Fate is Soulmate part 4 update pg 17...29/5 - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Sunna nahi abhi tak yeh song even movie.. but let me tell u.. update was hell awesome...
Next time please meri taraf se MANIK up nandini punch dedena please... he is such a monster huhh
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
Amazing update...
& emotional too...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
so sad update

manik is such a moster

nandini crying for manik..she doesnt look good crying...she looks good when she takes stand for herself

plz dont drag this maniks ruthless behaviour... let him suffer got her love

no more rona dhona plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22

Sunna nahi abhi tak yeh song even movie.. but let me tell u.. update was hell awesome...
Next time please meri taraf se MANIK up nandini punch dedena please... he is such a monster huhh


sabse pehle download kar Jake song ...
mera exams hain Thursday ko Friday ya Saturday ko update karoongi ab ...
till then keep missing me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Superb update
Oh no nandu was manik's gf
He just took her to a party
Kaisa sa hai manik
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: shalini16gupta

I not able to get the story. Hope you will reveal it soon .
Otherwise nice Update.
Continue soon


my exams are going on dear but m not able to study so don't know what m writing ...but I will try clear u doubts soon ...after 27 ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Awesome update


Superb update




Fab update



Loved it




Loved the update



Waiting for the next part




Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Day by day I m getting very less likes and comments which is not encouraging me to update any of my stories but still I managing as much as I can update all new parts my stories before ramazzan ...those who are asking me to give name of my stories so here I am adding name in my signature there are only four stories and yes those who asked me to hive my watpadd id link so let me tell u I am not on watpadd coz I only have permission from my family to be here if anyone finds my story there do let me know or DTs..


@Manancraze ...I am updating this for u do big comment ...enjoys the update





PART 4




Wait nandini where are u going ?? Manik called her from behind but she didn't listen that and kept running she was observing the wetness of her eyes into her heart ...she was feeling hurt ...her body as well as her heart was paining ...she didn't knew on which she was running ,but she didn't wanted to looked back she just kept silently running may be she wanted to go away to the silent land where she can only heared her heart beat ...

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Manik saw her going away but he didn't go behind her someone tapped on his shoulder he looked back ..to see cabir was standing there ...

What are u doing outside?? did nandini left ?? canir asked ...

yup she left in fact I came here to stop her only but she faster .. but why u came leaving party in middle? Manik said as well as questioned him the reason of his exit ...

Just like that girls were troubling me with their question about u ... cabir winked at him ...one which manik chukkled...


Waise Manik can I ask u something?? cabir asked him ...

Hmm manik was engroosed in his mobile ...

What is going between u and nandini ??...I mean are u guys again together ??? waise I m still wonder why u broke up with her ?? cabir was confused ...

What are u serious?? she and me together again?? common man she is not my type and u know that ..and I was with her in the past just for the deck if stupid bet ...and today I brought her here bcoz I didn't have any company so she was is a easy option manik said without any care ...

[ But cabir tried to say something but stopped in middle ...bcoz manik looked at him ...


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Manik was lazily driving his car when he saw girl walking in the road alone silently she just looked like nandini ...Manik stopped his car near her and hot of from the car ...

Nandini !! he called from behind nandini turned towards him to look at him but after giving him her one glance she again looked away angrily and started walking...

Nandini listen where are u going alone at this time ?? come I will drop u !! first time manik same said her politly ...


Why?? u to hate me right? then why are u coming behind me ? bolo why are u doing this ?? she bounce on him with so many questions...

look this is not the time to discuss this here !!! its not safe for u get in the car he almost order her !!!

why ?? m I like a toy to u tum kahon to uth jaoon tum kaho to baith jaaoon ,jab Jo bolo wo karoon bolo its better to met an accident rather than going with u she through angry glare to manik now it made manik angry very angry ...

I said get in the car !! why are u not getting it? he hold her from her arms ...

Don't touch me I said leave me !! she jerked his hand ...

Stop !! bht ho gaya tumhara enough is enough now do as I say go get in the car otherwise u know I have better ways also !! He pinned his fingers into her arm...nandini looked at him for few moments and took a seat in the car ...manik also start the car ...

Take this!! he gave her tissue paper ...

Mujhe nhi chahiye she said and rested her head on the seat and closed her eyes ...

waise why ran from there ?? oh u can't see me with any other girl right ?? Manik asked with smirk ...

Aisa kuch nhi hain tum kisi me bhi saath raho mujhe koi farak nhi padta !! its ur life u can live this with anyone u wants its none of my business her eyes were still close when she said those words and tears were rolling down from her eyes ...

