MANAN FS: WHEN I'M GONE!!! PROMO on page 17 on 12/4/16

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey peeps...!!!
So...most of you won't be knowing me...so just know ki...am a crazzy fan of PATH...and this all bullshit happening has messed up all the things...

So...this one's my ever...like ever first try on writing...
Isse padhne ke baad...u all would want to just kill me...so pehle se sorry...this one's gonna be emotional...
I know already their is gloominess around...and like a cherry on the cake...am giving you all something emotional...

Please...please accept apologies in advance...if you don't like it...but being an hell emotional person...i cant think of anything else...and came up with this only...

I don't know weather it will be an os or ts or fs...as this is a thought that came to my mind...while recalling some personal incidents...

So...here i go with the prologue...

prologue


A man with his own;self created aura...who can define every definition of handsomeness...who has black eyes...that were now red and swollen...showing that he has been crying...for since hours...or to be more precise was venting out all his pain that he has been carrying with him...which seemed to be forever to everyone...he was the person who can have whole world on his knees...but was helpless...helpless in front of his destiny...in front of his love...

LOVE-a four letter word...which is a feeling...which gives happiness and sadness equally...no matter how lucky or how rich you are...if you don't have love...you are deprived of the bestest thing of this world...love is not only something which a lover do...or what is there between a couple...love is par more beyond these things...it is something which is there between a child and his/her parents; it is something which is there between brother sister...it is when you have a true friend...love is something which only knows to give and take...yes...it knows just these two things...if love gives you ocean full of happiness by giving someone you too...it also tags along the immense sadness of ever loosing that person...at one end you want to stay with that person for eternity; for life and beyond; till sun shines and stars twinkle...till there is sky...till there is water on earth...but somewhere deep down...u know...that this the biggest joke...and this cant be true...

So coming back...

The man; no actually the greek god himself...he was carrying immense pain within himself; but still he was breathing...yes,he was only and only breathing...because he forgot to live because of the one who herself taught him to live...his love. He had loved her since he understood the meaning of love...since he first saw her...since...actually since his all beautiful firsts...his all best firsts...which he had witnessed with her...and even wished to have his last with hers only...
But is this really possible...when for the person you had lived himself don't want this...?????



Okay...so here was the most creepiest thing...which i know you all would have ever read...
Thanks for giving your most precious thing to stupid me and my stupid writing...

I want to know...if i should continue or not...

Umm...guys..i have a request...if you dont like it...or whatever...i want to know your views on love...i know am asking for too much...but if please you can spare few moments of your life...and fulfill my wish...


TAKE CARE PEOPLE
STAY BLESSED
KEEP SMILING

LOVE
URS TRULY
stupid writer

INDEX..
prologue... pg-1


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi..
Emotional story...
hmmm emotional prologue..

beautifully u wrote...

i loved the definition what u wrote about love...
its so true...

And that happiness is out of the world

n that pain can't describe..
it just give suffocation..😔

what happened with that man..MANIK???????

Plz pm me.

HAPPY NEW YEAR

Keep smiling n take care.


Edited by lovePANI - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's really really interesting di ...
I am very excited to read more ...
So you continuing soon ..plz ...


Love you
Your Ekuuu
Edited by manan_eku - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Actually Hey...I really wanna say ki..emotional se to dil bhar aayegaa pura.but still I wanna read that...or ye first ever experience h...I seriously can't believe this. .this was looking very matlb kafi accha laga raha h padkr...n me to jarur kahugi..plss continue. .ab ye os ho ya fs ya ts..me to pdugi...N love k bare me mere views..Love Bhot pure hota h..bhot pure n innocent feeling hoti h...Love friendship bhi h..Love fighting bhi h...Love Selfish h To Selfless bhi hona janta h..Pyar do logo ko kyi ways me connect krta h..itss a very beautiful feeling...Love ka dusra naam Understanding & Trust bhi h.n love me conditions hona..ye samjh nhi aata...or haa ye pyar hme apne partner se ho..ya friends se ho.ya family se ho..ya apne loved ones se..bs pyar to pyar hota h..I know bhot bakwas kr di mene..kitna faltu ka bol diya.bs ye mere views h...ab kr bhi kya skti hu...Chaloo but I surely tell u plss continue. .n yaa Happieee New Year...With Lots of happiness. .n love..Stay blessedLove Geet
Edited by gtilwani45 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept...
Do Continue...
😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice .i am a fan of imotional storys.so please continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey sanjana
First of all
HAPPY NEW YEAR SWEETHEART
Abhi abhi login kiya
And I found ur story
Well its quite emotional
And u knew am very emotional
Toh please jyada mat rulana
...hehe ...
PROLOGUE is very interesting
I would love to read it
Continue sooonnn
Love you
Diya😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mishtuuu concept toh achha hai...
Par bohut rulaane waale story honge
Pheww!!! What should i do now??

Chal you'll get review on it par definitely from not me... Sweetu or Sanju will give it

Continue soon... Thnx for the pm
Take care stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovePANI

Hi..

Emotional story...
hmmm emotional prologue..

beautifully u wrote...

i loved the definition what u wrote about love...
its so true...

And that happiness is out of the world

n that pain can't describe..
it just give suffocation..😔

what happened with that man..MANIK???????

Plz pm me.

HAPPY NEW YEAR

Keep smiling n take care.



Hi,

thank you so much dear,
glad u liked it...
thanks for fulfilling my wish...

and the man...i know suspense rakhne ke koi fayda ni hai...everyone knows about it...hehe...

and accept my request for pm's..

thank u so much for commenting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: manan_eku

It's really really interesting di ...
I am very excited to read more ...
So you continuing soon ..plz ...


Love you
Your Ekuuu


ekuu baccha...thanks for liking it...
will surely continue

bt u didnt fulfilled my wish...😭😭


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