TS: MY FIRST SHIVER (Hot+Romantic) *COMPLETE* *THE END*

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ruchi116

@ruchi116

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Awesome superb mind blowing romantic update loved it to the core. It was awesome how they craved for each other, n how they confess their feelings to each other it was lovely n finally manik has made nandu his forever they completed each other. N all of them got married wow amazing story dear loved it.

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Keeni001

@Keeni001

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Oh my my !!!!😃!!! It was so romantic !!!!😳!!!!! Just like fairy tale !!!!!😉!!!! I just loved it !!!!!🥱!!!!!!!!

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lovePANI

@lovePANI

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Ok..i loved it..
it was amazing..beautiful..hottt..
Haye...my nandu..n my manu..aawww
O ho..manik has the gut man...to speak in front of her father...That too..calling my nandu..
Their romance..maar dala...ummahh..
n y did u tried to control ur desire ..;)
n Oh my lord..kitna Sara..did he managed room..
n that jerk..so called future husband.Oh my lord..everyone got their love in same home.. n that together aye hye ...how lucky..

n plz keep writing..that too..fantasies..;)
keep smiling n take care..