ROOMMATE: The Right Mistake(new ff) [ON HOLD] - Page 10

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Part 2

Manik: Guys meet my new ROOMMATE MISS NANDINI MURTHY

Fab4: WHAT??? And they wake up from their sleep

Manik: Yes

Fab4: You Can't Be Serious

Manik: I am

Fab4: No you are not

Manik: Yes I am

Cabir: he looks towards Fab3 and said

Guys I think we are watching a Dream"

Fab3: we secant you cabir

Cabir: let's sleep again'

Fab3: yeah good idea

And they all again sleep covering them by duvet

Manik: he saw them sleeping again he got irrupted, First he got new roommate and his friends are thinking he is joking and they are in dream.

He went inside the washroom and come with a bucket of full ice cold water

And he pours cold water on fab4

And fab4 stand up with jerk shouting

Fab4: MANIKKK and come towards manik to beat him

Manik: he thought that now he will not save by fab4

Suddenly he notice that nandini is standing beside him with shocked face and can't utter a word after watching his friends sleeping

He saw his friends coming towards him so he thinks a idea and smirks

Before fab4 beat him he pulls nandini towards himself and stand her between him and fab4

Fan4 saw her and stopped at their place and ask

Fab4: who are you?

She didn't utter any words, manik notice thisa and said from behind

Manik: she is NANDINI

Fab4: nandini kon?

Manik: MY NEW ROOMMATE and smirks

Fab4: WHATTT????

Manik: Yes

Fab4: so we are not watching dream before

Manik: Yupp

Fab4: didn't utter any words after that and looking towards both of them like they saw some alien standing in front of them and talking to them

Manik saw their shocked faces and smiling

Cabir is the first one who comes out from this shocked face and he said

Cabir: manik you are joking I know she is your sister and smiles

Manik: What?? Shocked he never thought his friends will think nandini his sister he said

No you know na I don't have any sister'

Mukti: who come out second from shock?

Mukti: manik she is your cousin na, your mama, bhua, chacha anyones daughter

Manik: no mukti, y r u making her my sister? She is nothing my, she is not related with my family anyhow, manik in loud and cold tone

Nandini also come out from her shock state but didn't said anything and when she hears maniks answer when mukti ask then she get sad she also don't know y but she feel hurt by his words

Then druv said who come out by maniks loud tone

Druv: Buddy then IS SHE IS YOUR GIRLFRIEND SO SHE IS SHARING ROOM WITH YOU?

Manik: WHAT??? He shouted very loudly, he can't believe his ears that his buddy said something like that

Manik: R U MAD DRUV? YOU NO NA I AM SINGLE then when will she became my girlfriend

Nandini also got shocked when druv said that she is maniks girlfriend, and feels happy when he hear his answer that he is single,

Manik: I can't believe you guys will think something like that

I am clear to all in one line

SHE IS NOT RELATED TO ME ANYHOW SO STOP ASSUMING HER MY SISTER COUSIN GIRLFRIEND in a loud tone

Alya who is standing silent till can't stop herself more and shouted in high pitch tone

Alya: THEN WHO THE BLEEDY BITCH SHE IS? AND WHAT ARE SHE DOING IN THIS ROOM?

Nandini got shocked by alya's words and got hurt by her words, she never imagine that someone will say her like these cheap words tears start coming out of her eyes and she looks downwards and start crying silently

Manik also shocked by alyas words he can't alya will say something like for a girl, he looks towards nandini and sa tears in her eyes and feel hurt the can't control and said

Manik: STOP IT

STOP IT ALYA, I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT YOU ARE A GIRL AND WILL SAY SOMETHING LIKE TO A GIRL.

I am saying last and final time

"SHE IS NANDINI MURTHY MY NEW ROOMMATE AND SHE WILL LIVE IN THIS ROOM WITH ME"

Alya: What?? What r u saying manik? You are shouting on your friends because of this commoner? You to never like sharing your room with anyone na then what is this all? You never share your room with your friends then y u agrees with her?

Manik: listen alya, you are saying is completely right, I know I not like sharing my personal space with anyone not even you guys, but I don't have any choice this time, if I will not agree with house holder then he will kick me out of this house so I agree with him. He said in clam tone

Everybody listen carefully what manik is saying, they understand that manik doesn't do it intentionally.