Achcha!! then why are u not saying this looking into my eyes ?? bcoz I caught u Manik focussed on the road..

u can think whatever u want to think I won't convince u ... I am not getting any prize and money by convincing u she said slowly ...

Money and prize ?? I think I am ur everything nandu haina ?? he said grin...nandini didn't say anything she kept crying silently ...Manik stopped the car and looked at nandini for few moments ...and then he pulled her to himself ...

Manik what are u doing ?? and why u stopped the car ?? she asked fear took her under it ...

Ur eyes are so beautiful !! tears don't look good in them I want to see my face in it ... Manik said wiping her tears ...

Manik...pl...ple... please leave ...me we are getting late !! she stammered ...

First say that which u said me few moments before looking into my eyes Manik traced his finger on her cheeks ...

What ??? she asked him confusingly ...


That u don't care seeing me with anyone ?? I don't beleave u ?? looked at me princess!! he hold her chin and made her look into Hus eyes there was a naughty grin on his face !!!

Why u wants me to say that?? I am no one to u then why it does matter to u ?? Nandini asked and again looked down ..

u know na I love to tease people specially the girls and about u to u were my girl friend with whom I spent longest time so ??? he touch corner of her lips ...

Why u plays with our emotions manik we are human hame dard hota hain .when someone keep insulting u ,when someone don't care about u or about ur feelings don't do this with anyone manik ...at least find someone and be with her changed ur casual attitude ...please nandini said ...

Say that u don't care about me honey ... Manik hold her chin again and pulled her more close to himself...

What do u want to listen ?? bolo yahi na me mujhe farak padta hain ya nhi then yes it foes matters to me ,I can't see u with anyone ,my heart pains whenever I saw any girl near u ,u are my heart beat ,I love u I can't change that fact ...but I font regret that I still love no ... she hold his colller and said her eyes filled withdrew tears ...

Aww Manik playfully said and traced his fingers on her face ...

Manik stop !! what are u doing ?? she herk his hand ...

Arey u urself said that u love to I m just showing my love to u !! after all I care for ur emotions for me .. he placed her hair strends behind her ear ..Nandini tried to read his expression but failed Hus face was emotionless as well as expressionless ...he was looking into her eyes with straight face ...

Love ?? u are showing me ur love wow what a player u are manik u can't love anyone !! I m not fool who will fall into ur trap again !!! how many times will u hurt me? please stop all this I am tired please manik I beg u ...don't do this to me already I am very tensed ...my family is tensed bcoz of u madhyams family refuse ... Now she started sobbing ...

Cut the crap nandini !? madhyam was not right for u at least u should thank me that I saved u from that jerk ... and about yr family so don't worry I will search a much better guy than him and will fix ur marriage ..hmm Manil cupped her face into his hand ..


U don't feel guilty for ur deads haina? u don't care about anyone .. u just wants show that how mahan u are ?? do u have any idea what u did with me by kidnaping me ..madhyam ki mummy meri kitni badnami kar rahi hain ...do have any idear how embaressing and painful for me to hear everyone's taunting when I am not at fault u are the reason for all this but u don't have any shame ...infact u are saying u will fix my marriage why ?? .. She hit on his chest ...

I told u before also u shouldn't have slap me otherwise ye sab nhi hota and don't care about anyone I will find some boy for u after I owed u that !!! Manik took both her hands into his and stopped her from hitting me ...and pulled her more close to him and fused his lips with her ...nandini was shocked on this sudden kiss first she tried to protest but he was so poqwrfull then her ...he was kissing her madly like his life depends on it ...nandini was not responding him ...she was keep pushing him but he was not moving a bit after kissing her wildly he left her ...

U how dare u Nandini fisted his hair ..

Ahh !!! o mwri jungli bulli stop its hurting ... he removed his hair from her grip and hugged her kissing her cheeks ...

Manik leave me ?? she again protest ...

Kya yaar pura mood spoi karke rakh deti ho..tumhari shadi k baad tumne mere haath thodi na aana hain...waise I have my ways ...and don't worry koi na koi kar lega don't worry he again kissed her cheek...

Agar nhi ki kisi ne to kya tum karoge mujhse shadi bolo?? nandini asked him and manik looked at her with shock ...


TO BE CONTINUE

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Edited by paarsaa - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Awesome update love it Manik is a jerk abhi bhi woh nehi badla please Nandini ko kisi aur ke sath setting karwalo aur make Manik Jealous continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update 😊
waiting for the next😊

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