Manan ff - Falling in Love with my BestFriend ^*^NOTE pg17 /28th Jan

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Hollaa people !! I am here with a new ff...its just a thought came into my mind so just wished to pen it down...N actually influenced by a story I read on Wattpad ^*^ So yaa i know uh all must b waiting fr the update 'The Lost Souls' but I need tym fr that...so till then tell me your reviews abt this one !!


Prologue

Manik Malhotra - A 21 year old guy. The most handsome guy fr whom all the girls go gaga n boys get jealous. He was in a relationship with a girl named 'Soha'. Eventually he broke up with her as he found her cheating on him. He has a best friend with whom he shares all his worries & everything. Manik is a flirt bt only flirts with one girl 'Nandini' his best friend.

Nandini Murthy - A 19 year old girl. She is the most beautiful girl any guy wud die to date with but eventually stays away bcz of her over possessive Best friend ofcourse 'Manik'. She is rather confused with her relationship with him as its just mere friendship or more than that.!!

Nyonika Malhotra - Manik's mom loves her son the most. His husband is basically a drunkard. She is struggling to move on from him & Manik & Nandini are helping her with it. She also loves Nandini alot & treats her like her own daughter.

Rishi Malhotra - Manik's dad a drunkard. He is drunk all the time & sleeps with every other girl. Doesnt care about anyone but still tries to flirt with his wife.

Khushi Murthy & Arnav Murthy - Nandini's Mom & Dad who were murdered ruthlessly infront of her when she was just eleven.


Other characters will be introduced as story proceeds ;)
Till then tell me your views about this one !!


Index
Chap 1 -pg 1
Chap 2 -pg 4
Chap 3 -pg 6
Chap 4 -pg 12
Chap 5 -pg 15
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Reallly nice concept

Awsmmm characters

Manik possessive and flirt ah

So sweeet

Counnn

Sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting concept...
Cont soon...
Plz pm me if possible...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept...
Just luved it...
Plz continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1

Flashback~Nandini is 6 and Manik is 8

*Nandini's POV*
It was recess tym, the sun was shining brightly & the birds were chirping gleefully. I went outside with my lollipop enjoying the warmth of the sun & started chasing the birds squealing playfully until I bumped into someone. I squinted against the sun & saw a boy standing smirking at me evilly, blocking the rays of the sun. I looked up at him with my large eyes, as he gave a sneer, deciding to put on a show for the class.

"Watch it, idiot" he said snatching my lollipop & throwing it on the ground. I watched it shatter as he stomped on it again, grinning innocently. Refusing to cry, I gave him my best glare while looking around if any teacher is watching what's happening. "Awww wittle giwl wants to cry??" He added sarcastically letting all the kids laugh, waiting for my reaction. I watched at the floor shamefully, wanting to cry, but I know it was weak. My daddy hated it when I cry, & used to say I need to grow up. Almost breaking down in tears I see him turning around only to get punched in the face, followed by a large crack that echoed in the playground, letting all the laughter die out as eberyone analyzed who punched the boy.

A boy

with black hair messed up in style,blackish brown eyes came next to me & brought me to sit up in his lap. I gave a little blush as I heard the boy that was punched running to the door & I looked down, smoothing down my crumpled dress.

"You okay??" he whispered softly, lifting my knee, where a little area was bleeding. Sniffling I buried my head in the crook of his head inhaling his shampoos scent. "It's okay," he murmured, burying his face in my long silky hair. The bell rang signalling everyone had to go inside but we stayed out there, watching the wind twirling aroung leaves until our parents came to pick us up.
"I won't ever let you get hurt again, I promise," he said pressing his lips against my neck. I smiled happily tightening my grip against him not wanting to get up.

~ Flashback over ~

*Nandini's POV*
Nandini is 19 and Manik is 21

After the sudden remenisce, a small smile formed on my lips, as I tightened my grip aroung Manik's neck. 'He really does keep his promises' I thought to myself. His arms looped around my waist another time as he dragged me to his chest. Sighing happily I kissed his cheek.

"Why sudden affection?" he whispered, a mischevious glint in his eyes.

"Just remembering sumthin" I whispered back.

The moon shone through the curtains, His white skin glowing. Manik my official, jerky, idiotic best friend, that I loved to death. Which is weird bcoz I doubt best friends sleep together in practically nothing.

He was in boxers & I'm usually just in one of uis shirts that I randomly steal.

"Hm okay," Manik responded back kissing my nose. I stared at his soft pink lips, my hormones kicking in, as I trailed my fingers against his chest, while his hands massaged my back underneath my shirt.
And yes we are only BEST FRIENDS.

Although I wanted more, I doubt Manik does, and its the typical cowardly feelings that make me unable to bring myself into admitting that I want him. If I tell him, we might not even be friends. Manik swore he would nevr fall in love
after his girlfriend was caught cheating on him. That was the first night Manik came & slept with me.

He was sobbing, clutching the rose he went to her house to give her, and ofcourse what are best friends for? She had a very attractive eye that she tried to pull off as falling down the stairs.

Manik was unlike any other guy. He had a better idea about majority of the girls, & yet he refused to be a player and do anything that moves like the rest of the school guys.

He says he regret being with a s**t, and he wants his first time to be with someone he really loves. I was shocked when I heard him tell me he was in love again, only this time the girl didn't love him back.

"Then she's an idiot," I recall responding back to him. But back to present, I weaved my fingers through his silky hair and rested my head against his chest, falling asleep listening to his soothing heartbeat, as I always every night did !!


Soo guyzz here is my first chapter!! Plzz pass ur comments & reviews abt it whether I shud continue or not ?? 😉



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful it is
U write amazing..
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update Loved it Continue soon :-) N thnx for d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its awesomeee,,... plz do pm me the next update
waitingg
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wowww

It was reallly awsmmm

Flash back to now amazinggg

Plsss coun sooon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update
waiting for d nxt update dat to long one
update soon

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