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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manancraze

Nice update dear...👏.

So Manik is getting restless... Hope use realization jaldi ho jaye...
But thank god aryaman is good...😛.
Waiting to know how Manik ends up being DULHA...

Cont soon.
Take care...🤗


Thank u 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vandyandy

Hi Anu

Thks for the PM
So u finally updated the 1st chp.
Working on three stories is hell of a job girl.
Update was good
Now when marriage ceremonies r on the way, Manik will realise that he can't let Nandu go from his life .

He already read something in her eyes.
He started feeling bad angry , when Aaryaman went with her in her room.
He kind of didin't like the idea of them being alone in the room NAAH !!!!

It's not far when he will confess his love to Nandu.
Plz update soonish.


Thank u so much...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: simkapoor

hey diii...
wow wat a beautifull beautiful update..
this stry is awsm..
one of a kind...
i lvddd it...
it ws so so emotionalll... seriously..
yanik is behaving so dumb...
wat is wrong wid him...
he cares fr hr possessive abt hr bt no doesnt lvs hr...
i dnt knw wat is nxt...
cntinue sooonnn di...
it ws awsm...
aryaman is vry nice...
tc...
lv u ..
thnks fr pm..
lvd it...
stay blessed...


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

Wow.. Awesome update.. Loved it..

N yes finally update n totally worth the wait..
Loved it really so so so much

Thanxxfor the fantastic update n the pm

Keep smiling
Stay blessed
😊


Thank u so much
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sony.K

Hey i know I am late but 5 min are there to finish new year first day so,


"HAPPY NEW YEAR"

Waiting for the next update. Please PM me.


Sry for late reply thank you so much and wish u the same
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART 2A :

NYONIKA : nanduuu

Nandu who was standing lost comes into senses and haaa

NYONIKA : tu yaha kitchen main kya karri hain

NANDINI : woo

NYONIKA : acha chod chel ab jaa aur apne kamre main aram kar bohuth thak gayi hogi

NANDINI : nahi maa main

NYONIKA : shhh mujhe kuch nahi sunna jaa ab

NANDINI : hmmm teek hain

Nyonika kisses her forhead and smiles faintly while nandu walks to her room silently saying nothing...

nyonika sighs closing her eyes while raj enters into kitchen at the same time and "nyonika"

she turns towards him and "hmmm"

He walks close to her and "chintha math karo sab teek hoga"

she smiles sarcastically nodding her head...

RAJ : manik????

she looks him and nods her head left and right while he turns his face sighing...

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KABIR : sube se rath hogayi hain

DHRUV : phir bi kuch atha patha nahi hain

KABIR : patha nahi kya karra hain... kyu karra hain...kuch...kuch samaj nahi ara hain...

DHRUV : I just hope ki wo teek ho

MUKTHI : tum dono yaha kya karre ho

KABIR : kuch nahi bas aise hi hava kane...tum dono yaha...

ALIA : haan wo ham bi bas aise hi

MUKTHI : manik ke bare main bath karre the na

DHRUV : hmmm

ALIA : I thought gussa kam hothe hi vapas ajayega

KABIR : shayad gussa kam hua hi nahi

MUKTHI : sahi hain bohuth badi galthi jo hogayi nandini se

ALIA : mujhe tho ab dar lagra hain agar usse nandu ko aryaman ke sath bait the huye dekhe hi itna gussa aya hain tho patha nahi and stops midway sighing

DHRUV : alia relax jo hoga vo hoga par ab I guess we need to look for him

MUKTHI : haan sube se tho hamne usse ek baar call bi nahi ki par ab shayad

KABIR : shayad kuch nahi ham usse nahi dundenge

ALIA : par

KABIR : kuch faida nahi hoga ham uska gusa handle nahi kar payenge and if am not wrong aaj wo kuch zyada hi gussa main hoga because har baar ki tharah nandini iss baar na hi uske peche gayi aur na hi use bath karne ki koshish ki hain

DHRUV : may be that's the reason he is still not at house shayad wo nandini ka intezar kara hain

MUKTHI : tho ab kya he will surely not return until nandu talks to him

KABIR : philal ke liye nandu ke paas jathe hain aur phir sochthe hain

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NANDINI POV :

I lied on my bed having my eyes closed thinking how the entire day passed in a blink...

I slowly opened my eyes letting a tear roll down from my eye realising that I did nothing since morning except meeting people as soon going to be mrs khurana...!!!!!

