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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _Myrah_

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Originally posted by: ZaraKhann

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SO GUYS HERE I AM WID UPDATES.. ENJOY READING..


CHAPTER- 4(A)


- ALVIDA YAARA ALVIDAA..



Manan were walking holding each other hands in a frndly way...

Cavyaa also entered inside..

As soon as they entered inside...a person ran towards them n hugged manik...

Both manan were shocked seeing her...

During the hug manik spoke "Alya tum yaha.."

Still hugging " Yaa baby.. I was missing u so much issilye i came here to see u.. "

Listening the word "BABY.." Nandu was shocked or say hurt too..

See then took off her hand away frm manik's hold...

Seeing nandu taking her hand away he looked towards nandini wid a helpless n sad expression...

A lone tear escaped frm her eyes seeing the hug.. she jst wiped it off silently before anyone could see...

Manik then broke the hug...

Alya: Baby did u liked my surprise...

Surprise kaa pata nahi bt manik shock jaroor lagaa hogaa.. said cabir to himself...

No one spoke anything...

Alya: Kya hua baby didn't u liked me coming here..??

Manik: No woh bas aisey achanak tumhe yaha dekh kar...I mean ...

Alya: yeh mean wean chodo naa baby... tell me how m I looking.. tumse milney ke liye I especially bought this dress...?? U knw manik this dress is so costly bt fir vi I bought it coz I wanted to look best as always.. upar sey heels I bought it after roaming a lot... she was blabbering about herself only..

While all other were silently standing there...

Finally navya spoke " ab bas bi karo.. bacche ki jaan logey kya..?? waisey who is she..??

Alya:wait a minute .. who is she..jisne meri baato ko beech mey cut kiya...??

Cabir: okay wait I will make a formal intro..so alya this is nandini.. manik's bst frnd n mine too..hain naa nandini ...

She jst hmmm n passed a smile..

N then she is navya.. nandini's closet frnd n yaa our frnd too...

Hello.. said navya passing smile to alya..

Okay n guyz she is alya..

Alya..??said navya asking for their relation status..

M manik's girlfriend...said alya..

Navya:manik ki girlfriend vi hain...

Alya:it hansum dude kaa gf naa ho aisaa thodi na hosaktaa hain.. m I right baby..

Manik jst hmmed...

Nandini: guyz I hve some pending work .. I need to complete it or else sir daatenge.. so m leaving.. will see u guyz tmrrww...

Saying this she rushed frm there before manik could stop her..

Navya: Raat honey ko hain so hum vi chaltey hain...

Cabir: arrey navya come I will drop u...

Navya: thnk you cabir...

Cavya left frm there...

Manik was abt to move toward his room bt alya came on his way n stopped him...

Manik gve her what...?? Look

Alya then encircled her hands around his neck... n spoke" kya bby we meet after 3 weeks aur ek miss u kiss vi nahi ...? Lagtaaa hain u didn't missed me in these days..

no alya aisi koi baat nahi hain..said manik

ab toh definitely kuch naa kuch na kuch gadbad hain as u called me alya instead of bby... kya hua didn't u liked me coming here..?? agar aisaa kuch hain toh tell me I will leave frm here right now only...said alya in a sad tone...

manik: arrey alya u r thinking too much.. who bas I had a tiring day so avi m not in mood of all these... n also tum vi thaki hogai after this travelling toh right now u also go n take rest... raat ko sidhaa dinner par milte hain..

alya: okay baby...

Both manik n alya headed towards their respective rooms...

Manik went inside his room n ly down on bed..

Manik POV:

OH GOD AB KYA HOGAA..?? NANDINI SHE MUST BE UPSET.. JO KUCH VI HUA.. LIKE ALL OF SUDDEN.. I KNW MUJHE NANDINI KO ALYAA K BAAREMEY BATAA DENAA CHAAHIYE THAA.. BT HUMAARI FRNDSHIP KO WAPAS PAKAR I WAS SO HAPPY N ENGROSSED IN NANDINI KI ALYAA K BAAREMEY DIMAAG SEY HI NIKAL GAAYA THAA.. BT AB MAIN KYA KARU.. OH GOD MANIK Y UR LIFE IS ALWAYS SO MESSED UP... KUCH SAMAJH NAHI ARAHA...

END OF POV

Thinking abt all these manik jst took a shot nap...

It was dinner time now.. a servant came n woke manic up for dinner.. after getting freshed he came down n joined everyone for dinner...

Everyone were present there except nandini...

Manik: harshad vai nandu nahi aayi dinner k liye..??

Harshad: haa who bas aaj uskaa khaaney kaa man nahi thaa.. tumlogo k saath bahar gayi thi toh now she is little tired ..

Nyonika: arrey bt aisi vookha pet thodi naa sotey hain..!!!

Harshad: don't worry maa mainey ussey fruit aur milk dediyaa hain...

Nyonika: toh fir theek hain..

Everyone then started to eat the dinner bt one person was still lost in his thoughts n that's none other than our manik..

Cabir noticed him n thought "I knw manik tu kis cheez ko lekar itnaa worried kyu hain.. main yeh samajh saktaa hu kit u iss waqt kyaa soch raha hogaa.. I guess we need to talk..."

Finally the dinner was over n everyone left for their room..

Manik was in his room..when cabir entered

Manik: arrey cabir tu.. come naa sit..

Cabir sat beside manik..

Cabir: so..

Manik: so...??

Cabir: y r u so disturbed...??

Manik: no m not disturbed...

