#2 Khamoshiyaan (link of thread 3 page -1) 21march - Page 31

Created

Last reply

Replies

964

Views

84.5k

Users

150

Likes

4.7k

Frequent Posters

Poushi thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
shocking promo...
plz manik call pick kara...
Sreeja_babu thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Shckin promo...
Really shckd...wt hppd b/w manan???
Y manik s ignorin d call of nandu???
Nandu in trouble..
so confused also promo.
Hope manan ke beech sb teek go jaye...

Waitin 4 d update dear...
Do continue...
Thnks so much dear 4 d pm...

Mehaklovely thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
KHAMOSHIYAAN

Love is not only trust

PART : 12 A

"I love.. u.. nandini.. "manik said holding her face deeply looking into her eyes both lost into eachother eyes

" i love.. rain.."nandini shouts n throws rain water droplets on manik face n start laughing

"Nandini.. i m serious.. "manik said aggressively holding her arm tightly he knows that she is not in her sences but he want to listen same from her mouth too because he knows she feels same from him as he feels for her

"Are.. tum itne.. angry.. kyo.. ho.. rhai.. ho.. i love.. rain toh.. it doesn't mean.. that i don't love.. anyone.. else... "nandini said irritatingly trying to get away from his hold

"Means...??"manik said leaving her arm

"Means.. manik.. phle.. adhr.. chlo... i want to see yr.. house.. "nandini said holding his hand
n manik accepted his defeat n go inside the house with her

"Oh.. sorry.. "nandini said as Nandini rans inside the house n bumped with servant

"Nandini.. careful.. "manik said holding her shoulder from back
Than they hurt laughing sound at the door they turn n see Alia n cabir at the door

"Oh... manik.. yeh.. dono.. bhi.. tumhre.. sth rhate.. fir toh.. double.. masti.. hogi... tum dono.. karoge.. mere.. sth masti.. "nandini said going toward them n manik seeing cabir with angry face

"Masti.. toh.. tb.. karenge.. jb..manik.. mujhe.. masti.. karene.. lyk.. chodhega.. kyoki.. iske..expression toh.. lg rha.. plan. Is not successful yet.."cabir thinks in mind n thought breaks by nandini voice as she said "bolo.. na.. "

"Haan.. karenge.. na.. haina.. Alia.."cabir said n look toward alia

"Nandini.. hum dono.. kitne..bheeg.. gye.. phle.. hum apne.. kapde. Change.. kr lete.. hai.."manik said holding her again as she can't able to stand properly also than he again stare at cabir

"Beta.. cabir.. aagr.. nandini.. ne.. sach.. na.. bola.. na.. tu.. gya.. "cabir thinks in mind

"Okay.. aur.. tum dono.. sona.. mt.. okay.. "nandini said showing her finger to both of them

"Haan..pka.. "Alia said n than manik take nandini to his room
"Nandini.. stay still for movement.."manik said as he is drying her with towel but she is moving

"Okay.. gussa.. kyo.. hote.. "nandini said looking toward him make a sad pout n manik smiles on her

Than he drys her about to go but she hold his hand "oh.. yeh.. toh cheating.. ab meri turn.. "nandini said n manik look at her confusingly

"Ab.. dekhte.. tum.. kitna.. corporate krte.. ho.. "nandini said after coming toward him n start drying his face n manik is looking toward her n than her hair r coming on her eyes he sets that behind her ear

"Nandini... do.. u love.. somebody.. else.. "manik asked her but inside he knows she loves him only as it is clearly vissible to him in her eyes n nandini looked at him shockingly

"No.. i.. toh.. love.. "nandini without completing her sentence fall on his shoulder

"Nandini... "manik said n than he take her in his arm n make her ly on the bed

"Oh.. ab mein.. kya.. karuga.. her cloth r wet.."manik thinks in his mind

"Manik.. u have to change her cloth vrna.. voh bimar padh gye toh.. "his mind give him reply

Than he change his cloth n take out his shirt n short for her than he switched off the light n change her cloth very difficultly fighting with his mind

