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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!!1! awesum promo dear..
Hahaha😆😆Manan r blaming each othr 4 revealing their secrets..
Lvd it..Mukthi blackmailin manik...
Atlast manan romance...Agn cliffhanger..
Kya yaar?? Jaldi post krna...do continue...
Thnks so much dear 4 d pm..Waitin 4 nxt update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome promo..
Mukthi blackmailing manik..
Manan romance..
Luvd it..
Thnkx 4 d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanq so much for this superb romantic update

manik super romantic

this time they both didn't fight

mukti teasing manna

dj helping manik for his first date


awesome update
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Posted: 9 years ago


NOTE : Slight changes have been made in the update from the promo ... because I felt it better this way... hope you like this... sorry for changing it...

Happy reading...😊

part 17 :

Next morning was a little peaceful that the usual bickering between manan. May be the day's experience gave them some brains to behave well instead of fighting like cats and dogs. And mukthi's silence was creating the oblivious doubts in manik's mind.

On the breakfast table :

"hey boyfriend.." nandini greeted raj who was back after his one week trip. "hey baby doll..." he smiled and greeted her back. She stood behind him wrapping her arms around his neck and kissed his cheeks and said " I missed you soo much..." he too patted her head and mouthed a miss you too and dadu dj nyonika smiled seeing the duo. Manik came and smiled widely seeing his dad and hugged him pushing nandini and said "dad kab aayae aap..??" and moved to sit in his seat ignoring the looks of nandini. "early morning.. u were sleeping toh disturb nai kiya..." and pulled a frowning nandini in the chair next to him. Mukthi too joined in minute and jumped seeing her dearest daddy and pounced on him and said "ohh.. dad I missed you soo much..." to which a missed you too reply came. Mukthi and nandini were sitting on either sides of Raj and he himself was feeding them with his hands and both were enjoying this while manik was sitting with a sad expression and said "mujhae toh sab bhul hi gayae..." to which all laughed and nyonika spoke "aww my baby.. chalo ill feed you today.." and sat beside him to feed him... and the breakfast continued with the little trio telling their dad what all happened in his absence... complaining teasing and glaring.. and what not...

In college :

Nandini moved to her class and sat with Navya and Soha while Manik joined his friends and Mukthi left to her department.

In Nandini's class :

"so kal kahan kahan ghum kae aayae...???" soha asked looking at nandini who was trying her best to avoid this topic but couldn't as all her friends under the guidance of mukthi and cabir were prepared to tease Manan to the max possible extent.

"kahan kahan matlab kya.." nandini asked playing with her pen and was praying that professor should appear asap.

"arae wahi.. kal date thi naa tum dono ki... kya kya kiya..??" navya asked and both soha and navya hi-fied.

"ku...kuch...kuch bhi toh nahi... and who told you that we went ofr a date" now she was stammering... she tried moving but was sandwiched between the duo.

"nandu idhar udhar bhagnae ki kosish bhi math karna... hum tumhae nahi chodnae walae... aur humhae sab pata hai...so ab bata do.. ki kal kya kya kiya tumnae manik kae saath... aur yeh baat manik nae khud cabir ko batai thi... aur cabir nae baki sab ko..." navya said and winked at her and a slight blush crept nandini's cheeks remembering the time they spent together the previous day. And what was there to hide so she decided to tell them in brief as there was no other option left also and told them about the beach the dhaba and the dinner skipping all the "important" moments but the poor girl didn't know that whatever she was speaking was being recorded by her very own friend soha. Soha smirked after nandini finished telling and clicked the send button and before they could further info their professor came and the class sarted much to nandini's relief.

Other side :

Manik's class was after an hour so he along with Cabir Dhruv Aaryaman Harshad and Abhi were sitting in the canteen.

Aaryaman winked at others and as planned Cabir started

"yaar achanak tu kahan chala gaya.." and manik chocked the juice he was drinking and said "mai.. kahin nahi... bas ghar pae hi tha... vo collage aanae ka man nahi tha.. so.." an paused looking at their evilly smirking faces. Abhi signalled Aaryaman and he played the recorded audio which soha sent him just a while ago. Maink gulped the saliva and said "guys vo... vo bas casually... u know.." and was about to get up when abhi placed his hand on anik's shoulder and said "arae baith yaar.. abhi class mai time hai..." manik wiped the sweat on his forehead and all were enjoying his condition to the core.

