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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice n funny chp..lvd it...
I still feel dat manan r gonna b engagd by their elders n its gonna b a surprise fr them...
I think dat myb d elders went to gt d rings aftr d cloth shopng...

Waitng fr u to finally reveal d surprise...
Waitng impatiently fr it..

Dhruv teasng session ws swt n cute...
N manan's monents of romance were cute too...

Continue soon...
Wl b waitng..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
The whole update was sooo much fun
First dhruv was the to get teased in the mall that was fun
Manik nd nandu selecting dresses was nice
The fud Cory scene was sooo dam funny loved it
Continue sooonnn
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsm update tha. ...
full of fun...
mukti ko sb malum hai 😆 dono ne ak dusre ki pasand ka colour ka dress kharida. ...
nandu ki situation like "na na karte pyaar mai kar gayi kar gayi " 😆
aww cool kabiraa ki nyonica ne mat de dia 😆
Romancing n all manan. 😳.oh vhi khullam khullam ... .. lomanik lene ki dene par gayi na...ab jhelo kamine dosto ki teasing ...😆
I think kal manan ka engagement milega surprise mai 😆😆
manan shocked family rocked😉
thanks for pm
update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Totally loved it so so so much...
Mukti knows k aag dono taraf lagi hai.. Hehe..

Tyanxx for the amazing update n the pm

Keep smiling
Stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chapter


Guys had a nice time teasing dhruv

Cabira was forced to spill the beans about navya!
Lol
Nyonika is so smart...

Dad's were their to save boys for the girls wrath!

Girls had a gala time shopping...

Manan chose each others preferred color combination. ...

And the best part was fab 4 teasing manan
With cabira s one liners...

Loved it

Thanks for the pm
Continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update thnkz 4 d pm..i thnk manan wedding hehe...it ws realy cute...manan dress selection...dhruv scared of alya..hehe...cabir buyng dress 4 navya..omg luvd it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome story.read all chapters in one go.the storyline was beautifully penned. Each and every update was an blissful one. U gave justice to each and every character. Manan's convos and moments were beautifully penned. Fab5, navni and abhi's convos were mindblowing showing their friendship. Manan and their families convos were blissful. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.if possible do pm me whenever u update.
Keep writing.
Stay blessed😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hat was awesome..
Cabir and dhruv were too good..
The way Cabir said that he is not alya so dhruv should not sit on his lap was way to funny😆
And manan color coordination..
I liked the manan scene...
Will be egarly waiting for the next update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Neeku mariyu mee kutumba sabhulaku Makara Sankranthi subhankankashlu ( a hearty pongal wishes to u and your family)

So people im in my pongal vacation which is my favourite festival and I managed an update.. do hit likes and comment jee bhar kae and make my festival more special... no PM's coz this is not being posted by me but by my cousin..! hope u understand...

Part 11 :

So finally the awaited surprise has come..!

The day after shopping :

Mukthi nandu and manik were in the garden jogging with dadu. Meanwhile in house

"morning ladies.. morning Kishore.." raj wished nyonika ,DJ and shalini who replies the same with a smile.

"toh kal ki tayyariyan kaisae chal rahi hai..?" he asked looking at them who were super cool sipping their morning coffee.

"bas amma shanno murthy ji rishu aur priya ka aana baki hai.." shalini replied

"aur humhari taraf sae zyada log nahi aayangae bas hum aur bacchae.. zyada shor sharaba ki zaroorath nahi hai.." dj said looking at raj who nodded approvingly.

"pata nahi manik aur nandu kaisae react karangae.." nyonika put forth her worries

"bacchae hai.. unhae kya pata .. kya sahi hai aur kya galath.. aur toh aur yae baath tabhi pakki ho gayi thi jab nandu paida hui thi.." dj said reminding them of their words when nandini was born.

"mujhae meri nandu pae pura bharosa hai... vo samajh jayaegi.." raj said proudly

"manik koi kam nahi hai.. vo bhi bahuth samajhdaar hai.." Kishore added in the same tone and after looking at each other they started laughing.

Same time the trio followed by dadu entered the house and saw them laughing over something and dadu asked "humhae bhi toh batao.. hum bhi thoda has langae.." and sat beside dj who immediately frowned looking at him

"yae kya kar rahae hai aap.. pehalae jayiyae.. fresh hokar aao.. phir gappae.." she said angrily and the juniors giggled looking at their strict dadu getting scolded by his wifie.