Cabir: jab tujhe pata hain ki u cant lie to me fir y do u even try..??

Manik: cabir...

Cabir: ab cabir cabir band kar n tell me its abt nandini n alya right...??

ManiK: haa who actually nandini ussey mainey alyaa k baaremey kuch vi nahi bataya thaa.. aur ussey aisey achanak pata chala ..she must hve been upset..

Cabir: haa toh fir tuney ussey ab tak kyu nahi bataya thaa..??

Manik: arrey yaar cabir mere dimaag sey hi nikal gaya thaa..

Cabir: aisey kaisey tere dimaag se nikal gaya ..??

Manik: cabir...

Cabir: accha toh ab..???

Manik: wohi toh samajh nahi aaraaha ki ab..??

Cabir: meri ek baat maan.. jaakey nandini sey iss baarey baat kar..

Manik: mujhse nahi hogaa yaar.. kya kahungaa y didn't I told anything abt alyaa..??

Cabir: uskaa jawaab toh tujhe khud hi sochnaa padegaa.. chal m leaving now.. n haa ussey iss baareymey baat jaroor karnaa..saying this left frm there...

Manik was sitting in his balcony thinking what should he do.. he noticed nandini standing on her terrace n staring the sky...

Common manik go n tlk to her.. saying this he got up n came out n in no time reached her terrace..

Manik was standing jst behind her..

So watching stars...? Said manik

His voice broke her trance..

Nandini.: tum yaha..??

Manik: kyu ..?? meraa aana accha nahi laga..??

Nandini: no aisey baat nahi hain..woh actually I didn't expected u to be here... u hve a girlfriend naa..toh I thought ki u would be bzy wid ur girlfriend at this hour..

Manik: nandu...!!

Nandu: hmmm

Manik: naraaz ho mujhse...??

Nandini : main kaun hoti hu tumse naraaz honey waali...??

Manik: U knw naa what r u for me.. arrey meri bstest frnd ho tum..

Nandini:bstest frnd hu... par mujhe toh aisaa nahi lagtaa...

Manik: plz aisaa mat bolo nandu..

Nandini: toh aur kya kahu manik...agar bst frnd hoti toh u would hv share me abt ur life.. u had a girlfriend.. n tum ne mujhe ab tak bataya vi nahi thaa?? I thought we were bck to manan who don't keep secrets.. bt... Agar alyaa naa aati toh mujhe kavi pata vi nahi chaltaa that u hv a girlfrien too. Dekho manik I don't hv any problem in it bt mujhe accha nahi laga that u didn't told me abt it..pata nahi aur kaun kaun si aisey baatein hain jo mujhe nahi pata...

Manik:Woh nandini ...

Nandini: Its okay manik u don't hv to explain anything.. maybe I was expecting too much...!!!

Manik: nandini bataane laayak kuch thaa hi nahi.. actually I was my self not sure abt alyaa toh tumhe kya batataa...

Nandini: what do u mean by kuch bataane layaak nahi thaa.. alya tumhaare girlfriend hain issmey share naa karne waali baat kaun si hain...

Manik: see nandu...he was cut off in btn..

Nandini: its fine manik...i can understand.. yeh 9 saal ki duriyaa ..hum chaahey kitnaa vi karle manik we cant deny everything has changed btn us I may be not that important to u...so rehnedo..u don't hv to explain ki tumney alyaa ki baareymey mujhe kyu nahi batayaa.. main chalti hu..i have some work still left.. kal imp project submit karnaa hain so kuch editing work baaki hain.. u too go n take rest..aaj kaa day waisey vi tiring thaa so need it... n also alyaa must be waiting for u...

Saying this she started to walk..

Alvida yaara alvida
Ho rahe tumse hum judaa
Le chale saare gham tere
Khush rahe yaara tu sadaa

Tears started to role down her cheeks... manik was also crying seeing her going...

nandini stops in mid way..

Tumse bhi zyada hongi
Ab yaadein pyaariyan
Hum dono ki hain apni apni lachariyaan
Ab hanste hanste tumpe le khushiyaan vaariyaan

She then wiped her tears..n turned around plastering a fake smile..

Good night manik... said nandini n again walked frm there...

Marz bhi hain deti
Chain bhi hain deti
Dard bhi hain deti
Jaan bhi hain leti
Yaariyaan Woh o..
Na chhode yaariyaan
Woh oh oh...

Manik was standing silently seeing her going away frm him...

Manik's POV:

IS IT REALLY OVER.. KYA NANDINI SACH MEY MUJHSE DUR HOGAYI HAIN.. DID I RUINED EVERYTHING AGAIN...??

END OF POV..

He wiped his tears n went to his house...

A bad n sad night went n new morning of new hopes n rays came...

Manik woke up n came for breakfast...

He saw everyone was sitting there except alya n nandini .. he got sad not seeing nandini for breakfast...

He sat wid everyone...

Suddenly he saw nandini entering shouting good morning all of u..

N here alya also came.. nandini was abt to sit beside manic bt then alyaa made a sad face which didn't went unnoticed by everyone..

Okay.. main maa ke paas baith jaati hu.. u sit here.. waisey vi u r manik's GIRLFRIEND..haq bantaa hain tumhaara.. saying this she sat beside nyonika..

Alya sit beside manik...

Good morning bby.. said alya..

Morning... replied manik

The breakfast went smoothly...

Manik: nandu m waiting for u outside breakfast hojaaaye toh bahar aajana...

Nandu: y will u be waiting..??

