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Chocolava14 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...so finally d truth is outtt !!
Its so very bad...srsly...manan hve to suffer so much
But it was nicely written
Always keep writing😊
Edited by Chocolava14 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for being late...
Unres on 74...
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Posted: 9 years ago
osm
too emotional
Getting interesting
Thnx for pm
Stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
Khamoshiyaan

BROKEN SOULS

Part : 15 A


"Nandini.. ko medicine dedena.. n ush.. kuch.. mt puchna.. i will tell u everything.. afterward jb hum milenge.."mukti read the manik msg


"Seriously.. manik.. tum.. nandini.. se.. bhut.. pyaar.. krte.. ho.. kash.. nandini.. apna.. pain.. tumhre.. sth share.. kr skti.. hoti.. "mukti thinking n goes toward her room


"Angel.. u okay.. na.. "mukti said as nandini setting on bed n with blanket on her shivering badly due to cold but loss in thought


"Angel..."mukti said shaking her shoulder n she come to her senses n looked at her with blank expression


"Yeh.. tu. Kyo.. kr.n rhi.. look at yr.. condition.. tujhe.. pta.. manik.. tujhse.. kitna.. pyaar.. krta.. tu.. mujhe.. mt bta.. ushai.. toh.. btade.. atleast.. he will handle.. everything.. "mukti said but now nandini looking down n silent tear fell from her eyes


"Angel.. plz.. kuch.. bol.. u remember mumma.. bolti.. thi.. pain.. ko jinta.. apne.. adhr.. rkhte.. hai.. utha.. voh aur.. badhta.. hai.. "mukti said holding her hand she is trying very hard to make her speak but she is setting like a lifeless soul n tear falling from her eyes continuously


She is not saying anything as she has no power left to say.. anything n she knows when mukti comes know about manik's promise she will be frown n she don't want to say anything as she know manik will never broke his promise


" mt bol.. uhi.. roti.. rhai.. jb ro.. ro kr thk.. jae.. na.. toh. So.. jaeo.. fir.. rohio.. tujhe.. lgta.. rone.. se everything get alright... na.. toh.. thike.. hai.. "mukti said angrily getting up from bed but now also nandini didn't even look at her


"Kha.. se la.. rhi.. hai.. tu itni.. himmat.. "now mukti said sits on knees on floor beside her
N she after giving her medicines leaves from there


"Nhi.. share.. kr.. skhti.. mein.. apna.. pain.. tumhne.. thik.. kha.. hai mukti yeh.. pain.. jinta.. adhr.. rhkte.. hai.. uthna.. aur.. badhta.. hai.. n now this pain is killing me.. mein.. kuch.. nhi.. kr skti.. kuch.. nhi.. "she crys.. on helpless state again after saying this she want to die but she can't also die as his love will get into danger



(Teri baahon mein jo sakoon tha mila
Maine dhoondha bahut par
Phir na milaa... aa..)
On the other hand manik after after leaving murthy house comes to bar as he is feeling so much.. frustrated n hurt n most importanly He is in pain by seeing her that condition he agree for her promise as he can't able to see her begging infront of him


"Manik.. Plz.. Don't say.. Like.. This... I beg.. U.. Marry.. Mukti..."Her pleads again n again echoing in his ear n crying face making him more n more broken n to forgetting this he continuosly drinking but can't forgotting it lit bit also as he broken deeply as he want to say that to her "The peace that I found in your arms,
I had looked for that peace a lot. But I couldn't find it again."



(Duniya chhoona chaahe mujhko yun
Jaisay unki saari ki saari main
Duniya dekhe roop mera
Koi na jaane bechari main)
In bar the girl which dancing comes to manik n sings the word that clearly indicating nandini's that The world wants to touch her as if her all theirs..
The world looks at her beauty but no one knows how wretched she is.. n through this again gulfs another shot n leave the bar furiously as the song make him hell angry



(Haaye, tooti saari ki saari main
Tere ishq mein hoi Awaari main)
Scene shifted toward nandini she is now standing at window now she is not crying as she is got teried her tears are also drys n the whole wht happen today with her first she insulted manik n than somebody trys to rape her than the person he hate the most comes n blackmailed her she is only thinking that wht mistake she has done that the god is punishing her so hardly giving her pain n pain only she is completely broken to hurt him

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Posted: 9 years ago

Part : 15B

"Manik.."Cabir calls him as soon manik comes home but he directly went to his room ignoring him


"Cabir.. kya.. hua.. "alia asked coming out of room n looked toward manik's room as he closed the door angrily


"Aur.. kya.. hua. Hoga.. Alia.. nandini ne fir.. kuch.. bola.. hoga.. pta.. nhi wht she wants.. manik.. ki.. kya.. halat kr di.. hai.. "cabir said angrily as manik is changing as he never ever behave like this he always try to remain happy after facing many problem so.. cabir is brother so it is hurting him to.. seeing manik in this condition