Than he ly on couch n lost in thought "why... in this condition she didn't dare to speak anything.. wht the matter.. i want to know.. why can't she understand yeh.. sb.. krne.. se.. kuch.. nhi.. hoga.. hum dono.. ne.. pure.. 10 sal intzar kiya.. hai.. mein.. janta.. hn.. ushne.. bhi.. ki kiya.. hai.. hai.. lekin.. ishi kya vjha.. ho.. skti.. hai.. jo ushai.. yeh.. sb krne.. pr majboor kr rhi.. hai.. i want my nandu.. back.. aaj.. today.. she was not in her sneses also than also.. she having some fear of something... oh.. give.. me..strength to find out it soon.. ishe.. phle.. she do more silly things.. i have to find out "

After many hours of thinking he sleeps


SCROLL DOWN FOR THE NEXT PART
Mehaklovely thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
Part : 12 B

Next mrng sun raises fall on nandini who is sleeping peacefully tugging in blanket she lazily open her eyes

Nandini P.O.V.

I waked up in unknown house.. n was feeling intense pain in my head.. it is blasting.. i hold my head n trying to recognize the surrounding n about last night some blur flashes came in my mind of yesterday night

"Oh.. how can i be so careless.. agr... in sb mein.. thank.. god.. i didn't spit out the truth.. vrna.. i don't know.. wht will be it consequences "i said thanking to God than i see on side table our childhood pic is kept n set on the bed n pick up the frame caressing the pic it is very very precious for me

"kash.. sb phle.. jaise.. ho.. skta.. hota but.. aisa.. kuch.. nhi.. ho.. skta.. becoz.. it is not in my own hand.. "i said cryingly n tear fall on pic i accepted my fate but my tears r not in my control..

"No nandini.. if u have to control.. on yr.. emotion agr.. yeh.. bhr ae.. toh.. pta.. nhi... how.. will.. he react.. i can't see him breaking down in front of me.. n i can't.. play with his life.. "i said wiping my tear n kept the pic back

Than i uncover myself from blanket.. than i realized that i m in manik's cloth oh.. yesterday i got wet that's why he change my cloth.. i trust him he can't do anything but than i only the idea came in my mind which will surely work.. it is very difficult for me.. but i have to.. i m sorry.. manik.. for now wht i m going to do

Than i heard the footstep n ready myself

"Oh.. so u wake.. up.. "manik said entering in the room with tray having glass of water on it oh.. god.. his charming face.. having smile

"Nandini.. plz.. stop all this.. go hug him n tell him everything.. "my heart said to me

"No.. nandini.. u have to do.. this.. it's better for him.. chahe.. abhi.. he feels bad but age.. jakr.. he will live happily.. "my mind said me oh god.. i have to this i know..

"Manik.. so u r successful in yr mission.. " i shouted angrily looking toward him n than he stoped there only his smile vanished his charming face become pale n he looked at me confusingly

"Tumhne.. mera.. sth.. voh.. sb.. kr.. hi.. liya.. chee.. mujhe.. toh.. bolte.. hoe.. bhi.. shrm aa.. rhi hai.. "i said pta nhi.. how.. i say this word to him but i don't know wht he is thinking he is standing there still with fully shocked as i distrust him

"Ab chup.. kyo.. kadhe..ho ab.. kyo.. shrm.. aa.. rhi.. hai.. tumhai.. ka.."i get up goes toward him n shouts but stops in mid way as now he broken his silence

"Oh.. just... shut.. up..."he shouts throwing away the tray on the floor it get broken in pieces like i m breaking his heart in pieces

"Oh.. wao.. manik.. tum.. kis mitti.. ke.. bane.. ho.. mtlb.. u think.. that.. tumhne.. yeh.. sb.. kisi.. ladhki.. ke sth karoge.. n she don't have right to raise her voice.. also.." i said as i have to continue it.. i can't stop as now i have decided n oh.. god.. now wht happen him he is smiling i got confused

"Nandini.. u tell me.. tum kis mitti ki bani.. ho.. means.. ki tum kis extend tk ja.. skti.. ho to hide the truth.. "manik said holding my arm n pulling me closure to him oh.. god.. now also.. he is not believing me..

