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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update..luvd d bonding...maniks dream also gt true he gt sum1 2 cuddle...poor pillows...luvd it plz pm me...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
nice update
loved manan scenes a lot
so nandini found new friends
please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome story
loved it so much
amazing
wonderful
cot soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94


Hello...am here with update..
I know it's little late but sorry actually i was busy...😊

Ok first i wanna thank you all who liked and commented on my story . ...

And who are not responding it's also ok...am happy.. That atleast some are responding

Dheere dheere sab thik hoga

Enjoy...


Part 8 A

Nandini was sitting all flushed in her room...

N : oh God... Ye kya hogaya...and that too in front of all... God...how will i face them...and that stupid moron can't he control... Ughhh..

Soon her self talks were disturbed...

V : oh...hello...you are saying me stupid...

Nandini towards door and there he was standing with annoyed face...

N : haan..tu...

M : execuse me...you was the one who was busy in checking me out ...and than caressing my mole...

Listening to this nandini was whole flushed...

She was looking down...

Manik goes near her and pulls her from her waist...

M : so...wanna continue...

Nandini looks at him shock first and than pushing him runs out of the room...

Manik ruffles his hair and bites his lower lips smilingly...

...


Soon it was morning...all sleepy head were awake today...as daadi had given them strict order to come school on time..

All retires to their room for getting ready...

Nandini was the first one to come at breakfast table all ready...

She sits on one of the chair and waits for everyone's arrival..

Soon manik too come...

Both look at each other and than looks down...

Manik too sits opposite to nandini...

All too comes down and smiles evilly seeing the duo...

But manik interrupts them saying they are getting late..

All makes faces to him and eat breakfast and move towards car...

Now all were standing out...

Mu : ok so...me abhi and cavya in one car and you all guys in one...

Abhi : umm...ya cool ..

Cavya : ok...

Cavya and mukbhi settles and move out of the house..

Than dhrulya and manan too..

Manii was driving dhruv was on passanger seat and NanYa on back seat...

Alya : nandini...

N : hmm...

Alya : have you looked for any coaching classes..

N : umm...no..i..dont know here any thing so...

D : ahh...than tum alya aur navya ke saath join karlo..

N : ya..it'll be great .

Alya : ya it'll be fun...
Haina manik ..

M : ya...it's nice...

Nandini looks at manik...

N self talk : isko kya hua... He looks restless...


...

Soon all reach school and comes out of car ...

Alya runs to navya..

Alya : navuuu...

Navya : what happen...alu???

Alya : you know nandini is joining our coaching classes..

Mu : really...

Alya : yess...

Cabir : ok..it will be fun...

Abhi : yup...maja aayega..

Than all starts moving inside..

Alya : acha nandu...aahh..i mean nandini..

N : he he...it's ok you all call me nandu...

Mu : aahh...thank God nhi mere muh pe nandu hi aata hai..

Alya : yess..so nandu...hamari classes 6 baje se 7 aur in logo ki 7 baje se...8... Isliye hum inke liye wait karna hoga half an hour...is it ok...



N : half an hour..

N : haan..actually nandu hamari na bio ki classes hoti hai aadhe ghante...roj...7 : 30 se 8...

Isliye hum logo..ko 7 se 7:30 wait karna padta hai...aur hume body guard bhi milta hai..he he he..

Nan : bodyguard..

C : yes...manik ne guards higher kiye for their safety as ye raat ko...akele wait karti hai...and here it's not safe...

N : hmm...it's nice of manik ..

All retires to their classes...
But while going nandini grabs manik's hands and pulls him to nearby empty class...

M : hey...kya hua...

N : you tell me...what happen??

M : mujhe kuch bhi nhi hua...ok..mai jaara hoon...

N : manik...

She holds his hand and pins him too wall and stands in front of him blocking his way...

N : kya hua...

Manik holds her waist tightly..

M : wo...wo am am...sorry...for yesterday...meri wajah se..se..you ...

N :maniik...

M : ii know nandini that this alliss new for you..hum ek doosro ko jaante bhi nhi..hai dhang se...and i did that stupidity...

Listening this nandini immediately looks at him..

N : you...you listened me yesterday night talking with alya...hmm..

M : umm...yes...and am really sorry...for that...it will not happen again...I'll stay away..

He leaves her waist and making her side he moves out of room..