I got up and stood near window don't know thinking what and that too for how much time.
(End of POV)

NYONIKA : tu soyi nahi na ab thak

NANDINI : maa aap

NYONIKA : haan main

RAJ : tu soyi kyu nahi abi thak

NANDINI : neendh nahi ari thi thoo

RAJ : chel aja bait yaha

KABIR : kya ham bi andar aa sakthe hain

RAJ : jee haan bilkul

DHRUV : thank you

ALIA : kya bathe hori thi

NYONIKA : kuch nahi ham bi bas abi aaye

RAKESH : tho iska matlab hain main bi sahi time pe pahunch gaya

RAJ : haa

MUKTHI : I guess hame neche bait jana chahiye circle main thaki ham ache se bath kar sake

ALIA : haaa

NYONIKA : nandu tu yaha aa and she makes her lie in her lap

All smile and settle down looking them...

RAKESH : wo main puchna chahtha ki

RAJ : kal ke sare arrangements ho gaye na

RAKESH : haan

RAJ : kuch reh gaya hain tho mujhe batha de main dekh lunga

RAKESH : haan wo main kehra tha ki ma

RAJ : sab ne dinner kar liya na

MUKTHI : haan

RAKESH : raj

RAJ : haa

RAKESH : abi thak vapas nahi aya na

raj turns his face while nyonika who was caressing nandu hairs stops caressing and closes her eyes controlling her tears...

nandu turns her head towards left not wanting anyone to notice her and closes her eyes tightly controlling her tears pressing her lips inside...

DHRUV : abi thak usse ajana chahiye tha par

PREETI : Jab thak nandu usse bath nahi karegi thab thak wo vapas nahi ayega

RAKESH : haan isliye

NYONIKA : nandu ko usse bath karne ki zarurath nahi hain

Preeti walks towards nyonika and sube se nahi aaya wo patha nahi kana kaya bi hoga ya

NYONIKA : preeti mujhe uske bare main bath nahi karni hain

PREETI : par mujhe karni hain... nyonika wo aaj bi mera ladla hain aur main usse nandini se zyada pyar karthi hoon...

aur main nandini ko usse bi zyada and nyonika replies instantly

Everyone look them silently not knowing what to say while nandu was lying silently like a life less body...

NYONIKA : ab uske nadaniyan nazar andaz nahi kar sakthe hain preeti

PREETI : par

RAJ : nyonika sahi kehri hain preeti chod de usse rehne de jaha chahe vaha agar gar ana chahtha hain tho khud ajayega

RAKESH : ye kya kehra thu

PREETI : aap in logon ki bathe math suniye aur nandu se kahiye na ki manik se bath kare main sube se usse kehri hoon manik ko call kare par wo meri bath manri hi nahi

RAKESH : nandu

Nandu gets up controlling herself and looks down silently saying nothing

RAKESH : tu bath kyu nahi ki manik se

ALIA : arey wo busy thi na sube se

KABIR : isliye time hi nahi mila

DHRUV : aap log bi na

MUKTHI : patha nahi bath ko kaha se kaha le jathe hain

sabko uske bare main soch kar pareshan hone ki zarurath nahi and before nyonika could complete door gets opened with a thud making everyone look towards it...

PREETI : manikk

FAB 4 take a deep breath feeling relaxed finally being able to see their best friend...

Rakesh moves towards him and "kaha chela gaya tha thu"

preeti walks close to him and "hamare phone calls lift kyu nahi karra tha"

RAKESH : jaan leli tune

PREETI : patha bi hain kitna pareshan the ham

RAJ : manik ye log tumse bath karre hain

NYONIKA : divaron se nahi

Fab 4 were angry on him but still they couldn't control themselves seeing him and

KABIR : manik

DHRUV : kya hua

MUKTHI : sab...sab teek hain...

ALIA : tum..teek ho na...

Everyone was worried for him and talking to him while the one whom he wanted to worry and talk more than anyone else was sitting simply looking him saying nothing...

Fisting his hands he turns his gaze from her and simply walks inside uttering nothing...

He goes into washroom leaving everyone surprised and shocked and quickly changing himself comes out again...

(His spare clothes were always present in her room right from his childhood)

Knowing his son very well nyonika gets up from bed and "tu yaha so nahi saktha"

Everyone gets up worriedly and look each other helplessly...

