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CHAPTER 28-MY LIFE...

MANIK P.O.V-

After boarding the flight I took my seat which was a Window seat and as usual mobile phones switched off...damn I wish I could just talk to her through out...I'm already missing her...

Shit..how I'm gonna survive without her there in Delhi...

Delhi...for me now it was just a place..A place I'm visiting to meet my Father...

It was my home when I had my mom there...but now it is just a place...

The place I come from it suffocates me..there is no freedom no independence..all my life I've seen people following the same old way of living..Delhi has my all sort of memories from bliss to sulk..Bliss of having all the Love I got from my mother and sulk of seeing that she never got that love back...My Dad has been a dominating Man in his life and now he is also the reason I lost my Mom and My Grandfather but I can't loose my life My Love to his Greed...

He is a kind of Man who will just Need you and use for his own benefits and I very well know it's same reason he is calling me back..if it wouldn't have been My Moms last promise I wouldn't see his face ever again in my life...

I've to protect Nandini from him now...I can't let him know the reason behind my stay in Mumbai!!


I can't loose her again..again for same reasons!!

6 months back..when my Grandfather was having his last breaths..my father called me back not because of my grandfather but for his property which was on my name and now I know the reason is same...

I lost my mom like this..I lost my grandfather like this..but I won't lose my love like this...

The only person who brings me happiness without taking anything from me..but just me...

The reason I'm ready yo give my life to wait for her...


Because I know she is the one who can make me smile and put me at ease by just being there..beside me...

I miss you My Love...

I miss her smile..I miss her poker face..I miss her pout..I miss her hugs..I miss her warmth when she sleeps over me..I miss her kisses..I miss her...

But than its life..where nothing is perfect..and do we need to be?? NO It's perfect with its imperfections...

And wesse bhi Perfect life ko nazar nhi lag jayegi??


Everyone is about living and loving...

Your life won't be perfect with 6 digit salary..but it can be perfect if you become a part of someone's life..that part that without you there story will be incomplete...


Life is not about a luxurious apartment its about making someone smile...because Trust me no luxury can make smile brighter than making someone smile...

And I want to be someone's story..I want to make someone smile..just because I'm selfish..because I know that..That someone's story will be my story..that someone's smile will be my smile...


And the best part is I know I've found my someone...

And I can't loose her..

How can I loose her when I've been losing everyone I love..but not her..as not only I love her but she is My Love...


I don't why it is like I feel like there is a need to be with her that without her I'll break again..break again and then there will be no possibility about restoring myself!!

The first I met her was the first I had came Mumbai the first time I had came out of house after I lost my mother...

And than it was the vibes around her which restored me!!


She unknowingly filled a place within me which was vacant!!


And that day I was Me again who wanted to live life in place of living with life...


And slowly that definition changed I not only wanted to live life..but it was her with whom I wanted to live my life!!

But again my destiny screwed it...but not again not now!!

Never!!

Main rahoon ya na rahoon
Tum mujh mein kahin baaki rehna...

No matter if I'm with you or you are not with me..but you will be always somewhere within me...

Mujhe neend aaye jo aakhiri
Tum khwabon mein aate rehna...

With Naked eyes I'll see you..but once I'm asleep you will be there in my dreams...

Bas itna hai tumse kehna..


And that's all I wanna say to you...


Main rahoon ya na rahoon
Tum mujhme kahin baaki rehna...


Kisi roz baarish jo aaye
Samajh lena boondon mein main hoon...

If it rains I'll be drops of rain touching you...

Subah dhoop tumko sataaye
Samajh lena kirno mein main hoon...

And if it's the sunlight playing with you..than I'm the Sun rays touching you...

Kuch kahun ya na kahun
Tum mujhko sata sunte rehna...

No matter if I say or not..just keep listening to me...just like your heartbeat...

Bas itna hai tumse kehna..

Kabhi dil se gaya hi nahi
Hawaaon mein lipta hua main
Guzar jaaunga tumko chhu ke...

I've never left you alone...I'm always there with you..in the wind following around you..Playing with you...

Agar mann ho to rok lena
Thehar jaaunga in labon pe...

And if you wish just stop me..and I'll be there in your lips in your breath..

Main dikhu ya na dikhu
Tum mujhko mehsoos karna..

No matter if you can see me or not..just feel me and I'll be there...

Bas itna hai tumse kehna
Hmm..
Bas itna hai tumse kehna
Main rahun ya na rahun
Tum mujh mein kahin baaki rehna...
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PART B-

//12 am//DELHI AIRPORT-


Like finally after I landed and everything the first thing I did was switch On my phone and send a quick message to My Love...

"Reached Delhi..already Missing you..Love you My Love..Good Night❤️"

I know it was quite late but still I wanted to text her hoping she was asleep by now..but the moment I got a cab and settled in..I got her text..

"Missing you too..take care take rest..come back soon...Good Night 😊"


I smiled at her text very well knowing now that she was actually waiting for my text...

I looked out of the window and Delhi was already freezing with its icy temperature...and the moment I heard my teeth greeting this temperature I smiled and closed the window...


Thanks to nights low traffic o reached my house in next 15 minutes...

I paid the driver and rolled my luggage into the Mansion in front me!!


It's not just a mansion but a place a building I hate the most...

Once in I saw the lights were already off that means everyone was asleep more like fast asleep as according to My dad you should be in your bed at sharp 10 pm no matter what..even if your own son is visiting you...

I sighed and went to my room turning On the lights and for once I was satisfied that nothing was changed in my room at least...

The black bed..red curtains black wardrobe My Guitar My Football collection my set of trophies and the Big Photo frame above right in front wall with a picture of My mom and the little me which was taken some 8 years back!!


I sighed and settling my luggage decided to take some rest...

