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Posted: 9 years ago
hey plz update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
Di where are you
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
muje nhi pta tha u uploaded
so cute chappy
luv d fights btwn nandu n jack
dey r such kiddos
n d fight btwn manan is also cute
w8in for manik's bbday
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Posted: 9 years ago
wud luv 2 c d mini fight btwn
manik n his dad
precap is gud

n ya sry
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mtlb 17 chappys
n u hit d 5th thread
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Posted: 9 years ago
Manik ka brday...cant wait now...update soon... 😊
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Hey I never got pm I am upset for chapter 17 but still loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: devilkhushi

Hey I never got pm I am upset for chapter 17 but still loved it


There is no need to e upset dear cuz i haven't sent pms yet think before u write honey read the description 'PmsLater' sothat means on weekend
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Posted: 9 years ago
Your ff are the best dear. Beautifully penned i just love reading it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
When will u pst nxt prt u said u will pst this weekend bt ab to vo bhi gya ab to pst lr dp plz waiting eagerly to read
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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 18 A


Manik's POV..


Finally we reached Home..! Mumbai..! For the first time as husband as wife..! We were going to enter our house..! We were about to step in when..!


"Manik Sir..! Wait a second..!"Mohan's Wife Simi came and stopped us..


"What happened Simi?"I asked curiously..


"Its' Nandini Maam's first visit after marriage..! Greh Parwaish and aarti is compulsory..!"She was such a sweetheart..!


"Yes..! Though we are your servants Sir..! But it's our duty to fulfill all rasams..!"Mohan spoke and I was overwhelmed while Nandini was in tears..!


"Awww...! You both are so cute...!"Alya exclaimed from behind and all smiled..! Then Simi did aarti..! Teeka..! And then the rice ritual...! During all this Nandini didn't left my hand...! Not even for a second..! Then Simi placed the red liquid and Nandini stepped in..!


"Welcome..! MR and MRS Malhotra..!"Mohan and Simi spoke together..! And


"Welcome FAB5..!" All clapped and we smiled..! Then we all sat in lounge for coffee..!


"Umm Manik..! Ap ko office ni jana?"Suddenly Nandini asked and I look at her astonished..


"You want me to go to office?"I was shocked...

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Nandini's POV...


Aiyooo Manii office nahi jayen gay tou how will I prepare for the surprise...! Luckily Tiger Bhai spoke..


"Haan na Manik..! Guys..! You all forgotten? Hmy new client say milny jana hai..!"HE rescued me..!


"Ohh yes..! We forgot..! Lets go..! Baby don't you dare to skip the meal..! Jaldi so jana don't wait for me I will be late..!"He said lovingly to me and left after pecking my forehead..!

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"Mam..! What kind of help you need from us? Why you asked me to cancel all the preparations you ordered for?"Mohan Dada asked as soon as everyone left for work..!


"Because I want to do everything by my own..!"I said happily and Dada simply nodded..! "Dada ap jaoa..! Go and have fun with Simi Didi..! I will do everything by myself..!"I said and after a little argument Dada left..!


"Ok Mr.Malhotra..! Time to plan a simple sa choto sa surprise for you..!"I spoke to myself and began the preparations..! First of all I called Manik..


"Haan baby?"Manik asked in a hurry as soon as he attended my call he must be very busy..


"I need advance..!"I spoke in a sudden voice..


"Hain?"Maybe he was surprised..


"Aray I am your secretary na so I need my salary..! Advance main..!"I explained..


"But why you need that mere salary when you have my gold credit card?"He was very much shocked..


"Manik..! When I said that I need it that means I need my salary end of discussion..! I need it in half hour..!"I said sternly and ended the call..! I knew he will send me the money within 30 minutes and as expected salary was here at 29th minute..! Then I started all my preparations..! Though the money was not enough for a grand party but it was more than enough for the things I wanted..! With the tick tick of clock time passed and finally it was 11:45 pm..!


"Come soon Manik..!"I whispered dreamily after giving a last glance to my preparations..!

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Manik's POV..


After meeting the investor Tiger,Max and Jack left. It was night now so me and Cabir drove back to office to finish some pending files..! During this Nandini called me for salary I wonder what was cooking in her head..


"Buddy you go..! I will join you I have some work..!"Cabir said as we parked in the parking and I came up to my office..! As soon as I opened the door of my Cabin the person I saw made me frown..


"Good evening my darling Son..!"Dad spoke in his usual attitude filled tone and I sighed..


"Why are you here?"I asked crossing my arms on my chest..


"I am here to talk..! A friendly talk..!"He said sarcastically..


"And If I would say that I am not at all interested then?"I too said with the same tone and he laughed a little..!


"You have to be interested son..! As you know it's the matter of your love and friends..!"He was so cruel..


"I am very well aware of the game you played with my friends..! So now don't even dare to fool me..!"I shouted furiously..


"Relax son..! Don't shout already..!"He said in a calm tone and his calmness was giving me goosebumps..!


"What do you want?"I asked as I wanted him to leave..


"Simple..! Leave that s**ty wife of yours..!"Dad spit out the cruelest words and I fumed with anger..


"Don't you dare to speak any ill about my wife..!"I yelled on top of my voice I felt like punching him right away..!


"Manik..! Come on don't be an emotional fool..!"Dad was giving me 'advises'...


"Shutup..! I don't wanna see your face Dad..! Get out of my office right now..! And yeah..! Nandini is my wife..! I am not gonna leave her..! Never ever..! She is the only family I have..!"I shouted as loud as I could..


"Oh really family? Manik Malhotra she is just behind your money..!"He spoke again..


"Enough..! One more word against her and you will face my worst Dad..! You know me very well don't you..!"I yelled again..


"Don't raise your voice..! I am your Dad..!"He too shouted...


"Dad..? What kind of Dad are you? You can never be my Dad..! Never ever...! Aray Dad tou kya ap tou insaan tak kehlany kay lyk nahi hain..! A person like you is not more then a shame for me..!"I was spitting out the anger I had for him..


"You will regret Manik..! Now no one..! No one can save your friends and your wife from my curse..!"He spoke furiously and started walking outside..


"Do whatever you want..! Am not afraid of you..!"I too was so much angry and he left...! As soon as he left Cabir came in and I narrated him everything..!


"Relax bro..! Everything will be ok..!"He said patting my back and I nodded..! I need to see Nandini now..! Yeah..!


"Cabir..! I am going home..! Tu sambhaal laina..!"I said hell tired and frustrated..! Then I drove back..! Too much traffic..! I got stuck in traffic for atleast two hours..! I hate Mumbai because of traffic jams..! On my way I bought fresh red roses for Nandini..! The time I reached home it was 11:55 pm..! I entered the house and all lights were off..!


Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 9 years ago

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