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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: 12345niyati

Wowww

It's going to be super fun
Really very very very great concept
Waiting for the update
Plzzz update soon



Thanks dear..
I will update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

So... m IF family HAPPY NEW YEAR... I wish this year bring happiness n success in your life... all your dreams come ture...

LOVE

MEGHA

Chapter-1

In 1996.

A girl is hugging a guy.

Girl-"jana jaruri hai...?"

Boy-"meera, mera jana jaruri hai varna me tumhe aur humare baby ko yaha chodke kabhi nahi jata."

Me-rahul tum vapas kab aaoge...?"

Rhl-"jab yeh war khatam hogi."

Me-"me inzar karungi."

Rhl-"meera ek bar yeh war khatam ho jaye badme me tumhe mom n dad se miluga. Wo jan kar khush honge ki unka grand child is duniyame aanevala hai."

Me-"mujeh bahot dar lag raha hai."

Rhl-"tumne mujse pyar kiya tab to nahi dari tum."

Me-"mene ek angle se pyar kiya hai."

Rhl-"ha... aur wo angle sare angles ka prince hai."

Me-"tumne mujeh mana kardiya tha, jab mene bola I LOVE YOU."

Rhl-"wo iss liye ki me ek angle hu, me nahi chahta tha ki meri vajah se tum hurt ho. But bad me mujeh realize hua ki I cannot live without you."

Me-"aur humane sadi karli. Rahul tumhari mom ek human ko apnayegi kya...?"

Rhl-"I don't know. Kabhi kisi angle ne kisi human se sadi to kya pyar bhi nahi kiya."

Me-"humara baby bhi angle hoga...?"

Rhl-"wo half human aur half angle hoga n wo jab tak aapni powers ke bare me nahi janega wo ek human hi rahega but when he/she know about his/her power then he/she can use his/her power n become an angle."

Me-"plz... don't go."

Rhl-"meera I need to. I m a prince n I cannot back off from my responsibilities. Meera promise me if I don't come bach you will move on."

Me-"no. I will not."

Rhl-"meera try ro understand."

Me-"I loved you, I love you n I will love you n only you."

Rhl-"meera I love you too."

Me-"rahul yeh war kyu ho rahi hai...?"

Rhl-"some werewolfs n vampires want to rule over world n we are against them."

Me-"what do you mean by some werewolfs n vampire...?"

Rhl-"bcoz kuch vampires n werewolfs humare sath hai."

Me-"wo bhi achche hote hai kya...?"

Rhl-"ha... wo bhi achche hote hai."

Ral-"meera mujeh jana hoga."

Me-"ok. I will wait for you."

Rahul kiss her like mad bcoz he don't know ki wo wapas aayega ki nahi n then he left.

At Dehradun.( angles are not living in Dehradun. They live in their world. They come her for fight.)

Rhl-"mom..."

Sweta-"rahul tum aa gaye."

Rhl-"mom war kab suru hogi...?"

Sw-"kuch hi derme."

Jit-"beta tum ladna chahte hona."

Rhl-"yes dad."

That time malhotras n khuranas come there n they bent down to give respect to king n queen.

Sw-"itni formalities friends me nahi hoti."

Raj-"we wre friends but we cannot forget that yor are king n queen."

Jit-"raj me nahi chahta ki tumhare bachche is war me samil ho."

Boy-"kyu uncle...? Aap prince rahul ko to samil hone ke liye mana nahi kar rahe."

Raj-"jit yeh manik hai."

Jit-"me nahi chahta ki aap mese kisiko bhi kuch ho. Yeh to raj chahta tha warna mene to ise bhi war se dur rehneko kaha tha."

Mnk-"no uncle. We all will fight."

Jit-"raj your son is very brave."

Mnk-"thank you."

That time a person come there.

Person-"king, war start ho gayi hai."

Jit-"hum aate hai."

They all left for war. War start n lots of vampire, werewolfs n angles are killed. N rahul is also died but angles win the war.

