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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Amazing update...
Update soon...and thnx for the pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for pm.dear

Very very interesting start.

Looking forward to seeing more.

Stay blessed dear.




Thanks.





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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Thanks 4 pm & yes update is very beautiful .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update...
Manik loves nandini so much...n he want she shld forgive druv so tht she cn freely live her life...n b happy...
Nandini thkg tht she can't love manik has she loved sum1 else...hah...
Manik so understandg... To bring nandini out of darkness he brought druv so tht she cn get her answer...
Loved it...
Waitg for next update
Tk cr
Keep smiling...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was awesome, emotional update. But loved the way you describe manik. He is so caring and understanding one. I hope this will help nandini to come out of her darkness world. Waiting for the next part. Continue soon. Tack care of yourself. Keep smiling 😊.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys ...actually I wanna tell u that this is a os ...but bcz of not getting time I couldn't complete it ...issiliye ab yaha par puri update de rahi hu ...I hope you guys like it ...ENJOY😛




Manan os - AASHIQUI




Manik was driving and nandani was sitting beside him ...she was just looking outside the window ...she is in deep thought ...


Nandani Pov :

Life ...log kehte ha ki jab pyar hota ha ...toh aapki life magical ho jatti ha ...voh aapko itni khushiyan deta ha ki aap apne aapko sabse special feel karne lagte ho ...par ...meri zindagi... main pyar aaya par uss pyar ko meri kadar hi naa thi ...shayad ...main hi badkismat hu ...yaa shayad kissi ke pyar ke laayak nahi ...kyunki hoti toh shayad esa naa hota mere saath ...aaj jab manik ko dekha toh mujhe apne liye dard aur pyar nazar aaya...shayad issiliye maine usse yaha se bahar nikalne ko kaha ...main usse mana kar kar usss darkness main nahi bhejhna chahti thi jaha main khud hu ...pyar karta ha voh mujhse...par nahi jaanta ki main kissi se pyar nahi kar paaungi ...kyunki pyar toh bas ek hi baar hota ha naa ...aur voh ...voh toh maine kar liya ...toh kya hua ki mera pyar adhura reh gaya ...toh kya hua iss pyar ne mujhe dard ke alawa kuch nahi diya ...toh kya hua ussne mujhe ek esi andheri galliyon main chod diya jahan se vapas aana namunkin ha ...par maine toh usse pyar kiya ha naa ...sacche dill se ...aur shayad issiliye aaj usse hate bhi sacche dill se hi karti hu ...par ek sawal jiska jawab mujhe jaanana ha ...WHY ME? WHY U LEFT ME? WHY U BROKE ME? WHY U SAID THAT U LOVE ME ? WHY U ALWAYS CARE FOR ME WHEN U WANT TO LEFT ME? WHY? shayad in sawalo ke jawab mujhe kabhi nahi milege ...I just hate him ...hate him from the core of my heart ...


A lone tear came from her eyes ...manik who was just looking at her ...observing her ...knows how she must be feeling but he needs to heal her ...to tell her ...he is always be with her through it didn't effect her much but it gives her relief ...
Maybe an assurance that someone is there who just love her ...without any condition just love her ...who doesn't want anything just smile which left her face from five years ...he wants to give her that smile back ...he stops the car ...that breaks her trance ...she come out of the thought and looked at the place ...who is looking like a hill ...she looked at manik


Nandani confusingly said : why are we here


Manik smiled and said : To get some answers ...


He get down of the car ...makes her to come outside ...


Nandani coldly said : kya keh rahe ho tum ...hosh main toh ho ...


Manik smiled bcz he expect this ...he cupped her face and lovingly said


Manik lovingly said : ANDHERA KO ANDHERA NAHI SIRF ROSHNI MITA SAKTI HA ...NAFRAT KO NAFRAT NAHI SIRF PYAR MITA SAKTA...JAB TAK USSE NAFRAT KAROGI KHUDKO TAKLIF HI DOGI ...USE MAAF KAR DO TAAKI AAGE BADD SAKO ISS ZINDAGI MAIN ...JAANTA HU KEHNA AASAN HA ...AUR KARNA MUSHKIL ...par karna hoga tumhe yeh ...apne liye ...maa papa ke liye ...amms ke liye ...apni friend ke liye jo bahot pyar karti ha tumse ...mere liye jo tumhe ese nahi dekh sakta ...koshish karo nandani ...problem se bhagna uska solution nahi hota ...uska solution usse face karna hota ha ...baat karo nandani ...please jo bhi ha nikal do ...jitna dard ha usse bahar nikal do taaki khushi paa sako tum ...jiski hak daar ho tum ...


Nandani was just looking at him in shock ...she didn't understand what was happening ...why he is saying like this ...suddenly she saw someone is standing in the hill ...his back is facing towards them...nandani couldn't believe in her eyes ...all just could she managed to say


Nandani shockingly said : Druv ...


