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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
give us rose day & proposal day in detail...
pls continue...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow.. nyc update. .
Manik when called nandini mummy that was an emotional scene. ..
Really loved it
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yes yes plzz update rose nd propose day ka...nd today ka update was awsome
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update dear
Give rose day n propose day in detail
Cont soon ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update n pleazz update rise day n propose day with manan love...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Happy Rose Day...😊😊


All were ready to go and rock today...with their Hot Looks...all were lost in their partners... But Manik Malhotra was still waiting for his girl to arrive... Who was still in her room being ready..


Mukti : Red shorts with white shimmering top

Alya : Red with net sleeves mid thigh dress..

Navya : red halter neck top with white jeans..

Abhi : black jacket with white t-shirt...

Dhruv : blue jacket red T-shirt... Black jeans

Cabir : red T-shirt with blue jeans

Manik : white inner with red blazer and skinny jeans ...


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Mu : yaar nandu kahan gayi..

Abhi tak nhi...aayi...


Al : umm...maybe she wants to show her best to manik...

She speaks naughtily... Manik who was looking towards stairs looks at them listening his name...

C : haan..bai...ab tu inko bhi inki waali mil gayi...


Manik blushes...

Nav : hey maata rani...manik malhotra is blushing...cabir jara humein pinch karo

M : vo..kyun navya jii...mai hi kar deta hoon aapko pinch...with this he pinches her and she shouts...

C : saale..
Itni jor se kyun kiya...


M : are...vo keh ri thi..hai na navya...

N : haan tu itni jor se karne ke liye thodi nhi kaha tha...

Saying this she pouts...and manik smiles seeing it.. Al : seriously manik...see it became red... Here ..

He moves towards her... And holds her waist and with a jerk pulls her...her hands lands pn his chest...

M : by tye way i...forgot to tell you... Today you're looking Hot...

Alya too... Put her hand around his neck and smirks

A : really...

M : yes...

Both look at each other and than at all of them whose face were worth...watching... Shocked..

Both burst out laughing ..as soon as they laugh dhruv sighs of relief...

D : you both shocked me yaar...

Al : aww...he said i did not...

M : ok...guys..i was just playing..

Mu : seriosly i thought you guys still have some feelings for each other...

Manik smiles a little...

M : i always took her serious but never felt anything...i tried hard but i...i failed... Am.. Am sorry alya...i know in that relationship of ours i have hurted you the most... Am sorry

Al : oh...please manik ... It was our past... But you know what...it was really beautiful past of mine with you...but now too am happy with my this silly boy ...

All laughs and alya hugs dhruv...to which he too hugs her...



Dh : by the...way guys ...had you ever kissed each other ...

Listening this both look at each other and smile and than alya speaks casually...


Al : ya ..we did...kiss...each other... When raima came in our school...and she used to flirt with manik...i was insecure so...i ...i asked him to do so.. And for that i have to totally beg... To him... To kiss me...he was really tough one to crack...


All laughs...


Mu : and guys do you...remember that... Girl... Kayra she was only with him for 14 days... But she teally took out shit out...of us ... She was really crazy man...


Nav : 😆😆😆 yes...and...and... That riya... She tu begged us to send manik to her after our tutions...

She speaks laughingly...


C : really guys...it was fun to handle his girlfriend's... In still remember Niti... But she was really good... She was funny , crazy and naive too. ... She used to behave so cute around...


Listening niti's name manik became excited.. Like a child...


M : ya...that girl...you know guys... She was the only one out of all the girls who took my heart by her cuteness , shyness , her talks , innoscense...

Mu : ya ..i know how you used to run after her... And talk about her...always...

M : but she was gone...till i understood that i loved her. ...

He speaks emotionally...

Al : but...you know what...whatever happen is for good...see how we got nandini...


Mu : haan...yaar manik...Nandini mein kuch tu hai as Niti ke jaane ke baad... Tune kabhi kisi ladki ko date nhi kiya... She was the last girl...


Manik smiles. ...


