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Posted: 9 years ago
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Silent readers kch seekho insab se...Aur comment karna shuru karo... 🤣

PS- Update in 10 mins...!


Edited by _Samthanian_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry foe the typing errors if any...

Chapter 1 : Unknown Guy

NANDINI'S POV

"Rishuuu...What the hell are you doing with my lappy" I shouted fuming in anger watching my baby brother using my laptop...

Rishab just ran from there to save himself from me knowing that how much I get angry if anyone just touches my things and he toh was using my lappy which is my Jaan..

"Dare not to do that again" I shouted and sat back closing my eyes and keeping my head on the headboad of the bed after two hectic hours of my coaching...

After some time, I opened my eyes and looked towards my laptop and thought to have a look at my Social Networking Sites...

"2 Messages, 50 Notifications and 1 Pending Request...
Hmmm...Interesting... Lets first have a look at the messages..." I mummered looking towards the screen of my lappy

"Navu ke 9 messages... Ab kya ho gaya ise..."I thought as I saw Navya my Best Friend's message and opened it...

Message-

"Oye... Sorry na re... I know got to know that I was at fault yesterday... Aur teri koi galti nahi thi... Maine hi galti se rujhe galat timings bata di thi...Sorry na re..."

"Ab baat bhi ni karegi kya???"

"Dekh Mai tujhe apni Latest pics bhi tag nahi kar pa rahi hu..."

"Plsss ab toh karle Meri friend Request Accept..."

"Sholly babes..."

"Pakka agar tune mujhe maaf kar diya toh Mai tujhe KFC mei treat dungi aur kabhi Tere Parth Samthaan ko kabhi curse ni karugi use mujhse zaada time dene ke liye..."

"Yaa fir sabse acha... Tujhe kabhi Dhruv ke name se tease ni karugi... Cabir ki kasam..."

"Please... Pretty Please...Ab toh karle meri friend request accept..."

"And yeah tomorrow I will be back to Mumbai... N I don't want you to be khafa with me once I am back"

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Goshhh... This girl is crazyyy... Ek din baat na karo toh Pagal si ho jaati hai... Ab kal isne mujhe khud hi galat timings send ki apni flight ki... N uske baad khud hi kehti hai ki tu mujhse milne bhi ni aayiii ek baar... Kya karu mai iss ladki ka??? Bt ek chezzz achi ho gyii iske naraaz hone se kam se kam ab mujhe KFC mei free ki treat milegi and Ye mere Parth Samthaan ko kabhi curse nahi karegi... Wohhha...! Ab yeh Mujhe Dhruv ke name se tease bhi ni karegiii... I know he is my school crush but that doesn't mean yeh mujhe hamesha tease karti rahegi... And I know ki yeh Cabir ki jhooti kasam nahi kayegi... After all he is her Crush...! But wait a sec Why did she said to accept her friend request... I toh accepted it na after coming from school... Wait let me Check...


With this I went to pending request column and saw Navu's request pending...


Goshh... I think by mistake I didn't accepted mah doll' s request... But I am happy that I didn't accepted her request that time as it only benifitted me ...!


"Chalo... Now lets see who messaged me next..." With this I opened the message box to see an some unknown guy named Manik messaging me...


"Now whose this guy??? And why is he messaging you???" My mind interrogated...


"By the way her has an nice name... Manik ...I liked it..." My heart said in an exited tone...


"Uff...! You can't be serious who has such a creepy name woh bhi in 21st century..." My mind said irritatedly to my heart...


"No he doesn't have a creepy name infact its somewhat cute ..." My heart said in a defencive tone...


"No it isn't cute..." My mind retorted


I know where will this fight of my heart and mind will lead to so I just shouted at them...


"Shut up...! Just shut up you both... Kabhi toh iss 17 years ki bacchi ko bakshh diya karo...! And yeah Who is that guy and what name he has... I don't give a damn to it... So why arr you both fighting for that... Idiots...!" I shouted at both of them and opened the message of that Unkown Guy...!


Message -

"Hey"

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Goshhh... For this little message my Heart and Mind were fighting... Useless creatures...!


But I think my mind was right why is he messaging me... Let's see... And I got to know that he is in my friend list...


"Ohhh... I think by mistake I added him in by friend list..."


I Unfriend that Unknown guy ...Ahhh...What was his name??? Yeahhh... Manik... I Unfriend him from my account and went to dinning hall as Mum was calling me for Dinner...


I had my dinner and I came near the window... Cool breezes of winters was kissing my serene face and my hairs were dancing in sink woth the breeze... And I don't know from where the thought of that Unknow Guy captured in my mind... And I remembered the words of my heart and smiled...


" He has really a cute name " I mummered unknowingly and went to sleep smiling brightly...


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Next day I was busy with my school, coaching and studies...


At Night, I got some free time so I again opened my social Networking account and saw some notidfication and 1 message from that Guy Manik...!


I opened the message and got all shocked by his message...


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A/N - Finally done with the update... So fast na... Kya karun your comments encouraged me to write this quick... I know the update was short but ab itni jaldi itna sa hi update milegaoe else mai toh 30th ko update dene waali thi...

Now Coming to the update...
So you all mostly guessed it right...
I know their was no MaNan in the chapter but I promise next update se MaNan hi MaNan hoga...
N yeahhh what was Manik's message which made Nandu shocked??? Socho Socho...
Hope uh liked this chappy...


PS - I have thought to make this a SS and give short updates to you guysss within every 3 or 4 days... Comment your views and tell me...!


Loads of Love n Hugs,
Pari



Knight99 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Thanks for pm
Jaldi update karna
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update I think something interesting is going to happen so please try to update soon keep smilingly and of course writing thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey, new story... Update was nice... Eagerly want to know what was manik's massage?? Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow New story great yippee thank you so much
Navya toh Bht crazy types h
Nandini is crazy abt parth Hehehe
And Navya abt cabir lol to good
Manik ne nandini ko request send ki or usne accept b kr li or fir unfriend b kr diya
But manik ne Kya msg Kia.. Sunna diya hoga
Parth samthaan ka naam mention kr Ke uff Dil khush kr Dita Luv u..
PS -i didn't knew u have starTed a new ts other Pehlenhe comment kr deti... Plz turn it in to ss
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi dear nice update sis 🤗
lols aisa kya msg kar diya manik ne ki nandu shock mein aa gyi 😲🤣
thanks for pm 😳😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Intersting

Let's see wt message manik send

Coun sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update
navya's apologies r good
but nandu unfriend manik's request
what was d message that makes nandu shock?
excited to know
thanks for pm
continue soon
waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...
Navya's apology was soo cute...
Waiting for manik's message...

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