MANAN TS : YAHIN HOON MAIN CH 5 PG 88 EPILOGUE PG 98

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Swarna

@manancraze

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#151

Superb di...👏.

So nandu was drooling over "HIGH CLASS CHAUFFEUR"...😆. Flashback was nicely written.

Par last main woh sachi main Manik tha yah nandu ka imagination...😕.

Plz use Manik hi kar dena...

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shoana

@shoana

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#152

awesome prologue
loved it
manan is 5 years old
nandini thought that manik has died😔
flashback was superbb😉
manik as driver😆
girls were really mad...
how could a driver be soo decent handsome and hot too😉😆
chauffer + chor😲
ye to hadd hogayi bewaqufi ki😆
so manik was the gift😳

end me manik wapas aagaya
or nandini is hallucinating😲
can't wait for next update
continue soon di

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mickeym

@mickeym

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#153

nice story .. a different one ..
awesome update ...continue soon

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JiyaRajput

@JiyaRajput

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Nice update Some flashbacks Nandu misunderstood manik this sequence is amazing Continue soon Stay blessed and be happy

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Sid

@BrightNSparkle

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#155

lovely update loved it to the core thanks for the update...

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Sm0405

@Sm0405

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#156

Ohooo I'm loving this story ... Seriously ... Manik is nt there with her nd its been 6 yrs he died ... Nandini misses him a lot .. Tht day still is the biggest nd scariest nightmare of her tht still haunts her ...

Flashback was really nice. ... All the girls misunderstood Manik as a driver ... Nd bechara Manik ... Use explain karne ka mauka tak nhi diya ... Hmm toh Manik was the gift Mr. Murty planned for Nandini ... Both were affected by each other at the first sight only ...

Bt now Manik is nt there with her ... Nd she is imagining Manik is there ... Ohh god ... 😭😭

Waiting for the next update ... Please post sooonnniishh ...

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qamarkhan87

@qamarkhan87

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#157

Awesome

Major manik ko driver bana diya poor boy

And her dad surprise was manik only

Continue soon

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FairyGamer

@FairyGamer

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#158

Fab chapter
flashback was awsm
loved its

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sadiya51

@sadiya51

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#159

Superb update
Flashback was damn good specially the driver part
And at the end manik is back but how
Good going yaar iska to ff hona chahiye tha but an already itna coverup ho chuka
Its OK but brilliant writing and idea

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Shreya

@Sjmanan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#160

amazing story...loved the flashback. the girls considered Manik as a driver...haha!!! Manik was the gift for nandini...her dad wanted her to marry him!! Major manik malhotra...sounds so good!! the last scene shocked me...manik is back or nandini is dreaming!! update soon...

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