MANAN ff 'RAB NE BNA DI JODI' discontinued/ note pg 26

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PROLOGUE


"aaj to bade din baad Jane yaad kiya apne hame...nhi to apko to kaam se fursat Hi nhi milti " said Mr singhaniya who just came to Murthy's office on a call of his beloved frnd Mr Murthy


"ashok mujhe bahut zaruri baat krni thi...nandini ke bare me"

sensing the seriousness in the topic Mr singhaniya too became serious...

"kya hua kishor, nandini thik to hai n" asked ashok with a concerned voice

"ha, vo to thik hai, tumhe to pta hai n last week Hi mai hospital me admit tha aur MRI reports kal aa gyi h" he said in a low volume

"kya aya reports me??" asked ashok in a scared tone...

they were friends since 25 years the time when MR Murthy came in to business world...nd he was scared fr9m the look on his face that what can be in reports...

"cancer, last stage" his words fell like a bomb on ashok...

he was soo shocked...he became numb after listening kishore's words...

understanding his condition kishore continued " tum to jante Hi ho, nandini ki maa k guzar Jane k baad kitni toot gyi thi MRI bacchi aur kitne laad pyar se bada kiya hai mne use, aur abb agar mujhe kuch ho gya...to vo ye sah nhi payegi.,...aur mai yeh chahta hu ki mujhe kuch hone se pehle mri nandu ko koi use pyar krn vala mil jaye...Jo uska humse bhi jyada khayal rakhe" with a tear brimmed in the corner of his eyes remembering his wife...


"kab vapas aa rhi hai mri bacchi? " asked Ashok in a trance ...

"kal aa jayegi mri nandu...pure 2 mahine baad ghr aa rhi hai mri jaan" said kishore with a smile on his face with the thought of his dughter coming back after long 2 months...!!!!

at the same time his PA came to inform him about some. meeting and all are waitig for him in conference hall...

Mr Murthy immediately left for the meeting telling Me singhaniya to think about what he said...

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Malhotra Mansion

Mr Malhotra - neyonika , mai soch rha tha ki ab hume manik ke liye bhi kisiko pasand kr Hi Lena chahiye...Manik pura time akele Hi rehta h apne har concert me...koi uska bhi khayal rakhe ke liye hona chahiye...said he with a smile

neyonika was too happy on his husband's words so she said " ha...bilkul sahi socha hai Ji apne...bass koi acchi si ladki mil jaye...Jo mre manik ko complement kre.,."

Mr Malhotra- hmm sahi kha...vse kab vapas aa rhe hai pke ladle London se...?

neyonika - 2 din baad...on which he nodded...

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So guyzzz a new idea has popped in my lazy head...
Actually I was watching vivah on zee
And suddenly I got an idea...Jo mne jaldi jaldi likh di6a with a slight change ...
And about title...it is song from movie "rab ne bna di Jodi " so yeah...there will be a love story...
They will get married and will fall in love...but HOLE HOLE I.e. slowly slowly...

So give ur feedback on this and tell me should I continue or not...??

TILL THEN

KEEP SMILING
KEEP SHINING

LOVE
SAKSHI
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***INDEX***




Chap 1 - page 3

Chap 2 page 7BR]
Chap 3 - page 11

Chap 4 - page 14

Chap 5- page 18

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Nice story
Quiet interesting
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome prologue manan will get married update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow..a new manan ff...😛..so hpy...amazing plot...do continue plz n update very soon with long updates 😆😆😆
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Amazing concept...
Very well written...
Plz pm me if possible...
Cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice ..continue soon
ty for pm
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Originally posted by: eppie99

Nice story
Quiet interesting
Continue soon


Thank u..
Will update tomorrow..
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Originally posted by: muskaantayal97

Wow..a new manan ff...😛..so hpy...amazing plot...do continue plz n update very soon with long updates😆😆😆


Heheh...thanks..
Will try to give big updates..

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