MANAN FS: WHEN I'M GONE!!! PROMO on page 17 on 12/4/16 - Page 10

Originally posted by: gtilwani45

Ummm..

That's so confusing promo naa.
m getting so confuse...

but kuch to super interesting lagta h.

vaise koi baby h kya?.
vaise promo was interesting.
.

lga to aisa. 🥱


But Ur exam dates r here...
oppss.
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so study hard.
agar ho paye to...

😆

So thoda late hua to chalega na...off course study is important na...

so we can wait...

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Love Geet

Originally posted by: Fatima_mir

And I'm sholly that I was late..pleade meli apolody accept kalo

Hahaha

Okay so what's going on??I'm literally clueless...?? And yes I don't if I'll be able to read this sad story ...mere mein ab itnei guts nhi rhei ...Wese bhi kabhi nhi read ki heheh let's see kia hota hei...

Originally posted by: krazzy_parthian

thanks di for letting me know this...i will avoid using hindi...and even if i do...i'll put up the translation along...hope it would be fine...

Originally posted by: krazzy_parthian

there's no baby...i can just tell this as of now...nothing else...rest suspense...😆😆

hey guys...i know am late...okay i cant even be categorized as late...as am updating after ages...so without any delays and my explanation to this mistake...i'll update...hope you all enjoy...please do like so i can atleast give a token of thanks to everyone...by sending pm's 😆 Guys italics means the flashback, I won't be writing the flashback starts or ends here or anything like that.

CHAPTER- 1A

" Jadoo...Jadoo...where are you baby...??" Said a boy...scratch that...screamed a boy...who was totally famished and tired after his basketball practice...

"Am upstairs bhai..." yelled Nandu...

"Come downstairs jadoo...have a great news for you..."

said the guy...will sipping upon water...and doing his treasure hunt for food..."and cook something too...am dead tired"

"what's that bhai...??" She said while entering the kitchen" and which golden word is used...?" she snickered

" Guess who's coming...??" He replied with a thunder bolt smile plastered on his very charming face" and paleaseee jadoo cook something...though your cooking is not worth a please...but..but..but...am still saying..huh"

Nandini was flabbergasted...not only that...she was shocked, surprised, stupefied, astounded, dazed and any word can't describe how she felt after listening to this news from him and resulting she didn't listened his plead to cook something. She didn't knew how to react after listening to those words from her brother's mouth. She was waiting for his return ever since he has left.

"Back to earth...back to earth..." said the guy waving his hand in front of her eyes. She jolted out of her dreamy world and reconfirmed whether she heard correct or not to which the guy the cried out loud and nodded in positive.

"Oh my God !! Oh my God !! He's coming back...thank you thank you so much bhai for this good news...love you...i'll be back.."

she chirped happily and turned to leave but was stopped when someone grabbed her hand " you are in a real hurry girl...what's the matter..??" He smirked and asked

She just nodded in negative dismissing it having no words to say anything.

" Jadoo...Jadoo...Jadoo...get a fact clear.." he snickered again" nothing can be kept hidden from CABIR MURTHY"

Yes, the guy and girl were none other than our very own CabIni...They described and lived their relation fully. They knew each other in and out. Though Cabir was 2 years older than Nandini, but they were like best of friends, always there in time of need.

CABIR MOORTHY- son of Konal Moorthy and Radhika Moorthy, the 15 year old was a prankster...actually the biggest prankster along with his friend, his second family. He loved his sister more than anything in this world, and can go to any extent for it.

NANDINI MOORTHY- daughter, princess, world to her parents and aankhon ka tara to her brother, this lil angel of their lives was everything in such a tender age of 13 too. She was mature, but still a child at heart but can show correct path at times, she was a tantrum queen, yeh ni karna vo nahi kharna , but still was apple of everyone's eyes.

Together they were CabIni , and say something to one, the other one can show you living hell, possessive for each other, and was everything parents wish their children to be. The elder Moorthy's were proud of their little, but not so little bundle of joy.

Coming back to story, after listening to this heart warming news, Nandini quickly cooked noodles for her brother and getting a thumbs up from him, as every one was aware of the fabulous drastic cooking of Nandini Moorthy. Happily, she went to her room and opened her diary, which had every single thing written about her life, even those fewest things which she didn't shared with Cabir even. She was flipping the pages when suddenly her she found the date, which changed her life, the turning point of her life, the most amazing day which will never return, according to Nandini- the 10^th of August - 6 years ago.