Manik: what do u mean by y will u be waiting arrey hum humeshaa saath jaate hain naa..

Nandu: its okay manik tum chaley jaao.. main aaj khud scooty se chali jaaungi...

Manik: par humeshaa toh tum mere saath chalti ho naa..

Nandini: I knw bt koi ni aaj khud chali jaaungi.. how does it even matter ki main tumhaarey saath jaau yaa akele jaau..

Manik: par...

Alya: arrey bby let it be naa.. woh akele jana chaahti hain toh let her go naa.. itna insist kyu kar rahe ho...?? Aur waisey vi m coming wid u today naa toh its bttr ki humaare saath aur koi naa ho.. u knw some alone time...

Nandini:exactly alya is right.. m leaving.. n haa enjoy ur alone time... bye...

Saying this she went frm there...

Manik: alya main office jaa raha hu.. tum mere saath chal kar kya karogi...?? I will be bzy wid my work.. tum sirf bore hoo jaaogi... so its bttr u be here yaa fir shopping pe jaao naa..

Alya:actually u r right.. its alright.. tum jaao main shopping pe chali jaaungi...

Manik: okay...

He then went to office...

So what could be more bad than such starting of the day...

N the day went much more bad than the morning..The day went in such ignorance only..manik called nandu many times bt she didn't received the call for once instead she sent a text that she is bzy...

In past days there wouldn't be sinlge called missed by nandu of manik n today...!!!

It was night now... manik returned frm office...

He firstly inquired abt nandu n got to knw she was still not bck...

He went to his room n got freshed... He was in his balcony looking towards nandu's house waiting for her to return..

In meanwhile alya entered his room... she came n back hugged him...

So aaj kaa din kaisaa gaya... asked alya still hugging him...

Manik then broke the hug n made her sit beside him...

She sat resting her head on his chest..

Manik was feeling akward wid this bt he couldn't deny her as it was not the first time they r sitting close.. they had been so close before than this...

He then spoke " kuch khaas nahi... bas work n all..n wat abt urs..??

Alya: I toh had lots of fun in shopping.. I bought lots of things.. also mainey tumhaare liye vi kuch kharidaa hain.. its in my room.. baad mey dikhaaungi...

Manik: hmm..

Alya: hmm kya...??baby don't u think ki aajkal tum kaafi boring hogaye ho... like its been a day I hve came aur u haven't even kissed me once..!! is there smthg wrong..

Manik: aisi koi baat nahi hain...

Alya: accha then prove me...

Manik: prove u .. bt how..???

Alya: I will show u how.. saying this she sat on his lap n slammed her lips with his... Manik was taken aback wid this kiss.. he was in a dilemma wat to do..?? as his heart was not letting him respond bt his mind was telling u cant bck off as being his gf its her right to kiss him.. so he neither respond nor bck off .. his was sitting totally mum...


N this all scenario was watched by a pair of eyes... yes as they were in balcony n nandu jst returned home so she saw them kissing... she felt like some one hit on her heart wid a knife...

Finally alya left him broking the kiss .. it was when Manik also saw nandu standing on her gate n watching them..

As soon as nandu saw manik looking towards her she walked inside her house...

Ab jeene ko jaane ko, na koi raasta
Tanhaaiyon se hoga, ab dil ka vaasta
Hum khud hi khud ko, ab to kar denge laapata

She rushed inside...n jst banged the door... she then sat leaning against the door...Tears were continuously flowing down frm her eyes... she then started to cry badly...manlya kissing scene was all that was roaming in her head...

Maan le tu aise
Hain zara bhole se
Jaante hain waise
Hai nibhaani kaise
Yaariyan
woh oh ho
Naa chhode yaariyaan
Woh oh ho..

Alya then left frm manik's room as she got a call...Manik was jst thinking abt nandini..Remembering her sad face his eyes also welled up... He was feeling so helpless...

manik' pov:

pata nahi y m i feeling this way... aisaa lag raha jo vi hoaraha hain galat horaha hain..!! kya karu main... kya karu...

end of pov...

Nandu then composed herself.. she got up n get freshed n quitely ly down on her bed..

Once that kissing scene got stucked in her mind...

Nandu's POV:

Oh god y m I thinking so much abt it... they r in a relationship.. so a kiss is normal btn couples.. y m I feeling bad... Now my head is gonna burst out... I need to share my feelings wid someone else this is not gonna wrk...

End of pov...

She then got up frm her bed n open the drawer of side table n took out a diary..

She then turned the first page which has manan chilhood photo... she jst caressed the photo for a while n then turned a blank page n started to write...