M : yes...nandini...she is too like her... I really really like...her and i don't want to loose her...

All hugs him...


All : we will never let that happen...


...

N : aur kitni girls thi tumhari life mein manik


They hear nandini's voice... And the words which she spoke startled manik...

They all turns towards her and were mesmerized..

She was wearing black shimmering tank top with red tight jeans skirt exposing her legs... And black boots... With curly hairs...


N : bolo manik...


She speaks when she comes near him...


All of their trance was broken by nandini


M : aah ..vo nandu...i...i..

N : promise me...

She speaks taking her hand out...

N : promise me that... You'll never leave me like you leaved other girls... You'll never break my Trust you'll never hide anything from me...

Manik smiles a little and keep his hand on her trembling one... Their were tears in her eyes...

As soon as manik keeps his hand on her's she hugs him tight ...

N : manik...ii really likeyou... If you'll never leave me na...I'll break down...badly... I. ...i...


M : never...I'll never let you break down... You are the one who made me feel the feelings which were alien to me...i...i like you...and will love you...


He speaks with so much honesty that... Nandini tightens her hug and kisses his hear...


...


All were too emotional and were now sure about nandini and manik being together as if any other girl would be their she would really create a big sean...







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M : kya khana...
Hai nandu...

He asks as they all were sitting in restaurant for lunch ... After watching movie...


N : umm...kuch bhi...


C : manik...tune tu bht jaldi humara saath choda yaar ...

M : mtlb

C : mtlb... Pehle tu hum sab ko poochta tha... Aur ab tu sirf nandu...ko pooch rha hai haan... Bht pyaaarrr...ho gya hai


Listening this manik blushes while nandini smiles a little... Manik looks at nandini's face it was dull.. All looks at each other and sighs...


N : guys..i..I'll be back...

M : kya..hua...

N : aah...washroom. .

Manik nods and she goes ... Manik looks down as he was feeling pain in his heart seeing her like this... Shecwas disturbed all this while... From morning.. She was not talking to him properly ...


All look at manik...


Mu : yaar...manik tu... Emotional mat ho yaar

Manik looks at her and...


M : nhi...just she is not talking to me yaar... I.. I.. Don't know...mai..

He was speaking when his eyes falls on alya...

She was having tears in her eyes...

Manik immediately stands and goes near her...

All too sees that and..goes to alya...


M : hey..what happen???

Alya hugs him and starts crying

M : alya... He sighs...

Al : manik...she...she is not talking to me either.. I.. I ... She heard all that we were talking... Is she not talking to me... Because of... Me...being with you before . . ... You know manik... I i...

She stops as she sees nandini... She breaks the hug and looks at her...

Manik too looks at nandini and from her it was shown that she came after crying...

Seein alya and nandini crying irritated manik..


N : k..ya hua...???

All looks at her...

M : nandini tumhe kya hua... Y r u doing this??

N : manik mai kta kar rhi hoon...i..i

She speaks with tear in her eyes

M : here alya is crying because of you god dammit y r u behaving rude to her... You should have problem with me not with her...


Seeing tears in his friends eyes really raises anger of manik and same was now... He was controlling himself not to shout on nandini...

Tear slip from nandini eyes...

N : no manii ... I...

M : you know what?? If yoy have problem with both of us... Than i don't give a damn to... You...

Nandini tried to speak but manik was not giving her chance ...

Al : nandini i am sorry but that..

N : no...alya.

She was not knowing what was happening she was just shaking her head in a know...

Al : nandini but..

M : alya..rehne do na...yaar... If she want she can behave with us... How ever she want... You don't cry.. She wants to go she can...

He speaks turning towards alya

Nandini was confused...
Tears were flowing from her eyes... Her eyes red as she had cried ...

N : manii...


M : i said go...

He shouts irritatedly making nandini shiver.. Tears were continuously flowing from her eyes she holds her bag...

N : manii...i... Bhai...vo...

Manik turns his face and this took all her courage to speak tyat cruel words... She was broken after that phone call... She was crying continuously... And manik leaving her was even worst...



