the green room. I was shocked what happened to him now. I was about to go behind him when all of a sudden navya came and hugged me saying she missed me. I too hugged her back and excused myself to go but it seems today everyone has to show their love right now itself. As soon as I excused Aliya came and gave a polite hug. She started apologizing on behalf of her brother. I said thats ok. Ahh!!! God what to do and i looked at cabir with pleading eyes. He had seen manic going out so he understood my situation and came in between as out cupid.

Cabir: Nandini Manik nahi dikh raha zara jav na leke aao use.

I mouthed a thank you cabir and went from there as quickly as possible. I was looking for him everywhere and then I found him standing in a small garden that was accompanied with the concert hall. I slowly walked to him and wrapped my arms around him from back. It felt so peaceful to hug him how I wished to be in his embrace all these days. But he jerked my hands and walked a little away and I can imagine his lips in a cute pout. I chuckled on his babyish antics and again walked to him this time I was standing infront of him looking keenly his face to read his mind. But he was again trying to walk away when I held his hand because now its enough for me i can never stay away from him and here I even don't know what was my fault. "Manik kya hua kyu kar rahe ho mere saath ese. Itne dino baad tumhe dekh rahi hu have u even imagined how much i missed you. Every second was a hell for me"

Manik: Really nandini you choose this. Ek baar bhi mujhe batana zaruri nhi samjha. Humne decide kiya tha that whatever will come our way we will overcome it together bhir tumne kyu nahi bataya mujhe Didn't you trust me enough that will I be able to protect you or not.!!! Tumhare bare mein ese suna k go..goli..lagi..aur..

He paused for a minute and I hung my head down as only those words gave him pain. he continued

"par tumhe kya! Tumhe to hero banna hai na"

I interjected"Manik heroine" I thought to enlighten the mood but this only added more furry to him.

"Ahh. Chup ekdum chup nandini do you have any idea what i have been through. Roz rat ye sochke k sota hu k shayad kal kahi se tum aa jao par nahi har sham mujhe ye dard jelna padta hai ki tum aaj bhi nahi aai. And i feel like ending my l.."

I again interjected him but not with words, this time i placed my lips on his lips asking him not to utter anything futher. How dare he say those things. I was angrily kissing him for uttering such words. He didn't responded. He was just feeling.

After a while I saw he was calm so i broke the kiss. But suddenly he pulled me from my waist with a jerk and took my lips for slow, gentle yet passionate kiss. He took my lower lip and sucked it ever so gently that i clutched his shirt for support. And he pressed my waist tighly. I was sucking his upper lip and he was sucking lower lip. There was no urgency no lust no want no need it was pure love.Ahh! how I missed him. He wasn't willing to leave me but when I wriggled out of breath he left me and I hugged him and said

"I LOVE YOU SOOO MUCH MANIK"

Manik: I LOVE YOU TOO SOOO MUCH NANDINI"

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Okay Cut Cut Cut.

Now tell me guys how was it.I know you all will be like ye kya tha...kuch bhi'

But guys I really wanted to share this pudding theory with you all so just penned anything that came to my mind.

Anyways do let me know how was it. Kuch bhi comment karo but plz tell me

Ok now bye Enjoy

Have a Good day

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ankita_t thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Hi,
Gosh where were you all this while... i never knew you had such a funny bone😆..

I am a science student too, but have no clues that Pudding could be a saviour...

You have no clues i am having my tea and its midnight here, but i had to keep my cup aside when Nandini started to narrate the importance of "non-Newtonian fluid" and i was in a laughter riot after reading what Cabir and Navya said...🤣...

While typing this comment i still have my tea cup in my hand...

Coming to the intensity of Manik's grief of missing his Girl was beautifully portrayed and i must say, you have a sensibility of reflecting the emotions in the most apt manner...

The 'cupid' Cabir was amazing... but the most striking thing was Nandini... a small story, yet it reflected volumes about her character...her strength, being alert and mostly tackle situations was depicted Bang On!!!!!

