MaNan ts- my girlfriend(final part pg 7)

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PART 1


Manik malhotra had liked her from the very first day he saw nandini murrty. He was sure then that at that time it was merely attraction. Physical attraction. With his hot ans ever sexy dance teacher. Nothing more he knew he didn't loved her just attracted to her.

But, slowly when he started going to her dance classes more often and used to follow her and notice each and every detail about herself. He got unknowingly obsseessed as well as possessive about her. He couldn't even tolerate any one near her. If he saw someone holding her hand he felt his inside burning. If someone dared to hug her god knows what happened to that person after he would have left the class premises.

Slowly and unknowing he fell for her. He smiled idioticly ad remembered the day when he realized his feelings.

>>>>>>>>> 31ST OCTOBER, 2015<<<<<<<<<

It was like any regular day. He was following her like any other day but she was like alays oblivious of this. They were walking along along deserted road. Nandini was fully engrossed in music she had her headphones on.

They both were oblivious of the fact that there was a truck from behind coming at fll speed. The driver didn't notice both of them, but manik saw the truck when he turned around so nandini couldn' see him. He saw the truck was straight in nandini's direction.

He ran to his full speed and pushed nandini along with him. They rolled along the road. Fortunately nonw were hurt as soon as nandini got up manik hugged her , that very moment he reaslised he couldn't afford to lose her because HE LOVES HER.

Nandini was confused with this sudden hug and she forcefully pushed him and said"yeh kya kar rahe ho tum!!!"

Manik expected this kind of reaction from her he said sarcastically"dikhai nahi deta mai road pe rolling-rolling khel raha hu"

Nandini gave him a "r-u-insane look". Manik again said"stupid ca't u see u were going to be hit by the truck and I just now saved u"

Except of thanking him she gave a sarcastic smile and said"oh ho aisa hai par tmne meri jaan bacai uske liye so thank u par uske bad tumne mujhe hug kyu kiya"

Manik really didn't wanted to answer this question he started rubbing his neck and said"wohh..."he looked at her face she had smirk on and her eyebrows raised"haan haan bolo mai sun rahi hu"

Manik said"who..tum..haan..mai..bas check kar raha tha that u r ok aur kahi agi toh nahi"

He again held her aems and starts checking whether she was hurt or not. Nandini slowly removesher arm from his hold and says"accha check kar rahe the ...sacha me yah kuch aur"

Manik got irritated and left saying"mujhe nahi pata"

While he was going back he turned nandini saying"really u don't now ya kahi kuch ho toh nahi gaya tumhe ..."

He smiled to his own and thought"ho toh gaya ha..aur who bhi tumse ishq."

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

He smiled on this and thought how he fell in love with her. And today he was gonna confess. He knew she loved him too but she is a hard nut to crack and bring off the confession from her. He thought to himself"manik beta shurru ho ga"

He msged something on his phone and set out on his plan . he was walking through the corridor to reach his dance class so he could meet his teacher cum love.

But, when he opened the door the view made him forget everything and he got lost in that.

Nandini was tyig her hair to start her practice . there few students with her who requested her to dance for them. And she can refuse anything but dance.

Suddenly, she felt some intense gaze on her as if being watched she looked around her students but all were busy in selecting the song. She was gonna turn back and mr. malhotra was going to be caught shamelessly ogling his teacher but then one of her students told her to satrtd ancing. So, for that time she forgot about that gaze thing.

The song started ...

Haan... Aaa Haan... Haan...

Ho... Sun Saathiya Maahiya
Listen O partner, O lover of mine
Barsa De Ishqa Di Syahiyaan...
Make the ink of love rain
Rang Jaoon, Rang Rang Jaoon Ri, Haari Main
I'll want to get coloured, I've totally lost myself
Tujh Pe Main Jhar Jhar Jhar Jaoon, Haari...
I'll sacrifice everything that's mine on You, I'm all Yours
Hoon Piya Bas Teri Main
O my beloved, I'm only Yours
Ho O... Chhule Toh Khari Mein
If You touch me, then only I shall become worthy (valuable)
Toh Khari Main Khari Main...
Then only I shall become worthy

(she moved her hand swaying in the air making everyone lost totally oin her beautiful dance)

Sun Saathiya Maahiya
Listen O partner, O lover of mine
Barsa De Ishqa Di Syahiyaan...