She runs from their crying...


C : manik...baat kuch aur hai...


All looks at him

C : I'm noticing her from the time she came from terrace... After that phonecall...she is disturb.. And her eyes shows she is crying continuously...


M : i don't care... I can't handle tear in your eyes guys ... And she is cry

He stops and sees nandini their

Nandini's pov...

I didn't knew what they all were speaking... But i was not crying because of them... I know i should have clear the misunderstanding but my heart was not with me...heart was crying... I was feeling like broken doll... After that phone call... Manik too send me away from him... My heart was now paining even more... I ran away from their... But than i came back to take my phone which i forgot their only... May be ... Daadi will call me again..

But it was my bad luck that i came back... As i heard those hurtful word from him...
After yesterday night whatever happen between us i thought that he considered me as his friend and part of his life... He said he liked me but than y he said that he don't care ... And than. Than he can't see tears in his friend's eyes...
I was also crying... Was i not his friend...???





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N : vo...my...my phone...

She moves forward and picks her phone... She was about to go when cabir holds his hand...


C : kya hua hai??? I know baat kuch aur hai... You can't cry over these things... Bolo... Neither you're avoiding...it's just something Else... Haina


N in mind : he understand me more than manik... Seeing in his eyes i was only able too see the same love , care... Which i see in my bhai's eyes...

Bhai...i just want to hug you...can i...


Listening bhai from her cabir was mesmerized he do not have any family except his mom... He nods happily and she hugs him tight and cried out loudly...


Seeing her crying manik's heart paining all were looking at them with teary eyes...






Manik's phobe rings


M : haan daadi

Listening daadi nandini breaks the hug and looks at manik...

Manik notices this and

D : nandini kaisi hai...manik... Tu uske saath hi rehna... Beta she will need... You...

M : daadi but... Kya hua

D : beta mai...london aayi hoon... Yahan rishabh ka aciident hua hai...

M : what???

He looks at nandini who now came near him

M : ye aapne kab bataya use

D : subaha...

M : bye

Saying this he cuts the call and looks at nandini with tearful eyes ...

N : k...kya...hu...hua...??

M : is...liye.. You ...we...were cry...crying hmm..

She nods...


And that was it for him he takes her in bone crushing hug ...

Nandini too hugs him...and cries...

Mn: am..am...sorry


N : mani...manii... Bhai..
Bhai... I want to go to him... But...i... Man


She was crying only...







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At malhotra mansion...


8 PM...

M : nandu daadi ka phone aaya... Bhai is out of danger


Nandini smiles and hugs him...
He too hugs her and says sorry...

N : it's ok...

Manik cups her cheeks and keeps his lips on
her's for a slow passionate kiss...




All watched ot standing out side and closes the door of their room...


C : god bless her...

Mu : she is so selfless girl...


All : god bless them...





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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Lovely cabni bond

Awsmmm

Coun sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
MANIK BINA KUCH JANA NANDINI KO ITNA KUCH BOL DIYA...IT'S NOT FAIR...
ROSE DAY MAE EK BHI ROSE NAHI DIYA...

PROPOSE DAY LI PART KAB POST KAROGI???
PLZ NEXT PART ASAP...WAITING EAGERLY...
PLZ ASAP...

BUT EK BAAT ACHA HUA...CABINI BOND STRONG HUA...
Edited by Poushi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Poushi

MANIK BINA KUCH JANA NANDINI KO ITNA KUCH BOL DIYA...IT'S NOT FAIR...
ROSE DAY MAE EK BHI ROSE NAHI DIYA...

PROPOSE DAY LI PART KAB POST KAROGI???
PLZ NEXT PART ASAP...WAITING EAGERLY...
PLZ ASAP...

BUT EK BAAT ACHA HUA...CABINI BOND STRONG HUA...


Dear abhi Rose Day baaki hai
Abhi tu unke 8. Hi baje hai
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dear nice update
But emotional rula diya yaar
Manik is shouting on nandu
He is slways implessive
And nandu she is so sweet
Thanks for the update

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