CHAPTER 1B

Nandini's P.O.V

My birthday...i had been so excited today, not because I was born on this day or I'll be getting gifts or my parents will throw a bash for me or something, but today it was a full family and friends day. I always look forward for this day for this thing only, momma dada bhai and my all friends, we all stay together...eat, play games, and have loads and loads of fun. Today, bhai also told me someone, actually his best friend...actually scratch that even, his "brother from other mother" was showing up after 3 years. Though I turned 7 today, but still I had some problems in saying something's, and I got hell nervous while talking to strangers, that is why bhai was always there with me when we go out or something. I actually don't remember anything about his this friend cum brother neither I have ever seen him, as I always was a person who preferred staying at home, no going out from starting itself. After playing and feeling thirsty. I excused myself and was going to kitchen, when the doorbell rang, and I got scared, being a weak child from birth itself, I feared almost everything, so when I saw Raju kaka going and opening the door, I hid behind the sofas, and peeked to see who was on the door. Some..no actually three people entered the hall, and I wanted to go upstairs, frightened, so I turned to go, but to my bad, I impinged with a vase, and it made a scratched sound in there. When I turned to see, I was on verge of crying, I saw Raju kaka had gone already to kitchen. I got scared when one of them asked me,

"Who are you..?? What are you doing here...??"

"Am sholly...meli ball yahan aa dayi thi...ishliye main yahan aayi...sholly..."(am sorry...my ball came over here...that's why I was here...sorry...)I lied, being hell scared, butthen all of a sudden I don't know what got into me I ran to my room parallel to the staircase leading to where everyone was.i don't know why I lied, afterall I was standing in my house, and they were no one to question me, but I idnt have any courage to say something other than this.

I was in my room thinking about those people, that who were they, and what were they doing here, but then I thought I aslo don't know everyone, maybe dadda's colleague's or someone, but that boy, he was very intimidating, I didn't liked him, huhh...how dare he asked me that, idiot stupid,...no no no...nandu don't say like tha, all these are bad words, what will momma say when she'll here these. I was thinking all this, when I heard spounds of chuckling and laughter from just other side of the door of my roo, I quickly got up, and straightened up. Then there was a knock on the door, and bhai entered, laughing, with...urghh...with that same lambuuu boy. He probably had drunk whole factory of complan, he''s tall...okay..i exaggerated, but hey, it's a truth to some extent.

I was bought back to mortal land when bhai said "hahaha...jadoo..where were you...?? dekho tumse milne kaun aaya hai.." (hahaha...jadoo..where are you...??look who has come to meet you...) He asked me while climbing up the bed, and making himself comfortable, and I got confused, about whom he wanted me too meet, and noticing such expressions on my face, and before even bhai can say anything, the complan boy said-

"Hey, first of all, am sorry for whatever I asked you out there, I didn't meant to, but the way you were standing there with those "am caught" expressions I couldn't stop myself from asking it" and before he could say anything ahead, bhai interrupted him saying

"My bro, now are you gonna say this only, or will let me introduce too. So Jadoo, this is the special person I talked to you about, meet Manik...Manik Malhotra...and Manik, meet my lil angel..my Jadoo, Nandini." He introduced us to each other, and I suddenly got delighted to meet him, as he was a very special person to bhai.

" Hello Manik, nice to meet you." I said forwarding my hand for a hand shake to which he replied politely by" nice to meet you too nandu..hope you won't mind me calling you that..?? and am really very sor-" he couldn't continue as I stopped him " no no Manik, it's absolutely okay, and yes, you can call me that." He gave me a wide smile and we shook hand.

Before I could say anything more, he said" by the way, Nandu, Very very happy birthday"and then thanking him we all settled on bed, and talked to each other, and I got to know, that actually they were brothers from other mother, they knew each other so well, and were so cool. I had just met Manik, but was comfortable with him, not fully, but very much, moe than I expected I will. Our chatting, and bhai and manik's arguing session- who is going to win today's cricket match- when momma called us for dinner. Gosh, these guys are crazy about cricket...huh...

When we went to dining room, I greeted Manik's parents and they also wished me, and then I got some more gifts from them, and we had cut the cake and had fun time with everyone.

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Finally it's done, am again really very sorry. So compensating with a 1500+ words update. Hope I stood upto expectations, and didn't had anything od clich sort, sorry for boring you guys. But please atleast click a LIKE...Thank you for your precious time.

See you all next time...

LOVE

SANJANA