"huh..! aakae dekhunga tum logo ko.." he said and got up and looked at manan and mukthi giggling and said "tum logon ko alag sae bolu kya.. chalo jao aapnae room mai.. quick..!" he said maintaining his strict voice ant the trio ran upstairs.

After 30minutes everyone was on the breakfast table. Along with breakfast as agreed earlier the kids were served milk and they were having tough time to drink it.

"daduu.." nandini called him ever so sweetly and he looked at her and asked what by raising his eyebrows and nandu continued pointing at the glass "yae jo mlk hai na.. im.. yes im allergic to it.. toh mai nahi pee sakthi na.." she said sadly

(Manik's pov :

Omg.. itni acchi acting.. esae toh actor ban jana chaiyae tha.. doctor ban rahi hai.. agar mai dadu kae place mai hota toh.. jhae sae ek kissy dakae boltha ki "betha nahi peena ha toh mat piyo..".. nai nahi manik kya soch raha hai.. yae aaisae hi cute faces bana kar apni saari batein manwa lethi hai.. hum sab phas jatae hai aur yae madam bach jaati hai.. kuch soch.. itni aasani sae tu usae janae nahi dae saktha.. kal jo hua uskae baad toh bilkul bhi nai.. eureka...!! Got an idea..)

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"lekin nandini.. as far as I know.. u r not allergic to milk.. agar allergy hothi toh jab tum collage mai cold coffee pee rahi thi tab toh tumhae kuch nahi hua.. kyun mukthi..?" manik dragged mukthi along and mukthi who was dug in the thoughts of "how to get this glass empty" suddenly came out of her thoughts and said "kya..? kaha.. kab..?" to which manik replied "arae uss din yaad hai.. she was enjoying her cold coffee.. she was alright na..?" he tried to remind her and as she wasn't attentive towards previous conversation nodded a YES and nandini slapped her forehead

"nanduu... jhut bolna galath hai..." manik smiled at his victory as it was everyone's darling nandini's "pol-khol" and she glared at manik for spoiling her plan and he winked at her irritating her to the core.

"nandu.. not even a single word more.. finish this.. all of u.. and leave for collage.. are nt u ppl getting late..?"dadu ordered strictly and manik was the first one to empty his glass who drank it by closing his nose followed by mukthi who followed her brother and last was nandini. They made faces which dadu ignored as if nothing happened and others were trying hadr not to laugh looking at them. Nandini immediately ran into the kitchen to get something for her to get rid of that taste in her mouth and came out with a big bar of chocolate broke it into half and gave the other half to mukthi and they ate it as if they were starving from ages finally let out a sigh for getting that taste out of their mouth's and manik gave them an irritating look for not sharing the choco with him and said

"mai dikhai nai dae raha tum logon ko.." he said angrily to which mukthi replied licking her fingers "bhai.. chocolate first baki puri duniya baadmae.." and winked at him. Nandini ignored him and said looking at mukthi "chal golu.. we r getting late.." and moved to her room to get her bag followed by mukthi and a totally irritated manik.

"in dono ka kya hoga.." dj said keeping her hand on her forehead

"chill..dj.. why to fear when dadu is here" dadu boasted himself and she gave him a weak smile

"mummy ji.. bacchae hai.. bas aaisae hi Mazak mai ladtae rehatae hai.. aap pareshan na ho.." shalini assured her... and nyonika seconded her saying " ji.. mom.. bacchae hai.. chodiyae na aap yae coffee pijiyae.." and handed her a cup of hot strong coffee.

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"mai tumhara driver nahi hun.. sit in the front.." manik said angrily seeing mukthi and nandu settling themselves on the backseat.

"lekin hum log rozaaisae hi jatae hai na.. aaj aapko kya problem ho gayi hai.." mukthi said in an equally irritated tone (lady manik she was )

"im not going to drive today.. jao jaisae jana ho vaisae.." he said and came out and stood outside in the parking. Nandini had enough today she stormed out of the car sat in the drivers seat threw manik's bag to him who was standing just beside and said

"mukthi do u have any problem if I drive.." she said and mukthi nodded a NO. nandini ignited the engine and without waiting for manik she started the car and drove away. Manik was standing there with his mouth opened in a perfect O and after coming out of trance called his driver to bring another car for him.