N : manik...manik..
Shit...he listened...use bura laga kya...but..kya hua..it's just . ughh...

Than she renembers her talk...

When she runs out of room..
Alya comes in front of her..

Alya : hello ..

Nan : hii...

A : so...romance and all haan..

N : na...nahi...wo.bus..we..we

Al : we lost control haan...he he

N : nayi...

Alya : do you feel for him...

N : what?? No...we tu even don't know each other alya...and it was just stupidity...and it was not a big deal...and about feeling tu i think we are strangers...atleast for me...
But that wan nothing just nothing...just stupidity...
And it'll never happen..again..

She speaks all this in nervousness...

N : ok..good night...

Alya : hmm...

She goes from there..

As alya turns she sees manik there..

A : manik ..

M : wo main...

A : manik tum tu uske liye feel karte hi na...i seen in you eyes don't lie...

M : hmm...but she don't and she was right it's stupidity ..
Acha chal good night. .

He goes from there...

Alya : god..ye kya hi ra hai...
Manik is very delicate god...uske saath rehna...agar kuch hua tu vo tut jaayega...
Please be with him...


...




Nandini too moves to her class and soon it was lunch break..



Ok guys I'll post b part soon...

Hope you liked it..

Bye keep smiling..

Be happy...

Divya...

SaYa...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
It was Nice.
Waiting for next part.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
oh no!!!!! manik ko bura laga...ab nandini ko kuch karna parega...jissa manik better feel kara...
awsm part...plz next part asap...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Fab update...
Luved it 2 d core...
Plz continue soon...
Take care... & keep writing...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Hey dear nice update but manik ko bura laga nandu ke baat se so he is sad and staying awsy frm het pls update next one soon and pls pm me next part iam ut requalar reader and commenting also
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
nice update manik feels bad ohh poor boy interesting continue soin waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello...am here with update

Please guys response do

Part 8 B

It was lunch and all the stundents were present in canteen , ground or corridor ...

In 12th sceince A

No one there except them..

C : uff...what a day yaar..no fun att all...

D : yess..no free period..

Mu : umm...am feeling tired..

With this she hug abhi and he immediately holds her tight and caresses her hair...

Manik smiles looking at them..

D : ye alya aur navya bhi ni aayi

This was there daily routine to stay here in class for alya and navya

M : you all are waiting for tgem as love sick puppy..

Abhi : yaar...jab tu is phase ko taste karega na..tu tujhe bhi aise hi restless ness..hogi ...

Manik smiles...

In mind : god...will i ever be able to taste it...please i really need someone beside me as they all gave

As soon as he finish his talk nandinu enters with her ever so swewt and cheerful voice

N : hello...guys..

Mu : hey nandu..

Abhi : hello beautiful..

Cabir : he...lll...ooo...honey

Dh : hello...doll..

Nandini smile on there antics

N : ok..it was good..

Than she hesitatingly turbs towards manik..

N : he..ll..o.. Ma..nn..ik..

Manik looks at everyone and than at her..

M : hey...by the way where is alya and navya..guys..

N : umm...vo actually miss verma called them...and they asked me to come here..i don't know y??

Than nandini looks at manik who turns his face towards window and give an uninterested look to her..

She understands that she is not needed here..

Mukti was about to say when..

N : but i think i should not dis.. Aah...disturb you guys.. Umm.. I'll go than.

Abhi : are..no ..nothing li..

He was about speak further but was interrupted by

M : aaahh..ya actually..we are..
So ya..you .umm..you go..
Thanx..

Nandini nods and goes towards door...when alya and navya too comes there..

Al : hey...where are you going..come.

N : umm...vo..mai..i vo..

M : are alya..come na..you are late..

Alya : haan..but..nan's you..

M : are come na..navyaa..come..

They comes inside and nandu goes out...

...

N : god..y am feeling bad...he ..he was right..i should not disturb them...uff...it's hurting..ughhh

...


Al : what was that??

Na : haan...sweety aise kyun

Mu : haan ..use bura laga hoga

M : guys...bura lagne wali kya baat hai...isme...it's ok...

Al : means you said anything

M : umm...vo..chalo canteen chalte hai


All sighs and moves out...

Alya and manik...were coming at last...

Alta holds his hand and takes her to wall beside ground and make him sit there and stands in front of him...

Al : manii...kya hua..

M : aah..vo nothing...