Sweta n abhijit cannot believe that their son is no more. Meera wait for rahul but he don't come after 8 months.

On 21 feb,1997.

Meera give birth to a baby girl but while giving birth to baby meera died. After meera's death the doctor give that baby in an orphanage givr her name. N her name is nandini murthy.

Time is running.

In 2015.

A girl is praying to her ayyappa. Another girl come there.

Girl-"nandu tujeh scholarship mili hai space me."

Nandini open her eyes.

Na-"kya vrshu...? Sach me...?"

Va-"ha nandu. But abhi to vacations hai."

Na-"yes I know abhi 2 months ka vacation hai but me abhi hi chali jaungi bcoz mujeh vaha rehne ke liye n baki expenses ke liye money chahiye hoge to me yeh do mahine job karungi vaha jake."

Va-"tu chali jayegi."

Na-"haa... I need to go."

N they both hug each other. all congrats nandini. N give party. After 3 days nandini left for Dehradun.

In Dehradun.

Malhotra mansion.

A boy is sitting at his room's window. Another boy come there.

Boy-"manik kya soch raha hai...?"

Mnk-"kuch nahi cabir."

Cbr-"mujeh bhi nahi batayega...?"

Mnk-"cabir kas hum vampire bane hi na hote. Wo rat humari zindagi badal gayi."

PAST (IN 1815)

Manik,cabir,mukti,alia n dhruv are best friends. One night they are in forest. In mid night some vampire attack on them. They they don't left a single drop of blood in their body n then after they left n raj n niyonika find them.

Raj n niyonika give them new life. A life of vampire n then they all live togather as family.

PRESENT

Mnk-"kitane kush the hum us din."

Cbr-"ha... dusre din dhruv aur alia ki engagement thi."

Mnk-"par hum vampire ban gaye. That night changed everything. Hum ek khoon pinevale animal ban gaye."

Cbr-"manik tu aaj yeh sab kyu soch raha hai."

Meanwhile a girl come there.

Girl-"tum dono kya bate kar rahe ho...?"

Mnk-"kuch nahi mukti."

Muk-"manik kuch hone vala hai I can feel that."

( mukti can feel future but cannot see future.)

Cbr-"kya hone vala hai ab...?"

Muk-"pata nahi kuch aisa jaisa pehle kabhi nahi hua."

Mnk-"mukti hume mom dad ko batana chahiye."

Mukbir nodded n go to their parents.

Muk-"mom dad kuch bahot bada hone vala hai. I can feel that."

Raj-"hume sambhal kar rehna hoga."

All nodded.

At railway station.(Dehradun)

Nandini come out from railway station. N she feels something.

Nandini's pov

Ye konsi feeling hai...? Kyu aisa lag raha hai kuch badalne vala hai...? Ayyappa plz... help me.

Nandini start walking but she don't know that something will changed her life.

Precap- manan's first meeting.

So here is chapter-1...

I hope you all like it...

Plz... comment...

N who wants PM send me buddy request...

Stay tune till then bye n take care...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Yeah I am the first to comment
But seriously superb this angel concept
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Nice start
Happy new year
Edited by zarakhanarlover - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Awesome update. Introduction of all the characters were mindblowing. Eagerly waiting for manan's meet.continue soon.thz story is very interesting. Thanks for pm.
Keep writing.
Stay blessed.
HAPPY NEW YEAR. HAVE A PROSPEROUS YEAR AHEAD😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
awwsum waiting for d nxt update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Awesome update waiting for manans meet
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
It's interesting. .
Full of suspense. .
Really excited for next
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
Happy New year 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Awesome...
Its very interesting...
Different concept...
I just loved it...
Thanks for pm...
Can't wait for next part...
Plzzz update fast...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
nice thought.. awsm starting.. luv it..
angle ki daughter ha nandini.wo bhi half angle..
excited 4 the next part...1st meeting of manan..
plz post next part asap..

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