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In collage :

Nandini entered the class making a grumpy face cursing manik under her breath "huh.. stupid..! idiot..!gadha..! kya samajha tha hai apnae aap ko..?? kat kae biryani bana dungi aur khud kha lungi..!! chi..!! nai nai.. mujhae toh chicken biryani pasand hai.. mai uss motu ki biryani kyun khau..? aghh..! ab biryani kyun aa gayi beech mae..! mai usae..ahhh...! nandu.. calm down.. stop thinking about that stupid..! yes..nandini murthy calm down..!

She took few deep breaths and sat beside navya and soha who were looking at her with confused expressions.

"kya hua.." navya asked curiously and before nandini could reply professor entered the class and the class continued for 1.5 hours and finally like finally nandini's mind diverted and she forgot morning's incident. As usual the trio left for canteen to have something and to manik's bad luck he was present there and wasn't aware of nandini's presence and was discussing something with dhruv regarding their classes and cabir was least interested in their discussion and was focusing on his food. Overwhelmed by cabir's gift navya jumped to his table excitedly and said "thank u cabir jii.." and flashed her 32 teeth and cabir chocked his juice which he was drinking and lifted his head to look at navya and nodded his head in a no signalling her not to speak further poor soul didn't understand his indication and said "arae bhul gayae hum aapkae gift kae liyae thank u bol rahae hai.." making cabir slapping his forehead and manruv along with aliya and mukhbi got curious and cabir just wanted to run away from there.

"kaun sa gift..?" manik was just waiting for a chance to get back to cabir.

"arae... kitna pyara dress tha.. aapko pata hai.. hayee.. humhae kitnaaa pasand aa gaya.." navya spoke dreamily.

"Ahem ahem" aliya cleared her throat to bring navya out of her trance and was quite successful and navya smiled sheepishly.

"cabir.. u want to say something..?" manik asked with a smirk looking at cabir whose face went pale on navya's revealition and he nodded a NO looking at manik who had a victorious smile on his face.

"navya will u show me your dress pleaseee..." mukthi asked ever so sweetly and navya nodded approvingly and before navya could drop both of them in more trouble cabir dragged navya along and all burst out laughing but the frowns from nandini's face weren't fading but growing with each passing second and she angrily sat beside manik and stomped his foot hard and looked the other side as if nothing happened and manik winced in pain

"ouch.. u stupid panda.. I think mera fingers ka fracture ho gaya hoga.." and gave a glare to nandini who was least interested in his expressions.. why would she.. her frustration was out and finally she was in peace enjoying his cries and paid deaf ear to all his words.. but the word "panda" irked her and she was about to give another hard kick but this time manik immediately dragged his feet back and held her hand tightly and asked in a hell annoyed tone "tumhari problem kya hai haan..? kyun marae jaan kae pechae padi ho..?? already merae ek pair ka halaath kharab kar diya hai.. ab aur kya chaiyae..?" she also gave an angry look and said "already kaddu jaisae motae ho.. aur kya hona hai tujhae.. huh..!! motu kaddu sadu kahika..!" and got up to leave when he grabbed her arm and sit her in the same place and said "you... noisy laddu panda.. har wakth chapar chapar karthi rehathi hai.. kahan sae aati hai itni takath tujhmae.. dekhnae mai to bilkul chuhae jaisi hai.." he said in an irritated tone.. he had enough from morning now no more.

"bhai.. nandu.. stop it yaar.. subah sae u r fighting.. now no more.. chalo ab say sorry to each other and b friends again.. chalo.." mukthi jumped in between as now it was needed as the two stubborn heads were not ready to end the fight so easily. Both turned their heads in the opposite directions and said "bilkul nahi.." and others sighed helplessly. Finally all left leaving them alone and after some time of more silence manik spoke

"ok.. fine sorry.." he said as someone had to start.

"apology not accepted.." she replied void of any expression and manik's face was worth watching.

"oh hello bhav math kha..laddu kahiki.." his voice had a tinge of sarcasm again frowns on both sides.

"motuuu..!!!" nandini was irritated so was manik and both of them got up and left to their classes.



Part B :

Night at dinner table :

Everyone was looking at manan as both were having a grumpy expression on their faces. Everyone ate silently and retired to their rooms. Mukthi tried talking to nandu but she slept switching off lights before mukthi could speak something.

At 12:00

"happy birthday...!!!!" nandini heard a loud scream and she woke up with a jerk and what she saw made her eyes pop out of her sockets.

"chachi..chachuuu..rishuu..priyaaa...amms.." and she jumped off her bed to hug them tightly.