RAJ : manik gar chel

Paying no attention manik sits on bed and spreading his legs wide closes his eyes relaxing himself keeping his head on HIS MISHTEE lap making everyone startled including nandini...
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART 2B :

NYONIKA : manik

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RAJ : manikkk

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Nandini sighs while preeti and rakesh side hug nyonika and raj pleading them through their eyes not to disturb manik...

nandini slowly looks kabir and he as if understanding her language simply walks out saying nothing and returns back holding a tray filled with food...

Kabir keeps the tray beside nandini while everyone stands looking them silently...

"main gussa hoon" and he utters as if knowing her next move turning his face a little making her smile with his cute antics...

kaane par gussa karna is not so good...!!! and she utters softly controlling her smile

He shot opens his eyes and looking her gritting her teeth "main tumpe gussa hoon..!!!"

Ooo and she opens her mouth in a perfect o making him roll his eyes

NANDINI : tho iska matlab tum kare ho

MANIK : nahi

NANDINI : haan

He closes his eyes and nahi

NANDINI : haan

Na and before he could complete she keeps spoon filled of rice inside his mouth making him open his eyes instantly

haan and she taking out the spoon from his mouth smiles hugely while he lies glaring her without munching the food

Chorryyy..!!! please kalo..!!! and she makes a puppy face due to which he immediately starts munching the food closing his eyes again making her smile more hugely...

Everyone stands looking them happily yet with pain filled eyes...

Nandu brings another spoon filled rice close to his lips but instead of eating it manik holds the spoon and sitting straight looks into her eyes making her surprised...

Ma and before she could complete he keeps the spoon inside her mouth making her look him as well as all others with tears...

If he was hungry then even she was, more than him because she ate nothing since morning which no one noticed and which only HE knew as she was HIS MISHTEE whom no one could ever know better not even in dreams than HIM...HER JAAN...!!!!

Manan feed each other silently looking into each others eyes while everyone stands looking them cursing god asking him why he was separating them when they were born to be together...

Knock knock knock

Rakesh opens the door and smiles faintly seeing aryaman

aryaman looks everyone and woo lagtha hain sab yahi par hain

haan par tum yaha kya karre ho...wo bi iss vakth and manik completes his sentence coldly making nandu have a bite all the time looking into her eyes...

ARYAMAN : wo neendh nahi ari thi thooo anyways am sry mujhe nahi patha tha ki sab busy honge...u carry on I'll leave...

nahi aryaman its ok and before manik could say anything nandu speaks making him grit his teeth holding the spoon tightly

NYONIKA : tum aao na andar aao tum log bathe karo ham chelthe hain

ARYAMAN : arey nahi aunty

RAJ : aao aryaman itna formal hone ki zarurath nahi hain

Aryaman enters into room while everyone looks manik who was least interested in all this

NYONIKA : manik

yes of course and he gets up keeping the tray on side table

gud night beta ham and nyonika stops in mid seeing manik settling back on bed lying on nandu's lap closing his eyes happily

RAJ : manik

He opens his eyes and aryaman am damn tired yar tho am sry mujhe philal bohuth neendh ari hain tho you guys continue whatever you want to and I promise main disturb bi nahi karunga hmm and without waiting for any reply he closes his eyes turning side ways facing his back to every one

NANDINI : manikkk

ARYAMAN : nandini

She looks him while he continuous its ok rath bohuth ho gayi hain tho main cheltha hoon

She looks him blankly while he after blinking his eyes walks out smiling slightly

NYONIKA : what the hell is wrong with you manik

RAJ : ye konsa tharika hua aryaman se bath karne ka haa

PREETI : nyonika tu

NYONIKA : nahi preeti tum dono ki vajah se hi ye aisa ban gaya hain...kya sochra hoga aryaman... Kitna bura laga hoga...

Wo jo bi soche mujhe usse farak nahi padtha hain aur galthi uski hain kon atha hain itni rath ko ek akeli ladki ke kamre main usse milne haaa and manik shouts irritatingly getting up from bed

ALIA : tumhe farak padna chahiye manik

MUKTHI : kyuki wo nandini ka hone vala pathi hain

DHRUV : aur wo kisi aur ladki se nahi balki khud apni hone vali biwi se milne aya hain

MANIK : exactly wo hone vala pathi hain...shadi huyi nahi hain ab thak...

NYONIKA : manik

MANIK : papa maa main yaha so saktha hoon na

RAJ : pagal hogaya hain tu

MANIK : maa...papa...main apse puchra hoon

RAKESH : haan beta tu yaha so saktha hain

NANDINI : nahi

Manik turns and haaa

Tum yaha nahi so sakthe and she utters looking straight into his eyes...