"chal bhai humhae bhi toh bata... ki kya kya kiya tunae..." Dhruv too had his part

Manik sighed on getting caught red handed and said "I know that tum logon ko sab pata hai.. so now stop teasing... im tired already..." and hid his face in his palms. Cabir smirked at his answer and said "aaisa bhi kya kar diya tum dono nae ki u r tired..." and the others burst out laughing. Maik fisted his hands to punch him but Abhi pulled him back into the chair and all again laughed seeing his face. Manik got up and left in the speed of light before he gets pulled back and went straight to nandini's class room. As nandini was sitting on the bench near to the window she spotted manik waving hand at her. She frowned and again shifted her focus to the professor making manik more angry. He texted her to come out but she switched her cell off pissing him more. Finally after loosing his patience manik barged into the room to everyone's surprise and professor asked

"yes manik.. what do you want..?"

Manik looked straight into nandini's eyes and said "nandini..." nandini's eyes widened in shock and she covered her face with the book leaving her eyes to see manik's next move

"but the class is going on.. cant you wait for sometime.." and that was it for manik... he walked straight to nandini's desk..signalled navya to move from the side and holding nandini's hand dragged her out of the class to a deserted corner in the corridor.

"what the hell is this manik.." nandini asked rubbing her wrists and manik held her by shoulders and pinned her to the wall behind and said "kya zaroorath thi sab ko batane ki we both were out yesterday.." nandini tried freeing herself as manik's hands were hurting her shoulders but manik was adamant on his place

"don't even try... now answer me.." he said coming deadly close to her face and she looked into his eyes and said angrily

"u told cabir.. not me.." and pushed him back with a jerk. Manik frowned and said "no u told soha... see I have proof..." and played the recording which he copied from Aaryaman's cell without his notice. Nandini palmed her mouth and said "hawww... but she said that they already know about it because u told cabir and cabir told all of them..."

"y will I tell them dammit.." manik said pinning her to the wall again and she pushed him again and said totally angry with his act "stop it manik.. mujhae kya pata tha that I was being trapped... aur vo log jhut bol rahae thae to get to know things from me.. I thought ki u told them.. like you told mukthi.." and rubbed her shoulders where he caught her. Manik huffed in anger and left from there after getting to know that all his friends had planned all this and both got trapped so easily and nandini also tapped her foot and left to her class after apologising to her professor. The classes continued till lunch.

LUNCH TIME :

All were sitting and having their lunch silently as they observed manan angry and decided to stay quite when suddenly and announcement by principal broke the silence in the canteen

"hello guys.. so its been nearly 3 weeks the college started to we management have planned a Freshers party for all the new admission students... I know its quite delayed due to some reasons but now we will be holding a party after 2 days... so be ready boys and girls... and start your preparations for the party..."

All the first year students present in the canteen hooted in joy and aliya exclaimed "oh my god... only two days are there... so how about going for shopping today itself.. agar kal jayangae toh we will get tired for the party day after tomorrow... what say.." and looked at all for approval.. all the girls clapped in excitement but the boys were pondering over the same as shopping and girls was a big task for them to handle.

"guys..im not interested in shopping.. ill wear something..." nandini said disinterestedly and all looked at her totally shocked by her answer and mukthi said "yaar tu theek toh hai naa...?" and checked her forehead making everyone chuckle and continued "tu kuch bhi pehan kae apnae freshers mai aa jayaegi.. just shut up.. we all are going and that's final.. mai abhi us designer ko call karthi hun where we took clothes for bhai and your engagement.. that's the best here... so decided... everyone eat fast and we will move in 20 minutes... am I clear..." mukthi announced and Abhi murmured "lo aa gayi Manik ki carbon copy.."

" I heard it abhi.." mukthi said crossing her arms across her chest and cabir and dhruv giggled seeing his face while manik was lost looking at nandini only. Nandini was also aware of his gaze but still avoided him as she was angry for his behaviour in the morning.

After one hour everyone was present in the same mall where they brought clothes on the occasion of manan's engagement and this time navya soha aaryaman and harshad also accompanied them. The girls were busy in their section whereas the boys were least interested in shopping and were just chilling out talking about some random topics.

"dhruv come here..." aliya called dhruv and he stood up with a jerk and moved towards her and said in a uninterested tone "kya hua Aliya...??" to which she shot a glare at him and said handing him a sherwani "go try this and come..." and crossed her arms on her chest and the rest of boys gang laughed seeing him. Aliya turned to them and said in a serious tone "itni hasi kyu aa rahi hai.. wait ill call other girls also.." and went to call mukthi navya soha and nandini. Soon all the couples were divided in selecting clothes for themselves as well as their partners but three people were acting totally different. And they were 1. Manik 2. Nandini and 3. Aaryaman.