Then alya said

Alya: then its okay, she turns towards nandini and said

Alya: hey, what is your name? nandini yes, listen

I AM SHARING ROOM WITH MANIK AND YOU WILL STAY WITH MUKTI

I know you are a commoner and you don't want to stay with a guy.

Fab4 and nandini got shocked by alya's sudden announcement

MANIK AND MUKTI: what??

Mukti: R U NUTS ALYA? HOW CAN I SHARE A ROOM WITH THIS COMMONER? No I will not staying with her, you have to stay with me

Alya: no mukti, you know na manik don't feel like share his personal space then how will he stay with an stranger, so I am saying I am his friend and know him so I can stay with him in place of nandini, then what is problem in it? And vese bhe we don't stay in our room all time, we stay in cabir maniks room so, you don't have to stay with this commoner all time.

Nandini is hearing their conversation silently and getting hurt by their words, she can't believe that some people can behave like this with her, she is crying continues silently.

Cabir and Druv: yeah mukti, I think Alya is right; you should share room with nandini

Mukti then don't have choice and said

Mukti: if you want this, then it's okay. I will stay with this commoner

Manik is hearing all this from very long time and he saw that nandini didn't said anything till so he said very loudly and clearly that fab4 got shocked

Manik: NO ALYA, YOU ARE NOT STAYING WITH ME, THIS ROOM IS ALLOTTED TO NANDINI SO SHE WILL LIVE HERE, AND YOU WILL LIVE IN YOUR ROOM WITH MUKTI, and nandini looks towards manik suddenly

Manik also looking towards her and said

Manik: I WILL SHARE ROOM WITH NANDINI AND THAT'S FINAL AND ITS MY PROBLEM THAT HOW I WILL SHARE MY PERSONAL SPACE, and smirks towards nandini

Nandini feels something fishy in maniks lines, but she first got happy that manik agree with sharing room with her, because when she hear mukti alya she got hurt and don't want to live with them

Cabir also saw that manik is smirking towards nandini, he also found something fishy so he said

Cabir: are you sure manik

Manik: yes cabir, 100% sure and smirks towards nandini who is looking towards him only

Nandini: she got little afraid by maniks sudden change but she ignore it and pass him a smile manik also pass her but the meaning of that smile is something different

Alya notice manan eye lock so she got jealous and angry with nandini

Alya: BUT MANIK...

But manik stop her in between and said

Manik: NO IF NO BUTS alya and this is my final decision.

Alya got very much angry and she leaves from their after giving very deadly angry glare to nandini

Mukti: but what is problem with alya manik, she is your friend and it will help u na sharing a room, infect you know na she likes you and knows you well

Manik: yeah mukti that's the reason I don't want to share room with alya, because I know she likes me but you know that is only attraction and I will share room with her then, he will make her hope high and I don't like her like the way she likes me I only like her as my best friend so I am denying staying with her.

Mukti: yeah I can understand, and she also leaves from their behind alya

Druv also got hurt when he hear that alya likes manik so he silently leaves from their manik and cabir notice this can't understand so their ignore it

...

Only manik cabir and nandini is alone in room now

Manik is looking towards nandini, nandini is looking towards downwards she is thinking muktis words that alya likes manik and she is coming between them but then she hear that manik said he don't like her and she can't understand anything and cabir looks towards both of them, he found something fishy in maniks behavior he notice that manik is smirking so thought to confirm his confusion and said

Cabir: manik

Manik: hmm and still smirking

Cabir: I am saying that I totally understand that y u don't want to share room with alya

Manik: thanks cabir

Cabir: thanks haa he is shocked that manik first time said thanks to someone he found change in manik, he further said

Cabir: so I am saying that

Manik: yes cabir and still looking towards nandini

Nandini feels some intense gaze on her she looks upwards and found manik looking towards her

Both share a eye lock, cabir notice this and said

Cabir: From whom you learn this word?

Manik: which word?

Cabir: THANKSSS stretching the word

And manik come back in his senses and looks towards cabir and remember that he said thanks to cabir

Manik: wo... mai..i mean...wo...