9 yrs manu... nau saal hogayee they ... Tum mujhe vool gaye they aur main aagey badh gayi thik kyuki mujhe lagataa thaa ki tum kavi wapas nahi aaogey n aaogey vi toh u wouldn't talk to me.. mujhe lagtaa thaa ki agar tum wapas aajaaogey fir vi nthg can be like before btn us... I don't knw y main itni jaldi maan gayi manu... Jab tum udhar jaa kar badal gaye they then i was so angry on u.. Kaafi gussa aya thaa n also i was so hurt... Tab mainey soch liya thaa chaahe kuch vi hojaaye main tumse kavi baat nahi karungi.. Also i won't forgive u.. Bt tumhe dekhte hi sara gussa kahi gayab saa hogaya.. U knw since the very first day u came i so wanted to talk to u... I was so happy seeing u bck... Par tab mujhe samajh hi nahi araha thaa how should i react...issilye i jst said a simple hello .. Bt fir maa ki kehne par we hugged each other..That hug was so blissful... Slowly manik i felt u were trying to put sme effort..like u wanted to talk me.. .. i knw manik ki mainey kitni muskil sey tumhe ignore kiya thaa... mujhe naa manu dar lagtaa thaa ki agar i let u get close to me n fir tum mujhe chod kar chale gaye toh... how would I again live widout u... Uss din jab tumhaare ghar aayi thi n i saw u so disturbed.. Mujhe pata nahi thaa ki tumhaare saath kya hua thaa bt i could sense some problem.. Nahi rok paayi thii khudko ..so i said those things to u..so that i could reduce ur pain.. that night jab i told i was waiting for u i really mean it.. I was really waiting for u since last 9 yrs...bachpan se mera yeh dil sirf tumhaare liye dhadkaa hain... Chaahe main dusro ko kuch vi kehdu bt mera dil jaantaa hain that still i feel for u...bachpan mey jab tumney mujhse kaha thaa ki in future u will marry me tab se I started to dream abt our marriage... I wont be lying if I say I LOVE U... yes manu bachpan sey hi sirf tumsepyaar kiyaa thaa..aur aaj vi main sirf tumse pyaar karti hu... sirf tumsey... kitna samjhaya thaa iss dil ko ki no stop this feeling coz iss pyaar mey sirf tum ho.. manik is no where bt ishq kisi ki nahi suntaa... kehte ho naa aap jintaa kisi cheez sey dur vaagtey ho who utnaa hi aapke piche aati hain.. yeh ishq aur iski dard ki koi dawaa nahi hoti... Mujhe ishq se rehnaa thaa dur.. Gam ishq k badey hain mashoor.. par yeh dil hain ki maanaa nahi...kyu hotaa hain mere saath aisaa..?? M I not worthy enough to deserve his love...???... Kyu mere saath hi aisaa hua... y..?? aiyapaa kyu mere saath aisaa karte ho..mujhe laga thaa sab thik horaha hain.. bt u have a girlfriend..kal jab I came to knw ki alyaa if ur gf my heart broke into many pieces... kaas manik tumney mujhe alya k baaremey pehle hi bata diyaa hotaa toh sayad main firse tumhaare itnee karib naa aati... mera pehlaa pyaar.. my childhood love ..adhuraa reh gaya... it remained incomplete... don't I deserve to be happy don't I desserve love.. amma aur ams ko toh aapne apne paas bulaa liya hain.. appa k paas toh humaare liye kavi waqt hi nahi rehta aur vai vi aajkal khudhi bzy rehte hain.. kya meri zindagi mey yeh akelaa pan hi likhaa hain...kyaa mere nasseb mey pyaar nhi likhaa hain...???

A lone tear escaape frm her eyes...she then closed the diary...

No nandini murty u r definitely not weak... Ab sey u will be strong.. kuch vi hojaaye bas no ronaa.. jo honaa thaa hogaya... ab bas apne kaam pe dhyaan do..make ur future.. thaats it... kuch dino ki baat hain fir manic vi chalaa jaayegaa than everything will be fine...bas 7 more days n he will be gone...so jst make urself strong till these 7 days.. I knnw I can do it...

Composing herself she wnt to sleep...

Here after sobbing a lot manik also slept...

A new mrning came...evryone were in dinning area.. nandini didn't came for breakfast.. manik knw she wouldn't come..

Mujhe vook nahi hain.. main baad mey khaalongaa.. m leaving now.. saying this manik went frm there...

Nandu was waiting for the bus on bus stop as today she didn't brought her scooty...

Manik was passing by when he noticed her..

Manik:Come in nandu i will drop u...

Nandini:No its okay.. I will manage...

Manik:Common nandu..

.

Suddenly a car came on stop right behind manik's car..

It was aryaman..

Aryaman:Miss nandini murty tum avi tak idhar hi ho.. I don't want u to be late..common m also heading toward hospital only.. Saath chalte hain else aaj vi u will be late n fir complain ki i shouted on u..

Nandini's pov:

I hve to ignore manik.. main manik saath nahi jaa sakti..so its bttr ki main sir k saath hi chali jau..

End of pov..

Nandini: okay sir lets go.. saying this she started to walk toward his car..

Yaari yaari har koi karda ve
Yaari yaari har koi har koi
Karda ve.. karda ve... karda
Yaari de bus jo peh jaave
Woh pagla woh jhalla ve

Nandu passed by manik's car side.. she for once also didn't looked toward manik.. manik felt bad.. Nandu left in aryaman's car...manik saw his car going.. he was feeling as if his nandu was going far far away rm him...

Manik felt dejected as well as jealous...

Manik also headed toward his office..

It was afternoon now..

Manik was sitting in his cabin n thinking " its lunch time now.. ek kaam kartaa hu nandu ko call karke ussey bahar lunch k liye puchtaa hu..."

He then called her bt she didn't answered so he msg her.. " wanna catch up for lunch.. kahi bahar chalte hain.."

In no time he got a reply.. " sorry bzy in a imp meeting.. cant join u for lunch..."

Manik sadly came out of his office n went inside the nearby restaurant...

He sat on a corner table... a waiter came n asked for his order.. he order smthg n was jst waiting for food to come..

He quietly watching his n nandu's photo in his cell phn.. suddenly he heard some familiar voice aur say familiar laughter...

He turned around n saw nandini sitting n hving lunch wid aryaman n laughing a lot..

