#2 VIVAH MANAN FF PART 12/PG 130 nt on pg 144

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aruha

@aruha

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#281

Awesome story

Read all parts in one go...

Loved your story very much

Plz cont soon

Waiting for nxt update

Stay blessed

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kalyanimyneni

@kalyanimyneni

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#282

Loved it. Both are right but at the same time nandini is correct.

Nandu jaldi mangayi... It's OK we want this only.

Waiting for the next.

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nirvisha

@nirvisha

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#283

Hey
Its beautiful part yar.. .
I mean so cleverly manik done everything ok nd than also romancing with cute nandu.. .
Its so pretty
one
Now waiting for their vacation. ...another beautiful movements.. .
So update soon plz.. .

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shivangiibajaj

@shivangiibajaj

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#284

Lovely update dear...😊

Full of manan😳😳

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manan_eku

@manan_eku

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#285

Uff di ...This was the most beautiful part you wrote ... I seriously loved it to the core ... how cute when he call a her baby. ..I just loved that part ...waiting for the farmhouse sequence...Thanks for the pm so much ..and continue soon ...

Love you
Ekuuu

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epicangel

@epicangel

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#286

Best part of the ff...
I loved it truly

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sanjana

@krazzy_parthian

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#287

res...

haye...thank u so much didu...for the shout out...really means a lot...

i will unres by tomorrow pakka...

unres

thank u...thank u...thank u so much didu...

u dont know how i was feeling to read my name over there...i wanted to stand over the table...and do dancy dancy...hehe...bt thank u soo much...u considered me too e that worth...bt all the hard work belongs to u...

the update...

i dont even have words to tell...that how beautifully u have written it...

the words and the emotions...they were flowing so smoothly...and it just touched my heart...

nandini...she wanted to forget everything...bt couldnt...

manik...uff...he was so much hurt...and repentfull...

mukti and abhi...they are so awesome...the way they guided manik...truly an experienced one hi kar sakte hain yeh...

soo...nandini was on ignoring spree...hehe...i loved it...the dress too...

the way manik respects the elders...and the way he genuinely wanted to apologise to nandu...

hahaha...unn logon ke ladai...over suitcase...srsly...they were behaving like kiddos...

haye...manik toh kinna sona munda hai...

the way he asked mukti...haye...shoo cute

ooo...rishu...samajhdaar bachcha hai...hehe...

soo...manan together alone finally...

now everyhting after this...i truly appreciate ur efforts very much...

the way nandu opened up herself...and talked bout it...i loved it..

manik's promise...

and nandu ka roothna...deadly combination...and i enjoyed reading it so much..i was literally imagining manan in that seen by visualising...

haye...rishwat kinni achi hai...

the ring was beautiful...

their first hug...

and the kiss...uff...maar dala...

i wanted to read more...par khtam hogai...huh...

this was one of the best update...(aage likhoge na...tab bhi yeh line rahegi hi rahegi...)

waiting to read more...

continue soonish...palease

LOVE

SANJANA

Edited by krazzy_parthian - 9 years ago

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Arunima

@jesse93

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#288

Yaar love it a lot,
finally everything is well in between them,
waiting eagerly for the next part.

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Swikriti

@Suku111

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#289

Awesome update. Loved it. Continue soon.

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#290

wow.

that's nice..
itss lovely. ...

manik ko mistake realise krna jaruri tha..

or Abhi ka manane ka funda to awesome nikla..
dono k apne issues the.

but nandu is also correct na..
but nandu man gyi.

chalo accha h...

m happy wid it...

n loved manan little romance. .

ab trip pr kya kyaa hoga.

waiting for it..

keep updating

waiting for next update eagerly impatiently

thanks for this beautiful update.

Thanks for pm too.

u r amazing writer.

Love Geet

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