Manan ff : ishq soofiyana updated Page 47(15 A )

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rajirock123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

Nice update dear pls update next part soon

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mairaallauddin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

Awesome update

Superb update

Fab update

Loved it

Loved the update

Waiting for the next part

Update the next part soon

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starssaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#173

😊. Part 11 A

Do Not Copy...😊😊

It was mid...night when manik settles his head on her chest and wraps his hands around her waist tightly..

Due to suuden touch on her body to find manik over her...she blinks her eyes and smiles ruffling his hairm.than she slips her hand in his hairs and another on his back patting him...just Like Mother do's and he was sleeping just like a Child do's on his or her mother

She closes her eyes but opens again listening some whispering sound... She titles her head upto manik's reach and was numb as she hears...

M : mumma...mum...

She was numb as she never thought she would come across these phase too...as she never thought boys will be like this...like him...after that dreadful incident with her ...tears brimmed in her eyes..

She again give peck on his forehead and speaks..

N : sleep...am here...mumma is here...

Listening this manik smiles a little and snuggles mire in her and digs his face in her chest ... Whispering mumma once again...

She smiles and too drifts into a calm slumber..

HIS face was calm , stress free...as if he truly was sleeping in his mother arms... The girl to whome we love can guve us everything which make us calm.. Happy...

Warmth like mother

Love like lover

Trust luke friend

Care like sister...😛

...

Morning😊😊😊. Rose Day...😳 7 th feb...😊😊😊

Mu : kaka...ye manik kahan hai...

She ask as thry looked for manik in his room but he was not their...

Today was sunday and their school was off...

K : bitiya ... Pata nhi...apne room mein subah bhi nhi the...

Ca : thik hai...aap jaiye thankyou...

...

Abhi : guys ..nandini tu hogi hi na...

Mu : oh...haan...nandu...chalo...use milte hai...

They all goes and knocks her door but no response...

Again...no ...

C : ye gate kyun nhi khol rhi...

All stands leaning to door...and thinks something... And than something clicks in their minds ...

Na : guys hum jab aaye tu gate lock tha...kaka ne chaabi se gate khola tha...

Dh : matlab us se pehle koi bahar nhi gya...

Abhi : aur mai abhi phone call leke terrace se aaya wahan pe bhi koi nahi tha...

Aly : aur...kitchen mein kaka hai par unhe bhi nhi.. Pata aur apne room ke alaawa use kahin neend nahi aati...

Mu : aur...yahan daadi bhi nahin...hai...and nandini's door is locked...aur manik apne room mein nahin hai...

Ca : aur agar wo andar hai Honey ke saath tu... Aaj ki party meri taraf say...la...la...lala...la...

While talking all were having naughty smirk on their faces . . ...

C : guys ...andar kaise jaana hai...ye hum sab ko

All : pata...haii...

C : come..

On than...

Than they all move towards manik's room which is next to nandini's room...and their Balcony are attached with Glass windows...😉

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starssaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

Part 11 B

All enters inside his room and move towards balcony... But got pissed when nandini's window was lock...they all sighs...but suddwnly alya speaks excitedly

Al : guys...manik's and her's window lock is same...so we can take...his keys...

All smiles and cabir speaks

C : are wah...alya..

Dhruv

D : haan

C : tu kya ab gift mein ise Bornvita dene laga hai...huh.

Al : cabirrr...

Mu : guys bad mein yaar...pehle inki bajale...jo andar pata nhi Kya Kya kar rahe honge...

Nav : i tu think wo log andar jo bhi kar rahe honge na...nandini sorry bol ne ke liye kar rhi hogi kal ke liye...

Dh : guys...lo key..

Cabir takes key and open door in excitement... But their all faces fell when they found everything their except Manan...as pillows were spread on floor...manik's shirt was on couck...bedsheet was lying down...

Mu : ye kya haalat bana ralhi hai un dono ne...i mean did they had wild one last night...

Al : ya...haalat dek kar tu WILD one hi kiya hai un dono ne lagta hai.

But they stop when they saw Manan coming from washroom giggling...

Nandini was now wearing skirt and red top... Manik was holding towel and was shirtless...

N : oh...god manik...you are too much...he he...he...

M : ufff...am tired now and..i y...

But his word got stuck in his throat when he found his all friends standing there with naughty grin...

C : what's up guys????

N : umm...aa..

Vo...insta...instagram...

C : what?...

N : i...i mean we are not using what's up but Instagram...

She speaks nervously and all burst out in laughter...

Mu : nandu...it's ok...don't get nervous...abhi tu hum shuru bhi ni hue baby...

She speaks naughtily amd manan gulps...

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starssaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

Part 11 c

M : hello guys...

Al : hello...manik...chalo guys baith te hai...

With this all settles down facing manan.. Who were standing only...

...

Mu : kya chal rha hai guys...

Abhi : aur...no lies just tell truth ...

Manan look at each other and than manik

M : i like her...and wanna fall in love with her...

He speaks looking at all...all were taken aback... But than look at nandini...who too looks at them and ..

N : i...i too like him...and wanna raise in love with him...

Listening this manik looks at her and tears brimmed in his eyes...

She too looks at him and holds his hand giving him smile...all look at each other amazed as never manik showed his tears in fron of any girl or them too...but today...he was...

They all smile and hugs both of them...

All : we all are happy for you...

Manan smiles and sits down...

Al : but guys don't you think it's too fast

N : fast...as in...

Al : umm...you guys did it...too fast...

Manan : what???

Mu : yes...room ki haalat your clothes...

M : are...nhi this tu we were fighting and... Isliye this all happened and i slept with her necause light was not their and she was scared

N : yes...

They HALF lied...

C : than you both washroom together...

N : vo tu he...was fighting with me...and i hide their he came their also and than we started water fighting...

Abhi : you really like each other

Manan : haan...kyun

Abhi : no you guys fight more

All laugh

Mu : guys... Happy Rose day...

Manik looks at nandini and smiles she too

All wishes each other and after having breakfat decide to have fun..

Guys...if you want Rose Day celebration tell me

And i wanna give update based on every day like Today is Propose day...so in night I'll give updaye of Rose Day as well as Propose Day..

And than from tomorrow regular day wise...

Tell me if you want...

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rajirock123

@rajirock123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Hey dear really nice update

And cabira always rocks

And they told them they like each other

And rose day so cute

Of course dear no need to ask

Pls shows valatine week

Thanks for the update

Next one soon

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PamAlps

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

Crazy Manan n their sleep talk of Mumma n baby dat was just so mesmerizing, U did a good job carry on, HAPPY ROSE DAY N PROPOSE DAY DEAR.. eagerly waiting for The Update :-)