"Cabir.. i know.. bhai.. is so much.. hurt.. but.. unhai.. thik.. bhi.. nandini.. hi kr skti.. hai.. cabir.. u can't blame nandini she is hiding something deep inside her aur.. she is in big trouble.."Alia said as she is feeling very bad for manik but she is feeling for nandini's condition also


"I know.. alia but.. nhi.. dekha.. jata. Manik.. ko.. aise.. "Cabir said n start crying on manik's condition


"Cabir.. everything will be f9 "Alia hugs him to console him n patted his back


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"Mukti.. vha.. hua.. kya.. manik.. apne.. room.. ka.. door.. open.. nhi.. kr rha.. hai.."Cabir said mukti on phone n Alia also standing beside him

"Cabir.. i don't know.. mujhe.. manik.. ka msg. Aya.. that he will tell afterward we will meet aur.. nandini.. is also..not saying anything.. i don't wht all this happening.. mujhe kuch smjh nhi aa.. rha.."mukti said sadly as she is so much confused


"Mukti.. just.. relax.. tum ghr.. ajao.. fir.. hum manik.. se mil kr bat.. krte.. hai.. sb thik.. hoga.."cabir calm her down n alia got shocked before he is not in his control n now he is controlling her


"Mein.. ati.. hn.. hope.. sb thik ho.."mukti said n cut the call n cabir looks at alia who was staring at him as something going in her head


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"Manik.. tu.. kuch.. bolega.. kya.. promise.. kiya.. tune.. nandini.. ko.."cabir asked angrily as manik is silent n saying nthng n cabir alia n mukti r trying to make him speak..


"She wanted me.. to marry mukti.. "manik broke the silence n said n which make all of them shocked


"Wht...?? She out of her mind..."mukti shout furiously n cabir n alia r silent n don't have word to say


"Aur.. manik.. tum ushai.. promise.. kr.. diya.. manik.. she gone.. mad.. tum.. toh.. ushai.. mana.. kr skte.. thai.. "mukti shouted holding manik's hand


"Kya.. krta.. mein.. she is begging me.. she.. is crying.. i don't have any option.. "manik said cryingly looking downward n alia n cabir feels bad for him through his word witness his love how much he loves her that he agree to marry mukti but mukti got so angry


"Manik.. tumhai.. kya.. lgta.. hai.. she will be f9.. after seeing marring with me.. mein.. yeh.. kabhi.. nhi.. krungi.."mukti denay him as she knows through this her condition become more worst


"No.. u have.. too.. "manik shout angry on mukti


"Pgl.. ho.. gye.. ho.. kya.. manik.. tum.. yeh.. possible nhi hai.."mukti also shout n


"Bs.. i said.. yeh.. marriage.. hogi.. aur.. hokr.. rhaigi..."manik jerk her hand n shouted n left the room n all of them r shocked


From mukti eyes tear fell down she also got teried she is confused wht all this happening now this marriage she is not understanding why nandini is punishing herself by doing this


"Mukti relax.. don't worry.. mein.. janta.. hn.. manik.. ke.. deemagh mein.. kuch.. na.. kuch chl rha hai.. voh.. aise.. hi nandini.. ki bt nhi.. mn skta.. "cabir said putting hand on mukti's shoulder as he knows manik very well but mukti also left from there without saying anything


"Cabir.. mujhe.. i know.. tum bhi.. iss marriage se... utna.. hi hurt hoe... jintna.. ki.. manik aur nandini "alia said putting hand on cabir shoulder n cabir got confused by her words


"I know... u loves.. mukti "alia said n cabir looked at her shockingly n questionly that how she knows as he fallen in love with her from very first day he met her


"Don't look at me.. like..this i m yr.. twins.. mujhe nhi.. pta.. chlega.. aur.. kise.. pta chlega.."Alia said n cabir hugged her


"Cabir.. don't worry.. manik.. kabhi.. bhi.. mukti.. se.. shaddhi.. nhi.. karega.. "alia said as she knows how much he loves nandini


"I know.. dr.. toh.. mujhe.. iss bt ka.. hai.. ki.. uske.. dhimag.. mein.. chl.. kya.. rha.. hai.."cabir said as he confused wht is going in his mind

So here.. is next after so.. long.. time.. got. Shocked na.. Cabir loves Mukti n wht is going in manik's mind u wanna..so do lots of comments..


Love Mehak


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sana121 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
I am first yeee
Awesome update
Cont soon dear
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow update...
But yaar ur making me soo confuse😕
Manan r soo mch hurt...
Nandu should tell manik abt all this...
Cabira luves mukti
Jst hope manik comes to know everything and clear it...
Luved it..
Cant wait for nxt update...
update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update manan poor souls suffering alot really iam shocked cabir loves mukti ohhh manik wants to marry mukti what is he upto? excited to know thanks for d update continue take care nd keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shocking and confused...
Really excited for next
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shocking update
Cabir loves mukti 😲
Hope Manik gets to know truth soon...
Eagerly waiting for next update
Tysm for pm
Keep smiling always 😊

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