# 4//The Ex's At War//Ch 15 on pg 141 n LINK FOR THREAD 5 on pg 1 - Page 103

finally weekend came... ur story is ALSO coming. . finally. u know i was literally waiting for weekend just to read ur story. .. first kal to ise hold pr dekhkr m shocked yar.. I was seriously scared... phir just after two minutes dil ko relief mil gyi... I got so happy ... ab finally aaj me update dekhkr bhot khush ho gyi.. firstly poor all.. because of language problem. kuch samjha hi nhi pa rahe the.. n phir nanfu kho gyi. n searching scene. n manik literally shouting on her.. ThaT was wrong. but this shows vo kitna dr gya tha.. n manini got scared of her daddy.. hehehe... n police pakad le gyi. hehehe.. n manikko aise situation me bhi kiss ki pdi h.. n nandu had to do this so prove ki manik uska hubby h.. finally vo English known person mila. or vo ship pr phuch gyeee... . ... manini adorable. . manik ne bat hi nhi kr rahi.. manik was so sad naa...but nandu h na. father daughter ko milaa diyaa. .. n manini wants a brother.. wow. n nandinj remembering her past. they lost their baby. that part was emotionally nice.. n manan talk was awesome. . but ye rewa khaa se aa gyi... y manik is so happy abt rewa news. may be business related. . but but but.. nandu misunderstand him... n that last line..ThaT literally. meko sad kr diyaaa... ye galat h na. yar manik me to kuch sense dalo naa.. is ullu ko samjh nhi aata kyaa... I just love it.. Itsss soo awesome .. So amazing. .just love to the core. .. Soo .fantastic. ... Keep updating. .. U r such a beautiful writer... Update soon.. Waiting for next update eagerly .. Thanks for this update . Thanks for pm too. .. Stay blessed Love Geet literally waiting for next update eagerly impatiently desperately. .

Emotional tha yr

Manik ka Gussa Was right totally

Manini manik ka milan
HAyyeee

Chooo cute

Now wat is with Rewa bimbo
Hmmm
Manik ko kya kaam h Rewa k dad se yr

Plzzz reveal it asap

Tysm for pm do pm me next part pretty pretty please

Keep up Ur work

Ur doing great
Really

Vidhi

Awesome!! Initial part was really funny when nandu was trying to prove that manik is her husband..people there thought that he was misbehaving with her n he got arrested 😆the thing which cracked me that he wanted her to smooch him even in such situation, 😃 Thank god that one of the cops showed some kindness n helped them to get back to ship n crew... Manik was so sad for making his daughter upset but then nandini helped in their patch up.. Rewa is such a drama queen,so irritating.. Manini wants a brother,manik was right that only her mommy can fulfil her this wish..
😃 Last part was emotional, they lost their second baby in the past ... Why everything is so complicated between these two, when it come to patching up between these two,they are just as slow as snail ..This Rewa again intervened but I don't understand that why manik accepted her proposal to meet her father... Nandu was so hurt... The update was full on package,loved it!! Pls continue soon... Thanks for the pm... 😊 😊

wow...manik and manini's moment was very beautiful...the way nandu made her understand was very nice...

Hi, awesome update but quite emotional too. These manan are alwz fighting either privately or publicly and our manini is so understanding kid na. Again manan are drifting apart, ab kya hoga. Waiting for next update.

Fabulous update

Hey this was one of the amazing update seriously this part filled with lots of emotions. I love each and every line of this update. And specially I love the bond between manik and manini it is so pure. U really wonderfully write or create daughter - father relation. I love this update a lot... Plzzz continue soon.

Hi, awesome update but quite emotional too. These manan are alwz fighting either privately or publicly and our manini is so understanding kid na. Again manan are drifting apart, ab kya hoga. Waiting for next update.

Yaar the update was great plz cont soon