MaNan SS - I Know What You're Doing - Archana Vinod Part 3, Pg 16

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sunset17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Awesome... Nail biting experience...

Update next part soon

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Jamwal

@Jamwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

omg..
loved the update
waiting for next

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Sathyasahana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Awesome story...little scary

Waiting for next update

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siyaaaali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

amazing but little bit scary update...

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Annieeeeiee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Through the first half I was like.. Yeah okay. Story is progressing. Good hubby wifey stuff. Hmph.

But but but the second half got me like oh shit oh shit oh shit!!! No no no no. It is gonna happen. Why do I have a feeling it is manik himself. Split personality and all. xD funny. I know. That maddy guy. Wierd.

Why do you have to do this. Leave us on a cliffy!!!

I want morrre. Uhun. Make me read. I have my pre pre boards hovering over my head. But I want to read your story. This is irresistible.

Brilliant work haan :D

Common get to it. Go write the next chapter for us. Kbye. Lots of love. Thankyou for the pm. :**

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kavyach

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Awesome update...
LAST PART WAS SCARY...
Whats happening with Nandini?
Pls update soon...

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mairaallauddin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Awesome update

But of manik is not the stalker then who is the stalker

Is maddy the stalker

Superb update

Loved it

Loved the update

Update the next part soon

Edited by mairaallauddin - 9 years ago

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riddhima11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

After a good minute spent in regulating my heartbeat to normal rate, here I am amazed at the way you write.

I am scared, sachhi waala scared. and specially with the gruesome thought that Nandini wont ever find comfort in "I am not alone". Strangely I can put myself in her shoes, even when I have fortunately never faced any situation as such, and never wish to. Maybe it is the power of the way you express this feeling of being watched, you get sucked inside the plot of the story involuntarily. Brilliant writing. Cant stress that enough.

Madhyam giving me creeps.

The best part about this story, how their relation seems so realistic, there is love, but with humdrum conversations of any normal couple. It seems so natural. The pataofying husband, and the dedicated wife (angry for all the right reasons). There are compromises in every marriage, and you portrayed them, makes me connect to the realism even more.

Also, I thank you again for addressing issues like drinking and eating, in the most subtle way. Have hidden messages, if someone wants to unearth them.

I feel blessed to have landed up with this story. I know m gonna enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy a roller coaster ride.😃

Thanks for the PM.

Lots of love and respect

Pankhuri

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nymphadoratonks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Really looking forward to the story! It's great :D Update soon :')

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mehak_ahuja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#70

It was sooo amazing...

I don't have words to describe the state by my heart... I mean I actually couldn't write anything for a good 15 mins it us then I'm able to come up with some words...

The way u express there relation n fear which nandini faces it just awesome...

N this Maddy I don't know but is giving some weird feelings ...

Thanxx for the amazing n long update

Keep smiling

Stay blessed

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