Cabir: FROM NANDINI

Manik: WHAT???

Cabir: I am saying you learn from nandini na this words, and now learn more words and things so that's why you want to share room with nandini?

Manik: what???

Cabir: he turns towards nandini and said

Cabir: nandini

She looks towards cabir who is smiling till now when cabir is pulling maniks lag

Cabir: nandini you teach us also

Nandini: what? Shocked

Cabir: these THANKS AND ALL and looks towards manik

Manik: CABIRRR in angry tone

Cabir: okay I am joking

Manik: you better be

Cabir: okay one last question

Manik: now what?

Cabir: I understand that u don't want to share room with alya and looks towards manik

Manik: aage bolega

Cabir: I thought u will say THANKS, you forgot so early, he turns towards nandini and said

Cabir: nandini manik ko MILK K SATH BADAM KHILANA MAT BHOOLANA eska dimag kamjor ho gaya, he can't even remember a single words

MANAN: CABIRRR

Cabir: OKAYYY so I am saying

Manik: you r not saying anything just leave from here

Cabir: I know you want spend alone time with your new roommate and want to learn more words but I also join na class

Manik: CABIRRR and punch in his tummy

Cabir: ouch manikk and hold his tummy because manik kick very hard

Cabir: are you m friend or my enemy

Manik: I my your DEATH

Cabir: what do u mean?

Manik: if you will keep doing this nonsense then someday I will kill you

Cabir: are u trying to threaten me

Manik: nope, I threaten you going near him

Cabir: ohhh I am afraid

Manik: achhaa

Cabir: okay chal bata

Manik: now what in an irritated voice

Cabir: I am your friend and like your brother na

Manik: hmm

Cabir: hmm,say na, didn't I in a fake anger tone

Manik: yes you are my JIGAR KA TUKDA and went near his face to kiss him and kissed on his chick

Cabir: STOPPP, I am not gay, stay away from me

Manik: y?? Didn't a friend or brother kiss to his friend or brother

Cabir: yes they do

Manik: see you only saying this and again goes near him to next kiss

But cabir runs away from him and hide behind nandini

Manik is running behind him, suddenly cabir said

Cabir: manik you love me so much and giving me kisses so can I share a room in place of nandini, and nandini can share a room with druv. You know we will continue our BROMANCE HERE AND NANDINI CAN TEACH DRUV THERE

Manik hear this and said at once

Manik: NOOO

Cabir: why??? And smirking

Manik: because you are staying with druv na

Cabir: but I am coming in your room na, we both brother will live together and do our bromance and went near maniks face

Manik saw him coming closer so he went behind and said

Manik: no cabir I am not gay, so don't think like that,

Cabir: y? You only start this na, now it's my turn, and went near manik

Manik runs from their and hide behind nandini and said

Save me nandini

Nandini is watching Tom and Jerry fight and enjoying it

Nandini: you both are brother and I am stranger so how can I come in between you guys

Both manik and cabir stop their fight and shocked by nandins words,

For the first time nandini said after coming inside the room,

They can easily guess how much hurt she by their words

Cabir: I am sorry nandini on behalf of everyone

Nandini: it's okay cabir

Cabir saw manik is looking towards nandini and didn't saying anything so he said

Cabir: manik you will not anwer my question

Manik: manik saw that cabir is back so he want to stop him

Manik: cabir if I will share a room with you then druv mukti alya will feel like I am giving you more priority than them, and you know na you all are at same place in my heart so I can't.

Cabir: start crying fake and said

Cabir: aakho me aashu agaye teri bat sun k

Manik: edhar aa mai pochh deta hu na

Cabir; he went away from him towards door and said

I know manik, I am leaving, you enjoy your class and tell ma what you learn next

Manik: cabirrr

Cabir: okay okay

Bye manik, bye nandini

Nandini: bye cabir

Manik: jata hai ya dhakke mar ke naikalu

Cabir: dost dost na raha

Pyar pyar na raha

And leaves from their

...

Manik: smiles and said notanki

Nandini also saw this and smiles

Nandini went near manik and said

Nandini: thank you manik

Manik: for what?