"Oh.. plz.. manik.. stop it.. u know wht.. tum jis truth ki bt kr rhai.. ho.. voh.. truth.. yeh.. ki.. i hate.. u.. aur.. jo.. tumhne.. mere.. sth.. kiya.. uske.. bd toh i hate.. u.. from core of my heart.. first u planned n spike my drink to fullfill yr Desire mujhe.. yeh.. smj.. nhi.. aa.. rha.. tumhai.. jo chahie..voh.. toh.. tumhe.. mil.. gya.. now wht more.. u.. want.. "i shouted as i have to make him believe plz.. believe all this manik.. i can't say more wrong things about u.. plz..

"Stop.. it.. "he stouted pinned me toward the wall holding my arm n i shut my eyes in fear

"Enough.. is enough.. i love.. u.. it doesn't mean.. that.. tum jo.. bologi.. i will believe u.. i love.. u.. n u r saying.. i want to fulfill my desire.. "he shouts in pain and anger that is clearly vissible from his eyes how much he loves me digging his nails in my arm

"How.. could u.. say.. this.. u know.. jbse..we separated my not any single past without thinking about u... our fun.. our masti.. our everything.. i never think about this in my life.. "now he leave me n said calmly but intense pain only i know how i controlling my tear becoz wht he is saying same i want to say to her

"Sb.. juth.. hai.. tum love jaise.. pure.. word ka.. mask... udha.. rhai.. ho.. shame.. on.. u.. manik.. are.. i m thinking.. tumhai.. singer.. nhi.. actor hona.. chahie.. tha.. hmm.. kitne.. superb.. acting Krte.. the best.. actor. Award goes to Mr. Manik Mahlotra..." i said but his anger increses so he is believing me.. haan.. he is believing me..

"thank.. u.. nandini.. for realizing me that true love never exist.. thank.. u.. becoz.. u don't have.. guts to say the truth.. but u have guts to insult everyone.. i know.. why.. u r doing.. this.. becoz.. u.. don't trust me.. now.. just get lost.. from here... n i promise i will never came infront of u.. u won nandini.. akhir.. mere.. pyaar.. tumhre.. iss juth ke samhne.. jeeth.. hi.. gya.. "he shouts n spit out all his frustration but no.. now also.. he didn't believe really.. he truly love me..

Than he hold my hand n give me my dress n drag me to the washroom

"now.. change.. n just.. leave.. "he said n closes the door in anger n leaves

As soon as he goes i collapsed on the floor with support of door brusted into tear holding my knees all words mine n his echoing in my ear i feeling shame on me.. how can say this to him.. jaki.. i know.. that he is one of the best Person who knows how to respect the girl aur.. mein.. ushi.. ke.. character pr dang lagya.. ho ske.. toh.. mujhe.. maaf.. kr dena.. manik.. i m sorry.. i love.. u.. only that's why i m doing.. this.. . By hurting u.. more.. than that i hurting myself

I cried for sometime as the emotion that i controlling infront of him is much needed to goes out..

Than get up n wash my face without opeing my eyes becoz i don't have guts to see my face in mirror..

After changing my cloth as soon as possible i leave from there as i m scared to face him again..

Scroll down For the next part

Mehaklovely thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
PART : 12C

MANIK P.O.V.

