Box Box Box aka Love in a Box-MaNan FF- Chapter 13-on pg 105- feb 14th - Page 61

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Posted: 9 years ago
That is really a weird condition...ha ha ha manik and puppy...to cute to imagine...and u described nandini's restlessness perfectly... And maniks reactions in bus stop are worth watching... Plz update soon yaar...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update.
Nandini z confused, one part of her have a soft corner for Manik and another part z scared of taking a stranger with her.
Dat condition, it was really weird. Manik ko puppy bana dia.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
aww...nandini is really a nice girl!!...

shez so cared abt him!!...

n the condition is little weird!!!...bt i can understand nandu's position...


nice update yar!!...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ys ofcrse I want them to be close.. Vry close..
Its so weird.. Manik, pet.. God. Too cute..
Yaar, am really upset with one thing.. U said na, manik's name won't be Manik malhotra.. No yaar. Let it be na. I just can't even think abt him having another name.. No yaar. Can u pls ignore that. Let it be manik na.. Pls pretty pls..

Oh god.. Oh god. Did u just say 'you are my pet'.. I have seen it.. Yes .. My Suki's film.. God.. Oh now I get it. Am a huge Korean drama fan. And that was my life before I get attached to kyy n manan. Now am getting the picture. So this ff is gonna be soo cute. Pet manik will be too cute na. will always be with her. Nandini will be lyk this only na, lyk confused soul. Ignoring her feelings.. If am not wrong, in that film, hero is younger than heroin right.. I think its not the same in this ff..anyway..
. Shit i want nandini to be more expressive.. Try to add more romantic scenes ..than cute scenes..
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Posted: 9 years ago
What will manik do now will he except nandini ke condition par he as no option Abe n when actually when manik memories will be back will he go n leave nandini for ever because he is falling in love with nandini
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Posted: 9 years ago
Kya. .
kya. .
kya. .

What a condition i mean. .i am short of words. .

Manik as a pet. .!!

God help him. .he really needs it. .

Par wo memory revive kaise karega. .??

Hmm so much of suspense. .

Continue soon. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Priya,

Thanks for the lovely update, well i do know about the show and how your story will progress ahead lol... but, i don't want to spoil the fun for other people...

I guess you are doing full justice to the story and i hope you will make your own amendments to it as required... I hope you will put the scene where the guy asks the girl to wash his hair...😆... That would be fun to read..

Lots of Love.

Ankita
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ankita_t

Hi Priya,


Thanks for the lovely update, well i do know about the show and how your story will progress ahead lol... but, i don't want to spoil the fun for other people...

I guess you are doing full justice to the story and i hope you will make your own amendments to it as required... I hope you will put the scene where the guy asks the girl to wash his hair...😆... That would be fun to read..

Lots of Love.

Ankita


So u too watched this film. Even me too watched it. A huge Korean fan..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...
Manik as a pet..
It's so nice...
Pls continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Manan's convos were well penned. Nandini's confused state was well written. Nandini's POV was mindblowing. The battle between nandini's heart and brain was phenomenal. Nandini's condition was different. The story is getting interesting day by day.eagerly Waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm.
Keep writing.
Stay blessed😊

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