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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing updet dear.
love manan bond.
i think ab fb5 ka milan hoga
plz next part continue soon.
stey blessed dear forever.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello my dearest readers...

Here is the next chapter of my manan ff YAARIAAN...

Please do read this and give me your precious comments...

CHAPTER 16

Malhotra mansion, 04:30 pm.

They all were seating their and waiting for aliya's call. When nandini said "guys... I have something to say." Everyone looks at her and manik asked "what?"

Nandini said "guys. I think hame sabko wahape nahi jana chahiye." Everyone look at her confusingly and mukti asked "what you mean sabko nahi jana chahiye?" nandini replied "I mean. Unfortunately if harshad gets to know about us then use ye nahi pata chalna chahiye ki hum sab isme involved hei. And also if we'll need any help then koi to hona chahiye to help us, in the town."

Then she turn towards manik and said "so I think..." she then turn towards navya and said "navya and aryaman. Tum dono ko yahi city me rehna chahiye." Mukti said seconding nandini "I think nandini is right."

Then manik said "ya. So that's decided and ya... I have another idea." They discussed the idea for a while and everyone liked it.

Aliya's home, 05:50 pm.

As soon as harshad's car passed through the gate Aliya called dhruv and tell him to come there. Dhruv is already waiting outside the aliya's house hiding himself. So when he saw harshad left, he immediately follow him after taking Aliya with him. While Aliya messaged others for bringing their plan in action.

Outside the city.

Manik and nandini are going towards the address which Aliya give them which she listened from harshad the other day. As manik's idea was that manan left first by another rout and they would reach first to the address which Aliya gave them. And mukti is following harshad's car in her bike along with Aliya and dhruv in dhruv's bike.

In manik's car nandini is seating quietly and watching outside. Manik observes this, then he kept his one hand on hers and said "don't worry nandini... " She smiles slightly and said after holding his hand in her both tiny hands and looking at him "manik... you know jabse ye harshad ki bat huyi hei na, I don't know but I'm having intuitions that something will changed or should I say something is big gonna happen. "

Manik said assuring her "don't worry baby... nothing will go wrong. And trust me this is the last time we are going to do such things, from then no drama like this. I promise. And ya you just keep smiling for me." She smiled at him widely and said "I know and I will always smiling and shining for you manik... And I trust you. And I also know that everything is going to be fine."

Soon they parked their car a little away from that address which is looks like a farm. And it is also having a newly constructed farmhouse which is at the end of the big land area.

(The farmhouse)



After waiting for about 5 minutes they show harshad's car getting park outside the farmhouse and he get into the house after rolling his eyes around. Manan messages in their group and soon dhruv and mukti park their bike a little far from the harshad's car and went to the gate hurriedly.

Meanwhile manan also reach to the farmhouse's gate. They all goes inside the farm after feeding the watchman's mouth with money along with manik's anger.

Manik told girls to wait outside and he and dhruv went inside the house.

Inside the farmhouse.

When dhruv and manik goes inside they show that harshad is talking with a person in hall area. They both hide behind the pillar to listen to their conversation. They both show that the person with whom harshad is talking is looking like a doctor.

Harshad said to the doctor with smirk "so doctor. How is he? And did he awake?" doctor replied to him "harshad. What you think, how a person should be who just came out of coma after almost a year...!"

Listening this manik and dhruv look at each other and dhruv muttered under his breath "coma..?" they both have a questioning look on their faces but harshad again said something which got their attention.

"Oh come on doctor. I know us accident k baad manik ko to bacha liya uske dad ne but..." and saying this he chuckled a little. doctor look at him and said "harshad I think k tum jo kar rahe ho wo sahi nahi hei. Tumhe uski family ko ya fir at least uske friends ko batana chahiye that he is alive."

When they both were having this conversation manik and dhruv were having a very confusing faces as they don't figure out that who they are talking about or how is it matters to manik's accident. And outside the house the girls were also confused who were listening this conversation through leaning near the window.

Harshad again smirks evilly and said to the doctor "Nope. Abhi usme waqt hei doctor. I know agar FAB 5 ko pata chala that he is alive to wo bahot khush honge but first I need to destroy that Manik Malhotra again who just came back from big injury but now I will harm him to the extent that he would be living dead."