"thank uu... I love you all.." she screamed in excitement and slowly everyone came to wish her one by one they came down for cake cutting.

"happy b'day manikkk...!!!" fab4 with abhi made manik wake up with a jerk and the moment manik woke up cabir sprayed the entire bottle of snow spray on his face making manik frown and he started chasing cabir after cleaning his face and all laughed loudly and finally pulling manik into a group hug they again wished him and all went down for cake cutting.

Manan were standing in front of the cake. Nandini looked at manik and said in a low voice "happy b'day motu.." he too replied in the same tone "thank you and happy b'day to u too.." both smiled and this wasn't gone un noticed by others and they sighed in relief. Finally their war came to an end. they fed cake to everyone and after eating the left over cake was found on the faces of manik and nandini and all started laughing seeing them and calling it a "night" they went to get their much needed sleep as tomorrow was indeed a big day.

Next morning :

There was a lot hustle bustle in the malhotra mansion. Everyone was pacing to and fro. Nandini walked downstairs and saw everyone in a hurry. Seeing this she asked "mom.. yae sab kya ho raha hai..?" shalini smiled and said "kanna.. tumhae sab pata chal jayaega.. go fresh up and vo jo ghagra liya than a tumnae 2 din pehalae vo pehan kae ready ho jao.. now don't waste time and go and get ready.." nandini got confused at first but obeyed her mom as she was unaware of what was happening around. Total house was decked up like a bride.

In mukthi and nandini's room :

Nandini sat in front of the mirror to do a little makeup when aliya mukthi and navya entered her room and gave her a "what r u doing look" she raised her eyebrows to clear the air and they said "aaisae ready hotae hai kya.. u r the heroin today.." aliya said and came forward to do the necessary things and finally after a good 30 minutes nandini was finally ready and was looking not less than an angel.

"wow.."mukthi said looking at her

"hayeee.. nandu kitni pyari lag rahi ho tum.. kisi ki nazar na lagae.." navya said and picked up the kohl pencil to put a dot behind her ear and finally after accomplishing the task and after finally touch up's the girls went down.

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In maniks room :

"arae wah.. someone is looking too hot to handle.." cabir said after entering and looking at manik and he rolled his eyes

"yaar sudhar ja na abhi toh.. grow up man.." manik replied gelling his hairs and asked looking at abhi "what is going on downstairs..?" to which abhi shrugged his shoulders indicting a no. everyone was ready wearing the clothes which they brought while shopping the other day and after getting ready they got down. Manik and Nandini got down and they were brought to the centre where a special arrangement was made.

"mom what is going on" manik finally spoke not knowing what was going from the morning

"tum dono ki sagai.." finally like finally dadu cleared the air and manan's eyes grew big like saucers and the only word that escaped their mouth was

"WHAT...?????????"

Shock was an understatement what they felt that moment. Both looked at each other and others around.

Dj smiled and said "haan.. beta.. aj tum dono ki sagai hai.. kaisa laga surprise..?" and manan were too numb to react. Nyonika brought the rings and placed in manik's hand and shalini gave the ring to nandini. First manik slid the ring into nandini's hand followed by nandini and all the elders came one by one and blessed them.


Flashback : ( the day murthy's came to dinner at malhotra's place )

"so what have u decided..?" raj asked Kishore

"about what ..?" Kishore was confused

"arae.. nandini kae barae mae bath kar raha hun.. u will leave this weekend na.. vo kahan rehaegi.." raj cleared the point

"bhaiya usae hum usae hostel mae toh nai rakh saktae.. we r thinking ki ek flat lae langae.. we will arrange servants.. manage ho jayaega.." shalini replied on behalf of Kishore and dadu dj raj and nyonika frowned on her reply.

"beta... hum kya bahar walae hai.. yahin rahaegi nandu humharae saath.." dadu declared

"lekin yaha kaisae..?" shalini was about to say something but was cut by dj

"beta abhi ya kabhi nandini toh humharae ghar ki bahu hai.. toh yahan rehnae mai kya problem hai.." dj said and looked at shalini and Kishore

Shalini and Kishore looked at each other and smiled at their possessiveness towards nandini but were not completely sure about their decision of leaving nandini before marriage as amms wouldn't agree or may not b happy regarding their decision. Dj being very close to amms understood their dilemma and said

"mai samajh sakthi hunk i tum dono kae dimag mai kya chal raha hai.. hum un dono ki sagai kar dangae... aur shaadi dono ki phadai puri honae kae baad... phir toh problem nai hai na..?" dj said and everyone agreed with her decision.