Druv turned around and looked at them ...tears were flowing from her eyes ...the memories just started flashing ...she is not able to stand ...manik holds her hand and said


Manik : Go and get ur answers ...


Nandani looked with tearfully eyes ...he kissed her forehead and wiped her tears and make her go ...


Manik Pov :

I promised you Nandani to get u out of this darkness and this is the only way to get u out of this darkness ...this is the only way u get peace ...this is the only way you get ur smile back ...my love is not my weakness nandani ...my love is for you is my strength ...that strength makes me ...force me to do this ...I want ur happiness Nandani ...just ur happiness ...I love u Nandani ...I love u a lot ...

Manik left from there ...nandani looked at druv ...Druv came towards her and tryed to hug her to which nandani show her hand

Nandani coldly said : vahi ruk jao ...dare not to come close to me ...u lost all the rights ...

Druv : Nandani ...kaisi ho tum ...

Nandani said in stern voice : zinda hu ...

Druv : Please ese mat bolo ...I knew whatever I did was wrong ...but nandu ...

Nandani angrily said: don't u dare call me that ...yeh hak maine sirf apne apno ko hi diya ha ...aur ab tum mere apne nahi ho ...aaj sirf tumse ek baat jaanani ha kyu kiya tumne voh sab ...kyu chodkar gaye tum ...bollo kyu kiya

She grabbed his colar ...to which druv looked at her furiously and take her hands off ...

Druv loudly said : bcz I want money ...aur tumse shaadi kar kar mujhe kya milta ...kuch bhi nahi ...bcz of ur so called ethics...Druv tumhe self depended hona chahiye ...Druv u should give some interview ...Druv yeh druv voh ...pagal ho gaya tha main ...arre maine shaadi ke liye haa ki taaki tumhari property mil jaaye ...par shaadi valle din pata chala ki tu toh apni saari property trust main de rahi ho ...toh kya karta tujhse shaadi kar haa ...main...

Before he could say anything Nandani give him a tight slap ...and angrily said

Nandani angrily said : u knew what tujh jaisa insaan maafi ke layak hi nahi ha ...accha hua tune mujhe chod diya varna meri zindagi barbad ho jaati ...Thank you Mr. Druv vedant for leaving me ...u knew now am just hating myself for loving a person like u ...who was nothing but a jerk ...who doesn't care anyone feelings ...u just want money ...am happy ki manik mujhe yaha le kar aaya at least ab main apni life main aage bhad paaungi ...now u didn't matter me anymore ...I want a closure taaki main apni life main move on kar paaun aur aaj mujhe voh mil gaya ...now good bye Mr. Vedant ...hope never see u again ...aur ek aur baat tu ek no. Ka ghatiya...
kamina...ha...jo apni selfishness ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta ha ...aur main jaanti hu aaj bhi tu yaha issiliye aaya hoga kyunki main ek rock star hu ...par ab I will make sure ...ki teri life hell bana du ...taaki tu kabhi kissi dusri ladki ke saath esa naa kar paaye ...bloody jerk ...

Nandani left from there ...she was hurt ...she was broken ...but she was at peace ...manik was right ...bcz sometime we needs closure if we didn't get we just moved towards the darkness ...and nandani she get her closure now ...she knows now where ger life belongs to ...manik ...manik who always be with her in every situation ...in every moment ...who just want nothing but her happiness ...she moves towards the church ...where they meet first time ...


CHURCH-

Manik was sitting in front of jesus ...he was just looking at him without blinking ...his eyes were filled with tears ...

Manik Pov :

God maine thik kiya naa ...aap hi kehte ho naa jisse aap pyar karo usse uss duniya ki saari happiness de do ...maine bhi pyar kiya ...beintehaa pyar ...toh kya hua mujhe voh pyar nahi mila ...par kam se kam main apne pyar ke chehre par sukun ...kam se kam usse uss andhere se toh bahar nikal saka ...jaaha khud ko ked kar kar rakha tha usne ...jaanta hu nahi reh paaunga uske bina ...par uski uss halat ko dekh kar bhi jee nahi pata main...kitna badkismat hu main apne hi pyar ko kissi dusre ko de aaya ...bas ab yeh hi wish ha meri ki uski smile uske chehre se kabhi naa jaaye ...kyunki uski khushi hi meri khushi ha ...uska gam mera gam ...usse har khushi dena ...ho sake toh meri hisse ki bhi ...

Suddenly a voice came from behind

Voice: Toh de dii usse khushi ...kho diya naa usse ...

Manik turned and saw cabir who was angrily looking at him

Manik : Cabir tu ...tu yaha kya kar raha ha ...mera matlab tujhe kaise ...

