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Posted: 9 years ago
update soon
Eagerly waiting...
Take care dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's high time yaar ab toh clear kardo..it's so irritating...waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Y nandu is doing all this..oh god nandu is ruining not only her life but all ter life manik mukti and now cabir...y she thinks doing tis all things it will b all ok...it wl b more complicated
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Posted: 9 years ago
KHAMOSHIYAAN


I LOVE U MANIK...


Part : 16A


The love for which they waited 10 long Year without knowing eachother feeling wht they thing about eachother but somewhere they know that their heart know that they both r waiting desperately for that when they meet n their wait is getting to be over but.. but.. someone is there who have evil eyes on their love n which ruined their excitment of meeting n force them to leave eachother now both r in equal pain one is having pain of guilt n leaving without him n other having pain of silence of her n helplness


Night Time


"Manik... manik..."the crowd is hooting his name as today there is his performance n his fans are waiting for him from morning As Manik just reached he came out of his luxury car n he wear his shades to hide his swallowen eyes n in pain also he give a warm smile to his fan n some girl pretend to faint on seeing him on eachother some are shouting in their high pich his name n some r taking his pics as he walks n bodyguards cover him


"So.. sir.. aaj.. bhi.. aap ushke liye.. ganne.. wle.. hai.. jiske.. liye aap gya krte.. ho.. "one of reporter ask but manik ingoring him moves to gate as he himself don't for whom he will sing wht he will sing

But again many reporter start asking him same question but manik push one of the reporters in frustration he ran inside n all the reporter r get hell confused by his behavior n terified as he is calm man

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Manik is setting in changing room n tunning his guitar aggressively n nandini words again echoing in his ear n he setting closing his eyes infornt of mirror n somebody knock the door n he stop tunning the guitar


"Sir.. in 5 min. performance will be started.. "pa tell him n goes n manik now open his eyes n look in mirror n than he imagine her crying face on mirror n get up aggressively broke the mirror with guitar n


"aaa... "he shouts loudly bending down holding his ear as again n again her voice is echoing in his ear


But than he see broken pieces on mirror but again he imagine nandini crying face on one of small piece of mirror n he hold that piece in his palm n crush it as he want crush her all pain but he helpless he do not know wht the reason of her pain n blood falls from his hand but this pain is nthng around the pain he is having in his heart and than he get up n ran outside holding guitar aggressively


"Sir.. "his P. A. About to say something but he pushing him comes on stage form backside
N He got confused wht happened to him suddenly he never ever see him so angry n he got worry after seeing his blood coming out from his hand that's he try to stop him n than he called cabir n tell cabir about manik n cabir immidiatly left to reach there


On the other crowd is going mad n hooting is name loudly n n lights get out n he is start tunning is guitar face is backward



(Milne hai mujh se aayi
Phir jaane kyun tanhaayi
Kis mod pe hai laayi aashiqui)
He than turns and sing looking downward as he is not in condition to face the audience as he can't smile n sing he want to hide his anger but but.. the word he sings comes from his mouth ownself n it clearly vissible from his voice n the word wht he feeling now as from song he wnat to say that he don't know why, loneliness has come to meet him again.. At what turn has love brought him.. n blood is falling from his hand continuously but who cares n now also again n again her word echoing in his ear but only he knows how he is singing in this state also



(Khud se hai yaa khudaa se
Is pal meri ladaayi
Kis mod pe hai laayi Aashiqui)
He than looking upward closing his eyes sings the word he singing he is singing from his heart as he want to want ask Is his fight against himself or against God Himself, At what turn has love brought him all audience hooting loudly n cheering him up n making vedio of him n they r enjoying his song but they the person standing infornt of them wht is his condition

(Aashiqui baazi hai taash ki
Toot-te bante vishwaas ki
Milne hai mujhse aayi
Phir jaane kyun tanhayi
Kis mod pe hai laayi Aashiqui.)
Now he looked toward audience n come more close to eadge of stage n sing n than turns n go backward sings as tear roll down from his eyes so to hide them he turns n sing he from puring all his feeling in song n than he turns after wiping up his tear now he is only tunning guitar n immidaitly his eyes fall on his life his love nandini who is standing infront of him in b/w the audience n stare her for movement but close his eyes in disbelief n again open the eyes but she is still standing

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Posted: 9 years ago
Part : 16 B

**Read the note at last**

(Jaane kyun main sochta hoon
Khaali sa main ik raastaa hoon
Tune mujhe kaheen kho diyaa hai
Ya main khud laapataa hoon
Aa dhoondh le tu phir mujhe..
Kasmein bhi doon to kyaa tujhe..)
Now he get to know she is really infronf of him but now she come here n his heart become more broken she is crying looking at him n than he again start his singing as he can't stop in b/w he has to continue n each every word now he sings is for her only that he is an empty road..
Have she lost him somewhere,
or have he gone lost himself
Come find him again.. n he while singing only n only looking toward her n blood now also continuosly falling from his hand n on the other hand nandini's condition is worst as she can't able to see him like this n he just want to go n hug him n want to say that everthing is f9 now



(Toota huaa saaz hoon main
Khud se hi naaraaz hoon main
Seene mein jo kahin pe dabi hai
Aisi koi aawaaz hoon main
Sun le mujhe tu bin kahe
Kab tak khaamoshi dil sahe
Aashiqui baazi hai taash ki
Toot-te bante vishvaas ki..)
he now come more close to crowd n sings so intensely each n every line Now from this line he want to say her that he is a broken musical instrument he is that voice which is hidden somewhere in the chest.. Listen to him without saying anything.. How long can the heart bear silence.. Love is a game of cards, of breaking and building trust..




