Manan FF- 'More dn Frnzzz' # Chptr 5 updtd - Page 6

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CHAPTER 5A:

In Cafe:
Nandu went leaving cavya in cfe..

Cabir- Navuu !! Tumhe nhi lgta nandu ka behaviour thoda weird h?? Kbhi dekha nhi use itna tensed kisike liye xcpt Avengers...

Navya- U r rite cabir!!! Tmne dekha woo kitnaa pareshaan thi manik ko lkr...

Cab smiles- Khi use...!!@

Navu (cut him in middle)- R u serius!!?? Nhi yar i think hum zyda hi soch rhe hn..Let it be..Acha h na nandu ko ek new frnd mil gya h...

At night:
Cavya and Nandu'sphone convo:

Nandu- Guyss!! Kuch socha , ki kya krenge hm manik ko normal krne kelye??

Navya- Yr nandu hume kuch smjh nhi aa rha..Sb kuchtry kr chuke hn hum...

Cabir- Are navuu!! Dont think negtive...kuch na kuch zroor smjh ajayega..!

Nandu- Wat about Music??Music use heel kr skta h..!!.

Cabir- Noo chance!!! Usne tb se music chod diyah...wo bhut nervous hojata h or restless b agr ab wo perform krta h to..!.

Navya- Wt about Picnic??!

Nandu- Bad idea!!! Hum gye the na beech ..but wo esehi chup chap sa tha..!

Cabir- Guyzz kuch es socho jisse use frnzz ki importance pta chle...wo firse kisi pe trust kr ske.!.

Nandu- Lets prty inhouse...I mean wt about House party???.

Navya- Nyc idea..!!kuch games khelenge..k doosre ko smjhenge to may be uska b dhyan hatt jaye whan se..!!

Cabir- Yup awsm plan..lets do it..to kal clg me we'll talk about dis..ok...

Nand- Grt..Abhi tum dono apni privacy enjoy karo..tada..gnt
Cavya- Gnt..

Morning time:
In canteen:

Mukti- Guys aj no lectures...teacers ki meeting h about coming functns..

Navya- (lkng at nandu) yr guys aj ka pln kya h fr?
Nandu nd cbir undrstnds wt she wants to say.. (dis is fr mnk..)!!

Alya- yes yaar borng sa shedule hogya h..lts hv fun tonight..khn chle fr..
Mukti (gvng a pleedng luk to nandu)...

Nandu- hn hn mkti me smjh gyi.. ajaynge bhai bhi..tension na le..
(Evryone laughs at mkti)...

Nandu- guyss wthat about House party at my place??
Dhruv- Very nice idea!!!

Mnk- No Guys..lts have dinnr tonite at my place..wt say!!??

Cabir nd navya get shked aftr listning him..Nandu luks them srprisngly..!!

Cabir to nandu (slowly)- Yr ise blkl pasnd nhi h iske ghr koi b jaye to...Infct me jb isse milne jata hu tb bahr wait krta hu..Isse full space chahiye hta h iski prsonel life me...

Nandu- R u sure mnk? i mean u really dont mind naif we come at ur place(lykng at mnk)...

Manik- of course not..m inviting u naguys..we r frnz afterall... :)

CHAPTER 5B:

Nandu, cabir, navya luks him in shok..
Mnk (smiling at nandu)- I trst u .. (then turns his face to others and say)-i trst u guys...

Nandu smiles at him..
Manik- So its final..party at my place.. cabir will pick up u guys..ok meet u dn..So i hv to leave coz abhi shift hua hu to ghr ki halt b thik krni hgi na..

(Mnk belngs to rich family.. as he is shiftedfrom delhi..so he is lvng in his farm house in mumbai..)!!

At mnk's place..around @7 pm:

Door bell rings..an old man opens d door..
Nandu- Kaka manik h? me uski frn..

Kaka- Aao beta.. baba apne room me hn ap betho me bula lata hu..

Nandu- Nhi kaka its ok..me chli jati hu..khan h uska room??..

kaka shows her direction of mnk's room and she reaches dere..knock knock!!!

Manik- kaka kya hua!!?.. mene kha tha na apko ki mjhe kuch der akele rehna h..Aap dnnr ki tyari kro mere frnz ate honge..

Nandu ( opens d door nd come inside) - Ooh to Mr.Malhotra ko akele rehna psnd h??

Mnk suddenly turn his face nd luks
at her..she is lukng soo pretty in green nd black salwar kameez..

He stares at her continusly for sm tym..(Nandu coughs)..manik comes out from his wrld nd stand up..

Manik- Ooh hii..srry i thought ki kaka honge...come inside..baaki sb kh h!??
Nandu- Relax manik...!!wse ye mere question ka ans nh hua..!!

Manik- Nandni...d'nt u think tum bhut questns puchti ho!!