Manan were not selecting clothes but were throwing glares and were irritating each other while Aaryaman was looking at the couples and mumbled "mera kya bhagwan.. meri life bhi set kardo... soha bhi gayi harshad ki help karnae... ab mai akela reh gaya..." and suddenly he felt a tap on his shoulder and saw nandini standing with a sherwani in her hands. She asked him

"akelae kya kar rahae ho..?" and he said in a sad dramatical tone "mera koi nahi hai help karnae kae liyae.. toh kya karu.. bas dekh raha tha.." to which nandini laughed and said "chalo ill help you... try this.." and forwarded the one in her hand. Aaryaman was first hesitant but after getting an assuring nod from her he took it and moved to the changing room. All this was noticed by manik who was boiling in anger and said "very bad move Miss Murthy... now face the consequences.." and went to cabir who called him to come to him.

"nandu try these two.. dono acchae hai... u try then we will finalise one.." mukthi said showing two ghagras to nandini and she sighed and said " yaar ab dono try karu... accha keep this with you.. first ill wear one phir doosara dena.." and moved to the changing section and after 10 minutes came out wearing an baby pink ghagra.

"nandu orange wala bhi try karo naa... humhae toh dono hi bahtuth acchae lag rahae hai.." navya said looking at nandini and without noticing that the other one was with mukthi she moved to the changing room.

"arae yeh mukthi bhi naa... mera lehanga khud kae paas rakh kae Abhi kae paas chali gayi.." and was about to open the door when she heard a knock.

A few minutes back :

"bhai give this to nandini...abhi needs my help..." mukthi said handing over the dress to manik and he raised his eyebrow and said in a scarcastic tone " and why do u think i will do this..." to which mukthi replied with a smirk "because aapka bed room wala secret abhi tak kisi ko nai pata... and if you want me to do the honours i will not mind but soch lo.." and looked at manik for reply... he huffed and snatched the dress from mukthi's hand and headed towards the dressing room where nandini was trying her dress.

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present :

Manik entered the dressing room when nandini extended her hand to take the dress making nandini's eyes go wide in horror. And before she could scream he palmed her mouth and pinned her to the trial room wall and whispered in her ears "what do you think you were doing there.." nandini frowned listening this and he said looking at her frown "don't act smart... Aaryaman kae saath y were that extra sweet... mujhae toh humesha MARY COM ki tarah punch karthi rehati ho.." and pressed her more to the wall feeling her hands struggling. "common speak something..." he asked forgetting the fact that he was the one who blocked her mouth with his giant hand. She with eyes showed him his hand and he removed it smiling sheepishly.

"manik get out of this room.. koi dekh laega... phir sae pakadae jayangae... go before they see.." and tried to get out of his hold. He slowly slid his hands on her arms and entwined his fingers with hers and said "let them see.. kya hoga..we are engaged now.." and winked at her. She was about to protest when manik held both her hands with his single hand on her back and his other hand travelled to the dori of the blouse. He opened it in one go making her gasp and started placing open mouth wet kisses from her bare shoulder to her neck. She fisted her hands and struggled to get them out of his hold and succeeded in doing so. Manik's one hand was on her back holding her close to him while the other was busy making patterns on her waist. Nandini clutched his shoulder for support as manik slowly started nibbling the area of her shoulders and neck and moaned his name in a merely audible tone "manikkk..." And he looked at her face. It was totally red.. nandini was breathing heavily and her eyes were tightly shut. He first kissed her forehead then her eyes and then came to her cheeks and was about to claim her lips someone knocked the door of nandini's trial room.

"nandu fast... jaldi karo.. kitna time ho gaya hai tumhae gayae huae.." navya called her from outside as because of nandini's delay she was not able to help cabir in selecting the dress.

Nandini looked at manik and he nodded his head in a no and buried his face in the gap between her neck and shoulder and nandini managed to say "navya tum jao.. im coming..." and navya left to help cabir. Manik hugged her tightly and said "you are looking beautiful in pink..." and smiled feeling her lips curve against his chest "tumhari sherwani mainae select kar di hai.. just try once.." nandini said still in the hug and manik said in a naughty tone " mainae vo final kar di hai.. now let me help you.." and slid his fingers on her bare back sending shivers down her spine and she hugged him more tightly. he broke the hug feeling her shivering and slowly pecked her lips making her blush and said " okay now im going out... tum bhi aa jao.. and.." but was cut in by nandini "im taking this only.." manik left the room again giving a tight smooch to her lips leaving her all red. Nandini composed herself and came out after changing and all selected their dresses cleared their bills and moved out to the accessories shop. Finally after 3 hours of shopping they reached home and showed their clothes to nyonika and dj and after dinner retired to their rooms.