(Milne hai mujh se aayi..
..kis mod pe hai laayi aashiqui.)
N than completed the song still looking toward her n she also looking toward him she want tell him everything now only as she knows his condition is worst now but how can she be selfish.. for her love as she can't be selfish by putting manik life on side n choose her love now.. the pain he is going through is equal to her pain she knows but she never think manik will also love her like her n this make her task more difficult n by seeing his hand condition she is crying more


So the question how she come here so for that u all have to go sometimes back times when cabir comes to know about manik condition


"Mukti.. where.. is nandini.. "cabir shouted as soon as he reached at Murthy house as soon as cabir got to know manik become mad


"Cabir.. relax. Hua. Kya.. "mukti asked as cabir is looking distured


"Mukti. Manik.. is gone mad.. he first beat the reporter n than injured his hand with that injured hand he still performing

"Nandini.. upr.. apne. Kamre. Mein.. hai "mukti said n she don't have any word


"Nandini.. come get.. up.. " he said as soon as he entered in room n nandini get shocked n looked at him confusingly


" nandini manik is gone mad first he beat reporter look i show u.."he said switching on the Tv n shows her manik perfornmance n tear fell from her eyes as she sees his blood in his hand the his emotion of singing made her cry more


"Cabir.. mujhe manik ke pass le chlo.. "nandini said cabir is shocked as he thinks nandini will not agree as he is unware about her love for manik


And than without wasting anytime they leave the house n whole way both remain silent


Flashback over

(Nahi jeena tere baaju
Nahi jeena, nahi jeena)
Manik comes to backstage his eyes r red like blood due to anger n crying n he stop as he see nandini standing lit bit far away from him n looked toward him wid pleading eyes n tears r continuously falling from her eyes n he also look at her with same like her n she ran toward him n hug him tightly n start crying



(Main tenu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee
Tu kee jaane pyaar mera
Main karaan intezar tera
Tu dil tuyyon jaan meri)
"I m sorry.. manik.. "nandini said b/w her crys hugging him more n more tightly n manik also hold her n he is now lit bit happy that she is with him

Manik break the hug n both look into eachother eyes with love n pain than nandini hold his injured hand n rub his hand on her cheek n manik from other hand wipes her tear that r continuously falling from her eyes n than she kiss on his cut n he closes his eyes feel her touch n again he open his eyes n she is looking at him with guilt love pain n want to say many things to him n same with him as now they want to say that What do I explain to you without you my heart has no existence I wait for you..
You're my heart, and you're my life too..



(Mere dil ne chun laiya ne
Tere dil diyaan raahaan
Tu jo mere naal tu rehta
Turpai meriyaan saaha
Jeena mera.. hun hai tera,
kee main karaan
Tu kar aitbaar mera)
"Nandini.. plz.. bola.. na.. that u love.. me.. too.. "manik said cubbing her face n looking deeply in to her eyes n from his eyes he saying that My heart has chosen the path of your heart..Had you been with me, my life would have been easier.. My life.. is now yours.


"Manik.. i love.. u.. i love.. u.. "she confesses her love after seeing his condition but she unaware wht will be the consequences of this manik happiness has no bound as he is carving to listen this 3 word from many years n finally she said



(Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil tuiyon jaan meri
Main tainu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee)
"I love.. u too.. my.. chotu.. "he said taking her in his protective arms n she also hold him n both r loss in hug closing their eyes



Oh.. nandini confessed her love.. suprised.. now wht will gone.. happen.. anybody.. have any idea.. keep thinking.. what will the consequences of her this act n do.. long.. long.. comment n good news that i m changing the concept of this story from next update n it will going to be interesting n fun n romantic n not that emotinal.. becoz i think many of u.. r get bored wid this emotinal drama..


Love Mehak


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Posted: 9 years ago
loved the update mehak...

am really happy with this update...

kitna roye hai nandu and manik...mujhe to dar tha k kahi sunami na a jaye...

on a serious not it was very emotional...

ittne pain mein the dono...

manik can't see her crying ...apne ap ko injured bhi kar liya usne ...but the pain which he was bearing uske samne ye physical pain to kuch bhi nahi tha,,,,,,

nandini was totally shettered...


finally nandini confessed and manik happiness has no bounds now...feeling really happy for them,,,,,,,

but ab kuch gadbad na ho ...ye guru a k beech mein apni taang na ada de,,,,,,otherwise i will kill him now,,,,,,😡😡

loved the update

update soon,,,,,,,,,


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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing awesome superb outstanding mind blowing fantastic lovely update tysm dear fr the update n next part soon plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Verrry emotional update dear...
Manik & nandini both are in pain...
& manik hurted himself...
Finally nandu confessed her love for manik..
& manik's happiness has no bounds...
Hope ab much garbar na ho... sab aacha ho
Thanks for pm dear
Continue soon
U write amazing dear
Will be waiting for next update anxiously:):):):)
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Posted: 9 years ago
too gd... gd ki u r changing d concept...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Manik sings with so
Much of pain
They love each other madly
Finally nandini confessed
Loved it
Updat soon

Thanks for the pm

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