#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1

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--Kkkhushiii--

@--Kkkhushiii--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#301

Damn I thought after knowing the flashback, the story wud become a bit clear

But here the opposite has happend, the story has become more complicated

Like the whole nandini, dhruv & Alya convo and then the whole Nandini & neyonika convo made it all the more confusing

Shyt so many mysteries man!!!

Anyway update was amazing as alwys

So update soon cuz m dying to know the real story!!!

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sweet_kaur

@sweet_kaur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#302

Tooo gud
Commendable job
Great update
Nandini description was beautiful
Manik pov was incredible
And yet another time your words made
Me cry waiting for the revelation
Nd about nyonika I guess she is negative
And behind the misunderstanding
But that's just a guesses
Cont soon
Thanks for pm!!

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vanivartika

@vanivartika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#303

Both r in so much pain ... o god

Pls break them out in their arms they needed

Both r in love ...but why is always complicated

Just waiting for Manan moment realisation of love care and pain for each other

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mishti5

@mishti5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#304

Nice update
Leap is a good idea...but show it haa, hw Manik comes to know everything...
But dont end it so soon...
M enjoying the updates
Continue soon
Thnks fr pm...

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yasmiincali

@yasmiincali

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#305

Awesome update pls next part update soon.

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lovePANI

@lovePANI

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#306

Beautiful update but very sad one..

No no no no...he didn't heard the full
conversation between nyonika n nandu..aiyaaa...

y this Aliya n nandu were talking like this...mzazk kai chakkar mai..she loose everything...
O this misunderstanding thing is very bad...

o it would be lovely to see manik on his knees..

keep smiling n take care.

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jashanpreet

@yash7717

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Posted: 9 years ago

#307

Awesome that was..i loved it...
I seriously wana c...what time brings fr nandu and Manik...

God bless uhh...

And plz plz update soon

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NAVYA64

@NAVYA64

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#308

awesome update

loved it

good one

emotional update

cont soon

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25prachijadhav

@25prachijadhav

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#309

Felt sad for manik, and yeah nyonika character seems to be positive.

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#310

it was such a emotional part...

with so much tears...
manik ye jo suna
lagta h kisi or k liye ho...
but manik ko laga ye sb fake h...
omg...

manik is in also so much pain..

pata nhi kab clear hogi misunderstanding. ..

but both love each other.

n both r in pain too much..

u r such a expressive writer. .

hatts of. ..

I just love it..
Itsss soo awesome ..
So amazing. .just love to the core. ..

Soo .fantastic. ...

Keep updating. ..

U r such a beautiful writer...
Update soon..
Waiting for next update eagerly ..
Thanks for this update
.
Thanks for pm too. ..

n yaa leap idea was gud...
I know jo bhi krogi accha krogi..

Stay blessed

Love Geet

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