"arae nandu bol na.. bhai tujhae kahan lae gayae.." mukthi finally asked nandini after getting time and locking all the doors of their room so that manik doesn't barge in like previous day and take away nandini.

"first hum beach gayae.. phir dhabae pae lunch kiya.. phir farmhouse gayae...accha I didn't know manik ki selection itni acchi hai..."nandini said looking at mukthi who was going crazy listening that her brother was behaving like a crazy teenage lover.

"kya..?" mukthi frowned and nandini moved to her wardrobe to show her the dress which manik gave her yesterday. Mukthi too was surprised seeing it but kept calm and said "arae wah.. bhai toh bahuth develop ha gayae.." nandini was about to reply when they heard the door banging and it was definitely manik. Both kept calm for some time giggling and mukthi said " bhai bhi naa... kitna ziddi hai... now go warna vo door todh dangae..." nandini nodded her head in disbelief and moved to open the interconnection door when manik charged her with questions "what the hell were you doing..?? itni der kyu laga di door open karnae mae... do I have to remind you everyday that.." and was continuously ranting in his frustrated tone when nandini ignored him and walked into his room closing the door and laid down on his bed and pulled the duvet over and switched off the table lamp of her side. Manik got annoyed by her behaviour and said after lying beside her "mai itni der sae bol raha hun and you are not even looking at my face.." but nandini didn't turn her face towards him. He was facing her back. This was limits of testing his patience and he turned her with a jerk and hovered over her and without giving her a second to register what was happening he placed his lips on hers pinning her hands on the bed. He kissed her harshly biting and chewing her lips and she just kept moaning and wriggled under him. He broke the kiss after feeling her breathless and again took her lips for a long passionate kiss And after breaking it dug his face in the valley of her neck and shoulder and started placing kisses all over her shoulder and neck making her moan his name. she tried freeing her hands but he was too strong for her and after struggling a lot she stayed calm and let him do what he wanted to. Manik was placing butterfly kisses all over and she just giggled feeling his touch and After whet felt like eternity manik left her and said pecking her lips one more time "good night..." nandini just blushed and turned the other side. Manik moved closer to her and taking her in a back hug he too slept covering themselves with the duvet.

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next part will be the freshers celebration... i was thinking of a new entry in the story... dont worry negative character nahi hai...it will be a funny one... she will be just like Ridhimma...

so do let me know...

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yaar readers finish this thread naa... i will give you fresh fast update if u finish this thread asap... pleashhh... 🤗

take care

keep smiling..

loads of love...

Neeraja... 😊

Edited by neeju_chinnu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
manik pushed nandu so that he can hug his father😆
their friends r epic😆
both got trapped 🤣
manik hid his face in his plams
he barged in the class
only he can do this😆
both were angry on each other
but phir bhi they don't forget 2 romance😳
lovely manan moments
poor aryaman😆
in between all the couples he was feeling lonely
now waiting 4 the new entry
is she 4 aryaman?
cont soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
bt give more of teasing of manan
superb update
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
too gd.. waiting for jealous nandu
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update chinnu...

kitna jhagadte hai yaar ye,,,,,,,,,,

frnds hai ya CID puri details nikal ke hi chod te hai...bechare manan phas gaye unke jaal mein...

manik and his impulsive behaviou...kuch nahi ho sakta is ladke ka...

again shopping,,,,,,,,,,bechare ladko ki to lag gayi waat...😆😆

manan romance in changing room...😳😳...manik will be manik...kabhi nahi sudhrega,.,,,,,,,

i love to see jealous manik.,...

ise kehte hai manik malhotra ke style mein good night bolna,.,,,,,,,hhaa

loved it

update soon


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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update thanks for it
manik anger and jealous is good
keep smiling😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
hahaha
that was really comic..Manik n nandini fighting over dad..so cute bonding

so bad trapping of manan..
bure phasein

loved d shopping mall revenge of Manik..
actually I was ghussa too seeing nandini choosing cloths for aarya n not for Manik but then when.nandini said that she hav already selected cloths for Manik I became so happy..oh nandini is soo lovely

loved d update

awesome

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