MANAN FS :OUR MARRIAGE (PART-3 (A) ON PAGE 58) PMS LATER 19 JAN - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Dear u have started 3 stories with same prologue n concept..
Our kiss, our marriage.. N 1 more..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Wow looks damn interesting .I would love to read further
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello guys ...actually I just wanted to update today itself ...couldn't stop myself ...and yaah most important thing I changed this story name yeh OUR KISS SE ...OUR MARRIAGE ...kar diya ha ...I hope you guys don't mind. ...here is the update ...ENJOY😛

PART-1 (A)


Nandani Placed her hand on manik's shoulder and said

Nandani smilingly said : Accha yeh batao yeh sad waala look kisliye tha

Manik sadly said : Meri girlfriend ne shaadi kar li ...she ditched me

Nandani laughed loudly and said

Nandani : Don't tell me ki tum iss vajhse sad the ...

Manik looked at her in disbelief ...to which she chuckled and said

Nandani smilingly said: Arre yaar mujhe dekh mera break up 10 baar... nahi 11 baar hua ...aur sab ki ek hi complaint thi ki main bolti bahot hu ...ab tum hi batao kya main jyada bolti hu ...

Manik sarcastically said : Nahi nahi bilkul bhi nahi tum kaha bolti ho ...pagal toh voh ha jo tumhe sunte ha ...

She placed both hands on her waist and said

Nandani : Dekha maine kaha tha ...kutta kamina ...khote da putar naa hoye taan ...chal meri chod ...bas yahi kahungi ki naa bhul jaa usee dekh pyar karti hoti naa voh tujhse toh kissi aur se shaadi kabhi nahi karti ...ab jo tujhse pyaar hi nahi karti ...uske liye aansu bahane ka kya phayda ...

Manik : Tu normal hi ha naa ...matlab aksar log normal esi baate nahi karte...

Nandani angrily said: Kya matlab tumhara ...main bilkul normal hu ...aur ek piece hu ...joo vahe guru jii ne bade pyar se banaya ha ...

Nandani was talking to manik ...but manik was just looking at her ...her big eyes ...chubby cheeks ...cute lips ...her smally nose ...she is just an angel ...his angel ...manik was thinking all this ...nandani saw him lost somewhere ...she clicked her finger in front of him to which he came out of his thoughts ...

Nandani smirkingly said: Oh hello kaha khoye huye ho ...pyar vyar toh nahi ho gaya naa ...😉

By listening this Manik looked at her in shock ...to which nandani chuckled

Nandani : Arre kya yaar hamesha yeh angry waala look dete rehte ho ...sachme bahot boring ho tum...accha chalo koi nii ...mere saath chalo ...

Manik confusingly said: kaha

Nandani smilingly said : Arre mere ghar aur kaha ...ab jaldi chalo varna baba jii naraz ho jayenge ...

Manik rudely said : Main kahi nahi jaa raha...tumhe jaana ha toh tum jao naa ...

Nandani dramatically said: Arre kaisi baat kar rahe ho ...tumne nahi suna ...akeli ladki khuli tijori ki tarah hoti ha ...u knew main akeli...sunsaan galiyaan ...mujhe toh dar lag raha ha

Manik : God ...tum kitna drama karti ho...

Nandani : vaise itna drama kafi ha yaah aur karu ...

Manik smiled and said : kaafi ha meri maa chal

Nandani frowningly said : oye maa nahi hu teri ...girlfriend bol ...friend bol ...chalega par maa nahi ...

Manik smiled : Accha chal ...


MURTHY MENSION -


Manan reached murthy mension ...manik was literally shocked by seeing the place ...he thought she must be live in some small house or something but it's a huge banglow ...which was very beautiful ...

Nandani : Ab cholo ander aane ke liye bhi invitation dena hoga kya ...

Manik nodded his head as yes and entered her house ...servants gritted them ...nandani smilingly gritted them back ...manik was sitting in the sofa ...and asked

Manik curiously said : Tumhari family kaha ha

Nandani smiled looking at him and said

Nandani : Tum ho naa meri family ...baba jii ha meri family ...u knew what meri family toh puri duniya ha ...

She stretched her arms like all the world ...manik became sad by listening this ...

Manik : Am sorry mujhe nahi pata tha tumhari family nahi ha ...

Nandani : God phir se sady waali face bana liya ...ek baat batao ...JAISE HAR RAAT KO MERA ICE CREAM KHANA COMPULSORY HA ...VAISE HI KYA TUMHARA YE SAD LOOK COMPULSORY HA

Manik makes a poker face to which she chuckled and smilingly said

Nandani : Arre yaar muskuraya karo muskurane pe tax nahi lagta sacchi ...baba jii ki kasam ...

Manik smiled looking at her childish behavior ...nandani too smiled ...she came towards him and hold his hand to which he shocked ...

Nandani : kya ese kya dekh rahe ho ...chalo mere saath ...

Nandani makes him stand in front of guru nabak dev jii picture ...and smilingly said

Nandani : Baba jii sholly ...sholly ...sholly ...aaj ke baad kabhi late nahi hungi ...par main kya karti ...mujhe naa yeh mil gaya tha ...oh sorry main toh batana bhul gayi...yeh ha manik ...aur manik yeh ha mere baba jii yaa tum vaahe guru jii bhi keh sakte ho ...accha suno baba jii ...mujhe aapse private mqin baat karni ha ...

Manik who was smiling all the time ...by listening private he got curious ...he too wanna listen ...nandani being nandani ...she goes close to waahe guru jii and said

Nandani : isski naa life main dher saari khushiyan la doo ...bahot accha ha yeh ...sad waala look accha nahi lagta iss pe ...meri har wish ki tarah isse bhi pura kar doo ...

Manik listening her conversation ...he was happy to see this ...his eyes were shining ...bcz now he knew what to do ...aakhir vaahe guru jii ka jaadu chal hi gaya😉


I knew I knew ...bahot short ha ...par manage kar loo ...next update toh tab hi milegi jab comments or likes Milenge ...so comments karo long long ...
Love you all
Keep loving
Keep smiling
And
Keep shining For Ur loved ones
Love
Diya😛


Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
hey diya...
sorry couldnt comment earlier...
bt ur this story has truly touched my heart...

nandini...the way u have shown her...
always there to take others pain...and give them happiness...inspite of being alone...
nandini in this story is truly an inspiration...
u have written her character really very beautifully...kudos to u...

manik and nandini's twasing session...
her vahe guuji talks...
manik's adoring session...
and her philosophies...uff...arre...of the bf and gf thing...hehehe...

i loved this story

continue soonish

will be waiting


LOVE
SANJANA
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Wow. Nyc... Loved it totally. ..
Mujhe nandini ko dekh kar geet yaad aa gyi jab we met ki...
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Awesome update
Nandu is such a chatter box
11 breakups wo bhi jyada bolti hai isliye hahahahha
Loved the update very much
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Awesome superb mind blowing update loved nandu so much nandus character is amazing manik KO sach me pyar ho gaya kya nandu se.
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Aww...
This story is really sweet..

I love ur this Nandu.. She is herself alone.. But giving happiness to others...


Beautiful storyline.. Bahut mast h ye Nandu.. Hehe

Continue soon re
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
awesome update
nandu soo cute and her talks r superb
i loved it
she is alone but she wants to see manik happy
she wants to talk privately to gurujii funny
thanks for update
continue soon
waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Arey wah, show kya end hone lagi tu ne toh nandini ki aiyappa ko hi change krdi hehehehehe.. Please yaar, nandu ki aiyappa ko replace mat kr haat jorti hu_/\_

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