After she is gone i came back to room n start throwing the things on floor her each n every word making my more n more angry.. ushne.. mere pyaar ka masak udhaya.. i know she was lying but voh.. aise.. kaise.. bol skti.. hai.. that i.. i.. wanted fill my desire

"Manik.. tu.. uski.. bate.. kyo.. sun.. rha hai.. voh.. tujhe yeh.. believe krna.. chti.. thi.. that she hates u tabhi.. ushne.. yeh.. sb bola.. trust on yr.. love.. "my heart said to me

"Manik.. no.. she don't trust u.. ushe.. tumhre.. pyaar.. ki.. bilkul kadar nhi.. hai.. tu ushai.. bhul.. ja.. "my mind.. said to me.. for the first time i trusting on my mind as today her each n every word broke me to the core

"Are.. manik.. she is yr.. nandu.. yr.. childhood love.. tune uska.. 10 sal itzar.. kiya.. hai.. pyaar.. me ishe.. imtha.. dene.. padhte.. hai.. this show how much yr love is strong.. manik.. plz.. go.. n find out the truth.. aur. Aur.. thodh do voh.. diwar.. jo.. nandini.. ko.. tumhre paas ane se rok rhi hai.. just broke that.. "now my heart said as becoz my love for her is beyond everything

"But.. ushka.. kya.. faida.. love is trust aur voh.. tujh pe trust hi nhi.. krti.. tabhi.. sach btatne.. se drti.. hai.. aur.. jo ushne tumhra dil thodha hai.. tumhre character pr shaqh kiya.. no.. manik.. ab tu.. uske piche.. kabhi.. nhi.. jaega.. just let her go.. "my mind said

Heart : No.. manik.. just trust on yr.. love..

Mind : manik.. bhul ja.. ushai.. she don't trust u..

Heart : manik.. tu janta hai she is doing all this for her love only for u.. only..

"Oh.. just.. stop.. it.. thak.. chuka.. hn.. mein.. ab.. aur nhi.. how can she.. do this me.. how.."i shouted as loud n collapsed on floor

P.O.V. Ends

"Bhai.. Wht happened.." Alia said coming toward him n they both got shocked after seeing his the room condition

"Manik.. Kya.. Hua.. Kuch.. Toh.. Bol.. " cabir said bend infront of him n put his hand manik shoulder

"Guyz.. Leave.. Me alone.. For sometime.." Manik said in low voice looking down n than both look into each other eyes n left the room

__________

Nandini is walking on the road senselessly as the flashes of morning again again coming infront of her eyes she is in that dress that she wear in party but different is only that yesterday she is free of all pain but now the hidden pain inside her clearly vissble her messy hair her swallowed eyes n tears that r continuously falling but this is not only god planned for her

" leave... my hand.."nandini shouts as she was walking on road somebody holding her hand drag to corner

"Yuvraj.. kl ke.. bd.. u again... come.. kya.. kl manik.. ne tumhri condition ki is that not enough for u.."nandini shouts but yuvraj seeing her with evil smile

"Manik... aur tumhne mujhe.. phaga leke bhut badhi glti krdi now i will show him ki wht yuvraj can do.."he said start taking nandini toward his car

"Yuvraj.. leave me agr.. manik.. ko pta chala na he will not leave.. u.."nandini shouting n trying her best to get away from his hold

"Oh.. god.. why.. always me... why i come acrossed this type of man again again.."nandini thinks n curses her fate than she realized she having phone in her hand n than she call somebody

On the other hand manik is setting on the floor with support of bed playing the guitar aggressively his eyes were red in anger again n again her word echoing in his ear His phone is kept infront than his phone start ringing n it is non other nandini call but manik sees it but ignore


"Manik... pick up.. the phone.. plz.. "nandini prayed as she really need somebody to save her

" yuvraj... Stop.. "Nandini shouts as she got scared as yuvraj start opening his shirt botton having evil smile on his face

On the other hand Manik stop playing guitar n get up taking the phone from the floor as he can't ingnore as he loves her yes today he is so broken by her word but from inside he knows she doing for him only

"Itni.. Miscalls Now wht more left.. " manik said calling her

"Yuvraj.. Leave.. Me plz... " nandini pleads as he pinned her hand above her head

"Oh.. Yr.. Lover is calling u.. Manik.. Teri.. Girlfriend.. Toh.. Mere.. Hato.. Bachegi.. Nhi.." He said throwing the phone but in that the call got picked up