Nandini: for letting me stay here

Manik: it's okay; you are paying equal rent so this is your room also

Manik:in mind(I to decide na to send her away from this room in a week then y I am concerned about her, no I have to send her away, I can't share my personal space with her, I can't even leave with my friend they also hurt because of me, but I can't share room one of with them, because they all are equally important for me, I have to stay with nandini only, but how I will send her out from this room, in a week, think something manik, think and start thinking plas to send her out of this room)

Nandini notice that manik is lost in thought

Nandini: manik

And manik come out from his thoughts

He saw that room is very dirty and a idea come in his mind

Manik: hey nandini look this room is so dirty, so can you clean it?

Nandini: yes manik, but you are my roommate na so you also help me na

Manik: yes but you na these all works of cleaning and all for ladies of you will clean it

Nandini: how can you say that?

Manik: from my mouth or kaha say. Don't tell me you speak from somewhere alse?

Nandini: what??

Manik: what? Are you dumb?

Nandini: no I am not

Manik: but u r behaving like one, now clean fast

Nandini: no I will not

Manik: yes you will

Then nandini think something and said

Nandini: I have an idea

Manik: what?

Nandini: we will divide this room in two parts, 1 part is yours and 2^nd part is mine, so I will clean my side and you will clean your side

Manik: WHAT???? In shocked, he thought that nandini will trap in his plan and will clean all house, and by this she will irritated by cleaning full house daily and leave this house in 7 days but no she is smart

Nandini: yes, I am taking this big bad and you are taking this single bad

Manik: what?? Shocked

Nandini: what? I am dividing na

Manik: you can't take this big bad

Nandini: y not?

Manik: because I come here first and so I will chose first and this big bed is mine and that single bed is yours

Nandini: okay, I will manage in this single also, I thought u will take this small bed so that you will clean less space but no, you are not, you chose thisbig double bad, so manik you clean this big bad

Manik: yeah whatever, then suddenly an idea comes in maniks mind and he said

Manik: nandini I think this is unfair with you that I will sleep on this big and you will sleep on that small bed, so we will sleep turn by turn on both beds so we will clean both bad together

Nandini: its okay manik, I am so small, so I can easily fit in this single bad and I don't have problem in that, so you can use this big bad by yourself daily

Manik: no how can I you will also sleep on this bad so we will clean it both together that's final

Nandini: no I am not

Manik: yes you are and he comes towards her

Nandini went behind

Both continues till nandini come between wall and manik.

Manik put both his hands on either side of nandini on wall and went very close to her lips

Nandini notice that his hot breath is collide with her face and something is happening inside her tummy so said

Okay I will clean both the bad

And at once manik back off from her

Nandini notice that manik leave her and standing far away and smirking towards her she further said

Nandini: only today itself, from next time, you will only clean your bed.

Manik: okay, so start cleaning now itself till I take a nape, for other things we will talk later if u still want to live here

Nandini: what do you mean

but he didn't listen

And he went in hall and sleep on coach

Nandini saw him sleeping and she prays to her appii appa that where he send her, how will she manage here and start cleaning the room

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here is 2nd part, this is it for now, i know all this is crap but i am like this only

so tell me how it

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(Rahul)

Nyc... seems intrstng...
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It was superb update bro...😛👏⭐️.

Amaziing update. ..loved it. .
loved the way manik was concerned n felt bad abt nandini's tears...
ohh god...I seriously hate aliya...nt bcoz she is jealous...but bcoz...hw can she sae such things to nandini. ..
n cabiraa. ..he rockss yar...
also loved their nok jhok. ..
update soon. .
grt wrk. ..
bye tc. ..!

I just love it.. Itsss soo awesome .. So amazing. .just love to the core. .. Soo .fantastic. ... Keep updating. .. U r such a amazing writer... Update soon.. Waiting for next update eagerly .. Thanks for this update . Stay blessed Geet

superb chappy iss alya ki problem kya hai ...urggg fell lyk mudering her cabir and manik ka bromance was amazing nandu is also smart ...i liked that thing waiting for more fun loved it update soon

thanks for pm

Nice update...