As soon as he said that manik's anger rises to its peak and he tried to barge in to the living area but dhruv held his hand and tell him to calm himself down so that they could hear their conversation more. But there is one more person who is beyond angry with harshad's talk and it is none other than nandini moorthy. She just wants to go inside and slap that harshad hard to utter this much cruel words about her manik, her life. But before she does that mukti stops her coming inside and do anything.

In living area accepting his defat doctor said "ok harshad. As you want. But at least tell me the real name of this patient to complete the discharge formalities of the hospital." Harshad said "no doctor. Write his old name only in discharge paper." Then he said with a smirk "but ya. If you want to know his name then let me tell you. He is none other than the X-famous drummer of town and was the member of so cold FAB 5, Cabir Dhavan."

Hearing this dhruv and manik along with mukti, Aliya and nandini froze at their places. They just can't believe that their friend is actually alive. They just can't believe their ears. Manik and dhruv look at each other's face to assure that whatever they heard is not their illusion but a truth. Shame happened with the girls outside the door.

But soon reality stuck them that cabir was in coma all this time and was in harshad's trap. Harshad knew that he is alive but he didn't tell them. And this mere thought boil the full blood inside manik's body. He just went to harshad and grab his neck tightly with his both hands and drag him to the wall. His eyes are red in anger and spiting the fire. Listing this sounds all girls also barge into the house.

Harshad winched with pain "manikkk..." Manik continuesly hitting him with his leg along with punching him saying "I won't spare you this time harshad. How could you? Han... " manik is continuously hitting him with all the anger inside him. "You didn't tell us about cabir... han... How could you? I will kill you this time harshad..." manik was so much angry that no one dares to stop him not even nandini and she actually don't want to because this time harshad had called for it.

While manik is hitting harshad dhruv is taking care of that doctor grabbing his neck and he being a fragile soul immediately confessed and said "yes...cab...cabir dhavan is my patient." Dhruv again punch him hard and asked "you moron ...where is cabir? Tell me... where is cabir?" he shouted and that doctor instantly said pointing his finger to a room "he is there..."

Dhruv gestured girls to go to cabir and all girls ran towards the room. Dhruv also left that doctor and goes to manik who is hitting harshad blue and black. He held his hand and said "manik leave him. Cabir needs us."

Listening to dhruv, manik came back to his senses and they both run towards the room leaving a horrified harshad behind. Seeking the opportunity harshad tried to leave the place and run away from there. He run towards the door but before he steps out someone hits his legs so hard that he fell down on the floor miserably.

When mukti saw everyone coming towards cabir's room something hit her mind and she came to living area immediately and saw that harshad was trying to run away. She knew him very well. She actually knew that harshad is such a coward person so he would do such thing and here her dough gets right.

So she run and hit his leg so hardly with her famous hokey stick' which she specially took with her keeping in mind harshad's evil side. She hit harshad very hardly that he fell down and he is also not able to get up on his feet. Then she smirking said "Not so soon harshad... didn't you remember. Our after-party is still pending..."

To Be Continue...

First of all...

Pardon me friends if you didn't find this chappy up to the mark because I'm really bad in writing fighting scenes.

Secondly, sorry if manan lovers are disappoint because I know there is no manan romance but I have to keep this chappy on evil harshad'.

And last but not least...

A millions of thank you' and loves to all of you...

And the little bit more love, who did comments and likes...so please do comments and likes if you are liking my story...

Lots of Love

NISHU

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice
Loved it
Continue soon
Take care
Thanks for pm
:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...
Loved it to the core...
Very well written...
Cont soon...


LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow update...
Finally cabira came..
All were soo shocked...
This harshad is a serious kamina...
So after party is remaining..
Luved it...
Thnx for pm...
update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update dear
Just luv ur story
Cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanq thanq thanq thank you somuch


for bringing back kabeer


it was needed

without kabeer ky2 magic was missing
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Tq for getting cabir back
His can harsad do such a thing
Waiting for the next update
Update soon

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow. Finally cabir is alive..
Yipee fab5 is back..
Really excited for next
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Super awesome loved it
Loving the way U are weaving the story ...
Im liking it more than i liked season 2...
This season 3 is totally awesome

Thanxx for this amazing story n thank so so so mh for the pm

Keep smiling.stay blessed
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