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Aditi jain

@kewlgirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Ohh man

It was so hot

Loved it 👏

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simkapoor

@simkapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

hey di...
amazing update...
this os ws awsm...
lvd it...
it ws rocking...
finally manik realised tht he wsnt adficted to nandu bt reallly lvd hr...
it ws hot romantic n nt vulgar at same time ..
i reallly liked it...
u shud cntinue writing sch stuff...
it ws rocking...
see u soonnn wid anothr awsm cncpt...
bye tc..

manan frevr

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

oh so HOT HOT

woh finally sturbbon monster realizes angels worth

great part

please do write more

bye sumi

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Aakifa Hussain

@Aakifa_Hussain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Oh god..!!
Wow..!!
Fantastic, Fabulous, Amazing, Mind bliwing..
Oh..!!
I seriously dnt hv words..
It ws super-duperlicious Awesm..

No doubt it ws Hot..
But it ws not even an ounce vulgar..
It ws soo passionate..
Besides dis.. Story ws Excellent..
The bestest os I've ever read..
U knw dis song ws on my mind since d tym i've heard it..
N aftr reading dis song sequence in ur story I am loving dis song a li'l bit more..
As u said dat yeah dus song is super erotic..
N even in d movie it ws used as a feeling of lust..
But here in ur story..
U used it to describe a feeling of passion..
He dint wanted to lose her..
As he realised hus love for her..
Trust me m reading ur story again n again..
Still m not enough of it..
Love u for writing dis dea..

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anshika garg

@anshikagarg126

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Nice
Loved it
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
Take care
:)

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nilisha-kunnu

@nilisha-kunnu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

nice one..
the lyrics is superb...
keep writing...all d best

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Arunima

@abhutani0311

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

This Was Hott! But still.. ❤️ thanks for the PM!

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Shaya94

@Shaya94

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

loved it ...so amazing
arrogant manik only to show that he dont love her seriouly
but eventually he accept tthat he love he but agar 2 saal pehle keh deta toh situation will be something elese but ya thank god shadi se pehle keh diya sab kuch
YKW u can make this OS as SS as u can add something more in it..only if u want
i enjoyed nd loved it alot
stay blessed nd keep smiling

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kishubedi

@kishubedi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Thanks for the pm
It was an amazing os
Really enjoyed reading it
N thankfully
Manik got some senses at the end n confessed his love

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Palchinn

@Palchinn

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Posted: 9 years ago

#150

Oh my !! This is so beautiful ! Extraordinary !!
Amazing piece of work yaar!!

Kahaan se laati ho aise thoughts and imagination !! 😛 Beyond expectations !!
Loved it so soo much !!!
👏

And i loved the banner.. Its damn cute 😳

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