Love doesn't needs words, it is an emotion that you can feel even if the person is not front of your eyes... the mere presence is enough to identify him/her... Absolutely lovely...

It was a delight trust me...😳😳

Kudos to you...👏👏

Well finally i will have my tea now...😉... Cheers...😆


Lots of Love...

Ankita
Edited by ankita_t - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lolzzz

Mera to cabir wala haaal h


Sbb upr se nikl gyaaa

Lolzzz


Nyc os yrrr :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for this million dollar information...
must say you utilized this info in a very good way..

the OS was superb.. like really good..

good work..

do write more such good stuff in future..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ye sab kya tha???😲
i m in kabir's category.🤣
Science to tumne hi padha n apply kiya...like rancho in 3 idiots...😆

but it was awesome..👍🏼
loved reading it...😊

Make new new stories...And i know u willl.
A die hard Parth fan.😉..so all the best for that.👍🏼

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Posted: 9 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: ankita_t

Hi,

Gosh where were you all this while... i never knew you had such a funny bone😆..

I am a science student too, but have no clues that Pudding could be a saviour...

You have no clues i am having my tea and its midnight here, but i had to keep my cup aside when Nandini started to narrate the importance of "non-Newtonian fluid" and i was in a laughter riot after reading what Cabir and Navya said...🤣...

While typing this comment i still have my tea cup in my hand...

Coming to the intensity of Manik's grief of missing his Girl was beautifully portrayed and i must say, you have a sensibility of reflecting the emotions in the most apt manner...

The 'cupid' Cabir was amazing... but the most striking thing was Nandini... a small story, yet it reflected volumes about her character...her strength, being alert and mostly tackle situations was depicted Bang On!!!!!

Love doesn't needs words, it is an emotion that you can feel even if the person is not front of your eyes... the mere presence is enough to identify him/her... Absolutely lovely...

<font color="#333333" face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif">It was a delight trust me...😳😳</font>

Kudos to you...👏👏

Well finally i will have my tea now...😉... Cheers...😆


Lots of Love...

Ankita



Hi di,
infact i had no idea about it until i happened to view the show i myself had my jaw dropped. .

Vacation is working wonders over me. .lol

U wont believe there are even bulletproof balloons i mean lyk seriously

A mere balloon saving u from bullet. .

And about writing part to as a reader of ur ff, i had almost learnt to write from u though not as beautiful as your works but just 30% u know. .lol. .

And nandu's character, i wont every girl to be lyk her strong and brave. .

I m glad u lyked it. .

Thanks di

lots of love
Drashti
Edited by DhruShti - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ps_angel

Lolzzz

Mera to cabir wala haaal h


Sbb upr se nikl gyaaa

Lolzzz


Nyc os yrrr :)



well just remember it can save u thats it. .

Thanks
lots of love
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ragingleo

thanks for this million dollar information...

must say you utilized this info in a very good way..

the OS was superb.. like really good..

good work..

do write more such good stuff in future..



Thanks a ton. .
I will try to write if my brain comes up with an idea. .lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kadia717

Ye sab kya tha???😲

i m in kabir's category.🤣
Science to tumne hi padha n apply kiya...like rancho in 3 idiots...😆

but it was awesome..👍🏼
loved reading it...😊

Make new new stories...And i know u willl.
A die hard Parth fan.😉..so all the best for that.👍🏼



wo sab baad me,
firstly m upset with u,

matlab where are you?

Its been so long u havent updated ur story. . Not dne yar. .

Well u asked kya tha?

Then let me tell u we have vacation so such 'kuch bhi' moments are bound to happen
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Your title caught my eyes..i was like pudding n saviour in manan os
n whn u explain bfor starting d os,i remebered i've also seen dat on geography coz my dad iz very fond of watching dis kinda channals
i loved it
cabir my baby alwayz find smthing to make situations light
besides being an awsmm bestie...
As alwayz Manan r D Best..
Love

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