#3//Lips Do Lie//Ch 14 on pg 140 & link for THREAD 4 on pg 1

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aishaph

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Posted: 9 years ago

#191

Amazing update
Too filmy
Nandu always creates problems for manik
Loved it

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pravidya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#192

wow awesome update nandu hug after shot was nice manik fight was too filmy poor nandu she wants to help him but in the process she hits him poor manik to protect her he is doing so much now finally nandu understood that escape was a bad idea waiting for next updates u are an awesome writer how come u will get these brilliant ideas

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vaastha31

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Posted: 9 years ago

#193

Well..yup it was thoda fimly
But seriously enjoyed it
Their is much to know more in the story
Cont soon

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Nitol1991

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Posted: 9 years ago

#194

I m in luv wt ur stories dear

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MahimaSankhla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#195

Thanks again for a mind blowing update...Har baar, baar- baar kaise kar leti ho?? U make us crave for more n more.. I loved this part.. Pehle aim phir shoot n den worrying whether i'm alive or not...Aww.. it was super sweet..

I think Manik is some under cover agent..smthg like tht.. Still so mch mystery to be unfold..

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sunshine_013

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Posted: 9 years ago

#196

Amazing update... Loved d hope of our Ms Murthy... 😉 n full on tashan movie it is... fun to read d story... 😛 😳 n luv d unique characteristic in ur story n dat is impulsive manik n nandini 😛 😃 😳... luvd d update. Thnx 😛 Update sooonish. . Cnt wait to knw who is manik exactly in d story as dis is sure dat he isnt a criminal 😉

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LoveIsManan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#197

I really loved it ..
the way Manik always uses his sarcasm around her is a treat to watch...

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Cooldude101

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Posted: 9 years ago

#198

This is so adventurous. With each update something new pops up.
One update I think he works for the intelligence and is undercover the next I feel he is a criminal.
I don't know what will happen next but this will be one hell of a ride for sure.
Next update soon please

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Fatheen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#199

Finally read the chapter ..., omg this was fantastic. . It really looked like a movie ... but who was that man who was hearing nandu's dad convo .. Ulf Ulf so much mysteries. .. but loving it ., the best was end part ,

Sorry for the small comment .. he'll busty with assignments . ..

Lots and lots of love mmmuuuaahh

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mananneetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#200

yaar ur updates are getting better nd better day by day...
i feel i m watching a bollywood masala movie...
i seriously enjoyed reading it
nd mein toh continously hass rahi thi... 🤣
jo bhi ho i know manik is nt wrong..isilye whatever nandu does to escape i find it reqlly funny..i mean the one who is saving her she is running away frm him...!!!
i loved that section when nandu fired...gosh..kya kya karti hain yeh manik ki nandu..!! manik ko kuch hojata toh!!!
nandu ke pass kaha se aata hain itna intelligence.. 😉
nd then that action sequence mein toh nandu ne had hi kardi..i mean manik ko help karrahi thi ya usse badla lerahi thi...hehe..it was so funny..nd u described action sequence really good...i was like imagining manik doing all the stunts../..
nd phir woh last part toh was my fav..i was really missing romantic manan...manik kyun nahi bata raha nandu ko ...!?
i guess manik is like some secret agent..on a secret mission..!! 😆
jo bhi ho i cant wait fr nxt part
update soon
doing great job

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