Ab jeene ko jaane ko na koi raasta
Tanhaiyon se hoga ab dil ka vaasta
Hum khud hi khud ko ab to kardenge laapata

He was watching them silently...

MANIK'S POV:

SO YEH THI TUMHAARI IMP MEETING.. MUJHE KAHA THAA U R BZY.. AUR YAHA ISS ARYAMAN K SAATH HASTE HASTE LUNCH KAR RAHI HO.. SIDHA SIDHAA KEHDETI U R BZY WID ARYAMAN...

END OF POV

Maan le tu aise
Hai zara bhole se
Jaante hain waise
Hai nibhaani kaise
Yaariyaan
Oh oh ho

Na chhode yaariyan
Woh oh ho...

His eyes were full of tears.. he couldn't hold it more so he left frm there...

He took his car n was driving frm last 4 hour...as if he was running away frm smthg...

Finally composing himself...he went to his office n at night he came home bck.. n like always he first inquired abt nandini n got to knw she was still not bck..

Again he went to balcony waiting for her...

N here she comes bt bt bt wid aryaman...

Aryaman stops his car infront of her house .. he then came outside n also opens the door for her...

Nandu then comes out of the car..

Nandu: thnk u so much for the lift sir..

Aryaman: my plzr..

Nandu: u knw what sir... main aapko jitnaa buraa samajhti thii naa utnaa buraa nahi ho aap..

Aryaman: accha...???

Nandini: hmm.. kavi kavi aap kuch jada hi khadus banjaatey ho bt personally u r a nice person...

Aaryaman: okay... Now thnk u for the compliment..

Nandu: n thnk u for the lunch... it was fun...

Aryaman.. hmm who kya hain naa that restaurant was my fav n today I was feeling like going there so..

Nandini: so issiliye... okay...then fir main chalti hu.. good night..

Aryaman:okay.. good night.. see u tmrww...

Biding each other a good bye.. aryaman left for his house n nandu also went inside her house..

Manik was watching all this.. he was burning wid jealousy... finally chucking everything he went down for dinner n eat silently... nandini as usual didn't came for dinner...

Manik completed his dinner n went to sleep...

Edited by _Myrah_ - 9 years ago
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CHAPTER- 4(B)

A new morning.. may be this morning has smthg different in it...

Manik woke up late...

He then came down n found his dadi sitting in hall while cabir n alya were sitting on dinning table hving breakfast...

He went near his dadi n sat beside her..

Manik: good morning daadi..

Daadi: morning baccha...

Manik: aapne breakfast karli..??

Daadi: haa kab kaa...

Manik: aur mom ney..??

Daadi: haa baba aapki mom ney vi karli...

Manik: par mom hain kaha I didn't saw her..

Daadi: woh nandu ki ghar par hain.. aaj uske ghar par party hain naa toh nandu ko help karne gayi hain...muku vi wahi par hain...

Manik: party par kis baat ki..???

Daadi: tujhe nandu ney nahi batayaa..??

Manik nodded in a no...

Daadi: woh harshad usney koi bohot badi deal crack ki hain..toh ussi ki khusi mey party hain.. sham ko ham sab jaa rahe hain ..

Manik: hmm..

Manik then left frm there to nandu's house.. there was lot of chaos.. all the servants were bzy in decorating the house while nyonika n nandini were instructing them...

Manic spotted nandu shouting at a servant...

"Kya dada thodaa jaldi jaldi haath chalaao naa.. party aaj hi hain haa..."

Manik then went near her n tap her shoulder.. she turned around n found manik standing...

Manik: good morning...said manik wid a smile..

Nandu: morning..

Manik: so ghar par party hain mujhe inform vi nahi kiyaa..??

Nandini:maa aur daadi ko bataya toh thaa.. so tumhe toh aisey hi chall jata naa...!!!

Manik: kya main ab itnaa parayaa hogaya hu ki u don't feel it imp to inform me personally...

Nandu: aisi baat nahi hain woh bas saari preparation mey bzy thi toh bas dimaag se nikal gaya ... Plz don't mind.. sorry haa..

Manik: dimaag se nikal gaya.. khair koi nahi.. so tell me how can I help u..

Nandu: its okay manik main aur maa hain naa hum samvaal lenge.. u go..

Manik: ab mujhse madat lenaa vi muskil lagne laga hain.??

Nandini: no manik its not like that...

Manik: toh fir let me help u...

Nandini: okay baba...

Soon alya, cabir,mukti n harshad also came n they all helped each other...

During all this time manik was jst stealing glances of nandini which didn't went unnoticed by cabir n also alyaa..

It was time for party now...

Everyone went to their rooms to get ready..

Malhotra's along wid cabir n alya was welcomed by harshad..

They entered the party n got bzy here n there..

Mukti was helping harshad in receiving guest while nyo n daadi got bzy wid some aunties..

Manik was waiting for nandini.. n here she comes looking extremely beautiful..

she came towards manic ,cabir n alyaa..

cabir: u r looking really breathtaking...

Nandini:thnx.. u guyz r also looking awesome... n here enters aryaman..

Nandu saw aryaman entering inside..

Guyz excuse me haa.. I need to attend my imp guest... saying this nandu headed toward the door..

Nandu: welcome sir..

Aryaman: hmm nice arrangements..

Nandini: thnk u so much sir..

Aryaman: n yaa u r looking really pretty ..

Nandu: thnk u sir.. aap vi kaafi hansum lag rahe ho..

Aryaman: thnx..

