# 4//The Ex's At War//Ch 15 on pg 141 n LINK FOR THREAD 5 on pg 1 - Page 100

This is one of the best MaNan FF i hv read.👏

Wow that was a really emotional chapter
In the 1st para i really luvd manini
She is such a sweetheart yaar
Tooo cute
I sumtime wish to gobble her up all at once after imagining yhe way she speaks...thats actually really cute
The way she speaks sum words in a wrong way
I have becum a fan of her
She is sooo adorable

Cuming to the next part
I really luvd that pollice station wala part
That was sumthing really funny
Actually once i went sumwhere in south india where people didnt knew nither hindi nor english n i can loterally imagine what must be there situation
Bt the bst one was when nandini kissed manik n manik being manik as usual commented sumthing that made me laugh
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The last art was way tooo emotional
I literally started crying while reading it
N my mother came running to me after seeing me like that :-p n when i told her i was reading a story her expression was worth watching
Plsss ley manan reunite soon
N plss continue soon

Ahhh emotional update but as usual u nailed it. U have no idea how much I love your work. Seriously too good.

That was really really emotional one ...specially last part...manini is the sweetest ...and manik behaving like a mad when they lost...u are truly an awesome writer...

Hey Di...

this is SO sad...and Nandini:'(:'(:'( god can they get their act straight

it's effing sad...they cannot see one another like this then why are they doing it, why are they hurting themselves in all this

and probably Rewa's dad has some deal with Manik and all

I loved manini yaar she is sssooo cutee...

Wow.. Really a looong update..
I was really scared..
I thought they could not find the ship..
When Manik was shouting like that even I got scared..
How could that poor baby Manini not got scared of her dad..
I loved the way Nandini tried to make understand the cops by kissing Manik..
He counting that too in his bet.. Naughty guy..
Manik was lost when his baby not coming to him..
I liked the love he having for his daughter..
Their patch up was so cute..
Ha ha.. It was really funny when Manini asked she want a baby brother ha ha..
That was hilarious..
But sad part was she started to feel bad for losing their baby.. He too..
Rewa... I just feel like killing her..
Nandu should try to understand Manik..
He is not going to leave her that too for Rewa..
Pls clear the misunderstandings soon..
Tanq for pm..
Eagerly waiting..
Continue soon..

Love
Suji :-)

As always awesome. But yaar unhe milwa do na. Ek saath kuch bhi kare 😉 means ladai or pyaaar but complete der family.