"theek hai phir after 3 days its their b'day.. usi din hum log un dono ki engagement fix kar datae hai.." nyonika was super excited now

"haan.. zyada logon ko nahi bulayangae.. hum manik kae dost aur mai amma shanno aur aravind (chachu) rishab aur priya ko batati hun vo log aa jayangae.." shalini was equally happy

"call is on the way.." Kishore showed her his phone as he dialled to inform amms and rest of all

"aur hum shopping kab karangae..?" mukthi had just come down and overheard all the convo

"beta dheerae bol.. yae sab surprise hai.." dadu said in a loud whisper looking at mukthi

"we will see.. jab free time milae chalae jayangae.. aur tu chup rehana.. laddu aur motu ko pata nai chalna chaiyae.." dj gave warning to mukthi and she nodded accordingly

"yes.. nandu meri bhabhi hai..yaiee...!!!" mukthi became super excited and everyone smiled seeing her expressions.. raj was about to speak something when manan came and the convo ended...

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Present :

All sat for lunch and the siting arrangement was like this manan in the center on the left side were murthy's and on right were malhotra's. cabir brought another cake on which happy b'day MaNan was written seeing which manik frowned followed by nandini and before he could ask what was written cabir said

"arae yae frowns kyu.. tum dono ka b'day ek hi din hai.. aur aaj sagai ho gayi hai.. toh ab sae tum dono do dil ek jaan ho.." winked looking at them and continued "to isi liyae..manik ka Ma aur nandini ka Nan..MaNan.." and clapped at his small creation followed by his friends gang. Manan cut the cake together and first fed each other on force from others and then others and like finally the lunch was over and they all sat for some chit chat. All the children together in mukthi and nandini'd room and all the elders in hall.

Cabir forgot his cell and came down in search of the same when nyonika caught him twisted his ear and said "don't u think tum kuch bhul rahae ho.." and raised her eyebrow cabir pretended to be innocent and said "kya hua aunty..?"

She held his ear more tightly and he winced in pain and said "ok..ok.. batata hun.. vo pink ghagra mai jo aai thi vo hi navya hai.. my friend.." but nyonika didn't leave his ear and was looking at him with the same questioning expression and cabir sighed and said "ok fine.. vo ladki hai jisae mai pasand kartha hun.." he said the last line in a whispered tone and she left his ear and smiled and said "bohath acchi ladki hai vo.. jaldi bata daena usae.. der math kar.. ok.?" And cabir nodded a yes obediently and ran away taking his cell.

In mukthi and nandini's room everyone was teasing manan who were blushing sometimes and giving fake glares sometimes.

"all of you come down for some coffee.." all heard nyonika's voice and decided to move down. All passed a secrete wink to each other and planned to leave manan alone in the room for sometime. And as planned mukthi spoke "nandu.. y don't change.. isn't the dress bit heavy.." nandini looked at herself and said "haan yaar.. mai bhi yahi soch rahi thi.. tum log chalo mai bas abhi aati hun.."

All nodded and moved out of the room even manik but how could cabir let happen so. He signalled all the girls to move down and cabir abhi and dhruv surrounded manik. Manik crossed his arms across his chest and raised his eyebrow. The trio smirked evilly and without saying a word held manik's arms and pushed him into nandu's room and locked it from outside paying deaf ear to maniks warnings of not to do so.

"cabir.. abhi.. dhruv..! open the door dammit..!!!" manik yelled banging the door hard but heard their giggles. Manik tried to open the door which was an inter connection to his and mukthi's room but to his dismay it was also locked from the other side. He sighed and having no other option sat on the bed in a leaning position and closed his eyes. He heard the click of the door and opened his eyes and gasped on seeing the view in front of him.

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Hmm... Ho gaya na another thoda lamba update.. what do u think would be manan's reaction.. how will nandini react..? is she happy..? or is anything else going in her mind..?? how is manik going to handle all this..? jaisae amazon ka advt hota hai na "aur dikhao aur dikhao.. vaisae hi.. is story mai bhi ap logon ko bohath kuch milnae wala hai..!

Stay tuned..

Keep smiling..

Loads of love..

Neeraja.. :)

Edited by neeju_chinnu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow nice update...Manan fights are so cute...
And surprise was so sweet...
loved it...thanks for the update...
Happy makar shankranti to you too

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