MANAN FF : JUST YOU AND ME chapter 10 page 68 (10/2/2016)

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All parts read in one go.. Amazing story... Superb concept.. Keep updating.. Keep smiling.. OK thanks for beautiful story.. Bye😊

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sanjana

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Posted: 9 years ago

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hey anshika...

just u and me...a perfect journey of manan till now...i loved it..

manan's secret marriage...

their parents are such a pranksters...

nandu's reaction on knowing dat she has to marry manik...ufff...kudos gal kudos...

their flashback for confession...short sweet and ty for nt dragging it...

their party...shoo cute...

wat happened to her...hope nthng serious...loved manik's reaction on it...

will love to see more of their friendship along with others...and cute lovey doveys...and some villanious acts...(its upto u for my last one...bt i love the heroic entry of manik...for dat we need to have a villain..right...)

and...awww...karan as dr.

he's in my favorite list

so am waiting for nxt update...

continue soon

LOVE

SANJANA

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juhi singh

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First of all so sorry for being supper late
Sooorrryyy now coming to update it was awesome ...and u know what karan s my second fab so I supper excited for upcoming updates love u

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Superb story dear
Love it very much
And All the best for your exam
Update soon
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Lovely story dear
Read whole part
and all the parts are very beautiful
please continue this story with your idea
love it
update soon
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Hey dear pls update soon

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Chapter 6 - Stealing the happy moments...
part A
After reaching the mall all couples went in different directions to shop and spend some lone time with their partners.
Manik and Nandini were in men's ethnic wear and were selecting dresses for Manik first as demanded by Nandini. Nandini herself was selecting dresses for Manik as she wants best for her man. Also she wants herself to be colour coordinated with Manik in every function of their marriage. So, she herself was selecting his dress accordingly so that she can buy her dresses according to colours of Manik's dress.
Whereas Manik was only adoring Nandini and her priceless expressions. He was carefully memorising her expressions in his mind. Whenever Nandu changes her expressions of her face Manik was doing only one thing that was to smile and to promise Nandini in his mind to make her smile always.
As they were shopping Nandini's phone rang and it disturbed Manik's adoring session. It was Alya's call so Nandini asked Manik to answer the call and put it up on speaker as her phone was with him. So Manik making a grumpy and sad face as this call disturbed his adoring session and then answered the call...
Manik : haan alya bolo... What's it ...
Alya : Manik maine Nandini ko call kiya tha na tumhe nahi so give the phone to her.
Manik : Alya Nandini is listening speak up.
Nandini : yes Alya bolo... Am listening...
Alya : Nandini listen don't shop for for your wedding function's outfit. Yours and Manik's outfit we are going to design. So don't shop for it okkk.
Nandini : obviously Alya its you and Mukti who are going to design for it. We both waise bhi are going to wear outfits made by you in all the wedding functions. Agar tum dono kehte bhi nahi tab bhi hum order tum dono ko hi dete...
Manik : Nandini sahi hi keh rahi hai Alya. As we want best for our all ceremonies.
Alya : Nandini and Manik you both are the best guys. We both love you. Thanks guys...
Manan together...
Manan : we both love you too...
And they hung up the call.
After that nandini gave Manik some clothes for the trial and asked him to go to dressing room. He handed over some changes to him while kept some with herself as she has selected many usual tees pull overs and what not.
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Manik was trying all the outfits. He has almost tried 20 things and now he was tired but soon he thought of mischief and he dragged Nandini in the trial room. After dragging her in he started kissing her with all love he had for her.
He was so afraid of losing her that he can't believe that her Angel can be in danger and can loose their memories ...
This sudden kiss shocked nandini and she was standing there all surrendered and let him do whatever want to do.
Manik was nibbling her lower lip and she was doing nothing only standing there. But Manik wanted her to respond so he deepens the kiss. Dueu to this Nandini also stated resonding.

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After some time feeling Nandini breathless Manik broke the kiss.
During the kiss Nandini felt Manik's restlessness but was confused why he was so. Feeling his restlessness and for calming him she decided to calm him down by taking him to beach after shopping and spend some lone time there. Whereas Manik assured himself of her presence.
Nandini asked Manik that...
Nandini : Manik yeh kya tha haan... Aise koi kisi ko andar kheechtah hai kya... Chalo andar kheecha toh kheecha but uske baad koi aisa karta h kya...
Manik while teasing her asked...
Manik : kaise karta hai Angel... Haan bolo kaise karta hai...
Nandini listening this realised what she was going to say and started blushing. And hid herself in his chest.
And then Nandini diverting the topic said ..
Nandini : accha Manik tum change karlo main bahar jati hoon ...
Manik laughed and said her to go out and wait till he changes...
Then Nandini went out and saw their friends standing outside... Seeing them she was shocked and started blushing whereas their friends smriked seeing her blushing profusely.
Cabir teasingly said ...
Cabir : Pari tu Manik ko change karne help kar rahi thi hai na tabhi tum uske saath trial room mein thi hai na...
Nandini not finding any place to find herself ran towards him hugged him and Cabir also gave her brotherly hug. And everybody else start laughing at her innocence and awwed seeing their bond.
Just then Manik came out who seeing his friends and Nandini's flushed condition understood everything...
Cabir saw him and said ...
Cabir : so majnu saahab apne kuch select bhi kiya yaa meri pyaari pari ke saath romance hi kiya.
Listening this Manik starting blushing but soon replaced it by an angry glare only for one and only Cabira. But everyone noticed his blushing and then Alya said ...
Alya : look guys he's blushing...
Mukti : I too second you... I mean look him. Who will say that he is the same Manik Malhotra who always used to run from this topic of love and used to tease us... Aur ab dekho hamari teasing se blush kar raha hai... Woh kya baat hai...
Listening her everyone started laughing and Nandini too and seeing Nandini laughing Manik's face also had a smile of contentment.
After their this little session of teasing everyone started to move to food court whereas Nandini and Manik decided to go to beach as per the Nandini's request...
While in hospital test lab...
Aman was himself doing test and taking out different conclusion of Nandini's blood samples as he too loved Nandini as her own sister and can't bear any scratches on her body and here he had to find out what ex have happened to her.
After 1.5 hour he completed his test and found out that Nandini was suffering from...

Heee haaa... Nandini ko kya hua hai next part mein ...
Guys as I said I wouldn't be able to update till 24th but as today I was free for sometime I wrote this ...
Pata nahi kya likha hai.
Plus I haven't done proof reading too this time so please bear it this time
After 24th I would able to update as long as I can ...
Negative feedback is welcomed
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Take care all
Stay blessed
Stay tuned for more...
Keep smiling
:)

Edited by anshikagarg126 - 9 years ago