Nandini: sir andar aayiye naa

Aryaman: thnk god u asked me to come inside else mujhe laga thaa puri party yahi door par hi rakhogi..saying this he laughed..

Nandini: aap vi naa sir..

Nandu was standing wid aryaman ..talking...laughing n here one heart was fuming wid anger n jealousy...

Manik then went near them..

Manik: nandu mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hain plz mere saath aao..

Nandini: manik avi main sir k saath hu lets talk later...

Manik: its imp plz...

Aryaman: go nandini sayad kuch imp kaam hogaa..

Nandini: yes sir...

Saying this she left wid manik to the garden side..

Nandini: bolo manik aisi kya imp baat hain jo kehne k liye tum party khatam honey tak kaa wait nahi karsaktey..???

Manik: y r u being so rude to me...??

Nandini: manik m not being rude .. tum dekh rahe they naa I was bzy over there aur aisey tumney mujhe yaha bulaa liyaa so jst thodaa gussa agaya thaa..

Manik: hmm kiske saath kitnaa bzy thi who toh dikh hi raha thaa...

Nandini: manik common yaar sir yaha kisiko nahi jaante except me so I need to be wid him so that he wont be uncomfortable...

Manik: Toh aryaman ko party mey bulaane ki kyaa zaroorat thi..??

Nandu:Manik i work under him.. Its my respect n loyalty towards him..!! Mera farz bantaa hain to invite him for party held in my house...

Manik:Bt i don't like him..

Nandu:Tumhaare like karne na karne sey meri yeh farz badal nahi sakti manik.. N y r u behaving so immature.. Like mainey unhe sirf ek party k liye bulaaya hain..mujhse shaadi karne k liye nahi..

Manik:I don't care ur respect or responsibility towards him.. All i care is i don't like him being around u..

Nandu:Stop it manik.. Ab baskaro apni bakwaas u knw what I hve no energy to discuss on this topic any more...

Manik: haa ab toh tumhe meri saari baatein bakwaas hi lagegi naa...saari acchi baatein toh sirf aryaman kartaa hain naa..!!!

Nandini: tum naa manik pgl hogaye ho..pata nahi kya fazool ki baatey kiye zaa rahe ho.. m leaving...

Saying this she left frm there...

Manik also came inside the party...

Nandini n went on stage...

N announced.. " hello everyone.. I hope u guyz r enjoying the party a lot.. so as aap sabko pata hain ki yeh party mere vai yaani MR.HARSHAD MURTHY ki business success ki wajah sey rakhi gayi hain.. so I would like to congratulate him infront of all n also in behalf of all of u... so vai I request u to come up on the stage..."

Everyone congratulate him... cake cutting was done n everyone was enjoying a lot...

Soon everyone started to dance... it was romantic song played by DJ..

Harshad was dancing wid mukti while cabir was dancing wid navya...

Manlya n aryani were standing quietly...

Alya: baby lets go naa dance karte hain..

Manik: m not in a mood plz..

Alya: baby.. plz..

Manik: I said naa aaj mood nahi hain...

Alya: hmm

Again all 4 were watching everyone dancing..

Aryaman: nandini...

Nandu: hmmm

Aryaman: mere saath dance karogi ... plz...

Nandu: sure sir...

Saying this they both headed toward the dance floor...

Seeing them going manik also hold alya's hand n headed toward dance floor...

All the lightings were dim...

Oooh ho...
Tum ho
Tum ho paas mere
Saath mere ho
Tum yun
Jitna mehsoos karoon tumko
Utna hi paa bhi loon

Both manlya n aryani were standing opposite each other in such a way that manan could see each other...Aryaman pull making her hands land on his chest sliding down his fingers on her waist .. He was standing facing her bck like a bck hug .. manik was seeing all this n burning in jealousy...

Tum ho mere liye
Mere liye ho tum yun
Khud ko main haar gaya
Tum ko, tumko main jeeta hoon

Oooh ho...
Tum ho
ahmmm...
Aaah haa aa...

Manik made alya stand facing her bck to him.. Both their hands were entwined n placed over her stomach..n then were moving wid the rhythm... nandu was hurt seeing them so close bt choose to ignore him...

Kahin se.. kahin ko.. bhi
Aao bewajah chale
Poochhe bina kisi se
Hum mile

Aryaman turn her around n then put her left hand on his shoulder n entwined his left hand with her right hand while his right hand was around her waist.. They were slowly moving with the rythms n beats..

Bandishein naa rahi koi baaqi
Tum ho
Tum ho paas mere
Saath mere ho tum yun
Jitna mehsoos karooon tumko
Utna hi paa bhi loon

Manik then pick up alya in air n twirl her around... He slowly put her turn n took her right hand n twirl her...

Oooh ho ho...

Kis tarah chheenega aa
Mujh se ye jahaan tumhe
Tum bhi ho main
Kya fiqar ab humein

Tum ho mere liye
Mere liye ho tum yun
Khud ko main haar gaya
Tum ko, Tumko main jeeta hoon

Aryaman turns nandu swiftly and entwining his right hand with hers places it on her stomach and then taking her left hand places it on her ear holding it with his and then swings right and left along with her having his eyes closed pressing herself to him... He turns her towards him and hiding his face in crook of her neck continues holding her waist tightly caressing it continuously... manik saw this n that was it for him he left the dance floor...

Oooh hoo ho...
Tum ho
Hoo aa...
.

Nandu also felt little uncomfortable so she excused herself...


Manik went to garden side...manik was sitting on the bench covering his face wid his palms..