PREETI : nandu

NANDINI : kya please aap sab bahar ja sakthe hain mujhe manik se bath karni hain

Everyone leaves silently closing the door while manik stands in the same position looking her without even blinking his eyes...

NANDINI : manik

He comes into senses and without looking her starts walking towards door

manikk and she holds his hand stopping him from walking

He jerks her hand and "nahi so saktha na main yaha tho jara hoon"

NANDINI : chele jana hamari bath katham hone ke baad

He raises his eyebrows and ohhh acha acha tumhe bath bi karni hain mujhse I see

NANDINI : manik aise kyu bath karre ho

MANIK : tho phir kaise karu haa bolo sube se nahi tha tumhare paas main... ek call bi nahi kiya tumne... call chodo at least message bi nahi kiya aur sahi bi hain karogi bi kyu naye rishthe banre hain... shadi hone vali hain tumhari... pathi ane vala hain tumhara...time kaha se hoga mere jaise insan ke liye... nahiii...

She looks him blankly with tears while he continuous nodding his head tch tu tho meri MISHTEE hain hi nahi...agar tu meri MISHTEE hothi na tho mere gar se bahar nikal the hi mere peche bagthe bagthe athi...mujhse sry kehthi...mujhe manathi...kuch bi karthi...par akela nahi chodthi...

she smiles faintly and nodding her head "haan...nahi hoon main teri MISHTEE aur ab ban bi nahi sakthi..!!!"

Shocked he looks her while she continuous haan nahi ayi main tere peche...nahi bath ki main tujhse... kyuki koyi galthi nahi ki maine...aur agar karthi thab bi nahi athi...

She takes a deep breath and manik ab pehle jaise kuch nahi ho saktha na hi main sube se sham tumhare peche bag sakthi hoon aur na hi tum kab chahe thab jaha chahe vaha mere sath tumhare marzee se kuch bi kar sakthe hoo

MANIK : aur wo kyu

NANDINI : isliye kyuki main nahi chahthi hoon

MANIK : tum nahi chahthi ho ya tumhara hone vala pathi nahi chahtha hain

NANDINI : aryaman ko bech main math lao manik ye mera faisla hain

Tho ek bath batao thodi der pehle mujhe kana kyu kilari thi...jab hamare beech kuch bi pehle jaisa and she cuts him between saying manik ham bachpan se dosth hain aur wo hamesha rahenge...I do care for you no matter what aur mujhe tumhari care karne se koyi nahi rok saktha...main bas ye kehna chahthi hoon ki pehle jaise har pal main tumhare sath nahi reh sakthi hoon...maine tumhe aaj akela choda kyuki teen din baad meri shadi hain aur uske baad na chahthe huye bi mujhe tumhe akela chodna padega...

He pulls her close holding her arms tightly and tum mujhe akela nahi chodogi...main tumhe mujhe akela chodne dunga hi nahi...

NANDINI : tum khud chahthe the ki meri shadi ho tho ab jab meri shadi hori hain tho tumhe mujhe jane dena hoga manik...tumhe adath dalni hogi mere bina jene ki...

She frees herself from his grip and am sry par aaj se ham ek sath so nahi sakthe hain aur wo kayi sare cheze bi nahi kar sakthe hain jo ham aaj thak karthe aye hain

He stands trying to register her words while she in a blink runs out not being able to control her tears more...




done...finally...maarna chahthe ho tho maar sakthe ho I don't mind sachi...extremely sry for making you wait so long and also a very big thank you for loving this ff...I was actually surprised the number of messages asking me to continue soon...it really means alot to me so thank you so much...people who asked whether I stopped posting due to parth controversies tho guys let me say its nothing like that I was hell busy and hence couldn't update...rahi bath mere kisi bi bath pe comment na karne ki tho guys let me say you I don't trust rumours and isliye maine kuch nahi kaha...I would like to say something surely when the entire the truth is out par thab thak I don't wanna jump into conclusions reading a new artical for every day and in fact for every few hours...didn't meant to hurt anyone so yes that's it leaving for now...keep smiling it will make you look more beautiful... tata...byy byy...gn...
Edited by anumanan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
simply superb!!!
totally loved it...!
continue soon
pls update love is my life!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update so manik is jealous
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Awesome update Loved it Thanks for the pm Continue soon

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