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shaan...

@shaan...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Nice & emotional concept...
Waiting 4 d nxt update...
Continue soon...

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shaan...

@shaan...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Nice & emotional concept...
Waiting 4 d nxt update...
Plz continue soon...

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sri_valli

@sri_valli

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

superb story dear...very emotional one...waiting for next part...

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mairaallauddin

@mairaallauddin

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Awesome update

Manik truly loves nandini

Superb update

Fab update

Loved it

Loved the update

Waiting for the next part

Update the next part soon

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@navk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

awesome
loved the song prabh gill
i guess
last part was just o damn fabulous

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

wow.. just so different. . yet amazing. . loved it.. itss fab... nandini n dhruv that something very rare. dhruv is such a jerk.. n poor nandini. she is so broken.. but manik is heads heals love wid her.. n manik is there to heal her. love it.. last part was fab. LOVE it totally. .. continue soon.. Stay blessed Love Geet

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reet0143

@reet0143

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Interesting storyy...manik really loves nannduuu...thanks for the pm yr...ab jaldi update krna

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mananneetu

@mananneetu

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

it was really good..
bt manik stole my heart in this part//...cause he loved nandu selflessly...though he knew he will get pain bt still he whole heartedly accepted that pain cause it was given by his love..his nandini..!!
loved that dialogue frm ek villain.one of my fav dailogues..it really has a great meaning..!!
regarding the song..i m nt punjabi so i couldnt understand most of the words..bt i did understand the emotions of the song..!!
is it only one shot!?
plz write few more parts...how nandu fell in love..she could forgive dhruv or not..manik could bring nandu away frm darkness or not...did he become her humdard or not...etc etc..!!
hehe i know i speak a lot..
anyways it jst touched my heart
great job
thnx fr pm

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akshima1995

@akshima1995

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Awsm
Just loved it
That was really emotional
Manik's selfless love for nandini
Eagerly waiting for next update
Cont soon...

Keep smiling
N Stay Blessed 😊