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PART C-

*MORNING*


Next morning I woke up with a constant buzzing of my phone below my pillow...I tapped my hands reaching for my phone yet with closed my eyes...once i found it..I turned around on my back pushing myself up settling on headboard...

I rubbed my eyes with back of my palm...and than I saw my phone still ringing...which a brought a morning smile on my face...

I swiped the screen and placed phone in the crock of my neck balancing it with my ear..and stretched my arms still with A Smile...

Me-Good Morning My Sunshine!!!

And than I heard her melodic voice...

Nandini-Good Morning Mr.Kidnapper!!

Me-hmm...so how's my Love??
Nandini-umm..I'm missing you manik...

And I could already imagine her biting her lips...


Me-Wesse..I'm missing you tooo..but do tell me if I'm good Mr.Thief too??
Nandini-Thief??..but what did you steal??

I chuckled hearing her confused...

Me-Aree..my one and only dream is too steal your herat..so tell me am I successful?

And than there was a silence..a peaceful one..where the smile didn't left my face..by just imagining her milky cheeks in the shade of babypink...


Nandini-You are soo Strange with those One Liners Manik...

I chuckled again...

Me-Look who's talking Ms . McDonald's!!

Nandini-aahhaaa...Get over that!!

Me-aree..how can I get over that..That's the one Epic story I would narrate My..Children's for million times!!

Nandini-No..you..won't..what they would think about their mom than??

I smiled at her innocence...


Me-So you agree that you will be My Children's Mom??


And I heard a Gasp other side...


And trusted me I had to bite my lips to control that giggle!!

Me-Aww..how I wish I could see you right now!! You know with that Crimson Cheeks!!..huh!!...I wanna Kissi Bite them!!


Nandini-Mr.Kissi Biter I soo hate you!!

Me-The More you hate the More you Love..My Love!!

Nandini-Huh!!

Me-Achaa tell me where are you??

Nandini-aah...I sneaked in your apartment last night...

Me-And you slept wearing my pullover and cuddling on my bed!!

Nandini-Haaaw...

Me-hehehe!!

Nandini-achaa..you met your Dad??


And that brought me back to reality...

Me-umm..Nope..I'm just going for breakfast!!

Nandini-Okay than bye...

Me-umm..Bye...

Nandini-hmmm...

Me-and...I miss you and I Love you!!

Nandini-umm..I miss you and I..I...ummm...Come back soon...okay Thank you bye!!


With that she hang up the call...Damn..I'm soo much in love with this Kiddo girl..My love..!! My Bachaa!!


And never like before I walked to my Dad with a smile rather than a disappointing look..but at the same time he wasn't the reason behind my Smile..and he could never be one!!

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P ART D-

After freshening up I went downstairs and I knew somethings never change...

Just like my father seating their on this huge dinning table surrounded by pin drop silence and having his breakfast all alone...

I look behind my father and saw the huge frame hanging their with Me My Father and GrandPaa in it!!

Don't take me wrong but this glory with always be fake Glory for Me!!

No wonder I had choose to live my life like a normal human being..I had choosen a rented flat in place of this Mansion I had choosen a Scooty in place of some BMW...And I had choosen living life in place of living with life I had choosen rainbow in place of Rain I had choosen star's in place of Diamonds I had Choosen My Love in Place of this Man!!


But still I had a promise I made to my mother back then...

I signed and headed my dad..he looked at me with a formal nod..I walked towards him and touched his feet to show something which I will never have for him "Respect"


Dad-Good Morning son!!

I controlled my emotions and took a seat...

Me-Morning...D..Dad!!


I even hate this word now!!

Dad-So how was your journey I know it could have been better if you would have accepted my offer of sending a Helicopter for you...


Me-No..it was fine!!

Dad-hmm..So you know I've called you..

Me-So obviously you have a reason behind that...


Dad-Correct...I've arranged a Maha Pooja after 3 days...


Okay I forgot to mention this but My dad is also a hell orthodox person!!

Me-So you have called me for that??

Dad-Obviously after all you are the next Gen of Malhotras and also the Next Head of Malhotra Industry...


Now that was it!!

Me-And how many times have I already told you that I don't want to head Malhotra Industry?

I gave him a pointer look but than looking at him all furious I had to control so I looked down..My fist had went pale now!!

Me-Dad..you know I don't want this and I'm also ready to transfer all my shares to your name which Dada left for me!!

Dad-And why you think I'm asking you?? It written manik..My command is written as a part of your destiny!!!

Me-Yeah..right!!


With that I stood up and left for my room...!!


This Man is actually really good at getting on my nerves...

I was about to get in my room when the room beside mine took my attention!!


And some how it calmed me down I pushed the closed door and all my childhood memories came rushing back...


It was my mom's room...


I turned On the lights and look around...


Her closet..Her Pictures.
Her Little Idol of Radha-Krishna Her Presence..I felt it..


And unknowingly my eyes were moist..I missed her soo much...Her voice still rang in my ears...


Manik...Manik Where are you...Manik have you eaten your food??..Manik where are you going my son??..My Manik is my little Prince!!


I sat there on her bed...and closed my eyes in an attempt of trying to heal that pain in my heart!!!


I miss you Maa...


But I also something bad is coming soon...!!



So here it is...I know I said Pms but than I'm super late soo have it and next will be pmed pakka toshu babu!!
So this is just because I would have taken a Forever to Pm and I can't make you wait longer na soo Sooo Sorry!!

PS-NEXT PART WILL PMED WHEN ALL CHAPTER 28 PARTS REACH 300 HUNDRED LIKES and some LONG COMMENTS so wake up!!

PPS-NEXT WHAT?? BUCKET LIST OR VILLAGE STORY??

PPPS-IVE A CHRISTMAS/NEW YEAR SURPRISE 😉

Love-Kavya :)

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