"Manik..No.. Yuvraj.. Plz... Stop.. It.. I beg.. U.. " nandini shouts loudly as her last of hope is vanished that manik will save her

On the other manik is got shocked to.. Listen this n regret himself to not picking up the

"Nandini.. Don't worry.. I coming.. " manik said n immediately rans out from the room

"Yuvraj.. I will not leave.. U.. Oh. God I have to save her.. Manik.. Tu Janta.. Tha.. She is doing for u.. Only.. . tabhi.. U.. " manik said n leave from the house he is feeling guilty to not to pick the call of her

"No... Yuvraj... " nandini sceams loudly.. Tear r continuously falling from her eyes as now yuvraj ripped her one side sleeve of her dress

After listening her scream a tear fell down from his eyes he got scared also n said slowly "nandini.. "

Yuvraj is about to claim her lips for kiss n nandini lying shutting her eyes tightly n tear r continuously falling but than she feel no weight on his body than she open her eyes n see manik n take breath of relief n she set up on sit putting hand on her shoulder n crying bitterly

"Yuvraj.. How.. Dare.. U.. " manik shouts punch.. Him again n than he fell on the floor unconsciously than manik calls his man to take him away aa now more important. Is nandini

He sees her toward her with painfull eyes n she looking down n just crying n crying as she got so much scared by this

"I m sorry.. Nandini..." Manik said after setting beside her n hug her as she must needs this at this time manik feeling so much guity that he didn't pick up the call

She also hold him tightly n crys loudly as she want to erase this incidence from her mind n manik patted her back
N let be cry for sometime

"Bsh.. Nandini.. Ab SB thik.. Hai.. " as nandini is not stopping crying n from manik eyes tears r also falling

"Nandini.." Manik said as she didn't her voice as she fainted in her arm than manik immediately taking her reach to his house

"Bhai.. Wht happen to her.." Alia asked as soon as manik comes inside as she got scared after seeing nandini in that condition

But manik ignores n directly comes into his room n make her ly on bed n calls doc n than tell everything to Alia and cabir

"Oh.. Poor nandini.. Already. She is.." Alia said sadly as she is feeling very bad for her

"I think we should inform mukti" cabir said n left from there to call her

Than manik asked Alia to change her cloth

_______

"Manik don't worry.. Stress n tension ki vjha se chkr aa..jate.. Hai..yeh..kuch..medicine hai unhai de dena.." Doc.said before leaving

"I m sorry.. Nandini.. AGR.. Mein tumhra.. Call utha leta toh.. Yeh SB na..hota.. Tumhri..toh mujbori..hai..but meri kya majbori thi.. I m sorry.." Manik said to nandini kneeling on floor beside her holding hand n than he kiss her hand

He leaves from there not before pecking her forehead

"Alia.. Plz.. Inform me.. As soon as she wakes up " manik said to Alia before leaving the house

"But bhai where r u going.." Alia said worriedly

"To finish yuvraj for forever.. "manik said angrily n leaves from there


So guyz..here.. Is a big.. Update... So manik came on time but nandini got so much scared n now how will she react after getting up u wanna know so wait for next part if u wanna me to reveal the truth so comment big.. As much u can as guyz.. I put lots effort in it.. Specially in b part manan fight n part c I wrote 2 times as it was deleted.. So..guyz. Plz. Do big wale.. comments..


Love Mehak


____________
rajirock123 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dearnice update thankgod manik came on time and saved nandu pls update soon hope iam first one to commenting yipiee
alind713 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Wanted to see some action
Update the next part soon
pooja71 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Please please please continue soon eagerly waiting for next part pretty please
Sunshine2604 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
manik saved nandini.
poor nandu. looks like there's something very deeply troubling her.
feeling so bad for her and manik as well.
its high time. hope nandini at the least opens up to manik.
can't wait to read the next part.
hope you continue soon.
shilvi thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Manik saved nandu finally
Hope nandu tell the truth to manik
Every emotional update
Eagrly waiting for next update
Keep smiling dear 😊

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".