Make the ink of love rain

(she in between the dance called two of her students to help her who readily agreed...they danced in the moving form like the video)

Main Ret Si, Boond Ka, Zariya Tu
I'm like a sand particle, You're like a water-drop
Paake Tujhe Bheeg Jaoon Re...
After achieving You, I'll get drenched
Main Ret Si, Boond Ka, Zariya Tu
I'm like a sand particle, You're like a water-drop
Paake Tujhe Bheeg Jaoon Re...
After achieving You, I'll get drenched
Tar Jaoon, Tar Tar Jaoon
I'll swim, I'll swim
Dariya Ye Tar Jaoon Jee
Across this river/sea
Ishq Ye Paake Main Tera, Nikhar Jaoon Ri...
After achieving/attaining Your love, I'll blossom
Piya Bas Teri Main

O beloved, I belong only to You

(manik was having a hard time controlling himself from not going and doing something else rather than dancing...his eyes were fixed on her waist which was being exposed from her crop top)

Ho O... Chhule Toh Khari Mein
If You touch me, then only I shall become worthy
Toh Khari Main Khari Main...

Then only I shall become worthy(nandini again felt the gaze and this time she turned around but savely manik turned other side seeing her turning and she igroned it off and again started dancing.the two boys lift her up and swirl about ..while they were having the bestest time of there lifew with there sexy hot teacher... while manik was pissed off coz thy dared to touch his nandini he had a well planned job for them ,i.e, cleaning the whole corridor with a tooth brush)

Sun Saathiya Maahiya
Listen O partner, O lover of mine
Barsa De Ishqa Di Syahiyaan...
Make the ink of love rain

(in the last part he couldn't take the boys again holding her so he came himself in between the dance and excused all the others and lifted her up holding her from he waist, which did confuse nandini for a second but again she ignored it and did the last step as gracefull as ever)

The performance ended all clapped for manan saying it was wonderful, amazing dance etc. Etc.

As soon as the dance finished manik came out of the room and set o his plan. He knew nandini would come to search for him and so as soon as the door opened he put his phone on his ear and started faking a call"yeah baby don't worry I reach there soon"

This baby word attracted nandini's attention she stood beside him so he didn't notice her. Which manik happily did and continued his drama"haan baba yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai obiously u r the hottest girl in the world now u r manik malhotra's girlfrienddd so chill and yah who meri dance teacher she isn't even 1% near u"

This fumed nandini and she directly came in front of hima nd stood with crossed hands and fake sarcastic smile. Manik faked a frown and ended the call with a "bye baby would talk to u later"

He looked at nandini and raised his eyebrow in a what form to which nandini said"tum kisse meri buraiya kar rahe the and how dare u say I ain' hot"

Manik was enjoying it and playing along h e said "issme galat kya bola u aren't hot thenu arn't"

Nandini fumed more and said"oh really !!! then show me ur girlfriend even I waana she how hot she is!!?"

Manik was having a hard time controlling his lagh seeing her million dollar expressions... but, he needed to play so she would confess ona nd said"fine!! U wanna meet her?! Then come today evening sharp 4 pm I would call my shone there and then u would know what hotness is!!"

He went off and making her hell irritated she looked up and sheriked..while he went home for procedure of his plan..

I M BACK WITH A TS

KAISA LAGA

ACCHA. BURA

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NXT PART JALDI HI AA RAHA HAI

MAYBE ON 22ND OR 25TH DEC..

AND OF MY FF I M INSPIRATION LESS NOW AND YAH CAN SOMEONE PLZZ TELL ME WHAT HAAPPENS IN S PUNJABI AND SOUTH-INDIAN WEEDDDING. JUST TELL ME ALL THE RITUALS AND WHAT HAPPEN IN IT I REALLY NEED UR HELP.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's really very much interesting ...
I loved it
Plz plz Continue soon
Thanks for the pm



Love you
Ekuuu
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nyccc start cont soon waiting eager ly nd thanks 4 the pm 😊
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Nyc start...amazing concept...beautifully penned down..continue soon 😆
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Nice begning nd thanks for the pm
Manik nd his plans ohhh God
He is sooo obsessed nd possessive fr her
Continue sooonnn
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey hi,
I simply loved it... honestly you have really good writing skills...😊👏

God Bless.

Take care...
Edited by ankitathanvi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...Nandini is a dance teacher...and manik is her student...good...👍🏼.
"Sun saathiyaa"...rocked⭐️.
So jealous nandu is on our way...😃...

Cont soon.
Take care...😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome.. Mind blowing.. Amazing... Wonderful..👏
This was just too good..
Loved it like anything..
And please don't make me wait now and post the next part soon..
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Awesome manik fell in love with his dance teacher confession is coming update soon
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It was amazing, beautiful update. Loved the conversation of manik. Thanks for the pm. Waiting for the next part. Continue soon. Tack care. Thankyou for writing it.

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