Nandu- And manik d'nt u think ki tum kisi b ques ka answr nhi dete..

Dey both strts laughing..Nandu luks at him..he is laughing like a kid..

Nandu- Tum na humesha hnste rha kro manik..it suits u..

Manik- Agr koi reasn na ho to?!

Nandu- Khush rhne ke liye kbhi kisi reason ki jrurt nhi hti mnk.. reason chahiye hota h sad hne ke lye..and m sure ki wo reason tumhare pas h..tbh tm itte sad rhte ho..esa kya hua h mnk..u cn tell me..

Manik- Oo!! cm on nandini ...or i cn say miss detctive doll.. esa kch nh h..tm itta mt socho..wse btaya nh tmne kh h bki sb?!!?

Nandu- Yeah!! cbir messgd me ur adrss nd tell me to come here myself coz teeno couples ko aane me thoda late hoga.. I hope u d'nt mind..?

Manik- ooh noo.. d'nt be soo formal.. comei'll show u my place..

Manik nd nandu walks in gardn and having small chit chats..then they come in hall nd nandu walks towards kitchn..

Manik- kitchn me ku jaa rhi ho? If u r feeling hungry so let me call kaka he'll serve us..
Nandu- Noo buddhu..m not feelng hungry..iwant to cook smthing...

Mknik (srprised)- U knw hw to cook?!!??
Nandu- yeah!! blkl.. I m a gud cook!..

Manik- yeah!! may be u are.. but not more then me.. :)

Nandu- oo really...so, Mr Malhotra.. lets have competition..wat say?!!
Manik- ok done!!.. :)

Dey both starts arranging dere stuffs for dere respective dishes.!.

Manik is gonna cook manchurian nd nandu makes noodles..
Aftr 30 min they done with there dishes...
Manik- M done..So taste it.. :)

Nandu (taste krke) - umm!!! really its delicious.. now ur turn.. :)

Manik- srry i cnt.. i dont wanna go hspital.!! ;)

Nandu ( hits him playfully nd makes puppyface)
Manik luks at her (smiling) - ok ok!! srry i taste it..(taste krke) ooh!!! wooaa not bad..infact aaj ka dinnr tum hi bnao.!!..

Nandu lks at him ..he is litrelly hppy..he is talkng..he is laughing. ,,:)

Nandu-Manik at dinner table..eating dere dishes..nd nandu talks to him continuously..she tells him evrything about her family, hr hobbies etc etc..

Manik- Nandni itna stamina kha se lati ho tm.??.i mean iti bak bak..(strsts teasing hr)!!!

Nandu- oo hlo!! Mr.!! me bk bk nh kr rhi.. Ab kya kruna..mje compny hi itni borng milih.. i mean itni cute ldki uske sath bethi h and wo kuch bol hi nhi rha. :(
Manik laughs at her point..

Mnik- u knw wat..u r funny!! tmhare sath koi chup or sad nhi beth skta..

Nandu - Achaa!! Fr to tumhe hmesha mere sth rhna chahye.. Tm b hansna seekh jaoge..(itna khke wo khdi hokr hand wash krne jatih and manik continuously use dkhta h..)

Mnk POV:
How? How can dis girl be soo slfless, so full of life..she is like a cute littel angel

(Sddenly his thoughts break and his xprssns changes..sddnly he becmes super angry on himslf..dt how can he think dt about her.. she is a grl..may be mjhe ispr trust nhi krnachahye..nhi to ye b whi kregi jo soha ne kiya)..
"He starts shouting I hate u..i hate u.."Nandu runs to him nd hold him - Mnk wt hppn???(Mnk jerks her hand and her hand hits with a table nd starts bleedng)

Manik- Go away..just go away..!!! i d'nt trust u..i dn't love u.. jst leave me alone..
(Nandu is in shok..she thinks ki shayd manik use soha smjh rha h)

Nandu (tryng to calm him down)- Manik manik!!! relax..its me nandu!!wat happn to u.?? am nandini..not soha..Calm down manik..!!

(By listning her words he comes out of his suddn attack and luks at her surprisngly..)
Mnk- Hw do u knw abt soha?!!

Nandu pov:
Oh shitt!! ye mene kya kehdya... ab kya xcuse bnau? ise pta lg gya to cabir ko chodega nhi ye or fir cabir mjhe...oh god!! kya karu ab?!!

So guyss thats it for now!!..To kya kregi ab nandu??? socho socho... ;

Wow yaar amazing update..i hope manik il cum out of ths trauma soon...nd strt trustng nandu...aap nandu kya karonge...il w8 nd watch...continue soon...

Nyc ... really loved it... I hope nandu will be able to help man. ..

nice update

Thanks for pm
I really like how manik is slowly opening up
I think Nandu will lie to him that he was himself saying Soha lol

Uff !! Where wre uh ??