Suddenly he felt a tap on his shoulder.. he looked toward the person n it was cabir...

Manik: cabir tu yaha kyaa kar raha hain.. andar party me thaa naa..

Cabir: same goes for u...

Manik: haa who bas party me thodaa dam gohhtney laga thaa so came out to get fresh air...

Cabir: accha toh ab manik malhotra ko kabse party mey dam ghootney laga.. common dude bahana vi maar toh thodaa soch samajh ke mara kar naa...

Manik: hmm

Cabir: abb hmm kya kar raha hain.. chal bata kya hua hain...??

Manik: wahi toh samajh nahi araha...!!

Cabir: accha ek kaam kart u mujhe yeh bata tere man mey avi kya chal raha hain...??

Manik: bohot kuch... m hell tensed yaar... sab thik toh hain par sab sahi nahi hain.. this was not what I wanted..jaisaa mainey chaaha waisaa kuch vi nahi hua meri zindagi mey...

Cabir: to tu kya chaahta hain apni zindagi sey..???

Manik: pyaar...!!

Cabir:toh kya teri life mey pyaar nahi hain...alya..??

Manik: yahi toh main khud soch raha hu... dekh cabir main alya k saath 2 saal sey hu.. tu jaanta hain alya was the hottest grl of our clz so I got attracted toward her issilye we came in a relationship.. bt issmey pyaar kahi nahi hain.. I want a life of love not of lust...

Cabir: yaad hain manik mainey tujhe bohot pehle hi kaha thaa ki its bttr u guyz split.. coz pyaar k binaa koi ristaa nahi tik paati.. mainey tujhe kaha thaa let her go issey pehle kahi der naa ho jayee bt tu tehraa usolwo waala insaan ...apni commitment pad adney wala.. ab der hogai naa..

Avi vi der nahi hui hain cabir... Said alyaa...

Manbir turned around n saw alya standing in tears...

Manik: alya woh...

Alya:tumhe kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahi hain..main jaanti hu manik humara relation its not a perfect relationship... there's no love in this relationship..so its bttr to let u go away frm this relationship...!!

Manik: no alyaa I cant do this to u.. apni khusiyo k liye I cant leave u...

Alya:manik iss zabardasti k ristey mey meri vi khusiyaa nahi hain.. u knw manik jab main yaha aayi.. I saw smthg different in ur eyes jo mainey pichle 2 saalo sey nahi dekhaa I saw it in jst these 2 days.. aur jaante ho woh kya hain..?? Its LOVE... Haa manik mujhe tumhaare aakhon mey pyaar dikhaa par afsoos mere liye nahi nandini k liye.. n trust me mujhe issey koi problem nahi hain...m happy for u that finally u fell in love.. u jst go n tell her dude that u love her..

Manik: no alya I cant be so selfish..

Alya: manik love is always selfish...manik tum hi socho naa agar aaj tum mujhe choose karte ho then things will be more difficult.. if u choose me jst coz u want to stand to ur commitment n let ur love go toh kya hum mey sey koi khus reh paayegaa ..?? don't hold on me if u don't want to.. iss tarah se hum dono ki zindagi barbaad hojaayegi... everything will be messed more...so its bttr ki tum apni commitment ko side mey rakho n be little selfish...

Manik: alyaa...!!!

Alya: manik..!!

Cabir: I guess now everything is going to be on track... n don't worry dude hum alyaa k liye vi uskaa sacchaa pyaar zaroor dhund denge...what say alya..??

Alya: that's cool...

Manik: r u sure mujhe nandu sey sab confess kardenaa chaaihye...??

Alya: manik go for it..!!

Manik: what if she don't feel same way for me...??

Cabir: tab ussmey toh hum kuch nahi kar paayenge...!!

Alya: cabir..! arrey manik tum tension mat lo.. I knw she also feel same for u..

Cabir: accha tumhe bada sab pata hotaa hain...??

Alya: cabir... manik tum isski baat mat suno jst go n confess her...

Manik: sacchi..??

Alya: issey pehle mera decision change hojaaye go frm here...

Manik jst smiled n started to walk.. he stop in mid way... n then ran bck to alya n hugged her...

He then whispered THANK YOU ...

U don't need to thnk me.. mainey toh wahi kiyaa jo hum sab k liye sahi hain...now go...

Manik then passed her a smiled n left frm there...

As soon as manik left alya broke down n sat on ground crying badly... cabir took her in a consoling hug...

I need to let manik go.. wo nandini sey pyaar kartaa thaa cabir... said alya cryingly

Shh..!! bas.. mujhe laga thaa tumhaari saari akal shopping mey chalti jaati hain bt u took really a good decision for everyone.. m proud of u.. kaafi strong hain meri dost... chalo now ab ronaa band karo.. lets go inside aur tumhaare liye koi hansum ladkaa dhoondte hain...

Finally after lots of consoling cabir took her frm there...

Scene shifts to pool side...

Nandini was sitting near pool side wid aryaman..

Aryaman: nandini party mey jo kuch vi hua uske liye m sorry... I didn't mean to make u uncomfortable...

Nandini: its okay sir...

Aryaman: so wat do u think abt me...

Nandini: think abt u as in..???

Aryaman: as in what do u feel abt me...??

Nandini: sir...!!