Cabir : GUNEHGAAR HAMESHA VAHI LOTTAH HA JAHA USNE GUNHAA KIYA HO AUR AASHIQ HAMESHA VAHI LOTTAH HA JAHA USNE AASHIQUI KI HO ...AUR TU TOH AASHIQ HA ...EK ESA AASHIQ JO APNI KHUSHIYON KO BHI HASTE HASTE kURBAAN KAR KAR AAYA HA ...PAANCH SAAL PEHLE ISSI JAGAH PAR USSE DEKHA THA ...AUR EK VOH DIN HA AUR EK AAJ KA DIN ...TUNE APNI KHUSHIYON KI TOH PARVAH KI HI NAHI ...ARRE KAHA GAYA VOH MANIK JO KEHTA THA KI USKE LIYE KUCH BHI IMPOSSIBLE NAHI HA ...KAHA GAYA VOH MANIK JISKE EK ISSHARE PAR DUNIYA USKE KADMO MAIN HOTI HA ...MANIK ESA MAT KAR ...APNI KHUSHIYON KO KISSI DUSRE KI JHOLI MAIN MAT DAAL ...NAHI DEKH PAAUNGA MAIN TUJHE TUTTE HUA YAAR ...MAT KAR ESA ...MAT KAR ...

Manik : Cabir ...MAINE USSE PYAR KIYA HA ...JISSE AAP PYAR KARTE HO ...AAPKE LIYE USKI KHUSHI SE IMPORTANT KUCH BHI NAHI HOTA ...MERE LIYE USKI KHUSHI KE AAGE KUCH BHI MAAYNE NAHI RAKHTA ...AUR JAHA TAK MERI KHUSHI KI BAAT TOH MERI KHUSHI USKI KHUSHI SE HA ...KYUNKI MERI AASHIQUI BAS USS SE HI HA ...TU PHIKAR MAT KAR MAIN THIK HU ...BAS THODA TIME LAGEGA PAR SAMAJH JAUNGA ...MERI NANDANI MERI ZINDAGI HA ...AUR USKI KHUSHI MERI ...

Voice came from behind

Voice : Agar main kahu ki meri khushi bas tum hi ha...

Manik and cabir turned and saw nandani who was having tears in her eyes ...they were shocked to see her over there bcz they didn't expect this ...but nandani who listened there conversation was shocked happy at least she found someone in this world who can hold her whenever she fall ...who can do anything for her happiness ...she ran towards manik and hugged her tightly ...and cried ...manik who was shocked but when she hugged him ...he came out of the shock at rubbed her back to calm her down ...

Manik : Nandani ...bacha ...relax ...kya hua ...please batao ...why are u crying baby ...

But nandani was just crying didn't said anything ...that makes manik worried ...he broke the hug and wiped her tears and lovingly said

Manik : Nandani Please batao kya hua

Nandani : am sorry manik am really sorry ...main bahot buri hu naa ...itne saalo se tum mujhse itna pyaar karte rahe aur main ...main bas apne main hii ...please maaf kar do manik ...main ...main tumhare iss pyar ke laayak nahi hu ...nahi hu iss pyar ke laayak main ...mat karo itna pyaar mujhse manik mat karo ...

Manik was shocked by listening all this from nandani ...

Manik : Nandani ...esa kyu keh rahi ho ...u knew u r the most amazing person in this world ...aur kisne kaha ki tum buri ho ...arre tum toh itni acchi ho ki mujh jaise ek heartless insaan ko bhi pyaar karna sikha diya ...please chup ho jao ...

Nandani wiped her tears and smiled a little ...manik too smiled looking at her smiling face ...

Nandani : Manik ...life main bahot kam logo ko second chance milta ha ...aur shayad main lucky hu jo mujhe voh chance mila ha ...manik ...I wanted to give life a chance ...I wanted to love a chance ...but with u ...kya tum mera saath doge ...

Manik eyes were filled with tears but this time these tears were happiness ...

Manik smiled : I would love too ...

Nandani smiled and hugged him ...he too hugged her back but there was someone who gave blessing to them ...there god who says
MANIK KI AASHIQUI NANDANI SE HI😉

THE END!!!

So how's it ...I hope you guys like it ...sachi batao toh ...I don't knew what I write ...please maaf kar dena agar aacha naa laga ho ...and if u guys like it toh likes or comment Jarur karna ...actually I write this end on yesterday night but couldn't get time to post it ...toh bas abhi time laga ha ...issiliye post kar rahi hu ...love u all guys
Take care
Keep loving
Keep smiling
And
Keep shining For Ur loved ones
Love
Diya😛
Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Awesome
Loved it
Beautiful ending
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Awesome update with an happy ending note.loved it to core.manbir's convo was fab.manan's convo was amazing. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
its nice!!...dhruv is disgusting!!...

u end it beautifully!!...

loved it!!...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very beautiful OS Diyuuu
Try more and more when you finish your exams
Thanks for the pm
Take care stay blessed

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