Al : manik are you avoiding her because of last night...tgat what she said...hmm..

M : no..vo..

Al : manik...you felt bad na...

M : umm..vo..yess

Al : manik you need to give her time dear..acha you tell me..have you ever felt bad because of any girl except three of us...me navya and mukti...no right??

He nods cutely...alya chuckles

Al : but you are sad on her...because she have an important place in your life in your heart...manik you were in many relationship before...but this time you genuinely felt for someone.. And you can't be so cruel on yourself and let her go so easily..
You can't be unfair with that little cut bundle of joy...
Give her a chance..feel it boy..
And trust me it will work..
Dear...don't be scare...give her chance and may be she is the one
I have seen in you eyes... You'll right...

Manik : i..i..just felt bad yaar..
And yes you are right..i..i should give myself a chance..
Umm...thankyou..

Al : oh...please shut up..

Manik chuckles and hugs her..

She smiles and kisses his forhead

Manik smiles and

M : acha ab chale...luv guru..

Al : awww...you are so mean

M : ohh...sachi..thankyou..

Al : you...

And they start running behind each other ...


...


Ayan : harshad's bff

A : hey...harshad look there..

H : where bro..

Ay : look...man..she is so HOT..that new GIRL...

Harshad looks where he was pointing and smirks...

H : aah..man..with hotness she is sexy cute..and BEAUTIFUL

Ay : so..chal..

H : ya..let's taste her..


They goes near her..

H : hey...beautiful...

N : execuse me..

H : aahh...we are complementing you and you didn't even said thank you bad manners girls kyun ayan

Ay : yup...

N : listen i don't need you complement...

H : umm...attitude..haan.. I like it

N : acha..you liked it..

H : yes...i really do...

N : omg..thankyou you liked it..
Really it matters to me a lot..
Bolo na kya tum mere friend banoge...

Alya and manik who were running behind each other too stop seeing harshad and nandini talking..

They stand in corner and listen's them..

H : ok...but tumhe kuch karna hoga

N : acha kya...

...


Al : is he trapping nans

M : i don't know..if he did any thing to her I'll not leave him

He was about to go..

Al : hmm...wait ...wait here..

Manik looks at her and than again nandini...

Ha : ok..kiss me..

N : umm...fine..than you'll be my friend..

H : he he..yes kiss.. Me..on lips

Manik and alya were shocked when they saw nandini going towards him...

Manik was fuming alya holds his hand...

Nandini moves near him and sneaks her hand around his neck..

Harshad smirks and pulls her waist

As soon as he pull her nandini give hard and tight kiss on his manly part with her legs...

Harshad immediately leaves her falls down because of pain

While nandini was smirking..

Alya and manik were shocked..

But suddenly alya started laughing

Ha : you bloody bitch

He gets up and was about to slap her but beforw manik could do anything nandini holds his hands and give her solid punch to harshad on his stomach..

Manik was shocked..

He looks at alya..

M : are you..sure..i ...i should even try to love her .

Alya nervously smiles..


H : I'll not leave you...

N : haan..pehle jaa..aur khud thik kar phir mujhe pakadyo...aur tu..
Chahiye...

Ayaan shakes his head horribly and rund holding harshad hand..

Nandini smirkingly turns and sees alya and manik there with shocked face..

Nandini smiles faintly...and immediately her eyes become teary

Alya looks at her and runs to her as soon as alya comes near her nandini starts crying and hugs her tightly...

Manik was shocked seeing this he goes near her and puts his hand on her shoulder

M : kya hua...

Nandini looks at him.. With teary eyes..

N : vo...vo...ii..i..am...

She again started crying hugging alya tight...

Manik and alya look at each other helplessly...

Alya too was crying seeing nandini

Manik closes his eyes and take deep breathe...

He than start caressing her hairs and back...to ease her..

After sometime she stops crying..

She gets up...

N : aah...vo..a...am...s..sor..sorry.
Vo i...loose coo...control..

A : hey...don't be sorry we are always there for you ...

Nandini looks at manik...

Her eyes were pleading to him to say same...

Alya understands and goes from there...


Nandini too was about to go but manik holds her hand and pulls her in a hug...


First she was taken aback...but when she feels that manik has hugged her...

She again started crying and tightens the hug...

Manii too let her cry and enters store room...while hugging only

Which was beside them.. ..




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