Aryaman: okay let it be.. main hi boltaa hu...nandini frm the very first day u came I got attaracted toward u... main humeshaa tumse late night work karwaata thaa it was jst bcoz I wanted to be wid u for some more times.. Dekho nandini I knw I had always been rude to u.. bt trust me I never meant to be rude to u...main tumse aisaa issliye behve kartaa thaa coz mujhe samajh nahi aata thaa ki main kaisey behve karu tumaare saamne.. tumhe dekhte hi maano dil thamsaa jata thaa.. so tu sue away all the feeling I talk rudely wid u... bt I guess now I cant hold on anymore... I need to say that... He was abt to complete his sentence bt was cut off in btn by manik's voice..

Manik: nandini tum yaha isske saath kyaa kar rahi ho..

Both aryaman n nandini turned towards him...

Nandini than spoke.. " tumse matlb...y did it even matter to u..??."

Manik: matter nahi karta tab tak jab tak tum iss insaan k saath yaha nahi hoti...

Nandini: manik plz mujhe tumse avi firse argue nahi karni..so plz jst go frm here...

Manik: m not here to argue.. I need to talk to u..

Aryaman: sunaa nahi tumney nandini kya kaha.. leave...

Manik:oh plz u jst shut up... tujsey kisi ney beech mey bolney k liye nahi kaha hain..m here to talk wid nandu..samjhe naa so its bttr u stay out of it..ek kaam kar tu naa jaa yaha se...

Aryaman: Nandini I must say smthg is really wrong wid ur this frnd...he is so impolite... ek kaam karte hain lets go frm here...

Manik: mainey tujhe jaaney k liye bola.. nandu kahi nahi jaa rahi ...

Aryaman: nandini u r coming wid me right..??

Manik:ussey kya puch raha hain... !! mainey ek baari keh diyaa na wo tere saath nahi arahi toh its final.. tu ab yaha se jaa..

Aryaman: tum kaun hotey ho yeh deicide karne waale ki what she need to do..???

Manik:main nandu kaa boyfrnd hu..chal ab jaa..

Nandini: guyz stop it.. band karo tum dono apna yeh bakwaas.. mere saath chalo mere saath chalo arrey enough.. sir aap party mey jaao m coming in a minute .. I really need to sort out smthg..

Aryaman: lekin nandini...

Nandini: sir plz...

Aryaman: okay.. come fast..

Saying this he left frm there...

Nandini: manik yeh kya thaa...??

Manik: what...??

Nandini: don't try to act innocent n haa tum mere boyfrnd nahi ho..

Manik: toh woh hain kya..???

Nandini: tumhe ho kya gaya hain manik..

Manik:exactly tumhe kya hogaya hain nandu... y r u ignoring me...???

Nandini: No I am not...

Manik: accha toh tum mujhse acche sey baat kyu nahi kar rahi ho...???

Nandini: manik I was bzy issiliye...

Manik: haa aur uss aryaman k saath baat karne k liye tumhaare paas waqt hi waqt hain...

Nandini: aisaa kuch vi nahi hain..

Manik: toh fir kaisaa hain nandu...jab dekho tab uss aryaman k saath baithi rehti ho..sunaa nai tumney wo kya kehne waala thaa...

Nandini: woh mujhe kuch vi kehne wala ho tumhe kya matlb ...!!

Manik: mujhe matlb hain..kyuki mujhe lagtaa thaa tumhaare itney kareeb aaney kaa haq sirf mujhe thaa..

Nandini: tum kehnaa kyaa chaahte ho manik??

Manik:main bas yahi kehnaa chaahtaa hu ki tum uss aryaman ko yaha sey vejdo..

Nandini:kyu...??

Manik: kyuki main chaahtaa hu ki tum apnaa saara waqt mere saath bitaao..

Nandini: manik mujhe nahi rehnaa tumhaare saath , I don't want to spend my time wid u...Yaa i m ignoring u... manik main yaha aryaman k saath issliye baithi thii kyuki main tumaahre saath aur waqt nahi bitaa sakti...who mere sir hain.. also my new frnd too.. bas..!!

Manik : toh tumhe koi idea nahi thaa he would hve such feelings for u..??

Nandini: nahi.. pab yeh tamashaa band karo...plz... tum samjhte kyu nahi main tumhaare saath 2 minute aur rahi toh ...!!

Manik : toh kya nandu..??

Nandini : toh pyaar hojaayegaa mujhe tumse firse... aur tumhe nahi hogaa firse...

After this confession Manik jst grab her frm waist n slammed his lips on hers...!!!!

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PRECAP: ROMANCE ON THE WAY... SOME TWIST...

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Edited by _Myrah_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
wah.

jealous season...promo was nice.

waiting for update. ..

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Thank you for this long chappi...
I will read and run away like you..
To abhi se bye bye
Love you

No unress.. :p
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Posted: 9 years ago
Parindey ka pagalpan...
Now I'm hating that song..
Vikas... huh😡

But jind meri roi.. hayee oska to nasha nai otar raha😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dua_arafat

Parindey ka pagalpan...

Now I'm hating that song..
Vikas... huh😡

But jind meri roi.. hayee oska to nasha nai otar raha😳

HAWW dudu ki bacchi jst bcoz of that stupid vikas tu itni acchi song hate kar rahi hain..
pgl ladki... vikas ko side mey rakh key dekh parindey song is jst awesome...

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Originally posted by: _Myrah_

HAWW dudu ki bacchi jst bcoz of that stupid vikas tu itni acchi song hate kar rahi hain..
pgl ladki... vikas ko side mey rakh key dekh parindey song is jst awesome...


Song jesa bhi ho awaz to vikas ki hai na..
I hate his voice.. And song ki picture rising bhi

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